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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.
Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.
B/Jms at first then B/E
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm really glad I gave this story a shot. A really heart breaking chapter. Great job, can't wait to see where you took this. ;)
Author's Response:
i'm glad you gave my story a chance too. I hope you like the later chapters.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Oh he laid it on thick. Can't wait to see how this turns. Great job. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I think she should have followed her instincts to be scared. Great chapter though, wondering if Edward has any feelings for her as well.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
So he was literally stalking her before she even laid eyes on him. Way to get the goose bumps raised. Great chapter, still wondering why Edward gets so upset, she didn't mention Jasper at all at the pizza place. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh my...tear jerker. Both from laughing and of course crying. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yeah, Edward's definitely hiding his own feelings. I'm really scared to find out what finally brings Bella to her senses. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Ah...silly blind little girl...
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
cute chapter, no shit from James, hmm...
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Oh Edward, if only you could have found the courage.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
okay, if this wasn't James I would be in line to get me some of that. Dang, I hate to admit it, but the boy was smooth. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
If it was any other guy, I would be in line to get me some of that. Dang, I hate to admit it, but the boy was smooth.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
oh yeah, things are gonna get interesting. Great job! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Okay, I'm starting to get a little freaked out now...
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I knew it! Wow, that little piece was soooo teasing, but very welcomed. As great as this chapter was, I'm really scared for Ryan.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I honestly didn't think James would do that to her, I wonder what brought that on since he was so obsessed with her. I'm still worried about Ryan.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Was wondering when she was going to think of that. Great chapter, I'm on edge with each word! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I soooo fell in love with Carlisle in this chapter! He flippen' rocked! Also a little Edward and Bella action. Nice! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
A really cute chapter. Especially since we've had a bit of drama lately. Excellent job! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Beautiful...that's all I can say. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Now we're getting down to the nitty gritty. Can't wait! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Wow, talk about a roller coaster of a chapter. Excellent! Got to get back and find out her answer.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
It only shows how much Edward and Bella belong together that everybody approves. Now I just hope they can get things started before it gets too out of control. Great job! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I just love how they all support her and won't let her take any blame. And Emma calling Edward daddy...priceless! ;)
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Sweet and beautiful. ;)
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I never saw this twist coming! Can't wait to see what you bring on them now. ;)
Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day
Interesting, can't wait to see what you do with it. ;)
Author's Response: glad you've given my story a chance and hope you enjoy the ride :-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: First Day Pt 1
I honestly thought it was Edward she bumped into. Great chapter. ;)
Author's Response: lol glad I could surprise you like that then :-)
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple
Great story, I really think you should continue with EPOV. It helps pull the story together. Excellent job. ;)
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen
Excellent chapter! I don't mind waiting if you feel better posting after your chapters have been beta'd. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for being that patient but I have decided to continue posting anyway :)
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas
I went back and noticed that I didn't leave a review for this chapter and thougt that was just wrong! So here it is, great start, especially since I know what's coming next. ;)
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip
Oooh this is going to get even better! I have to give it to Edward, he actually came up with a pretty smart deal. I'm pretty sure he's going to take every advantage he can. Great job, keep it up. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
He sure will find every chance he can get :)
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife
Sorry about lacking in the review department. I'm trying to get caugtht up. Great job, I just love the way he calls her 'baby'. Can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Author's Response:
It's okay, you did review at least, thank you for that!
I love that, too ;)
Thank you so much!
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding
I can't wait to see what this is all about. I'm guessing that Jake has alot to do with it, maybe he broke her heart? Another good one. ;)
Author's Response:
We'll see what her reaction had to do with Jake in later chapters! :)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown
Heartbreaking, sorry about your friend. I guess this story means a little more to you than it would to others. Great job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, yes this means a lot to me. That is why the next few chapters will be very hard to write, I just hope I can touch my readers with it :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by
I have epically failed in my reading and reviewing. So I'm taking this day to catch up. Sorry again for the brain fart!
