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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625107
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

PLEASE BE EDWARD! I don't think I (or Bella for that matter) could  take her being violated again, especially in such a brutal way when she experienced so much from making love with Edward. I normally don't say this to authors b/c I think it can be rude, but PLEASE update soon! The suspense will surely kill me!

Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Really amazing chapter. I can't believe this story is almost over. It has been emotional and gut wrenching and maddening - but it has absolutely been worth it to get to this chapter. I thought that the fact that everyone took a step back to really work on themselves and their mental health was just the right step to take. Now they can all be the individuals they need and want to be, so that they can be the family they want to be. I was a little worried at first that Bella wasn't going to end up with Edward, but it almost became ok after reading how far she's come, but still how far she has to go. I can't lie though, my heart did such a happy dance when I read that last sentence :) Can't wait for the epi to see where everyone, especially Bella and Edward, end up!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315764
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Simply amazing! Glad these two are finally starting to get a few wake up calls and realize that there is another way to live their lives that is more fulfulling than what they had before. Just hope they realize they can do it together :)

Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

Oh no! Poor Bella; never having had any relationship where she wasn't hurt or let down, so now she's just waiting for something bad to happen, instead of truly being happy. And you know how that goes - she's going to start becoming a self-fulfilling prophecy if she keeps that shit up! I really hope that she can find some peace within herself, and in her relationship with Edward, because as much as she needs him to prove to her that she can be enough, all of her, he needs her too. Plus, these two are just so hot together! That smut scene on the car = muy caliente ;)

Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

So, I have been such a failure when it comes to revies (I know, I'm sorry). But I have to tell you that when I came across this story I fell fast and I fell hard, and I kept falling with every chapter. I thought this epilogue was so perfect because it was so them, and I like a little ambiguity; leaves some room for me to imagine how they are building a relationship and a life together (however, a futuretake would be greatly appreciated as well ;)) Really amazing story. Can't wait to see what you do next!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

So, I'm not new to the story but I am new to reviewing (wrong, I know)! Just wanted to let you know that I am loving this story, and I've loved this chapter. Edward and Bella have been through so much, but to see them growing together and growing stronger is really amazing, especially Bella now that she is back home. I can't wait to learn more about Alice and Emmett, and also to meet Charlie for the first time!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to review, and I'm so glad you like the story. I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: luxurylady05 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

Really amazing chapter. I thought the interaction with Edward and Alice was necessary; they are both so important to Bella and she will need them both immensely. I also think that out of all the Cullens, Alice is probably the most likely to get Edward to start feeling more comfortable and like he can help Bella assimilate to her old life again with him by her side! On an academic note, hope your classes are going well. I just started my semester as well!