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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward meet briefly on her 21st birthday. When fate conspires for them to cross paths again months later, will they have the courage to make it last while facing their darkest fears? Drabble like style, all chapter under 1000 words.

Contains some strong adult themes, must be 18 to read.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32005 Read Count: 34623
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
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Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

My brother has fought leukemia, beat it, only for pancreatic and liver cancer to wreck havoc. He got to the point he tried to push all of us away so we wouldn't be burdened with him, much like this Bella is feeling. Makes me want to shake some sense into her.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Bella's Epilogue

Fantastic ending.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Edward's Epilogue

I'm so happy they got their HEA.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Damn... you made me tear up. Edward done well.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

About time Edward makes amends with his past. I think I wanna hug the hell out of him for doing this for Bella. No better way to vow his love than publicly.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Can I hug Jasper for letting Bella know why Edward reacted the way he did?

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Esme to the rescue?

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I suppose its good for Bella to get it out, but damn she's stubborn.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

About time Emmett shows up to sort him out.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Someone needs to sat these two straight.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I don't hate him, just very disappointed he him for being a lying coward.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

She's in remission, and Edward is gonna make his shitty ways up to her. What more could a girl ask for?

Sherry

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Jasper deserves some recognition for laying it on the line to Edward and shaking him out of his selfishness. Anxious to see what kind of inspiration Edward has been struck with.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

*crossing fingers* that she's healthy and no side effects from the treatments.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

He needs to grovel to Bella first. No one gets in your ass, like your momma.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I like this protective Kate.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I thought for sure she was gonna push him away.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Gotta give Edward his due, following Jasper to find Alice, to find Bella. Very smart move. Bella can be angry, but not at Edward, he didn't do anything to feel her wrath or biting tongue. 

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm hoping that's Edward.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Jasper needs to be a little more polite about it. If the situation was reversed, he'd want someone to spill the beans for him.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

You keep ripping my heart out.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

He's a man on a mission once he gets himself straight.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

You brought tears to my eyes.

Edward needs to snap out of it before she gets away again.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

*pulls heart out of chest and places it on a silver platter for you*

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Alice go hunt Edward down and bring him to her.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Edward's families story is so sad. Fate had their paths cross again...

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You're breaking my heart.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That better be Edward.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

She's got cancer?

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You're killing smalls.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Is he gonna find her at the hospital?

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm gonna kick his ass if he does something stupid.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

When they reunite, she better realize how lucky she is to have such a man.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This does not sound good, at all.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well that was interesting.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I wanna kick Edward's ass for promising her he'd always be there.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You're gonna break my heart now, aren't you? Let me get my seatbelt on for this bumpy ride. I love she left him a note.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I would guess she's pregnant, but you don't have a fever with that.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yes, he is the dreamiest. When they have to come back to reality, it's gonna suck.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

*lights cig*

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella has lost a lot as a kid. Hopefully Edward will give her something to hold on to.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*fans self*

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh no, they can't pass up or ignore what they're feeling.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

*thud* I passed the fuck out from the hotness these two are.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yeah, I'm liking these two. Love the chemistry they have. They're both in trouble.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love a fiesty Bella. Yeah, Edward she's your girl, and you both feel it.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*chants* break the rules, break the rules.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yeah, I think the heat is on.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

lol... loved their first meeting.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A night to remember.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They're having so much fun.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I giddy about what's to come.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward's a musician... interesting.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

3 beautiful girls, dressed to kill, drinking to celebrate a 21st birthday, this is gonna be entertaining, as well as mischievious.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

What possible happen to her now?

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I knew this was coming. Its make or break time for them.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Good days vs Bad days... can be few and far between.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Bella needs to let Edward do what he wants. He wants to be there for her. She needs to overcome her fears.

Sherry

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104521
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

A very intriguing beginning.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

Fantastic chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21- What feels right

Not even 9 o'clock and Edward has had a full day. lol

Sherry

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Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

Tanya really got on my nerves in this chapter. I'm glad Bella corrected her about overstepping her boundries with her kids.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26- Making plans

I'm enjoying how they are rebuilding their relationship.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25- Our happy place

It seems like Bella is gonna over-think things too much.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy

An amazing first date ended very well.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23- The Date

Heavy discussion.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Beautiful chapter. Exceptionally well written. I loved every word, beginning to end.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29- Going home

Looks like fate...

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy

Rut-roh...

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb

Yikes.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Edward's side

The consequences of actions are real.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

At least he's stepping up and taking responsibility now.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22- Terrified

Such a great time with the kids, having a 'family' day.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

The struggles of parenthood are real.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

Edward was acting a bit selfish this chapter. Damn Alice for planting that seed.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

Heartbreaking decision to make.

Sherry

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8- The first day

Gotta do what you gotta do for the kids.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9- Family time

Quality time with the kids as a family will make your mind wonder to the 'what if's'.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- Explanations

lol Parent Trap them.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

I really dislike Edward right now. lol

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

I'm starting to not like Tanya so much.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

About time someone spelled it out to Bella, now someone needs to set Edward straight.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Tanya isn't gonna be able to deal with kid's messes. lol

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15- Fireworks

Damn Rose for breaking the spell.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Confused

I love Emmett being the one to help Edward sort out his feelings.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

What an emotional chapter. A lot of things came to light. 

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18- A long way to go

Heartbreaking and emotional chapter. They're working through so much hurt and anger.

Sherry

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

Gotta give Edward is due, he's trying.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27- Change of plans

Excellent way to spend a rainy day.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28- Normalcy

Bella is being level-headed.

Sherry



Author's Response:

thank you so much for taking the time to read and review each chapter!!! :)

 

kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419201
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
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Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm glad Alice stuck to her guns and didn't waiver for Jasper's pathetic ass.

I loved Bella's birthday presents. Edward really treated her right. The surprise dinner was a nice touch.

I expected Charlie to show back and up and cause grief, but didn't expect him to take Bella, Edward, and Garrett hostage at gunpoint. Angela said there were two men in the waiting room, Charlie and I'm gonna assume Jacob.

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Garrett and Alice's I love you's, not a moment to soon. Though I'm glad Jasper showed up to support Rose.

Poor Bella she seems to be slowly losing it. Glad Garrett was there for her until Edward could be.

Glad to see justice was served to Royce, he had it all coming to him in spades.

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Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Glad to see Bella taking actions in her and Edward's future plans.

 

I'm suspicious of Jasper's sudden apologies again.

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Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

A beastly chapter indeed, but so worth it.

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OH hell the hospital hired Jacob didn't they???

 

Loved drunk Edward and fluffiness.

 

Good for Bella standing up for herself and calling Jasper out on his rudeness.

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I don't recall if in the beginning if you wrote Charlie was friends with Billy Black, if so, since Jacob is working at Bella's hospital now, did he wire the money so Charlie could get out and torment Bella as amusement for himself... just a thougth. Edward's right though something fishy is going on.

 

So looking forward to Bella and Jacobs meeting.

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Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I loved the scenes from the island. The obvious guess who's calling would be Jacob or Charlie. But I think its Royce playing mind games, we will see though.

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Enjoying this story even though this Bella is a little on the patheitic side. I'm hoping her new found empowerment brings forth a Bella to be reckoned with. Looking forward to more Edward and Bella time.

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Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I think you captured the struggles, someone would have in circumstances as this, very well.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Geez, Edward just put it all on the line didn't he? Liking the flow of the story, it's moving right along and very smoothly.