Membership status: Member
Bio:
Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77165
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Caret
OK, truly, I am just annoyed at trying to get to the point here. Clearly they are going to end up together and now it's just getting frustrating to see them go back and forth and back and forth each chapter. Just get them together already. I don't see how this much of a delay can possibly benifit the story in any way. The first 3/4 of this story so far has been amazing. The time they spent together in the beginning. Now it just feels like you don't know what you are going to do with them once they come together so you are prolonging it. I don't normally criticise like at all and I read a ton of fanfiction, but with most stories I don't like I just stop reading. But, that is the problem here, I really LOVE this story and the writing has been very good, but I think you've gone off task here.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you're not enjoying it anymore... believe me, I have a solid plot, do not think I am writing on the fly. This story will go the way I want it to, and what has happened up until this point is deliberate and essential to my plot. I don't want you to be annoyed, but I do want you to feel frustrated, so at least know I have been successful in writing that. It is inevitable in this story that things won't go smoothly at first, there will be more angst, there will be citrus and lemons and all the other things, but I'm not sacrificing my plot to jump into that. It's a journey that will get them to where they need to be and if you decide this fic is not for you, then I completely understand if you flounce. Like you said, there are so many wonderful fic's out there. and my little story is what I need to write...and of course it won't please everyone. I haven't gone off task. If you trust me enough to let me tell the story, then that is fantastic, if not, well, no hard feelings and thank you so much for reading this far...
There is a music tease to Chapter 26 on my blog, if you're still interested... boydblog.tumblr.com
Luv BBxx
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
this chapter didn't post
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/ If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/
For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom. Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward. Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Ah, I knew you would have Em catch them, I just didn't predict him to catch them in THIS position. Will Edward jump out the window and take off or confront Em with her? Cannot wait to find out. I truly love this story, you have created an amazing connection between Edward and Bella here. I know it will be hard once the family finds out, but I hope it's not to angsty. It will certainly break my heart if they end up being apart for any lengthy period of time. But, since you are the author and your writing is amazing, I'll let you tell the story and I will follow you wherever you chose to take them on this journey.
Thanks for writing and using our favorite characters to do so.
'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Wow, that's all I can say, just simply amazing. I just cannot even think straight after reading this all. It's been a long, long time since a fanfiction story grabbed me, but this is simply incredible. Thank you, thank you, thank you, for sharing your amazing gift with all of us. I cannot really think straight at the moment to make any logical comments about the characters, but I will in the future.