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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
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Date: 23 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

It seem like I've read this a long time ago, but I'm not posittive, so I'll read on.

Sherry

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

This fasinates me. Looking forward more.

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

Looking forward to more of their evening together.

Loose Screws by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

When your college degree and $2.25 will get you on a ride on a subway, if you weren’t stuck in the Podunk town of Forks, Bella struggles to figure out her adult life. A job that was a last resort, and a feeling she can’t get rid of lead her down a path she never imagined. Forks Hardware is the beginning of that journey, and it’s easy to see that to work there requires a few loose screws.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86660 Read Count: 173570
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2012 Updated: 31 Mar 2013
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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Gotta love Charlie.

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I so want Tanya and Bella to throw down... lol.

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Alice is a feisty little thing, isn't she? lol

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Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152447
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh fuck, the girl attracts trouble.

Sherry

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What did Bella just do?

Sherry

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So glad you didn't drag that drama out. Leah is one fucked up bitch.

Sherry

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

They've came a long way from their beginning.

Sherry

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I enjoyed EPOV.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think Bella will be wasting her time.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What a frustrating situation.

 

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm assuming Creepy Guy is after Carlos because of his drug deals. Unfornately, Bella has caught his eye.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What the everliving hell is going on.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm with Bella here, she needs to get outta Dodge, lol.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Holy hell.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella sure has had a run of bad luck.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Who indeed?

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward is a great tipper.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Reading on...

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying this story. Reading as time permits.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yeah, I want more of this smooth motherfucker. He's gonna sweep Bella right off her feet. Don't blame Rose one bit for feeling the way she does about Emmett.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What is up with Edward? Why were the guys acting so strange? Reading on to find out what's going on with them all and who the roses were from.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very interesting indeed.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope Sam realizes how lucky he was to get away with his life. Here's hoping Bella's luck is changing. Surely things have to get better for her. Damn, what a first time for E/B.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward is a dream come true. Leah's putting shit in Bella's head because I bet the bitch is crazy. 

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yeah, she should've told Rose what happened when the apartment caught fire. First fight is behind them now, I'm sure more will come.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm wondering if Bella and Rosalie's assumptions/theories are gonna be true.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was an incrediable moment for them to share. I hope he comes clean with Bella soon about what his secret is.

Sherry

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717361
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I just have some mad love for Carlisle Sr at the moment... trying to look out for Edward's best interest. Dude isn't a blind as CJ thinks he is.

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Ut-oh what's going on at Sal's?

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

“The fuck is this?” Riley asked, barging in.

 

I looked to him, not letting go of Caius. “A shakedown gone wrong.”

 

Loved Edward's line. Looks like Carlisle Sr. has a lot going on, making changes. I have a feeling father/son is going to clash soon.

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Glad they seem to be getting on the same page finally. Bella really does need therapy to help her confront the Jake demons. Looking forward to when they get to have some Edward and Bella play time.

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Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Colleoni getting Edward's mother from the airport with their history... hmm. Interesting.

I'm actually looking forward to see how well behaved Liz is. If she's there for her family from her heart, or if she's only there to get what she can. Bella seems gullible and an easy target for Liz.

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Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

I remember those days, where you get to have sex only when the baby is asleep, and trying to stay silent enough not to wake the baby. I think that's the best sexy times you've written for these two.

Looking forward to them getting married and the christening.

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Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Glad to see they are finding there way back to each other. Bella's 'street smarts' about the 'merchandise' was unexpected, but still useful for the future. Whether they discuss the 'life' or not, she's proving to be an excellent mafia wife. I just want them to keep it together and for Edward to be there for Bella and the baby when it comes.

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Well, at least Edward called to say hello to Bella, lol.

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Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Though I'm glad Edward wanted to propose to Bella, I do think he did it for the wrong reason at the moment. He proposed out of fear of losing her. But I love how honest, endearing and regretful he's being, and acknowledging his failure to cherish her. I'm hoping they can get back what they seem to be lacking. She needs to be more trusting that he wouldn't cheat on her, and he needs to be more open, to give her some reassuring things are okay with them.

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Jasper needs to keep his cool when talkin to Bella or she'll never openly tell him about anything that concerns herself.

 

Emmett was about to cross a line, implying Bella was a slut. I'm not sure I'd trust CJ, he only corrected Em on disrespecting Edward when he wasn't around. Hmm... and he was a little to touchy feely with Bella.

 

Until the next chapter...

