Reviews by kroseph
Summary:

Edward and Jasper, business partners and part time lovers, are in Arizona for a conference. When Jasper gets the bright idea to take Edward to a well known strip club, they meet their match in a dark haired beauty named Bella. This is 99.5% smut and 0.5% plot. You have been warned.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5129 Read Count: 1655
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2010 Updated: 16 May 2010
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Arizona

New to your fics, read the first one on FMF-Covet-that was uncredibly hot and so erotic, I never knew about docking-do now! After that sweaty mess it left me in I had to search out your other works and here I am.

This is every girls fantasy, yes? How fortunate of Bella ;)

Thanks for the good read and time!



Author's Response:

I'm happy that my fics introduced you to docking, haha!

Thanks for the review :)

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

They both carry burdens. I'm not sure who's is heavier. I wish they'd stop running and from each other. He sought her out for a reason more than apologizing, I'm sure of it. Her desires cloud her reasoning yet she went to him this time only to run again.
Torturous-such a consuming story.
Thanks so much for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533439
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Outstanding as always. Boring??? Not in my head. This feeds my adrenaline.

Luke, he seems like a cry baby, grovels too much. Love the way Edward handles him-just says it like it is and takes care of it. No harm done (well not everyone) but...

Carlisle's getting married, I knew it would end up that way. Alex is young, she just has a flitty mind. She doesn't really know what she wants but she wants Carlisle and she really doesn't mind the kids-she's a natural around them. I think she'll be a good mom. We'll see.

Sonny's doing good, changing up and Damion is going to be the one to watch. He's got the ants in his pants. ha! I think Kylie will be a vixen ?

Should be an interesting dinner with Derek...

I'm so anal about reviewing and I totally blanked it until I saw the new update. Forgive me.

Ciao baby ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

I ended up laughing my butt off but let's get to the beginning. Alex and her immature ramblings. I hope everyone else can see she really is an honest person with a good heart. She's been protected all her life and now she venturing out. It's confusing for her. Bella is a good friend to her. Calms her down when she gets flustered and gives her good sound advice when it comes to Carlisle. I think it will take a while before everyone believes Carlisle's heart belongs to only Alex. It's time for him.

Dinner was a blast!!!! Yes Renee is cookoo, kabotz and drunk but she sure made that dinner spark didn't she??? She's got a cold blue heart and I can't tell you how happy I was when Bella grabbed her hair and made her listen to her. That woman is missing out on life, her own family. She won't get it anywhere else. Fool. I felt really bad for Derek, Renee never told him. His son got offed cause he was stupid and Derek is trying to make up lost time to Bella. I'd give him a hug.

Now Lauren Hell Yeah! Punched that bitch hard, roll around cat fight. Awesome!!! I'd be all over that scene if I were there. Us Italian girls don't play nice with flirty bitches. na ah, no way. Respect, give it, earn it.

Great chapter. Want to pinch your cheeks!!!

Ciao!!!

I totally loved this chapter

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

That was great and a day in their life much needed. Almost normal! lol

I love how you detail every emotion and thought because it does put you right in their moment. Very understandable. I think Edward is pretty unique and love him madly (do not tell Bella!). Though his words of 'just one more' scares me because per usual those are just that, 'last words'. Always wanting that one more hit, one more payoff and they usually get whacked. I know you won't do this to our beloved Edward but it still makes me shiver.

Bella is handling her position quite nicely. She's got respect and everyone listens to her (even Hanna). Alex will be okay and this plot to corner Carlisle is nul and moot at this point and I think Alex realises this. Dumb plan anyway. Like Bella said, immature. Karen is a piece of work. Old time ways for sure. Keep the woman barefoot and pregnant. Ugh I always hated that term. And yeah. The men marry out of their culture, it's allowed nowadays. Funny 'cause my Momma told me not to marry an Italian man cause they always compare you to their Momma's and they're spoiled. My Dad had a totally different opinion of that!!

Good job and your work is never boring, don't forget I said that. ;) Thanks so much for all your devotion to these two characters. I love them dearly.

Ciao!

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Priceless!!!! Poor Jasper and so typical of a 'boy'! lol

Alice was much calmer than I expected, I'm thinking shock and the real screeching is yet to come. ;)

 

Thanks so much for updating and being so determined to get your voice heard. I'm here and couldn't/wouldn't give up on this story!!!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Yeah, so glad this updated!!! That went well, don't you think? Poor kids, I'd been shocked silent if a celebrity came to dinner at my house!

Thanks so much for this and for posting back-ups. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Awwww, that was so sweet. Loved the chapter, of course I love these two.

Thanks so much for the update and for being so determined in getting your work out there. Looks like everyone followed you. So nice.

 

xo

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923290
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi Noc ;)

I'm enjoying re-reading these posts, it's kind of like a pacifier. I'll just suck  until the 'new' chapter updates...*snickers*

 

xo



Author's Response:

the author notes are surreal for me. I thought about changing them, because some of the dates and story recommendations are inaccurate, and honesly they can be painful to read, but I decided to keep them as is, because that's just how things were then. *sigh* anyway, I'm glad ur enjoying it all over again :)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

It's been a long time...

