Reviews by jbe86
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995786
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I read Human Sexuality and it was really good. not a nice ending with it not going further but i'll live. lol as far as this chapter goes I love that Bella finally got her punishment she definately needed it to move on. My favorite part of this story was actually just a small part but still my favorite. its where they're at the dinner and "a young actor who looks like Edward and his rumored costar/girlfriend were there" making goo goo eyes at each other. who could that be? ;) lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks - I had to put that in, I mean come on - just a little snapshot ...

So glad you picked it up!

xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

awww! I know I'm weird but that whole chapter was aww worthy especially since they made up and the whole scene with Carlisle and Esme? unnnffff yes please? ;) I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye p.s. if you could write a chapter like that of Carlisle and Esme but with Edward being possessive over Bella, I think I would love you forever! lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

aww :( every two weeks? okay I guess ;) I loved the whole Riley thing and his visit. does he still want Esme? that's weird. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

hey hone, no Riley has come to his senses! Thanks heavens and the outtake will be out next week. thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

the whole thing with Seth/Sue/Charlie was cute. Its nice to get an insider's look into their life and As for Edward, well I think he was too harsh on her personally. She forgot. it was actually an honest mistake this time and she said yellow when she needed time so what does he do, come in to her room and try talking to her only to get upset with her when she tells him she doesn't want to. poor thing. Hopefully he pops the question soon and I realy hope she gets pregnant too bc I want to see how w/the bdsm relationship how that works. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments and review.  Edward knows that Bella made an honest mistake, and he wants to make sure that she does't ever do that again. Edward wants Bella to be well and he wants her to respect her body and take care of it. Her health and wellbeing are the reasons that he chose to put away his 'training wings' and to step up to the next level.  You know how protective he is over her. He begins filming soon and he knows that life is going to get hectic and he wants to ensure that Bella will look after herself.

I hope that this explanation has helped you to see his point of view.

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

AWWW!!! That was soo nice! What a proposal! That’s the way to do it too. Lol do it casual or go home. :D I can’t wait for another update. This is sooo good. I LOVE how Bella put Heidi in her place. Lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments.  I'm glad that you liked it. Update soon xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Outtakes: Carlisle and Esme after she left his side and her punishment. :D sequel: I'll tell you then and I'll tell you now: yes yes yes PLEASE!! lol I liked that chapter especially with everything going on and then you adding the pictures made it all the more better. I love Edward's surprise to Bella at her art show. that was sweet. I like how they went several days without playing but that role play thing? yes yes YES that was hot as hell! I loved that. I can't wait for another chapter. that might be another outtake, the roleplaying games of Edward and Bella. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

thank you and the outtake will come up this week end - I think you will be happy!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

wow they were fighting the majority of this chapter. I loved it though. it showed exactly what Edward said, they were growing as a couple. :D I loved it. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

thanks again for your review jbe xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

lol I keep thinking of Maury with Renee: you are not the mother. lol but now I wonder, even tho that's a FANTASTIC thing, who is her mother? and Charlie didn't know? wouldn't he know who he slept with? unless Renee is a coniving bitch who got a surrogate & faked her pregnancy. poor charlie. poor Bella. but YEAH EDWARD AND BELLA: They did it! lol I love how embarassed Bella got in this chapter. soo freaking good. I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

hey there jbe - thanks so much for the great review and comments. update will be on time - promise!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

DAMN!! Seth is FINE!! lol yeah you were right tho this chapter was looong. but so good. I'm glad Bella popped Renee. Especially after saying what she did to Edward. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work and thanks again bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

aww baby Bean is HERE!! I was so happy about that. I especially loved the relationship between everyone in this story, in this chapter. I liked Bella taking control of the wedding and showing that big guy who's boss. lol that was great. and when Emmett named the baby after Edward, I got weepy. I hope Bella does have a baby by the end of this story bc Edward is going to make an excellent father. :D keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I know! no sex in this story is such a crime. lol I was reading the chapter update on TWCS bc there's photos (:D) and I put my reply on both ff.net and TWCS bc you answer back on ff.net. so I have a couple questions: one, what is the first picture of at the very top of the story before it even starts? Two: have we seen pictures of her wedding dress or is that next chapter with the tuxes and all? that's it for questions lol but my most favorite part of this whole chapter was a small part, and that was when they were looking at each other across the lake. that was sooo freaking sweet and romantic. I can't wait for more. thanks again and bye for now



