Looks like life is heading in the right direction for them.

Sherry

Seven minutes of heaven, lol.

Sherry

That was unexpected.

Sherry

Lizzy is such a fun character.

Sherry

Thanks for sharing.

Sherry

Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.

Sherry

Thanks for updating, I had just put this story on a 'magic update thread' the other day on FB.

Jacob's an idiot. He's gonna end up getting himself killed. I feel sorry for Bella once he starts putting pressure on her. I hope she confides in Edward when it starts.

Love the way Edward and Bella interact. They're so sweet together. Loved the panic/safe room ideal.

Poor Bella is gonna have a hard road to travel with this team.

Sherry

I really can hardly wait for Edward and Bella admit their feelings toward each other, but with Jacob joining the coaching team, I see potential problems.

Sherry

Damn paps.

Sherry

I'm beginning to think Bella owning the team may be jinxed.

Sherry

Jacob really has some gall. At least Sam tore into Jacob for his behavior, knowing his past. I really hope she's able to fire his ass.

Bella and Edward are just finding out how hard relationships can be with complicated lives.

Sherry

They sure got hot and bothered quickly after their blow up. Please tell me it wasn't creeper Jacob watching them, reading on to find out.

Sherry

Edward sure does have game.

Sherry

I didn't see that twist coming, but it's fantastic anyway.

Sherry

Oh that sucks, but it happens to the best of them.

Sherry

Thank you for writing an amazing little tale of love and baseball. You wrapped it up perfectly.

Sherry

Thank goodness for Jasper taking care of Bella, but with him not suckling her, will it not make the process of milk production slower coming to her?

Have I mentioned how much I hate James and Aro. Gah! Can't wait until they are gone/dead.

Jasper is pure genius, making Anna and Giana service each other for distraction. Loved that Bella went to her 'happy place' during the blessing ceremony. Typical Edward to worry and overreact. But oh so rewarding when he got on the same page as Bella and gave her what she wanted and needed of him. At least she'll have one good memory of her wedding night.

What the hell is Vladimir doing to her? I'm guessing some type of peircing... 

What are the chances of you updating earlier? Can't blame a reader for trying to get an earlier update on such an enrapturing story.

I'm getting concerned about Edward. He seems like he's enjoying himself to much during his time with Tanya.

Emmett and Rose have done lost thier minds.

I accidentally came across this story and it caught my attention. I was gonna tag it and come back and read it later, but after reading the first chapter I couldn't stop. I'm intrigued to say the least.

I get Emmett and Rosalie are grieving for Edaward and Bella. But how can Rosalie be grieving for her fiance when Edward hadn't asked her yet? And she wasn't suppose to know he was planning to ask. Just curious.

WTG Edward, just hope James doesn't take it out on Bella, but knowing he will.

I like Bella's ideal to have Edward claim her before the ceremony. Hopefully they can pull it off without a hitch.

Looking forward to reading more...

I love seeing updates from this story.

Loved Jasper and Alice together. She's so innocent, yet quite the tease and daring. They need more sweetness.

Poor Tanya, she's one hell of a trooper, with everything she's been through she's still surviving.

Umm... will you be posting anything that happens back home with Emmett, Rose and the family? I'm really hoping James and Aro meet very painful deaths... hopefully soon.

I'm feeling spoiled with all these updates. Thank you for them.

It hasn't been hard to follow as to who this Elizabeth is. You've done extremely well telling 'her' story, as sadden as it may be. I love Charlie for spending time with her and revealing some of his history about his life. I'm sure she feels 'normal' when she's with him, sharing stories. I'm glad she feels safe enough with him to open up about some of the things that go on in the house. Looking forward to more.

I've been wondering if James made it out of the burning house alive, and if by some odd chance Aro survived. If one or both did, I can only imagine the vengeance that will come the escapees way.

So glad they made their confessions. Now they know their love was sparked a long time ago.

Eager for the next chapter.

That was a fantastic chapter.

Poor Tanya. I like how kind Edward was to Bree. Anna's about as messed up as Aro and the other men. It seems James' is being awful passive at the moment, but I think he's just laying in wait for his chance to get to Bella. Looking forward to the ceremony.

Vladimir is an animal. No matter how much I dislike Tanya, she didn't deserve what he did to her. I'm wondering how she'll cope with servicing the men on the wedding day in the shape she's in.

It seems like the torture never ends on the island. What else can go wrong?

Do you know how many more chapters will be left? And what's going on back home with Emmett and Rosalie?

