Reviews by Banshee69
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Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419201
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Enjoyed this chapter very much. Thanks for posting. I like the flow of the story, you've got it moving right along at a great pace. 

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was a sweet first date, no doubt.

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really like this story, even though Bella, at times has me feeling depressed. I can't wait for her to be happy with herself. I do wish she could have gotten a little more furious in her letter to Jacob.

 

At the ball, will Jacob be there?

 

Creepy James... I'm curious as to where you go with that now. That's all Bella needs is for him to force himself on her. Her self esteem would be squashed.

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad to see Bella getting stonger with her confidence.

 

Damn, lock Charlie up and throw away the key. Go Bella for finalyy standing up for herself.

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This chapter was just so emotional. Glad to see Edward not giving up on her, as of yet. The intervention was an excellent ideal. At least now Bella knows she has people in her corner. Charlie's an ass, is the drama with him over or is there more to come?

Looking forward to more...

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ow, ow, ow, and ow some more for Mr. Pecker.

 

Glad Bella got to lay into Jacob, finally.

 

Excited that Bella has come to a sense of peace to where she's feels she can move her relationship forward with Edward to the next step.

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great way to end the chapter.

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Looking forward to the explosives.

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Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Epilogue

It's good Bella got her happy ever after.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Is it me or does Bella seem more emotional in this chapter?

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Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Rose was a spitfire at the club, that Rose needs to prevail throughout the trail. A woman defending Royce is degrading to woman in general, but he and his attorney seemed a little too friendly just to be associated by counsel representation. He's scum.

Volkswagon Rabbit tail... has to be Jacob seeking his opportunity for revenge.

The dream in italics wasn't hard to follow. That was a messed up 'nightmare' to have. It's almost like foreboding of something to come.

Seatbelt on and awaiting the bumpy ride.

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Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What a terrifying and dramatic event that scene was. I didn't expect Bella to be awake by the end of the chapter, so that was a nice surprise.

Oh my gosh, how much more drama can these two withstand before they crash and burn? I don't see how either will be able to return to working in the ER without having flashbacks, or if even they could handle it at all.

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Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Glad they seem to finally be healing and moving forward with their lives and are no longer allowing themselves to be victims.

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Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So much happened within this chapter.

One of the best proposals I've read in a while. Sweet union sex. I'm glad they seem to finally be getting back on track and healing from everything they've been through.

Hmm... I never considered why Charlie did what he did. It'll be interesting to find out why he behaved like a manic and why he hated Bella so dearly.

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Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

The best chapter yet.

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
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All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
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Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32

At least they're getting their HEA

Sherry

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Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31 Part 2

Jacob, Emily, and Nurse Swanson need to be brought to justice for what they've done.

Sherry

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Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting start.

Sherry

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Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Every teenage girls dream to see their idol.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I kinda feel bad that Riley will get his feelings hurt over a bet. Alice and Bella are on cloud nine with excitement.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I love Emmett, fantastic things worked out for Angela to attend also.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Something tells me Bella will be taking something home with her.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Why do I think that was Tanya on the phone? Bella really should have had that conversation with Edward before getting into bed with him again.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Edward is a real douche. I thought Bella would bring 'something' home with her.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I thought Edward was 21. He's a real douche.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I really want to junk punch Edward.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Renee and Charlie are a real piece of work. By leaving it looks like things may be looking up for Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Good for Bella for starting fresh, but Edward really is a douche. I know I keep saying that. I can't wait for things to change for these two.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake 1

I want to know what Emily did to Edward to make him the way he is. The dude is deplorable. Well played bu Carlisle and Esme, recording him admitting to everything was perfect.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Irina is a real jewel, isn't she? Bella needs to toughen up a bit, or she's gonna have a hard way to go. I'm glad Elizabeth is her GYN and is being supportive.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

Carmen is up to no good. Her daughters are just awful human beings. I kinda feel bad Eleazar is related to them. I'm hoping Edward will start having a change of heart soon, as well as redeem himself.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

It's a good thing Alice and Bella got away from Carmen.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

About time Edward realizes what he's done and what his actions have caused, now to start redeeming himself.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

Though Edward has been an ass thoughout, I hope Bella gives him a chance to redeem himself.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Oh bloody hell. I didn't see that coming.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

The Emily story was so heartbreaking. She sure did a number on Edward. Hopefully Bella can give him a chance to make things right.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

I'm delighted Carlisle spoke to Edward on Bella's behalf.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Poor Bella can't catch a break.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Emily is as crazy as her mother, Carmen.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake (Emily)

Yep, Emily is crazier than her mother, Carmen.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

I don't think they'll be in different rooms long.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

This can't end well.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Famous last words Edward. Something is gonna go wrong.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

Glad Edward is finally doing this the right way, but he still has anger issues, he needs to learn to control himself better. Poor Bella can't catch a break.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Edward held a very professional conference meeting, but he should have addressed that last question.

Gotta be Emily in the car, or Tanya.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

Well at least one crazy bitch is gone.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27

I knew that was gonna happen. Can hardly wait to read on.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28

Emily has to be mental to behave the way she does. At least the twins are healthy and safe and Edward is awake.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

A sweet moment in time.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

Hope is good,

Sherry

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
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Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: September 28th 1843

Edward is a bit stiff, but I'm looking forward to reading on.

Sherry

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Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 6: September 24th 1843

Esme has a plan.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Suspicions confirmed.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ahh... he's a worrier.

Sherry

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Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

I adore Esme and her determination to help Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

Poor Isabella is working herself to the bone.

Sherry

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Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: September 29th 1843

The Cullens are good people. Looking forward to reading about the ball.

Sherry

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Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

I'm liking Lady Cullen more and more.

Sherry

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Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

Thanks for the insight of Edward.

Sherry

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

Edward's been bitten by the smitten bug.

Sherry

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: September 30th 1843

Poor Bella and Charles. Losing a parent is one of the hardest things you'll endure.

Sherry

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Such a heartbreaking situation.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: October 7th 1843

lol Edward proud of his small amount of milk.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Reading on to see how dinner goes.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Time will tell...

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Progress.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Little by little Bella is getting pushed from her comfort zone.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Rut-roh... how embarrassing.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Life is moving on for them. Though I think Bella may have gotten the wrong impression from Edward's choice of words about writing letters to each other when he left.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I assumed she'd work herself sick.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella deserves for someone to care for her.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Progress...

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm enjoying this fic.

Sherry

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Glad to vicar brought some good news with him.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love Esme.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm with Isabella... I'm quite fond of chocolate myself, lol.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved Charles's letter.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I think she's in for some enlightenment.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Poor Isabella, she's so confused. 

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That surely isn't news anyone would want to get back then.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What an emotional confession.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nothing like a dire illness to waken someone's eyes to their feelings.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

They aren't wasting any time, lol.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

lol, damn those corsets.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Simple wedding, yet well written.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I thought they'd wait to cosummate their marriage since he'd been ill.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Home Sweet Home...

Sherry

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Everything indeed.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wonderful first holiday as a family.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

The changes to the farmhouse is benefitting everyone.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Every day is an adventure, no better way to live.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Gotta give Bella credit for wanting to see to the children herself.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Esme knows something Isabella isn't aware of yet.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I'm looking forward to reading on about the 'hunting party' and how well Bella deals with them.

Sherry

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Rut-roh...

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Excellent chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Bella has done well.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Isabella certainly came a long way. Charles and her lives were changed for the better.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Loved the ending.

Sherry