Author's Response:

Okay - heres the 411 - the first picture are nipple cups that are used to um, actually used to help inverted nipples but of course it can also be used to um, simulate suckling sensations as well.  NO, we haven't seen the dress yet and you will NEXT CHAPTER. I'm glad you liked it, update soon xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

wow! Edward really is an uber douche but after his breakdown I really get why. poor thing and then he couldn't even get excited? wow what a blow to a man's ego. :( but I'm glad he finally did have his breakdown and get his erection. lol and that Bella told him off. he needed it. I can't wait to see what happens next AS USUAL. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Disappointed :( all loving between Carlisle & esme & no love between Edward & bella. :( oh well maybe next time. C& E needed to fix their problems first but I am sad that Emmett & Rosalie had to steal Edward & Bella's thunder. I'm just glad that everyone's back together, that's great. Keep up the great work & thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

aaawwww -  I'm sorry - no loving at all... but cheer up, I promise that I will make it up to you, ok?  As for Emmett and Rose, well, she told him not to, but he can't keep a secret to save his life!  All it takes is one smile and those  dimples and we are lost - sigh...

xoxo

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Shorter? No a lot happened this chapter. I of course loved it and look forward to more. :) can't wait for daddy Edward to get there. :D thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and the review - glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Well what an awesome place to leave that. Lol I still love how childish Edward & Alice are over their parents live lives. Lol too funny. The babies are coming!!! I can't wait! Thanks again bye for now.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Aww! Edward breaking down about killed me! And Carlisle comforting him. Ooh soo sweet! But I can't remember: is Edward adopted by the Cullens or is he esme & Carlisle's son? I can't wait to read the next chapter, which is posted. :) off to read now. 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Wait so youre posting Hope Springs AND THEN the sequel to PLU? Ooh harsh! But I'll be here. Especially after that. I don't think my heart could've taken any more after that car crash. I can't wait to read more from you. Thanks again sooo much. I just ask that if it's going to be awhile before the sequel if you could post a recap of everything from PLU before posting the sequel. Thanks again soo much. Bye for now. 

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

tfymBANNER


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Many Shades of Love

Aww can everyone say AWWWW?? I loved that chapter. it was sweet especially with Leah being the surrogate and Jasper comforting Alice and Edward and Bella's Valentines date. all that was too cute. Please update again real soon. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks...the prolougue is coming soon so I wanted to give you all a few sweet moments before that hits.  More will be coming soon.  Thanks love~

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Better Together

wow it has been awhile hasn't it? lol that's alright, you came back with vengence. lol that chapter was great. I almost cried when Edward got upset and Bella was comforting him. that was sweetly written. :D thanks again and keep up the great work. thanks bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The City She Loves & the Place We Call Home

aww poor Leah. that girl does have her hormones and mixed with being a bitch by nature, lol she is in for the long haul. TWINS both a boy and girl. they got exactly what they wanted for the only time they're having a baby. soo cool. thanks again and keep up the good work. thanks bye



Author's Response:

my leah isn't really a bitch, but the hormones are hitting hard and heavy.  And yes, twins for them. I'm excited, these babies have been alive in my head for ages so it's nice to get them one step closer to being out in the 'world.' thanks for reviewing and you'll hear from me 'soon.'

