Reviews by lovinjim
Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Loved it!!!  Great Job.  And my guess, is the girl he lost his V card to.

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Loved it!!!  I am glad that Bella got to hear everything and they could talk it out.  Sometimes, I think that Bella acts more mature than Edward does.   Also, I hope that there is not too much drama for these two.  I know some is necessary, but hopefully no third parties and cheating....PLEASE!!!

Again, great job!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Great chapter...Please Please tell me that Angela is not wanting to tell Edward that she was pregnant and that they have a baby somewhere!!  I just don't think  I could take that kind of Heart Failure!!!!

AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 - Surprises

welcome back!!!!!!!!  That was an amazing chapter and I am beyond excited about the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!  I don't have Twitter so I will be checking in to make sure I dont' miss this one.

Again, great series of stories and I can't wait for the next installment.  You are an official franchise now!!!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625310
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I love this story but I hate Carlisle....please don't let her go through anymore HELL!!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Thank you for such a fast update....I was dying....  As always, great job and can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I do hope that Bella's HEA is with Edward.  And, I am glad that those two are dead and gone!!!!

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Another great chapter!!!!!!  How long do we have until the angst will settle in?



Author's Response:

You don't!  It's starts next...

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!Love it and Can't wait for more(Lots More)

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks for the fluff....Let's hope that there is not too much angst ahead.  Please Please no third parties!!!  I hate when they cheat or date others, it tears my heart alittle bit.

Great Job....Great Story....Can't Wait for More

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108988
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I just found your story today and read all of it!!!!!  It is truly fabulous and I have loved reading it.  I do hope that everything in your life will be looking up soon.  Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful story, and hopefully soon you will be able to finish it, they you want.  Again, thank you and I hope this finds you well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373386
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

Fantastic and SOOOOO Hot!!!!!  Great chapter and I loved how you made Jacob her brother.  Can't wait to see what happens when they arrive in England.  And poor Alice, I can't imagine that this has been a comfortable trip for her!!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Tanya must pay a big price for her actions.  I know Edward was a womanizer before and in some way he is being held for his actions.   However, Bella has done nothing and is paying the biggest price.

Great Story!!!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Loved It!  And everyone needs a friend like Sam.  And, where would she be without Rose and Emmett.  I do feel bad for the kids, they really miss her and it breaks my heart.  I hope that when the baby is born, maybe some healing for all can take place.

Great Job!

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I wonder how much FUN this ball is really gonna be.  Sounds like a recipe for disaster to me, alot of pretend dating could lead into some real trouble. 

Loved the Renee parts, and the way Bella is starting to open up to Edward and admit that she wants to try and have a real relationship with him.

Great Job.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189019
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On

Just found your wonderful story today....I love it!!!! Can't wait for lots more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm having a great time writing it and putting my love for football into a fic is just a blast for me!  So glad you like it!  Thanks for the review :)

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

I hope that she is pregnant and it is a healty baby and pregnancy.  Maybe with no food or much water in her is the reason she passed out and not anything really wrong.  Poor Edward he is gonna have a major freak-out with this one.

Please don't make us wait until the 22nd....Pretty Pretty Please



Author's Response:

Sorry, but the chapter hasn't even been written yet. I would've caved into your wishes if it was because I'm always superexcited to post a new chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Dream to Reality by mehek18 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary - All Human. Edward turns sixteen. Emmett forces him to go to a strip club for his birthday. Bella is dared to be a strip dancer for the night. What will happen to two virgins when they meet? De-virginizing Edward, never entered contest but now is longer than one shot.

This banner is made by my very close friend in this fandom - Chynnadoll36

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2117759/chynnadoll36

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15046 Read Count: 5835
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WOW!!  That was HOT!!  I need a cig and a shower.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251334
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Loved it and I would love love love more!!!!!!!  Edward really has made a turn around

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

One chapter in...and I am hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

Another great chapter......love love it!!!

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved It!!  Fast becomming one of my favorite new stories.

Can't wait for more, great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am sooo happy you like it.

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just found your story today and read all 4 chapters.  I really really enjoyed it and I think that this will be a fantastic story.  Love the family dynamics that you have set up and that Edward is so attracted to Bella, but is still being an ass.....sounds like fun.

Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am glad you are enjoying it. I am enjoying writing it!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it... Poor Edward he doesn't know what to do and his actions are causing her so much pain.  Imagine being in a strange place and just having lost half of your family...her poor mental state.  And to  top it off the man that  is making her so angry is the man that she is attracted to.  It should be interesting when these two get together...can't wait!!!!!

 

Such a great story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. He is just a mess..LOL

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad to see Edward coming around....and Mike Newton is a real scumbag.  Let's hope that he stays away from Bella, if not James or Edward might have to make him.

As always, great story and I can't wait to see where you take us.



Author's Response:

thank you..edward will have his struggles as you will soon see....

Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.

I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.

 

 

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am really hating Mike Newton about right now!!!!

Great chapter and I am so glad that Edward is finally opening himself up to Bella.  And she is doing the same.

As always, such a great story and I can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you! I think everyone is hating Mike right now..

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I loved the introduction of Carlisle and Esme..they are too good.  The kind doctor and his lovely wife.  It is wonderful to hear how other people view the way that Edward and Bella interact and look at one another.  And for Esme to offer her guidance to Bella was a touching moment. 

Okay, so you have me intrigued...can't wait for next chapter!  I have a bad feeling that somewhere down the line we will be seeing Mr. Newton again.

Great Great Story.

 

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I have really fallen in love with this story and these characters.  I do hope that sooner rather than later, that one of all of the boys take care of Mike Newton once and for all.  Glad to see Em happy with Rose and hopefully James will find him someone, maybe at the church picnic?

Again, great story.

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty One

You just knew this was gonna come back and bite him in the ass.  Well, Tanya is a complete bitch and she must pay!!! I feel so sorry for Bella having to find out this way and just ruin her trip....Let's just hope Edward makes up for it.........

Maybe she goes back home and she is watching the Oscars on TV and Edward wins and during his speech he proposes to her or at least begs her forgivness in front of the masses!!!!

I do hope you update soon....brilliantly done.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading and reviewing!

Things between the two love birds will be discussed and hashed out in the next chapter.  Wait and see!  Next update should eb the weekend (I'm aiming for Saturday but we'll see)

-Lisa

The Greatest Gift by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen has the plane ride of his life when a mysterious flight companion changes his life in the blink of an eye. Edward will need the help of his wife, Isabella, to right the wrongs of his past before it's too late.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249172 Read Count: 36371
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lovinjim Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is your old pal Carla.....just had to leave you a review on this site also.  I hope that you get alot of new reader...this is a remarkable story and it has become one of my must reads.

Again, brilliant work and look forward to more!

 



Author's Response:

Hey Carla~

Thanks so much! Hehe...I hope everyone enjoys it over here as much as on FFn too! Thanks as always for the support! Talk to you soon!

Hugs,

Erin~