These sweet moments between B & E have been deish but this chapter with them both revealing their truths was the best. Now I think they will both be more secure about their 'relationship' ( I hope)

Love You Noc and love you Bec!!!!

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

Great, perfect song for this chapter.

Oh the roads we travel, some easy, some not. I do love Jasper and Bella is out of her mind right now. Jasper's calming positive attitude is helping her through. I kind of wish he would talk to her alone and not at Peter's. But I assume he needs the support in case Bella bolts...

Edward, no direction. I am afraid of what may happen to him. What kind of bar was it and who grabbed him? I know you can't tell me but it certainly increases the desire for the next update.

Thanks darlin' xo



Author's Response:

I'm PMing you darlin'  smh

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

*Sniffles* This all feels like good bye...I don't do well with good byes.

I really want to be by Edward's side, he's on a course for destruction.

Jasper is darn serious about Bella and Bella? I'm not sure she realises the severity of all that's happened and will happen.

Good job capturing these three emotions with the characters.

Hugs xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

Hi sweet thing! Wow this really took a turn. I think they're all confused but Jasper seems more in focus of what he wants and he wants Bella to himself. The whole story needs to come out between them-they need a sit down and discuss what's going on in their heads.
So glad you updated!
How are you and yours?
xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

I love that you put all three POV's. It helps to know what each is thinking. I may be the only one but I'm feeling bad for Edward. To me he always seemed like the odd man out which is why he acts so pompous and controlling. It is lonely to be that sort of person. ;(
I'm glad Bella told Jasper how she feels about 'both'.
Thanks so much for the update-xo

Author's Response:

hey sweetie!!  thank you.  If I could swing it, I'd try doing 3rd person, but whenever I've tried, it just doesn't flow right for me... so I stick to first and do POV jumps...lol.  And you're not the only feeling bad for E... there are a few of you that are holding on to hope that he'll sort himself out and Bella will give him a shot.

 

Next chappie underway and hope to have it to ya'll soon, so you don't have to wait too long to see who he ran into in the lecture hall.  But a small hint, I'm starting to tie up loose ends...

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

They're all falling like dominos...sad chapter but so glad you gave us a treat of three this week. When you're hot, you're hot!

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

Poor Edward is getting it from his past, present and now future (Alice because now she will know where Jasper's at) ah hell, what a day for him. Alex!!!! Broke my heart when Edward asked why he left him... ;( Everything is smacking him in the face, literally and physically. sniff sniff.

Jasper and Bella are happy!  Love your inserts of cooking and meals-you always make me hungry! Bella asked the question and here we are...waiting on Jasper to tell the whole story. I think Bella will be very understanding and I think she will listen to Edward if she gets the chance. I'm not sure if Jasper has an open heart for Edward, time does heal and I'm hoping by the time Edward is ready to talk to these two, his issues can be addressed. I'll take him, he can cry and weep and anything else he needs to do to purge his f'd up past...

I do love the bar E found himself in after you slapped my face with the proverbial 'duh!' when I asked about it. lol. Nice twist on the canon characters. ;)

Thanks for the update darlin'. I know you have lots to do and lots on your mind. One step at a time. Love you as big as the state of Texas!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

ss

"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407945
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Arghhhhh, Edward, relieve yourself of something, anything but you're failing at every corner and Jasper seems to have his game on.

Bella? well, she's in a league of her own and is probably suffering just as much as these guys are...

 

Thanks for the flux of postings-loving this!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Can't resist can you Edward?????

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just hopping on...sounds good, sounds verrrrry good. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella's dialogue is great. Loving this whole plot.

Enjoying your English influence too. 'takeaway pizza' there were others I can't think of now but in the US we say take-out pizza. same thing.

Okay, lets go to school with the boys...!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ha!!! LOL, great wit you have and this last quote 'fucking numpty'!!! The best.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Gasp!!!

They know each other? Cool.

I know nothing of martial arts and their attire or 'toys' they use. Educate me.

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This is fantastic. Let's play. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This is very entertaining!

Thanks for all the updates today.

Fun Fun Fun!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I love amicable break-ups, to still be friends and all. Nice.

I do love the boy's/men's honesty with each other too.

Thanks!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

minx-love it!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Double posting here-liked this chapter?

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

lol, channeling a bit of 'On the Road'?

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

She's a fiesty one. They have definitely got their hands full...

Thanks for all the updates!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

That was fantastic-loved it all. Humorous and right for them.

I'd love to see a sequel-thanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028963
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Is that true? Doms need a session every now and then?

Thanks ;)



Author's Response:

lots of Doms/Dommes start out as submissives. My Mistress was a switch, so im not sure what's typical, though I don't think anything is "typical". My Sir has never been a sub and has only once allowed me to Top him and I had strict restrictions.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Your place to do as you please...please. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Mmmm, fierceness at it's best. Love a ripped out orgasm!!!

 

Of course I want that - silly.

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

A plan is forming...;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

He drives a hard bargain...

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I love mornings!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Get to the part where they meet... ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Nice. I would not hesitate. ;)

 

Thanks for todays updates!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm here...