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: I Would Die for That

wow Bella panicked didn't she? poor thing. but at least Eli is ok. lost his leg but ok. its been awhile since you've updated this but keep up the great work. thanks again bye

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

lol2

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

awww that poor guy. :( I'm so sorry to hear that Bella didn't tell him in the note that she's pregnant. that sucks. i can't wait till may. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I'm just sooo happy they made up and both us and Bella got a lemon. lol I love it. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

they need to be reunited.....NOW!! I seriously chanting HEA HEA HEA over and over but its not happening. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

dang all that guessing? you would have to be YOU in order to guess right. lol. I cant wait to find out. keep up hte great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I hope Edward is pissed. I mean he needs to forgive her but not before laying in on her full force. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I hope Edward is pissed. I mean he needs to forgive her but not before laying in on her full force. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I hope Edward is pissed. I mean he needs to forgive her but not before laying in on her full force. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

He needs time? hasn't the time she's been away been long enough? poor guy. poor girl. Cute as hell Charlie. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

yeah he finally came to his senses. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

aww they're getting married. how sweet. :) I'm glad the girls have accepted Bella being back, especially Lizzie. Keep up the amazing work and i'm really sorry to see the epilogue coming so soon. :( thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

well what a nice ending. lol Edward's going to get some. :) I love where you took this story. it was amazing and I can't wait for part two. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

wow they are horny bitches. lol I loved that ending. and they had another baby, too cute. I loved it. thanks again bye

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

awww this is going soo well. and he does get her. at least he has charlie's approval. :) I was surprised by Edward's age but no matter. its going great anyway. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

those two are too freaking sweet. :) I loved the Mrs. Robinson thing. thus proving Bella is okay with their age difference. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

awww how sweet are they in a hot kinky way? lol I love it. I liked the poker game and Bella's whole gate crashing her car deal. that was funny. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

aww that poor couple. :( I love where this is going though. I loved the hot kinky sex in the kitchen and I can't wait for some Edward and Bella moments on the red carpet or Edward trying not to be with Bella when they're in public. I can't wait. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

that was a nice ending. :'( sad that's its ending period but it was nice. I love Edward with his kids. too freaking cute. can't wait for the outtakes thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

aww that was sweet. who knew it would cost Edward a hefty sum to see Bella's mom and meet her? lol. I love this and where its going. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

wow wow wow Edward is hot jealous. lol I love it. Its been forever since you've updated, what exactly are you doing? :) just teasing. Please update again real soon? Please PLEASE PLEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!!!!! lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Psst... I'm updating again tonight... I've been on vacay ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

aww this is going great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Well what a jump Edward made, you're hurt now so you're not going to NY with me. fabulous guy. lol Im so sad to see this go but hey we have two more chapters and an epi so I think I can live with that. :D I did read your outtake on Fandom and I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

aww those two are too freaking cute even with Bella's low self esteem. lol I love this story.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

lol Esme rocks! but not as much as that really hot scene in the living room moving to the bedroom! OOH! that was hot! I can't wait for more. I'm going to be crying like a baby when this ends but then I'll probably go back through and reread it again. I can't wait for the lemony outtake in the Dirty Cheeky Monkey o/s thanks again bye

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Checkmate

that's right, just like him but BETTER!! I am in love with this story. it is fantastic and I just got caught up. I can't wait till you update again. I got a little weepy when he said Baby you have to get up. that was heartbreaking. keep up the amazing work. the whole biting and sucking from each other thing is hotter than hell. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome review!!! It really means so much to me that people  are enjoying this story. I still get nervous and ask myself what the hell am I doing every time I post! lol. Also, I too love Edward's mooshy side, which we dont see often...maybe next chapter we will see more??? As always thanks for your support, its reviews like yours that make me want to write ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:The End

of course it had to happen, New Moon right? lol I'm so happy you updated. I love where this is going and to get to the good stuff we have to get past the heart ache. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right! And thank you so much for your support. This was a tough chapter to write but was essential in where the story needs to go. Thanks for not wanting to kill me, lol. Thanks again and see you soon ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

Ohh I'm Soo sad to see this end. :( I'm glad he's back tho. Even if he is a vampire who drinks human blood at least he's alive. Thanks again. 



