Reviews by NorthmanCullen
Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467289
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Choices

you know, i get what Edward did was wrong but so is Bella. not once, since this moment did he know that he hurt her. if he doesn't know then how can he correct his behavior. she says its done, but acts like he beat her. thats bullshit and she needs to grow up.

You Lost by Roux Roux Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Sookie lost a game of poker to Eric, now she has to give him his promised prize.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6702 Read Count: 1134
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Jun 2012
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was awesome & would like to see more of this story. how does their relationship grow from here? does Sookie find out he cheated? haha

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419218
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

been meaning to say something, but i love how you call Charlie the "sperm donor"...thats what i call mine too ;) haha

 

loving the story by the way!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285577
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

you tell her, Edward!! i hate women like that & sadly they are the ones who keep having kids while woman like Esme are heartbroken not being able to have their own babies :( can't wait to see how Kate's parents take the news. lets hope that they'll help Edward & his relationship with his son and not try to get in the middle of it all....now that they now the truth!

Late by Morgaine Swann Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary: Past Featured Story

late

 

Summary: Sookie has some surprising news for Eric. Spoilers for books 1-8. Story contains explicit Adult/Mature content - you have been warned. 

 

This story is being reposted after being deleted from FFn after 100+ chapters.   Its being cut/pasted from a back up file.  If you find any major boo boos, please email Morgaine's technical assistant, TheLadyKCT@gmail.com, with the chapter number and she'll go back to fix it when time allows.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 119 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1200172 Read Count: 472263
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Late

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for this update!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to find out more about the spell that Sookie & what happened during her skipping time. though i have to wonder about her waking up but then fainting later. i mean, she could have fainted because of all that happened. but i think she just woke up because of the assassins and then she'll go back to skipping. it sucks that she's missed/will miss time of her pregnacy with Sunny :(


i can't believe that Sookie is still friends with Amunet. fate or not, i would still not trust her or him.


thank you again for updating & i can't wait for more :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

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A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Outtake

awww that was awesome :) can't wait to hear more from Eddie!!

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

that was just awesome...loved it!! can't wait to find out the info Charlie was able to get on Alice & how the family will handle it.

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185509
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless

wow...Edward is going to be pissed off!! but you can't blame Bella running away, she should have thought that stuff through a bit more...she has no money for food. can't wait to see Edward's reaction :) haha

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I think she just paniced and was scared, she should have paid more attention to the getaway plan, shes left herself a sitting duck x

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless

*smh* Edward, Edward, Edward...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! x

Twilesque by pienuniek Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Her grandmother taught her to believe in fairy tales. She was told that one day her Prince Charming would come to save her. But after years of abuse, Bella has nearly given up all hope, until the day the Cullens moved to Forks. Twilight AU, mating connection story.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126196 Read Count: 58133
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2014 Updated: 24 Mar 2014
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote

that was awesome!! was a bit confused when Bella was reading Aro's memories...it read like she was saying them, not the other way around. there is so much left to happen, yet only 2 more chapters - so happy your already writing the squel :) can't wait to find out how Marcus plans to kill Aro & his followers? how will he react to the news? and why the heck is it always Renee to throw in the monkey wrench??? see ya next week ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

AU - After moving to Louisiana and surviving an attack by the Fangbangers killer, Sookie Stackhouse is more than ready to settle into her new life next to her vampire client/lover, Eric Northman. But when a mysterious woman looming over Bon Temps, a double disappearance in Dallas and the ever creepy neighbour across the cemetery threaten the happiness they had been looking forward to, it's up to the telepathic lawyer and the Viking Vampire Sheriff to save the day.    


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57434 Read Count: 11077
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2014 Updated: 19 Aug 2015
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

awww thng was too sweet, but i would have loved to see Eric's reaction :) thanks for the update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella’s life takes a horrible turn after Edward leaves her so she makes a call to the one person she could always count on to be there for her. Through him, she meets a whole team of heroes and eventually crosses paths with a god with a chip on his shoulder… Bella/Loki.

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Categories: Avengers, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Loki/Bella
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I love
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 112335 Read Count: 25673
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2014 Updated: 19 Sep 2020
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm

damn...that was awesome!!!!! thank you for the update :D

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: He Who Fights and Runs Away

annnnddddd....WELCOME BACK!!! loved it and i want the chapter for this story AND Gamma Love :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What would have happened if Eric Northman had been sent to procure Sookie Stackhouse for the Queen of Louisiana?  This is my interpretation of how SVM/TB would have gone without Bill Compton.

