Reviews by annsteph
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Your story is a masterpiece.  It takes alot of work and dedication to continually weave a storyline that encompasses known characters, and variances of the original plots.  You have achieved both.  It saddens  me to know it was taken off of the fanfiction site, but I am pleased that I can still read it on this site.  Keep up the great work as it is appreciated by those who enjoy your work.  Thanks for posting.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153109
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

Your writing style is great!.  The story is very original and most enjoyable.  I have been following it on ff.net and saw your author's note and well here I am since I don't want to miss any upcoming chapters.  I think you are doing an amazing job incorporating the major Twilight charcters to the storyline that you have created.  It is a great author that can take these same characters and keep their personalities and give them a new venue that is totally plausible.  Thank you for sharing and posting for everyone's enjoyment.



Author's Response:

Thank You so much. It really means a lot to me. I took on a different topic that at times is hard to write, so it's nice to hear that people are enjoying it. I have to admit it's a lot of fun to mess with Stephanie Meyers great characters.  

Summary:

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This is the story of the life and death of Elizabeth Ward Masen.  Who was she?  How did she meet Edward's father?  What did she know about Carlisle Cullen?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18649 Read Count: 2051
[Report This] Published: 22 May 2010 Updated: 25 Jun 2010
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You did an excellent job with Elizabeth's story.  She was protrayed with much love and strenght.  She only wanted to be a wife and mother and it showed how fierce she was dedicated especially when they all got sick.  Thanks for doing such a wonderful job.  Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Dark Moon by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella told you the story of our life together, which according to her human memories was correct, she told the story, as she believed it to be. The problem with human memories is that they fade and become blurry over time. Vampire memories are stronger and more reliable. Not to say that Bella didn’t tell the story as she remembered it, but I remember it a bit different than she did.

There was quite a bit she had no knowledge of. A lot of things that happened with my family that she couldn’t know about and I never revealed to her. This is the story she wouldn’t have known to tell. My hope is that it will clear up a few misconceptions…

 

 

Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115560 Read Count: 6233
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Dark Moon

I couldn't believe I had missed so many chapers.  This is such a joy to read and gives New Moon a whole new appreciation.  The wolves included makes for an awesome contribution to the entire experience.  This is the best companion piece down from another perspective and should be read by everyone.  The witing is exceptional and all characters are protrayed perfectly.  It is rare to find such a wonderful addition to fanfiction.  I hope everyone has a chance to read and review as the author has put in so much to make this great.  Thank you for another brillant chapter and I for one can't wait for the next installment.  The story just keeps getting better.  Thanks again for posting.

Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Stitches

Excellent rendition from Edward's point of view.  This is definitely one of the best that I have read on all the fandoms.  You have a great talent that makes turning the perspective easily and making it a better story.  Being a Edward fan, I find these type of stories wonderful.  Hopefully by focusing on Edward, you get a lot of family interaction with his decisions intertwined in the story not just the Bella/Edward love story.  Will look forward to more chapters and the rest of the books from your unique style.  It is truely an honor to be reading something this good.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful review, they were very kind words and I hope the rest of the story and the other books will live up to your expectations. I believe they probably will because Edward is such a great character I found it easy for him to find his voice. You will definately see more of the family with all the decisions that have to be made. Thanks again for taking the time to read my stories.

Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Seattle

It is absolutely terrific.  I believe your attention to detail really makes all the difference.  It was nice to see the added chapter regarding the monies for Bella's college that came from the outtakes of the original book.  Edward's POV seems a companion piece and fits extremely well with the saga.  The essence of the story is there but it is so much better.  Thank you for your continued posting of something so wonderful it really makes my day to enjoy it.  



Author's Response:

You pay me the most wonderful complements, so thank you once again. Reading them is wonderful and makes my day. Thank you for your continued support.

Renee

Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15-Italy

Thanks for posting another wonderful chapter.  I love Edward's perspective.  His version of New Moon and the events are more intriguing and enjoyable.  The retelling is awesome and is a great companion to the original works.   Just kind of wondering how Aro talked to Carlisle and how Carlisle took the news regarding Edwar's plan.  That couldn't have been a very easy conversation.  Anyway you are still doing such an incredible job with this.  Thanks for posting and making this so great.  You are still a remarkable author.  Can't wait for more stories.



Author's Response:

thank you for the kind words and the review. The conversation between Aro and Carlisle was simply Carlisle trying to get Aro to make Edward stay until he could get there. Yes I believe he was planning on going to Italy to help Alice, but then she told him to wait.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3350
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully written and a great Christmas wish for Edward even if he is a little spoilt.  Thanks for writing.

