Reviews by kini_113
Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

It seems aspects of your stories keep invading my personal life.  My 'hometown' in southern VA less then 20 miles from VIR.  Right now we are fighting against uranium mining in the area that had the abillity to devestate the entire area if thing went wrong.  A local paper released in the past week the VIR was combinging forces with General Motors and other huge corporation to bring a tire research and testing facility into the area.  The millions of dollars backing this endevor such hopefullly quell any contined grumblings about mining in the area.  Being raised solely on NASCAR I hadn't ever really paid attention to VIR but I have read 'Chasing Victory' and have a new a apresiation for 'Road racing'  which it seems may bring my hometown out of the current slump and focus on furture that involves research into tires and not uranium mining.  Thanks for a wonderfull story.  I've thourghly enjoyed everthing I've read from you so far.  Best wishes in your fuutre indeveres.  

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Truely enjoying your story...  I hope your RL things get better but family is the most important thing so we'll wait until your more important priorities have been taken care of.    



Author's Response:

Thank you. I promise I will finish this story. RL's been very difficult with an illness and a recent death in my family. I'm just trying to cope. 

 

I hope I can return soon

 

 

 

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For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

A few chapters back to talked about wasp spray versus mace.  It really made me laugh considering I have my own history using bug replentant against a guy.  I may have only been 8 or 9 years old at the time but at summer camp on year I was startled and scared $$$$less my someone sneaking up to my cabin window and grabbed the bottle of bug spray hitting him full face with it.  I don't remember any details about it other then my own guilt after the occurance but found the reference brought back a memory I had long since forgotten. 

Common Ground by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
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Bella has come to accept that her unusual fetish may mean she spends her life alone, that is, until she meets handsome OB Edward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11008 Read Count: 23179
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Althogh this is a fetish I know nothing about I really enjoyed what you've written so far and I hope you'll continue with this story

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story.... :D



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

The Hotel Sterling at least the one I know is in Pennsylvannia not Washington unless there is another.  The description you gave is too consistent with the one I know.  Am I correct?



Author's Response:

Yes, it's the one in W-B PA.

The Fire Inside by alexajaye Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Vampire mates Jasper and Edward are out hunting when they find a young girl named Bella. She's not just any girl. She has a gift. And soon, her very existence will change the immortal world as they know it. When her life is threatened, they soon fight for her in a struggle that could destroy her for all eternity.

"A bond forged by fire is never broken." — author unknown

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Slash, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: HamHamNation's List of Reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74779 Read Count: 15744
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: An Exception to Every Rule

How can Bella be considered human since she is essentially an imortal at 200 years old or are they only calling her "human" because they don't know what she is? 



Author's Response:

It is more or less because they don't know what she is yet.  I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Carlisle Cullen

Interesting twists and so many questions looking forward to finding the answers :D

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Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The Connection

I'm truely enjoying your story so far :)

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94836
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

Loving the story so far but I was wondering that sometimes the text is whited out and other times the Author's notes.  I wasn't sure if it was some you did for if it is a site glitch. 



Author's Response:

That's definitely gotta be a site glitch.  I checked through them and it isn't showing up that way in any chapters on my browser.  Hmm.  So sorry about that, but I'm not sure what the solution is.

So glad you like the story!

Reviewer: kini_113 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

Totally amazing chapter and story. :D  Stepmom's get such a bad wrap in media but I had a wonderful one who I wouldn't trade for the world and as an adult now it's really nice to someone else there... even though my father passed away years ago we've still maintained a relationship.  While I didn't have the age difference as a factor it's also been like she was my aunt or something like that, i guess is the best way to describe it. Adult but not parent, sort of thing.  As always can't wait for more ;)



Author's Response: Thrilled that you like the story and chapter so much. Yeah, stepmom's do get a bad rap, but they can be absolutely amazing. That's so wonderful that you still have such a great relationship with yours. Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: kini_113 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

awww that was hot and sweet and teary eyes all in one shot ;)



Author's Response:

That's exactly the blend of emotions I was going for!  Thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter so much!

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Bella Swan's unrequited love for Edward Cullen is a joke amongst their fellow vet students at Colorado State.  He's never returned her feelings for him, until a horse he's caring for finally succumbs to cancer, and he realizes that Bella's the only one who can comfort him. My contribution for the Fandom4Colorado Fundraiser.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11697 Read Count: 3783
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Outtake - The Fourth Truth

great story always love to find other horse people :D



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the story!  And yes, it is nice to find other horse people around!

Summary:

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Banner Made By Ellie Wolf

 

Tragedy introduced them, common ground brought them closer and heartbreaking circumstances will tie them together. A/U A/H OOC and all that fun stuff. Normal disclaimers apply


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60609 Read Count: 11220
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2012 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm really enjoying your story and looking forward to more :D

Is there an easier way to read the magizine article I saw it in your pics but the text is light and kind blurry?



Author's Response:

Sure... PM me on facebook so I know who you are and I will be happy to PM you hard copy of the artical.

Myth: Debunked by lmhsfan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Edward is writing a song-no, THE song-that will finally win Bella's heart. Until the perpetually shirtless neighbor shows up, babbling nonsense about his cat in another lame attempt to flirt shamelessly with his Bella. Well, jokes on him. Bella's not home, and he's not interested. Really. Language. Lemon. Slash. Inspired by a prompt given to me for Fage 4.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5236 Read Count: 1012
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2013
Reviewer: kini_113 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story ;) and your line "I was in the Navy" just about had me spit my drink all over the computer LMAO



Author's Response:

Thank you fior revewing! And yeah, I like that bit. I get 2 different stories from Navy guys, but this seemed like it might get a reaction either way. You're the first person to mention it. Then again, I only have 3 revieews between the two sites, so that's about right.