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Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

OMFG! That was an amazing chapter. Edward needs to invest in an alarm system or move them to a gated community for security, because I don't think this will be the last attempt on his life. I pity Joshie. Edward is gonna kill his ass.

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Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I'm looking forward to Elizabeth's arrival and how it will go with Edward and her. She seems like a real jewel.

Ut-oh... someone's trying to break in.

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Hmm... curious as to what's going on. Is CJ getting busted??

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Bella's a smart cookie. Alice is a little naive. So CJ got busted. He's gonna think Edward turned him in since he neglected their meeting. Did Riley get arrested also?

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Ahh... these two give me whiplash, lol.

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Oh shit!

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

She almost seems manic, thoughts racing in her head.

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

These two just can't stop dancing around each other enough to settle down and make some plans with getting bent outta shape. Poor Edward needs to re-do his proposal to her. And poor Bella's hormones are in full force.

I got a kick outta Jasper's in and out visit just for coffee.

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I wanna smack some sense into the both of them. He needs to chill a bit and she needs to tell him he's gonna be a daddy.

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

They're both acting like children.

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Those two are something else.

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

So is Carlisle basically telling Edward to ignore CJ from now until matters are settled. Can't see CJ letting that happen.

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

At least Edward knows he needs to watch his step with what CJ's doing.

He needs to talk to Bella and get their ducks in a row.

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Ugh. I dislike CJ. He's gonna get Edward into some serious trouble.

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Looks like hell is about to break loose. I just hope Bella doesn't get caught in the crossfire.

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I'm glad CJ is giving Edward solid advice about Bella.

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Love how supportive Edward is being to Bella and not voicing his opinions to much for fear of influencing her choices.

 

Gotta give Jasper his dues. He's been a great brother even if he gets a little overprotective.

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Love these two.

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

He's being so good to her.

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Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Why do I have the feeling that Riley thinks he is more important than Colleoni will make him? I think Colleoni is getting ready to start grooming Edward to take over the family. Instead of Riley being the next in line, it'll be Edward. Hmm.. Jasper has potential? I think that's what Jasper has always secretly wanted - be a part of the family - be important - respected.

Thanks for the updates and looking forward to more.

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Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

I was excited to see an update. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.

I think Edward has a good take on what went down with CJ and his crew. He's smart and learning their ways quickly. Jasper... I was like WTF? I don't understand why he lost his cool so quickly, unless it's out of jealously. Dude needs to get it together, before Collenoi finds out he walked away from Alice when he was suppose to keeping an eye on her. Jasper needs to remember she's young.

What's up with Riley? What's he got to talk to Edward about? Looking forward to finding out.

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I seen where FF removed this story. They're jerks, but alas...

 

Poor Bella, she's so beat down and traumatized. Jasper needs to let Bella come to him and not try to force her to talk to him and restrain his anger and outburst. She's lucky to have Edward caring so much about her.

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

She's physically free of Jake, that's for sure... but he still has her bond emotionally. Hopefully Edward will break those chains soon enough. And now Edward's on his way for business.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I was excited to see an update in my inbox.

 

Oh hell... Riley is gonna get them into trouble... lol.

 

Well that 'errand' seemed to go off without a hitch, maybe a little too easily. I'm curious as to what they were picking up.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Running guns... leave it to Aro to try and break one off in them. I bet Colleoni's gonna be pissed that Aro set them up. 

 

I hope Edward realizes he made a stupid move by hopping up on the window shooting at the gunmen. He could've easily been shot, how would've Bella handled that? Looking forward to his arrival back home.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

He shoulda just hugged and kissed and put the weirdness behind them. At least she finally bit the bullet and laid down with him in spite of the weirdness. Can't wait to see how they move forward.

 

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Jasper is just too funny.

 

Looking forward to see how they deal with Aro.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Riley's acting suspicious.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Edward is official a hitman now. Aro is done for, how's his brother gonna react to that? Jasper was a little to perceptive of Edward's time gone. Wonder if he'll suspect it was Edward when the news comes out.

 

Looking forward to Bella POV.

 

Thanks for the updates.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I really don't like that Jasper keeps telling her she isn't a person yet. It's a little degrading, but I know he doens't mean it to sound the way it does. She is a person, she just needs to find her way.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Edward or Bella one needs to make a move on the other, they're in limbo. I liked Alice and Bella's phone conversation... up until Alice mentioned Tyler. Is she gonna bring him to the bbq anyway?

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I did not expect that possible situation to arise. The sooner she comes clean with Edward the better. I think he'll be okay with it. Jasper on the other hand will filp.

 

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Both their emotions are running high, they need to chill out and talk to each other.