Author's Response:

My thoughts exactly :) Thank you again for all your support! I am sad to see this end too but it is time...there will be an outtake so at least there is that to look forward to :)) THANK YOU XOXO

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Truth

WHAT? well this isn't looking like a HEA at all. :( that was sad. very heartbreaking. I don't know if I want to read the last chapter (next chapter) or not. I hope you make it up to us. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I will tell you now that I am a firm believer in HEA...but it may be a little weird getting there :) thank you for reading and reviewing! I promise you will be happy with the end :))

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

aww poor Bella. I bet she thinks Tanya is moving in on her territory. lol Welcome back! I was just looking through my favs yesterday and wondered where you were and what was taking so long to update. now we know! :D I love this story. the whole "real vampire" thing is great with the purring and drinking blood. I love it and wow pregnant again. Bella should be a rabbit. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well I just got caught up with this story and i think its safe to say, WOW!!! I LOVE IT!! I'm so happy she's pregnant again and I can't wait till they tell Edward. I absolutely just LOVE the possesive side of Edward. that's too hot. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Your entusiasm is awsome and infectious! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Go tell DIEGO!! ooh this is soo good and again possessive edward is hot! I love it. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Lets hope she listens to you! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Happy New Years and thanks for the update. you rock. :D I love this story and always get so excited to see it. :D thanks again bye  p.s. More possessiveward next time. :D lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ooh nice! bella's going to be a vampire. this is going great. thank goodness you updated. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! and yes so much is now going to be going on. I am sorry for the delay. i was writing just not much Fan Fic. more to come soon! thanks for staying with me, nails233

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189020
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down

OOH OOOH OOH you have me at attentiion. lol I too can't wait till their friday night and hopefully our tomorrow. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you're liking it :)  I'm afraid I haven't written the next chapter yet but I will soon :)  Thank you for being so anxious!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview

AWWW!!! Merry FREAKING CHRISTMAS indeed. I saw that in my inbox this morning and about had a seizure! Thanks so much. that was I do believe Hotter than Bella's pov. :D keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. Meeting the parents next? or what do you have in store? :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Hehe I'm so glad that you were happy with my present to you!  Merry Freaking Christmas :)  Love it! 

I thought it was hotter myself.  Something about that guy/porn mentality coupled with his love for her that made it even better.

Meeting the parents amongst a couple other things next :) 

Thank you so much for the review, I'm happy as can be that you liked it!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact

aww girlfriend! I'm so happy they put that bitch in her place. she deserved it especially when she's not all that bright. I can't wait for more. hopefully you update again real soon. I'm excited for FRIDAY or tomorrow. lol okay I can dream. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Haha Everyone's excited for Friday :)  Their Friday is sadly not our Friday but I'll get it to you as soon as I can!

So glad you enjoyed the meeting and goodbye to Tanya!  She was dispatched easily thanks to Alice and Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

Lol on the whole chakra thing but major frowny face on the whole last half of the story. :( it made me get weepy. Especially when he hugged her. That was soo sad. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks again bye for now.



Author's Response:

Awww sorry I made you weepy, but it's a compliment that you felt that way!  I had fun in the beginning and sad at the end but I promise that things will be resolved soon.  Thank you hon!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting

that was sweet. the whole get-together. everyone got along, just like we thought they would and they made fun of Edward. lol loved the collage a la Edward on Emmett's ceiling. lol to funny. hopefully we get our lemon really soon. I think I might explode if I don't. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Hehe uniting in making fun of a person....always the way to go!  He took it mostly well.  Poor QB.  Well, Bella will make it all better next chapter, promise! 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion

aww she loves him, him, his fingers and ZEUS!!! lol I love it. that shower sounds awesome and i tried looking up the heater that heats your feet and I couldn't find it anywhere so I'm deeply bummed. :( lol other than that, I love where you're taking this. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Heheh what's not to love?  Fingers, tongue and Zeus and hotness and the shower!  I want some!  Sorry about your heater, that's not fair!  I would love to have something like that myself :)