A Higher Power by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Sister Swan is disappointed when she is forced to confiscate marijuana from her favorite student. What happens when she goes to Father Cullen to ask for his mercy? Priestward/Nunella Lemon/Drug Use. Entry for the High Times Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8946 Read Count: 3758
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 13 Mar 2011
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Higher Power

You did a fantastic job on this oneshot.  Maybe people would question the roles that the characters play but oh well it really works. Edward certainly didn't loose on this one and I am sure Bell felt the same way.  Loved the ending.  Who knows what it can lead to.  Thanks again for something special to read.

Lunar Eclipse by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

 

 Existence is hard, harder than I would have believed even a few years earlier. Being involved with Bella opened my world to things I wouldn’t have thought about before. Being human was far more difficult than I’d given them credit for, knowing now how wrong I truly was. And even after all of this… I wouldn’t change one thing.

Having her was the most important thing, and anything that came with that I would deal with. As long as she was with me, we’d be all right. Together we could conquer all. She was my existence now, and I couldn’t wait to exist.

 

 

                                                            Edward Cullen.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141121 Read Count: 5308
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2011 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Refusal

Seeing this from Edward's POV is going to be thrilling.  There is so much potential to this story and you are off to a great start. This is my favorite book so to have a chance to read it from this perspective is an opportunity not to be missed.  After the other two renditions, I believe you are knowing how Edward thinks, how he acts, how he lets his over protectiveness and later on jealousy interfere with his relationships not only with Bella but with his family.  I really believe you will do an awesome job 'cause you were meant to tell his side of the story.  Your writing is most excellent! I'm hopeful that you will bring out more of the family dynamics, relationships, etc as things progress in future chapters.  Thank you for all the continued hard work in bringing a new dimension to the rest of the story.  I for one can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind wonderful words. When I began this book I was surprised how much of it was not from Eclipse. You'll be happy to know that alot of it deals with the Cullen's. There was sooo much going on that Bella had no idea of. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks again for your continued support.

Renee

Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Agenda's

Wonderful chapter as well as the previous one.  I know Edward is bent on protection of Bella, but doesn't he realize that skipping a class when the principal just witnessed his little altercation with Jacob could mean trouble or atleast warrant a call to one of his parents just to relate a "dangerous situation" (hint, hint).  You know schools can't be too careful when the safety of our favorite vampire children are concerned.

The writing is so terrific and makes for a great companion piece to the book.  You capture Edward's thinking so well and the rendition of the safety thing with the crashing plane was funny all over again.  I got the mental picture of Bella rolling her eyes at him and just shaking her head at how stupid he sounds.  Maybe it was always a good thing he couldn't read her mind. 

The anticipation grows as I can't wait for more Cullen interaction because I am sure Carlisle's patience and understanding for Edward's feelings, jealousies and so forth will really be stretched.  No matter what happens next, I know it will be great.  Thanks for posting such awesome chapters!  



Author's Response:

Thank you for such wonderful words. It's always nice to know that someone is enjoying the story. I love Edward and he is so easy to write which is odd really becasue he is so complex, but I suppose that's what makes him fun. Continue to enjoy we still have a long way to go and he will suffer many twist and turns in this book.

Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Anger

Excellent chapter.  Liked the interaction between his brothers and Carlisle during the hunting trip.  Edward is still angsty but it will be a revelation to him when it is jealousy that he is feeling and needs to deal with it.  Writing really makes the difference because it makes it so easy to read.  Thanks for posting as often as you do which is another bonus for the story. 



Author's Response:

I glad you are enjoying the book. I look writing about the Cullens. I find them fascinating. I post as often as I can, but I'm posting here and over a twilighted, that is why sometimes it gets delayed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary:

 

 

 

 

Late one night while house sitting for her dad's friend, Isabella gets caught

acting out one of her fantasies by none other then the star of them. Carlisle Cullen. OOC/ BxC

 

 

This story contains graphic sexual situations and is not suitable for those under the age of eighteen.

 

 

*UPDATE*story has be beta'd and I plan on writing another Chapter or two.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3384 Read Count: 6378
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2011 Updated: 10 May 2011
Reviewer: annsteph Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't believe this is your first lemon type story, since it really seemed like you were a pro at it.  The way you wrote both Bella & Carlisle was amazing.  It was quite obvious that they thoroughly enjoyed themselves and the reader along with them.  I don't normally go in for this pairing but you really made it work, so I'm hooked.  Thanks for sharing and I'm hoping that you will write more whether it's a continuation of this storyline or something else.  You are really an a+ writer!