 

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82806 Read Count: 11323
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2014 Updated: 23 Mar 2015
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Twilight Leaves a Mark

that prank...sorry punishment was epic! lol seriously can't wait to see Godric meet Sookie :)

The Wife by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

Bella and Carlisle are starting a new life in San Francisco with their adorable boys and supportive extended family. They've been through hell, but they're together. Aren't they? Will they be able to survive life away from Forks? NC-17, AU. The Wife, sequel to The Babysitter.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future , Read Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76251 Read Count: 43325
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2014 Updated: 08 Oct 2017
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so i started, The Babysitter, yesterday & now all caught up! getting a PI to look for Varner is a start but Carlisle should think about getting some kind of security around the house & bodyguards for Bella and the Boys.

one comment on the writing: can you please not say Varner's full name every time? its slowly going from frustrating to annoying. people don't talk or think like that. i'm loving your stories but if this keeps up; i'm going to have to stop reading. i know this sounds minor but repetitiveness drives me batty!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A certain doctor finds himself hiding out in a small town. He soon finds out that he’s not the only one with secrets. What the hell is the rustic haired boy’s problem? And is a new love on the horizon or will it be doomed once again? Everything seems to be so wrong, yet so right.

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Categories: Avengers, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Bruce (Hulk)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143428 Read Count: 45628
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jun 2015
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 When It Rains It Pours

Tony, Tony, Tony *smh*

 

but Peter Parker? can't wait to see how he comes clean with Bella & vice versa :) oh and that professor...he better not try anything!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Go Edward!! haha

 

p.s. I am so sorry for your loss. I'll be keeping you in my thoughts.

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

hope your feeling better & thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

argh! longer chapters...PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Jasper should just have his foot surgical inserted into his mouth...seriously! if he isn't being loud, he's just talking out of his ass :P

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 7 part 5

i love this story so so SO much, but the short chapters kill me :/ haha

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

i think he should have put that Bella was Charlie's wet nurse. cuz at one point they'll be out with him & he's going to want to nurse. then the poopoo is really going to hit the fan!

 

Happy Birthday!! Hope your having a great day & thanks for the free ebook :)

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

"it is alive!" ugh...please tell me that Edward won't put up with her shit much longer & kicks her ass to the curb?! or better yet; since she picked the house, she can keep it as long as she keeps her trap shut about their "broken engagement". that way Edward & Bella can pick house thats better suited for their little family :D

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

keep them coming!!

Light Up The Path by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary: Past Featured Story

light up the path

In the sands of time, a promise was made to a faithful follower.  That promise is finally realized in a future that magic is all but forgotten.  A young woman will make all the difference.  She will be saved by the Gods, in a last ditch effort to fulfill their promise.  A man from the past stuck in the future, a woman lost, and a wolf is all that stands between a future with no magic, and a love that will surpass all of time, not once, but three times. Part 1 of the Light Trilogy.

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This story will be in three parts, and the first one is the banner above.  The second part will follow and so on.  They are not separate books, but will be posted as one story.   Just under different headings here.


Categories: The Mummy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Imhotep/Bella
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26542 Read Count: 7851
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2015 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Time Began To Blur

that was awesome...can't wait to see what Part 2 brings us!!

Summary:

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Lady Swan finishes with her 10 years of service to the Volturi, looking forward to being with her cousin, Lily Potter.  Only to find out in the decade she had been sent to the Volturi, the world had changed.  Soon she will be wrapped up in a war she had not known, and needs to reassemble her team as well as take her godson in her care.  B/?


Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29301 Read Count: 7466
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2015 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Sea of Tears

whoop whoop, the Dursley’s finally get what they deserve!! *happy dance* :D

 

but this Shadow worries me...

Dine and Dash by KittyTylz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary:

Rival gangs, rival hearts. Maybe he went too far but she was worth risking a gang war for. He wanted her, now he's got her... That dare was unexpected but it served its purpose, the purpose he needed it to.

Bella gets dared to dine and dash a restaurant but gets caught by the owner, Edward Cullen. He's a 19 year old deadly sexy gang leader and the enemy of the gang her best friend Jacob belongs to. Now he's found a way to spin her dare so that it works in his favor. She's stuck in his territory working at his restaurant to avoid a permanent record. What more could a Cullen ask for?

 

(Warnings for - Sex, Crime, Language, Violence, Self-harm)

(Pairing- Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan)

(Repost due to deletion)


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 255047 Read Count: 52832
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2017 Updated: 25 Mar 2017
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

When will you be updating? Please let it be soon!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Post BD. A vision foretelling the Volturis return, a secret life revealed opens up a whole new world to the Cullen's.  A prophecy made decades before. Dumbledore convinces the Cullen's to join him in Hogwarts, but is this magical sanctuary a real safe haven or an even bigger fire for them to fall into?

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Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157747 Read Count: 28786
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

let's hope that these stupid wolves listen for once!!