Glad you like it and I thank you for the review!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

Epov!!! please? lol I loved that chapter and the massage was HOT. I usually don't like being massaged but if the event leads to that, well massage away. lol I can't wait for more. especially more Dr. phil with Jasper, Edward and Emmett moments would be great. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I can honestly say I don't think I've ever met anyone who didn't like to be massaged!  How about that?  haha Anyway, glad you liked it in the fic, at least :) 

EPOV is definitely going to happen.  It's pretty much unanimous it looks like.

I love writing the boys together, so I'll see what I can do.  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field

aww that chapter was sweet. and I'm assuming this is the game before the prologue? or not? either way I love it. especially that glance he sent her and then mouthing for you. *sigh* too freaking cute. keep up the great work. I can't wait for another chapter. thanks again bye :D



Author's Response:

No it's not the game before the prologue.  That's going to require a time jump after this next chapter ;)  She covers that game, remember, not hanging out with Alice and Rose.  I'm glad you liked it!  The "for you" was just swoon-worthy I thought!  I so want him!  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan

lol Esme is too cool. I love her. she knew all along and just wanted her baby to tell her. too sweet. keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Haha yeah she did.  He needed a little needling and deserved it for shutting her out.  I'm so glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass

ouch poor Edward. :( he got smacked in the face but now I'm going to go reread Bella's pov from the first chapter to see if she told Edward about that Dan guy bc he needs to have his head ripped off. :) lol thanks again so much and I do HOPE you start updating weekly. that would be great. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Haha no she didn't tell him in the locker room, but I'm sure she'll tell him about it at home.  The locker room was for other things! hehe

He'll be okay, he's used to taking hits! 

I'm glad you liked it and yes, EPOV is coming very soon.  I'll do my best to update weekly! 

Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

lol that was great! I love Emmett. That picture of his smile mixed with the dildo was soo great. but did I miss the Jasper moment? He kept Jasper names like spider names? am I right? where did I miss that? oh well. this was great. keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now. :D

Author's Response:

Chapter 28, the Emmettake, Jasper had a hard time fitting in the car and Emmett realized he looked like a spider ;)

Thanks for two reviews!  So kind!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

First question: did I miss something? what was the private joke about the tool Emmett was buying? I felt like Esme there for a second. lol Now this chapter was cute and we now know how hung Carlisle is. lol I can't wait to read the fluff story from you. Anything is great but fluff is going to be perfect ESPECIALLY with Sideline Collison right around the corner too. OOH its like Christmas all over again. :D keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

You must have.  The tool was in the moving chapter, the big black dildo that Emmett bought and Rose threatened him with. She stashed it in her tool box, hence the name.

Haha yes, Edward comes by Zeus honestly! 

Yes, tons of things ahead!  Probably too much but this new story wants to come out so I'm gonna do what I can without taking away from this one.  So glad you're excited, thank you!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

Soo Esme's alright but Edward IS mad regardless of him saying he's not? poor Bella. I really hope he's not pushing her away. and he did tell her to write the truth so he has no reason to be mad. I really hope you have another chapter ready and rearing to go bc I need my fix. lol I can't wait for more on Everything! Sideline Collison (more about that :D) Edward and Bella to actually have a conversation in Words with Friends and E/B's confrontation on here. :D Sooo excited! keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now

Author's Response:

We don't know what exactly Edward is at this moment.  Bella's making some assumptions of her own, and we know how that turns out much of the time.  I think his pride is definitely wounded but I wouldn't call him mad.  I've made a point of saying that Edward doesn't take losses well, especially when he's the main reason behind them.  This is the first time she's had to write about it which makes it a little worse.

