Are you selling tickets yet to castrate the sob?

I will start making the list of things that Aro should be happy to endure!

He's as hysterical as a grenade up the arse! Wouldn't I like to get my hands on him. When I got done he wouldn't be giving any orders to anyone, heck he wouldn't be able to talk, walk, use his hands/arms, breathe, or pee, without assistance!

Vitamins, my to large butt. Fertility treatments if I were to make a bet.

Holy molely! Time to get out the crosses, holy water, and don't forget the weapons.

Can't think why I didn't ask what Charlie has been doing during this time. Let's see this is two weeks since she was pulled out of school, correct? Didn't it take Felix five weeks to break Bella? Now I want to know what Charlie is going to do to figure out what is ringing bells regarding Felix.

The more I read of Aro the more I realize there will not be enough that could be done to him. However, I would like to try. I'm racking up thoughts of what I wish to do to him.

Amazing what brainwashing can do.

The tar treatment is still my favorite revenge for Aro.

The Tar Treatment is only one of many things that should be done to Laurent and whoever or is it whomever on Aro's side of things.

I should have know you would be too devious to have them catching the sob in this chapter. Thankfully they now have the GPS tracker.

I like your idea and applaud your efforts. Getting a snapshot of Bella before James is an awesome idea. Also appreciate your leaving this story on the site. Any idea where you will publish?

You know that gal who walks in front of the band with something or another not sure what it is called, pumping it up and down, strutting. Well that was me when I read that Carlisle and Demetri died. Another thing that came to me what "Ding dong the bastards are dead" know that isn't the quote, but it fit.

Not surprised that Bella's words to Edward were "Let me go."

You did say you'd take care of Carlisle. That you did.

Will wait with bated breath to find out what Esme did with the bastards ashes.

Fourth paragraph from the bottom, "I didn't take office," not sure what you mean.

You are doing an excellent job of writing this story. Eating disorders are very hard to overcome. Not to mention the events that usually lead to the disorder.

Hope Baby Run will take it easy on you and pop right out!

Take care and will read you when you get back.

I couldn't believe Charlie said a pizza. My first thought was what Emmett won't be home for dinner. Am surprised two pizzas would do the trick for a growing boy with two hallow legs.

My prayers are with you as you go through this difficult time.

I have to say this cause I can't keep it in any more. What is Alice and this shopping kick about? Why the heck let her get away with throwing out clothes and putting Bella into tight stuff? Especially when she is uncomfortable with that type of clothing(I know tight wasn't mentioned in this chapter but it is in other stories)? Now if you couldn't guess, I'm no fashion bug. Jeans and t-shirts are fine by me. Course in my old age you really don't want to see me in anything tight.

All the votes aren't in yet but willing to give it a chance.

Ok, but I want to know what and who Carlisle got his information? Or show this be whom? Never did get that right in secondary school. Always have to look it up. Now my gray cells wouldn't hold that information if I did look it up.

If a person has the ability to dazzle, almost hypnotize someone else, and while being dazzled how can that not be rape. Bella did not even know how she got from the school to the house. How can anyone say they, in fact, had not been raped? In other words, if you aren't in your right mind how can anything be consensual.

Horny old bats.

I get so peeved off with the statement 'but you love each other' 'it's in the past, you ought to forgive him/her'.  Get real, sometimes love just can't cover some indiscretions. This has been a wonderful story and, although coming to this story late,  I've enjoyed reading it.

Sounds like me with ladies in the quilt class, as in little old ladies and church ladies. The more I try not to cuss the worse my potty mouth gets. I not only feel for Bella, but agree the hospital Christmas party may not be the best event to force her to attend.

In chapter 2 you state Emmett is youngest, in this chapter you indicate Emmett is the oldest. Would you mind clarifying the birth order?

How is it they can't understand that although she may look beautiful in an outfit, if she is not comfortable the beauty won't shine through?

That's been an ongoing problem I have with Alice. Pushing cause she believes she knows fashion and what will look best on an individual.

I'd tell the witch to get the heck out-of-town and not look back.

To bad a very large cat isn't available to scratch out the witch's eyes.

A wonderful story, and a tear filled epilogue. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Pictures while preggers, complete with huge belly sticking out. What fun! Why is it when the wife feels something off it must be hormones, pms, or delusions? When the guy feels that way Something is really off? Seems they forget about women's intitution really fast, doesn't it?

Wonderful! Not sure if it is the old gray cells or the menopause, but you had me in tears.

I like the way you have written Charlotte's character.

I understand her reason for wanting to foot the bill.

Can't wait to find out what the three actually are, and what they are doing.

Your imagination just astounds me! Wonderful story.

I'd start with Emmett's story too! Wrestling an anaconda that ought to be a heck of a sight.

Holy Chrysler!

My guess would be that Charlie is with the wolves in Port Angeles.

Good chapter. Definitely can understand the nightmare!

My wishes would be for the shot to take out Edward. Somehow don't think that is going to happen.

My guess would be Rose. That's because of her personality. Not Skankya! I'm still for cutting off Edward's gonads! What is the secret behind the blue dress?

It took Jasper to long before he yelled for Bella not to open the door.

While you are throwing thinks around, throw around James and his real employers ability to keep the background check coming back as clean. Cause we all know James is not clean. In more than one way.

I really do enjoy your writing. And am following a couple of your stories. Hope you don't mind--but instead of cloths it should be clothes. Please, take this in the spirit it is intended.

While the subject matter is not pleasing, your story is great. I honestly had a brain flutter when Bella talked about Charlie helping a friend and his mother get away from an abusive situation. Just not enough of a flutter.

I wouldn't just be talking about bringing them up on charges, I'd escort them to his own jail. What jackasses! Keeping information to themselves knowing James is the one doing the killing. If your purpose was to get us bothered by the events over the last couple of chapters you've succeeded with this reader.

You made the correct choice. It's none of their business! You should have let Esme tear them new ones. Charlie is pressing charges against Bella, so what the hell is he and Renee doing at the hospital? Get the biggest, meanest looking hospital security guards to assist (kick his ass out of the hospital, literally) his expeditious exit from the hospital. They are in a Seattle hospital, correct? Charlie is the chief at Forks, correct? If I got that right, have the Seattle police department pick them up for violating the restraining order.

Don't think they'd let 'em in the building, never mind the lobby.

I enjoy your stories, you always make me laugh. There's a word for writing the wrong word in a sentence, even when the word you write almost fits. Can't remember what that word is now. You had me falling out of my chair laughing at the attacked brace to the leg. I do have the best time reading your chapters!

She is much more forgiving with her parents that I would be had I been in her situation. Everything boils down to listening instead of just hearing. Communication, we do it every day just now as well as we should.