;)



Author's Response:

im glad!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

;)

Author's Response:

:P

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

:)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love the SPOV.

xo



Author's Response:

me too! he's such a perv!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Double Nice!

Thanks for the extra treat!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Eww, he's seeking Tanya I'm guessing...



Author's Response:

you guessed correctly!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

A perfect sub-how boring. lol
Thanks for updating...

Author's Response:

you are right! Boring!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oooo Door number 6 was a combo platter.

Lucky Tanya and yes, Edward is being a good Dom.

Thanks...*hurries to read the next*



Author's Response:

once again, funny review! Tanya is being well cared for :)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good little sub...

"Yes"

 

Thanks for the updates!  Ciao ;)



Author's Response:

no, problem! :)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Happy 4th to you also...

Um...this is the same as #9

;)



Author's Response:

Sorry! I fixed it!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ok you little firecracker-here's 2 reviews as I couldn't leave a 2nd one for ch 10...

10."Squeal like a pig" not an endearing description and good lord I hope I don't sound like that, actually the act renders me speechless. lol Wondering if Edward ever did experience it...

11. Anwered that question, no male bj's for Edward-and cue Tanya nodding. *yawns*

Thanks...onto next!



Author's Response:

i cry out when my Sir takes me sometimes. And thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awww, I want to know how that worked out...I'd love to see Tanya get punished for once in her mundane life...but I'm thinking 'His' plans may be spicier.

Thanks, enjoy the evening!

;)



Author's Response:

We don't get to see much imore of Tanya for a while.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

;) Bring on the playthings...

 

Thanks.



Author's Response:

giggle... just one plaything :)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Drabbling is such a tease...

;)



Author's Response:

I know right!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can also imagine the sounds...

*winks*

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Butterflies have a very special meaning to me...

Loved this description of them both. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh bb, beautiful! (fluttering my wings)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think it was a great way to end the day!

xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That's what she thinks...absolutely have to include BPOV. I don't think it would gel otherwise.

 

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

...and then the phone rang. DUN DUN DUN...

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh wouldn't that be a fantasy come true! Sir? You like?

Thanks bb ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I like his impact... a lot.

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yes, please.

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love your end notes. xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'd rather him 'be' in my room watching me...

Thanks for the updates.

 

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'd love to have someone come in a nd decorate for me, mainly Edward and Alice on the side... ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice images. ;)

No worries on the updates, we get 84 in return, who can complain?

xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Definitely Thrilling...

Welcome back ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

She's playing nicely too. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Observant isn't he? No rewards today...

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I 'wish' he could be watching me! Oooo how I'd tease him...

 

Thanks for the updates today!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Sheets ;) I love my bed too and I'm very particular about my sheets, pillows and how the bed is made...

Loved this.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Hmmm no pumping the V, what shall he use instead?

Thanks for the updates today. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

An A-plus performance...such a good girl.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Yum 3 updates of Nightward...'grew even larger'  ;))

 

Thank you Noc

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Damn yes I want to see that too!

xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Explicit and demanding-how enticing.

Dripping with desire-ugh

 

Thaanks for the updates today!!!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I wonder too ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

That damn window is getting a lot of action! Is anyone watching him???? Cause that would be really hot. ;)



Author's Response:

we're watching him!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Yeah, I hate when RL interferes with the what I realllllly want to be doing...

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Anticipation seems to bode well for her...

 

(I can't believe this is already at #60!)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

;) *rubs hands together* getting to the good part.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

grrrrrrr, naughty girl!

 

Missing you.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Is the girl normal?, a LARGE puddle... ;)

Maybe I'd be gushing too if Edward was giving me commands, who knows?

 

Thanks.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Edward sounds like he's losing control...

 

Thanks for all the updates, amazing you are doing this while on vacation.

You love us. ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Two thoughts to carry me through the day, Dom E and Disney.

Imagineers!!!!

Have fun-we miss you!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Grrrrrowlllll, Demanding. Hot.

I think he needs to show her who's boss, in person.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

O! Someone is needy!!!

 

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Calm calm calm...trying but it's not working...

 

Noc! Look how popular you are! Crazy good.

Thanks for the IR postings and this update-you've been busy!

;)



Author's Response:

U have no idea... all of this has been done from hotels. I haven't been home in three weeks.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Ahhh, no window decoration? Ripping orgasms. Good morning to you too!!!

We're pimping, have no fear... ;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I wonder too, I still wonder how to stop it...

 

Thanks xo

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Arghhh -that sounds painful...

;)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Hi Noc, welcome back!

 

This is certainly 'heating' up...

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Just got caught up. Vacation takes precedence and connections are not consistent!

Very interesting between Carlisle and Edward and the bits of their history.

You should know I am always reading...I should be back by Monday...

Ciao baby!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Yup, it's not a question of do I like it, more that it's sooo erotic.

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I'd fail that one!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Pulsing while reading...does that give a clue that I like this story?

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

That would be a happy trail!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Oh to be pampered like that, all expenses paid! :)

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

aroused!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

I suspect it will be a hard day at work...

 

Just caught up once again, this has definitely taken on a life of it's own, so hot, so fun...thanks. ;)