I'm glad you're anxious for more :)  Lots and lots ahead on all the stories! hehe

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

oooh SEX on the FIELD? that's hot, but its not going to come back and bite them in the ass is it? like someone saw them? that'd be bad. lol but I'm glad they worked screwed and made up. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

Very hot and no, it won't bite them on the ass.  I'm not turning my story into some sordid sex scandal.  All is well now!  Thanks :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

aww! that last part was sweet. I love how focused Edward was in the game. He was ready to win! I'm sad to see this end but at least we have a couple chaps & an epilogue left before the real end. that's always good news. keep up the great work thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

Hahah I'm glad you're here too!  Thank you :)  There's plenty ahead, I promise! 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

YES PERFECT ENDING! Daddyward all the way! Lol and I'm so glad that it's over but not really bc of the outtakes. That makes me soo happy! One outtake I want: Meghan choosing Wyatt or Ryan. :) thanks again, bye until more. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Daddyward is definitely win!  There's ore to come for sure!  I love how you all want teenage drama :)  I'll see what I can do!  Thank so much :)

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100556
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me

Whatever he's doing, keep doing it. its hot as hell! lol I love it. I can't picture all those piercings though. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! lol he is a little rough around the edges isn't he ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You

God Rosalie is such a bitch and then she drags Tanya into the mix making her too a bitch. lol I love it. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

As always thanks for the review! They sure are persistent aren't they! ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

does this line include killing you in your sleep for leaving us hanging like that? lol just kidding but that was pure evil! EVIL! I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

haha! thanks for the review...i just wanted it to be EPOV lol :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me

LOVE IT!! that counter scene was hott not to mention the whole bedroom scene at the beginning. :) I can't wait for more. I do have to ask if you can, can you put the translations to the italian Bella says at the end of the chapters so we know what the heck she's saying? lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yay! I will add translations at the end from now on...I'm glad you liked it. next one should be up soon

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me

sorry one more thing, I LOVE Edward and Bella's pda so DON'T STOP! lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

wow this story is one of the major ones I have on my favorites that I just die waiting for an update. its soo good and hot as hell. I loved the last chapter where Bella was kissing and biting on his neck in front of Rosalie staking her claim. LOVED THAT!! this chapter had some hot scenes too especially the metaphorical handcuff and infinity necklace. great job. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

aww thanks for the translations. you're awesome! I can't wait for more. I loved the whole possessive thing Bella was showing Gianna. that was hot and so was Edward sticking up for Rosalie. I loved the PDA hot hot stuff. :D keep up the amazing work and more jealous Edward or Bella would be awesome. I can't wait. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace

OUCH Edward is PISSED! he should really watch his temper. lol I can't wait to find out what Bella thinks in all this or what is exactly happening in her mind. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry

what do I think? HOLY FUCK to quote Edward. lol that was hott. wow I was right there with Bella when he bought out that camcorder. holy hell. wow, they sure are kinky you freaky girl. lol you make me proud. (wipes away a tear) thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response: Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

Edward's parents fucking ROCK!! forgive the language but dang. that was hot and Carlisle checking out Bella's ass was hilarious. I love that everyone likes it. lol keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

wow hot almost sex at the beginning finishing up with matching tattoos and a question. lol I for one am dying to know who was watching their videos if Edward isn't sure it was him? keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks! I always look forward to your reviews! Too bad their hot make-out was interrupted by Charlie! lol Talk to you soon...Laila

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

Wow okay first of all, I have to say: no sex? lol those two are some kinky bitches and for one chapter to go without a lemon, I'm shocked. :) otherwise the shit is hitting the fan now. I thought he broke up with her and now he's whining because she left him? wow this is going good. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Collin is a douche right? I modeled him after that Scott guy on the Kardashians lol. Have you had a chance to check out the outtake?

As always thank you for your continued support!