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Oh hell...

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Damn, what a way for him to find out. Jasper's a sneaky little fucker. Hit a man with his back to him.

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Looking forward to their discussion about the baby.

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I cracked up at the little cat fight. They all need to remember Bella's pregnant though.

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I fell in love with Bold Gestures. It was an awesome story. I'd like to see more of something like that.

I'm not sure Elizabeth is on the up and up, I think she's playing on Bella's naivety. Elizabeth's a pro and Bella is a novice to this game. Colleoni is treating her like Jacob did Bella, it appears. He's using her fear to get her where he wants her. I think they're using each other to some extent.

Keeping things from Edward is gonna backfire on Bella. I doubt that Colleoni will let Elizabeth leave now that he 'has her' again. Bella needs to trust Edward will not go off the deep end and tell him what happened, in their house. Elizabeth and Colleoni disrepected their home.

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Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Jasper should listen to Edward's advice and stay away from Ceej and the dry cleaners, so he doesn't get caught up in whatever's about to go down.

Edward has his hands full with Bella.

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Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

*Bella and I were decked out to the max, arriving at the expensive five-star restaurant in a beat-up Honda.* How embarrassing that would be. Looking forward to more.

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Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Oh Bella... she's having a hard time adjusting to how a real good relationship should be. It seems like her train of thought is so robotic, always to give and please. Poor Edward is gonna have some major blue balls soon.

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Hmm... didn't consider Colleoni having a motive to get to Elizabeth by promoting Edward. Makes sense though.

I think Elizabeth likes the chase.

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

I knew Esme and Elizabeth were going to go to blows.

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

They both need to relieve some stress.

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I love how attentive Edward is to Bella, giving her what she's never really had before. Someone to love her unconditionally. Taking it slow showing her what love is really about.

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I'm glad they got over that road bump, and Bella seems to be happy that she didn't back out of it. I was afraid someone was gonna distrubed them by calling Edward's phone.

Looking forward to more.

 

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Why do I have a feeling someone else will show up at Edward's instead of Big Joey to deliver the car? Edward's not heard from anyone all weekend, and since Colleoni told Edward to lay low. If something was going to go down, wouldn't he have heard about it by now? Hmm???

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

It's about time Bella opened up to Edward about everything that has been pleging her mind.

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Bella does need to toughen up or she'll be eaten alive with the lifestyle Edward is about to dive into deeper. She needs to have more faith in Edward, that'll he's not the other guys.

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Bella seems to matured alot. She seems like she may get tired of Edward shutting her out. I hope Edward realizes she needs more attention with the baby on the way. Hormones are a bitch. I get Edwards worries over kicking it up to Riley. Looks like he's gonna have to toughen up a bit more to keep Riley happy and make some more effect for Bella, before she has enough and leaves.

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Edward done the right thing by killing Aldo, dude had loose lips ready to flap to gain some points. They don't need a liability.

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

It reassuring that you don't plan to break them up after everything it took to get them to this point, but lawd... Edward needs to pull it together for her. Show her he cares by any means, a note, flower, a nice date night would be fantastic.

I'm concerned about Jasper, he needs to toughen up to survive.

Bad taste on Edward's part, using a engagement ring from a heist. Bella deserves better than that.

I'm actually proud of Bella for withholding the baby's sex from Edward for missing the appointment.

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Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

My curiosity is getting the best of me... All of a sudden Colleoni summons Jasper to come to him, and then Riley shows up looking for Jasper. Sounds like somethings amiss with Jasper.

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Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Damn. Has Collenoi lost his mind? He's having everyone killed off. Now I'm curious as to what Riley did to get whacked.

Edward's right though, Bella will most likely think he had a chick in the restaurant with him.

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Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Jasper needs to toughen up if he wants to be part of the Colleoni family. I think Colleoni is doing what he needs to do to make sure Alice will be provided for and taken care of when he's gone.

Hopefully this will give Edward the opportunity to move on up, as he should, he is Colleoni's godson after-all.

 

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I'm not so sure Jasper can get the job done right, alone. He's way to squeamish. I think he'll take short cuts to get the job done quicker.

I knew it had something to do with Alice. I'm dying to know what it was.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

I'm wondering if Coleoni didn't have it done for a test, but that'd be fucked up. Joshie is a dead man walking.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

So Coleoni didn't have anything to do with it. Jasper's gotten awfully chummy with Coleoni. Can't wait to for Joshie's excuses.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Yes Joshie, you did fuck up, royally. I like how Edward shot his kneecap then claimed he tried to escape, lol.