At least now the ceremony and blessing is over, though I think James will still be a problem. I think Bella's taunting him with a smile was priceless. Edward being worried that Bella was injured... I think she's in shock and trying to process what all actually took place. She also may be embarrassed, thinking Edward will think less of her now, seeing she was tattooed. Not sure having Tanya and Jasper come to their room to check on her was a good ideal, since they were suppose to be celebrating there martial union. People may think he's already to share.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I kinda of thought Bella would be pregnant with multiples. I think they should enlighten her to the fact though instead of keeping her in the dark about it. Edward needs to stop being so negative about the Bella being pregnant. He and Bella need to communicate better.

Poor Bree. She's had a difficult life. Royce needs to rot in hell, as well as the Peter and Charlotte. I can only imagine her life is gonna get more difficult being on the island with James and Aro around.

I sort of thought Bree might die during delivery. I hope Peter holds Aro and James responsible for her death, but most likely he won't care they allowed his 'property' to die. Poor Bree, she's at peace now, but her baby only has a damned life ahead if Edward and Jasper can't get them all off the island to safety.

What a terrifying ordeal to witness, not only to Bella and Edward, but to them all. I'm hoping they can get off the island before Bella gives birth.

The scene about the butterflies was a very touching and symbolic.

How far along is Bella now??

OMFG!!! Best chapter thus far!!! You totally nailed it. Loved how you jumped from each of theirs POV's, giving the occurance of what was happening with each of them all at the same time.

I feel emotional that they were rescued, though a bit pissed at Emmett for withholding the information so long. Aro was a lot sicker than I thought. Eww!! Keeping his parents and dead sisters bodies. So glad the house of ill repute is destroyed.

I'm concerned James escaped, and will go after Bella again. Please don't let Edward pull away from Bella once their back home.

I'm excited for more.

I don't know who to feel worse for... Elizabeth or Charles. Aro is such a sick and demented bastard. At least now will know how Aro's no dick nub came about. Charles is gonna shoot it off if I remember correctly.

They're so sweet together. Damn Aro and his timing, he just had to ruin the moment.

Isn't odd how history repeats itself. For some reason I was thinking it was Charlie that maimed Aro. Glad Anthony got some justice for all the women Aro violated.

Thanks for sharing Elizabeth's story here. Looking forward to more IR.

Poor Tanya and the nightmares. I can't imagine the horror.

I'm amazed at Bella's perception and strength. She called Em right the hell out and laid it out for him. Glad she talked to Rose also. They both needed to know they didn't need to feel guilty and it was okay to be with each other.

I want Emmett to talk to Edward and straighten him out about Bella. He needs to talk to Bella and stop avoiding her. They need and love each other.

I'm guessing Carlisle, Charlie, Jasper, and Edward are planning to go back to the island. That could prove to be interesting.

I really feel bad for Bella, that Edward has left, and that he's still under the misconception that she aborted their baby. Jasper's right they really need to communicate.

Alice's world has really changed, I'm glad Jasper's there to help her along, as well as helping Carlisle and Esme adjust to Alice's quirks.

So someone posing as Bree has taken Aro. I read your response to one of the reviews that he was not in good hands. I can only hope he is being tortured multiple times daily.

It's about time Edward is coming home, that makes me so happy. He's gonna be so surprised when he sees Bella is still pregnant. They need to do some serious talking to each other.

Since Edward is coming home, and Tanya has taken up living in his condo, where is Edward gonna be staying. Surely he won't stay with Tanya, that would just be so wrong.

Looking forward to more.

Sherry

James punishment couldn't have been more appropriate, well only if he'd been shot in the dick. Lol, oh my Aro's situation is just priceless, couldn't have happened to a better man.

I'm sick that he has Bella and how he plastered pics of her over her childhood room. What a sick fuck?

Edward's on the way though, right? He'll get there before James can do anything to Bella, right?

Looking forward to Friday.

Thanks Noc for the update.

I'm glad Edward and Bella have gotten to talk a bit and are beginning to open communication between themselves. They both have a lot to share with the other.

I half expected Edward to propose to Bella when he put her ring back on. They need to make it official and all that jazz.

Ugh!! James is still alive, even if it's barely? Breathing air is too good for him. Can't wait until he's dead and buried.

Do you know how many more chapters before the babies will be born?

Yikes! This chapters ending gave me chills. Baby Bree's aunt is getting her revenge. Love it.

Edward needs to share his sister with Bella. Keeping his feelings to himself isn't gonna help him, or Bella for that matter. Cancer not only effects the patient, but all those that love the patient.

Sherry

I'm loving how supportive this Edward is.

Sherry

I'm sure Bella is thinking Edward is just too good to be real.

Sherry

I think Edward is expecting too much too soon.

Sherry

If they truly care about Edward, no doubt they'll support his request, as they did.

Sherry