Reviews by nomadil
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625043
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

This was one of the hardest, most compelling, most difficult stories I have every read. You blew me away. And kept me awake. God those early chapters had me so disturbed. How strange to say, but it was some phenomenal writing. You make me afraid to post my own writing because I read you and that shit is good. Thanks for wrapping it up in an HEA. If ever there was a story that could go all "leaving las vegas", this is it, but you turned it around in a really well written way.

You are so going on my author's alerts!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. Please be sure to go vote.  I hope you check out my other stories (if you haven't already).

Take care!  Mic

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am really enjoying your story! Good writing and interesting plot.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

What a wonderful way to start the week! My own little guilty pleasure! I love this story and cannot wait for next Monday.

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

What a fantastic birthday present! Well with the teaser it is!! Wonderful as usual. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Have a great vacation!

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

Thank you for a endearing, captivating story! Your writing inspires me.

I cannot wait for the next one!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Playing the Part

Great story, but what a meanie for leaving an awesome cliffhanger!

I really like the original plot line; I haven't read anything like this before. Also, you have kept the story moving with a good tempo without leaving out crucial details. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

behind

 

AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Zoom In (by Nikteche)

Again, a story I probably not read except you wrote it, so I had to take a look. Your writing blows me away. Not as much angst and drama as FDKK, but what a nice clean story. Really curious to see where you are going to take it now that they are completely together. Knowing you, it will be somewhere interesting with citrusy scents along the way. Keep it coming but don't forget about those flyboys!



Author's Response:

Wow...thank you so much.  I'm so pleased you liked it.  Never fear, this story is actually already completed and so I'm just slowly moving it over since I have to do quite a bit of editing to combine the outtakes with the original story and fix a few of my errors that I keep finding along the way.  MOst of my writing time is now dedicated to both Flyboy and also another story that I've been working on slowly on the side...another period piece with Royals and Arranged marriages.  At any rate, never fear....I'm still hard at work!

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

You never fail to delight with your original plot lines. I love this epilogue with a glimpse into the more distant future!

Can't wait to start another story of yours.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Good start. I am trying my hand at a story and am really struggling with the third person aspect. I think I am reading too much Twilight fan fiction written in the first person!

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

There you go with another great chapter when promised. Amazing!

Cannot wait till Monday!

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Two great chapters in two days. You are spoiling us!

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Three chapters in one week. You are spoiling us with a great story and frequent updates! Thanks for the hard work.

 

Summary:

Edward and Bella have loved each other since they were kids but never said anything. When circumstance brings them back to Forks will they get their chance at forever or will the memory of the past be too much to live up to?  Originally written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44128 Read Count: 16278
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Way You Look Tonight

I am enjoying this story. I am curious where you are going with it since they got together so quickly. I really look forward to reading what happens next!



Author's Response:

Rocky roads ahead, they did get together quickly but they have a lot to contend with. I'm still uploading my other stories, so favorite the story and select email alerts that way you get an email when the new chapter goes up!  Thanks for the support~

Summary: Past Featured Story

game

Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Epilogue

Very nice story! I really enjoyed reading it and hope you will continue writing and posting here. I look forward to your next tale.



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for much for the great review. I have a new story in the works and hope to start posting it in a week or two. I can't wait to see what you think of this new adventure I am going to take our favorite couple on. Make sure you put me in author alert so that you don't miss it.

Thanks again,

EA

 

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What a sweet story! I am really enjoying the flow. The flashback would be confusing except for the italics. That is tricky to do and you are doing a great job!

Cannot wait for the next update.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact

Last night I wondered when the next chapter was coming! Maybe I should have wondered about when some money was coming??

Love the chapter and the story. Despite having gotten them together pretty early in the tale, you have kept it moving and interesting where some other stories lose their momentum. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Every other Monday like clockwork, unless I have a hold up!  Usually I'm good with schedules though ;)  Glad you were looking for it!  I wish we could schedule money coming that way :)

I'm glad I'm still keeping you interested.  I think it's that these two are so likable. And it's nice not to have angst all the time I think. 