Excellent chapter, I just love it when Edward calls her 'baby'. Glad to see Bella making baby steps. ;)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye
beautiful chapter. ;) loved the strip go fish!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past
Loved the first kiss, very romantic.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday
Loved the puppy! Jealousward is always one of my favorites. Great chapter. ;)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown
Of course when I get all caught up there's a cliffy. Great job, can't wait to see why Edward needs to leave. :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry about that! ;)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL OF YOUR REVIEWS! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane
Of course it would be the quote "Look after my heart, I've left it with you." That was an easy one for me. Loved this chapter, excellent job as always. ;)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you
Don't worry, I haven't left. I think there might be a problem with this site though. I haven't been getting my alerts for updates. I just keep checking the site. Anyways, I so happy that she finally told him, I don't even know how Bella can think that they won't make it. Of course you can always throw in some twist that could make it seem possible. Great job as always. ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I know there has been problems, I just didn't know it would effect my story :(
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date
Holy Crow! Now I seriously cannot wait till Wednesday, I loved this chapter. I really hope they get to make that finaly connection, if not then I'm sure you'll have a really good reason. Excellent job, ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
I hope I'll meet your expentations on the next chapter!
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together
I think you did an excellent job with the lemon, one of the most realistic ones I've read. I also love how realistic you make them. Edward getting annoyed, Bella getting cranky. Alot of fics keep them in a perpetual state of happiness or the exact opposite. That's why I love your characters. Again, great job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That means a lot that you think that :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets
Excellent chapter, a little bit of every kind of emotion in this one. Loved it! I don't know what happened to the reviewers on this site but I'm still here. If you decide to quit posting here, I'll gladly follow you to FF, though I'm not a big fan of that site and all their "rules". Again, great job, keep it up. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
I won't leave TWSCL, no way! I like it here, too! Thank you for the support! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving
Have fun on your vaca! Just wanted to say I loved this chapter. Can't wait till you're back. ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter
Love how close they are getting, keep up the good work. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I do too! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans
Great job! I was mortified for Bella...that was just...so sad. Anyways, I would love for them to have a baby, but I think that they still have so much to go through. Whatever you decide I'll love it. Again, excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
And thank you for your opinion, I needed it!
xx
Gelix
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas
I think little Miss Bella isn't as naive as Edward thought. Loved this chapter!.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve
Seems like they both have babies on their minds, great job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon
I'm only hoping that she's pregnant and not some serious medical condition. Great job as always, Edward just boosted his sexy for putting up with Bella's crazy mood swings. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
And Edward's practically always sexy!
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital
Thank you for this! I was worried at first, thinking they needed more time for just them, but now I'm so excited. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
I'm glad I managed to 'turn you over to the other side'! :)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats
Loved it, so glad everybody was onboard, even Jake. Can't wait to see when things start progressing. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you
Can't wait to see what Charlie thinks, and I don't think she was too early in forgiving Edward. If she couldn't forgive him then how could they plan their lives together? Great job as always. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents
Great chapter, I think they should tell Renee, don't know how well that will go though. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower
I love how your not making this pregnancy all sunshine and rainbows. It's very real with the mood swings and swellings. Also how you've made their marriage. Fights and arguements, very real, again I love it. I would also like to get the instructions for the macaroni, I bet my kids would enjoy that! Great job as always, keep it up. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
I'm trying my hardest to make it real!
xx
Gelix
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?
First off, I never got the recipe for the macaroni, would love it though. Second, the first thing I ever bought my oldest was a stuffed baby Taz from Looney Tunes and last but definitely not least, I think Alice and Jasper should be the Godparents. They're not really connected to either couple and their baby. I think it would be nice for them to feel included. Another good one. ;)
Author's Response:
I like your reason to have JxA as godparents! :)
As for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!
Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body
Great chapter, I cannot wait till the baby is here! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, me neither! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise
Of course it was worth the wait. I was a little freaked out about the dream though. Great job as usual, can't wait to see the new story. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting
Another good one, loved the choice they made for the Godparents. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up
Great chapter, I think the girls will be supportive with Bella. I'm also wondering if any other things from the past will come up between Edward and Bella? Mainly about how he treated her, or him throwing something in her face about how much of a "prude" she was. Just wondering. Again, excellent job. ;)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch
He is the sweetest! Again great chapter, glad Renee didn't make a scene. ;)
Author's Response:
He sure is! ;)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever
Great chapter, loved how she told him happy birthday, very original. As for the car, I knew Edward would love it. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful
Great chapter, I cannot wait for their wedding. Also for when Emily arrives. Excellent job. ;)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life
Perfect chapter, can't wait to see if the baby is arriving or not. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen
Great chapter, I think brown hair with green eyes. A little of both. ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home
Great job, I'm wondering if Alice and Jasper are having problems concieving? Just a guess. Can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own
I love daddy Edward, great chapter as always. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I love him, too! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty
Great chapter, I love how things are coming along for them. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion
Great job, I loved how Bella and Edward were united. ;)
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue
Perfect ending. Excellent job. ;)
How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is. Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?
Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Surprises
Well, I'm sorry Edward is hurt but, hey you did it to yourself. Don't worry, I still thinks he's sexy. Is the sad woman at the bar his mystery lady? I just think there's more to her than just her being a frequent patron at the bar. Anyways, great chapter. I'm dying to see when Edward shows his face again. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks honey! Edward will survive...he's a tough guy. The lady at the bar serves a purpose and it will all be realized.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
Great chapter, I have faith that you'll fill this story to its potential. Can't wait to see what Edward had to say and for the drama to start. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I just have a little more developing of this blossoming relationship before the flood gates open. Their relationship is a vital part of this story.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall
Holy Crow, I knew it! I knew James was using her to get back at Edward. One question, is little Parker Edward's or James'? Or is that a secret for now? Great job, as always. :)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Closing A Door
So all that's left is to comfront Edward...I'm dying to see how that goes. Another good one. ;)
Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:
It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind
Sounds interesting, can't wait to see what you've done with it. ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....
Uh oh, I think maybe Jealousward will come into effect... Great job. ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian
I'm dying to see how he gets to the point of trying to win her back. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving the story a try TexasTwilight. I hope you continue to enjoy!
New banner by Julie C.
Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like it so far, just wondering if it's an E/B or J/B story. Only one way to find out. ;)
Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rocking Car
I loved it! Please continue, can't wait to see where this one goes. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.
Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.
Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?
*Rated for strong language and lemons* Banner made by: Kiwibeme
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I loved how fun and light the wedding was. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Me and my pre-reader/friend thought that these two would have something a little more laid back. Glad you liked it!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Loved it!!!!! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I love that other people actually enjoy this story! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Oh for the love of Pete! I can't wait to see what now. ;)
Author's Response:
LOL. I couldn't help it, I had to throw something else in there!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I have a feeling that Edward's going to be a bit protective over Bella. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Happy you're enjoying the story!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I love how you threw the beeping of the monitors in there. I can't wait to see how things go now that Mike is out of the way...maybe. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sometimes the little details really help set the mood. Thanks for R & R!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I had a feeling when you said she saw one of her students at the resturant and then right after she got another rose. Can't wait to find out what happened. ;)
Author's Response:
Hope I didn't make it too obvious! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
An amazing story, excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate each review you left and am really glad you liked it!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue
Found this just looking around. Sounds interesting. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks-hope you like it!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Lovin it. I might just leave some smileys cause this is something I want to read straight through. Great job. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks-nice of you to say! :)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
;) Nice!
Author's Response:
LOL thank you!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Loved the first day. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you I'd like to go to a party like it! :)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Hmmm...Edward all sweaty playing football. ;)
Author's Response:
Yummy, isn't it? lol :)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Friends...right... You keep telling yourself that Edward. ;)
Author's Response:
Ha! yeah, let's see how long that lasts...
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Loved their time together. I'm dying to see how things unfold and how they handle him leaving. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh Bella...already jumping to conclusions. Hope things get straightened out fast. ;)
Author's Response:
When you get burned, it's easy to go there! lol thanks.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Bella needs to get her head out of her ass...just sayin'. ;)
Author's Response:
I agree with you!! lol. thanks :)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Glad that's all cleared up! I just hope Bella doesn't get all shy after this. ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't do angst much, so it won't get too heavy :) Thank you..!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
The rose thing is creepy. I don't know if it's James or Mike from school. Can't wait to find out. Love how they're giving this a chance. ;)
Author's Response:
I'm happy that you're getting into this! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
*Sigh* These two are just too dang cute!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Very nice! ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I can't believe he's leaving already. Great chapter. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!