Laila

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone

WOW THAT WAS HOT! Who knew Edward spoke Italian? lol keep up the great work. I love it. I especially loved her Nonni and the confrontation between Mateo and Edward. HOT HOT HOT! lol keep up the great work. can't wait for more. thanks again bye p.s. is Jake going to be in here? I can't remember if you said that or not. :D

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

that was hot! But bella is a little confusing with the possessive not posessive stuff. lol keep up the great work. I'm glad they're leaving Rome and Matteo (who by the way is fucked up with the whole I don't like Edward being with Bella but i'm married thing. lol) keep up the great work work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

look Edward is whipped so freaking bad. lol also Jasper is a little bit of jerk. :D I love it though. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long

lol I loved that photoshoot and then the aftermath too. lol now as for her mother that bitch has a lot of nerve. I can't wait till they deal with her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell

wow its been FOREVER!!! lol I was really missing this story. I like the comeback though. not love but like. because there weren't any lemons. :(    you comeback and Bella's on her period? totally not cool for perverted people like me. lol but seriously I love this story. I was soo afraid you abandoned it so I'm happy that you didn't so thank you for that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

wow it has Been FOREVER!!! lol no I'm kidding. what a comeback but Edward is going to be PISSED soo freaking PISSED!!! Bella should just tell him from the get go. oh well can't wait to see where this goes and do you have a link to that video of them in the theroes of passion? lol I'm kidding honestly. lol thanks again so much. can't wait for more and you want some love? how about this: LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it! is that enough for now? lol thanks again :D

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: I Want You

Charlie IS a bit of a dick. lol I love the happy dance from the cup cakes though. too cute. I can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart

Oh no! Edward is in some deep shit now. That poor guy. Colin deserved it and hopefully once he tells the court or his lawyer what Colin was saying he won’t be sued. I mean yes he shouldn’t of beat the hell out of him but if Colin wasn’t running his mouth he wouldn’t have had to. :D I can’t wait for more updates. This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the great work. Thanks again bye!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun

aww that chapter had me getting a lot weepy mixed with lemons! I love you! lol keep up the great work. this is getting soo good. I can't wait to find out the dirt on Collin even though he's PROBABLY gay. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

DAMN! now that is how SM's Edward and Bella should have spent their bachelor parties. lol that would have been sexy as hell. :D I can't wait for the wedding and they're trying to get pregnant! that's great! I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now p.s. I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE the marking they do in this story. Just thought you should know, more marking in the future, keep that up. :D psst also some jealous Edward in later chapters, would be great too. Just saying lol thanks bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

What? Edward didn't sleep with her, did he? or is she just a whore? Lol. I love Edwards reaction to becoming a dad. That's cute. Thanks again bye for now.

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135502
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bella is awesome. she is definately my girl. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well so far so good. I love that Edward is her partner but it would have been nice if he was a Cullen not a Masen but oh well. :) keep up the great work.  thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:0)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow bella kicked Emmett's ass and turned Edward on in the process. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

God Edward is a real dick right now. :( hopefully he gets better. Are we going to be getting any EPOV's anytime? :D because that would be great. I'd really like to know why he keeps looking at Bella with want but yet being rude to her as well? keep up the great work. I like it. thanks again bye



Author's Response:


EPOV will come later:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well that story was both fact fullfilling and dissappointing. :( I liked it though, just more Carlisle/Bella than Bella/Edward is is kinda :p you know? lol thanks for the great work. keep it up thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks:_

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like where this is at. its nice having Esme and Bella tease Carlisle. lol I wish we could have some more tension between Edward and Bella particulary of the sexual kind but any sort of interest would be nice. :) I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

There will be more E and B soon:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

YES punch Mike! lol I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the chemistry you have between Edward and Bella. He's so jealous its cute. and the eyes comment was too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ooh a little bit more "romance" between the two of them but more space between the girls. :( oh well keep up the awesome work. thanks again bye



Author's Response: Thank you