Thanks for the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

golf

 

Taking place at the 1956 US Open, 20 year-old amateur golfer Isabella Swan becomes the first women to ever compete at a professional golf event.  With local caddie Edward Cullen at her side as she makes her attempt at history, she will grow more in the span of this weekend then she has in her entire life as she plays against the best players in the world, battling gender roles and the boys club that is this “gentlemen’s game.”  Will she be able to pull out an against the odds victory, or will the prize she wins be even more valuable.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34179 Read Count: 3213
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 22 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Storm on the Horizon

I passed over this story twice in the general Twilight listing and only started reading it because acullenwannabe recommended your stories. Golf not being one of my "things" I did not anticipate liking it. I am glad I went with my gut and one of my favorite writer's rec. This is really good. I like your writing style and pacing in the story. I wasn't sure how in the world you were going to convey plaing golf in any manner that would be a good read, but you pulled it off. Definite eagle shot! Cannot wait to see your next shot off the tee. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  This is one of my first times using 3rd person, but the style is pretty similar so the fact that you like it means a lot!  I know the golf was my biggest concern, my dad writes the shots as if you were watching it on tv and I edit it down while keeping in the drama!  Thank you again for the love, it means the world to me that I have all these people reading my stuff!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

I am still really enjoying the story. You asked about reviews. I gotta say the site updates really screwed up my favorites. When I get a notification, it won't open the chapter from the email. I caught your update when I was browsing by category. I had a few chapters to read! I will keep a closer eye out for the story now. Keep up the good writing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do! And I hope the problems on this site are fixed soon, because they're driving me crazy!

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

OH my goodness. I LOVE this story! Thank you for continuing to write such a moving tale.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Really interesting plotline. Thanks for the two chapters in one day!

Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Southern Comfort Followed by some Jack Daniels

Really good writing. And nice plot, you have set up a somewhat obvious situation so I am curios to see if that is where you are going. How long do you think this story will be?



Author's Response:

I am not really sure how long the story is going to be. I tend to write until I run out of ideas or the story line is just dead when writing other types of stories. When I begin to lose interest in writing it, that will probably be the end because I know the readers will also be losing interest.

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129699
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

There was no content in the chapter.



Author's Response:

Fixed it. Not sure what happened there but thank you for pointing it out for me:)

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79198
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Again, no content in the chapter.



Author's Response:

Ok, going to fix this one too. I know there was content here earlier:( grrr....

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 30119
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I just found this story! What a great piece of work! I am definitely putting you as an author favorite and hope you continue to write --- SOON!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you.  I'm telling ya, with with readers like you, who'd want to stop writing?  I'm working on another now.  Hopefully, I'll hear from you again.  ;) 

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just love your stories. This one is really promising. Cannot wait to see the chapters I know are sitting on your computer right now!

Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Congratulations! While I bemoan the lack of updates, the reason is fantastic!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

Sorry about your cat. I hope you get some answers fast. We lost one to diabetes, one to kidney failure, and one to plain old age. Fortunately all but one went without obvious suffering. They were great companions.

Leaving RL, I really like this story, especially your writing style.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  The last chap was a nightmare...kept scrapping what I wrote because I was in a crappy mood.  Glad you liked it.

Summary:

Winter, 1693. The hysteria of Salem has reached the town of Carlisle, MA, where a group of magistrates including Edward Masen are sent to investigate claims of witchcraft. Will they find the truth & save those who are innocent? FGB o/s Javamomma0921.

 

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This banner was created for me by Rosalynn as a part of my FGB bid on her awesome banner skills.

 

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This is the banner I created for the story myself.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17336 Read Count: 1154
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nomadil Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered

Thank you! It is great to read your new work. What a great job researching and writing accurately for the time period (as far as I know!)! I love the originality and plot development crammed in the one shot.

Love your stories and cannot wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

thank you so much, there was a lot of research needed to figure out the time period acurately, especially the puritan aspect, but luckil I was able to write a believable story.  Thanks for taking the time to review and I can't wait until you see the next one!