Reviews by Skyclouds
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923138
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 75

I thought you may have decided to end it last chapter since it's been awhile since you updated but what a surprise to see that you had updated, I'm very pleased.

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Involuntary Rapture

Please continue with this story, I can't believe people would be offended if they don't like it don't read it simple.

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Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Congratulations on Midnight Caller. I hope Bree can get off the island before her baby is born, as well as the others.

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Now they really need to start thinking of a way off that island it would be to hard with a baby not to mention bringing a child into Aro's life.

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Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

Amazing as always, just wish Edward would get back.

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Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow paybacks a bitch I just hope James doesn't take it out on Bella. I laughed when you said in your authors note about toast and vegemite, I'm Australian and I love vegemite it's a staple in most Australian homes.

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Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

That was so much nicer than the wedding.

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I followed you from FF so I'm waiting for the new chapter as I have read most of these already before I give a review.

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You will get there with the reviews especially when the new chapter is up.

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can't stand James.

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You are updating so fast the new chapter will be up in no time. (I hope).

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This fic is like driving past a car accident and knowing you shouldn't look but do anyway.

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Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Now that's how a man should treat a woman.

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I can't wait to read the new chapters, when do you think they will be up.

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Gotta love Edward always the gentlemen.

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Finally almost the new chapter. I'm not very patient I like to know everything yesterday.

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

The update everyone has been waiting for finally here, Thank you. I hope James leaves Bella alone once Edward is married to her.

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Finally some revenge but now I'm worried for Edward and Bella, hurry up and get them married so James won't have anything to do with them.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

No James or Aro in this one I can't help but do a happy dance. Looking forward to reading the next few chapters.

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

James is sick I think he may be more sicker than Aro (In the head that is).

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I did not like it I LOVED it and yes more like that and I must add James is one sick man he makes Aro look like a saint.

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

It gets better and better with every chapter.

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Amazing I can't wait till the wedding that will fix James up. I don't like the sound of these guests I hope they don't do anything to Bella or Alice.

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I thought they were going to have a picnic, Aro is sick I feel like cutting the rest of his stump off and balls.

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Edward talked about his sister and to Alice I wonder if they will work out that they are related. Hurry up Edward and tell Bella you love her.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I hope this all works out for Bella otherwise the consequences would be bad. Love the pics of Alice and Jasper.

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Don't know if I can wait for the next chapter. Loved this one and the pics at the end.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 76

I loved all the different POVs it's so interesting with the mystery of "Who killed James" as I don't think it was Bella. Please don't take so long to update next time. 



Author's Response:

Im so sorry, I did write two novels though in the last few months and almost finished a third.

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

So the are going for it I hope it all works out well for them for all of them Alice and Jasper as well. Please dont give up on this fic I need to see how it ends.



Author's Response:

i wont give up!

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Talk about cliffhanger, glad they finally told each other they loved one another. Will you be updating next week or in 2 weeks.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

WOW amazing. I hope they don't get caught, I don't know how Edward is going to be able to preform at the wedding with everyone watching.

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

This chapter is very much like the last one but extended was it meant to be like that, love the picture so cute hopefully they will be rescued before Bella has the baby.



Author's Response:

yes, it was too important not to share Edward's point of view on it. It was extended so that you know we are moving forward!

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

It's all happening now I hope Edward and Bella will be prepared.

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I hope Bella is ok it doesn't sound good.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Wow that was crazy poor Tanya I hope they get off the island soon and kill Aro.



Author's Response:

me too!  It's a lot of work writing crazy!

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Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Finally the wedding has come and gone now they can focus on finding a way to get off the island. Very Sad about Katalina may she RIP.

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Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I guess that explains why James is so evil.

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Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Wow that was one hot chapter.

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Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I think Bree was better off where she was at least she gets a break at night, finally Edward and Alice are reunited as brother and sister (I knew they were related). I would love to order your book but unfortunately it's not available in Australia (which is where I am).



Author's Response:

it is available in australia... several people have ordered it in print and of course ebook is available everywhere. if you search Midnight Caller NJ Cole on amazon or nook you should have no trouble finding it :)   If you want the paperback, go to createspace.com and search the same thing, or click the links from the chapter.  or the ones below should work.

 

http://www.amazon.com/Midnight-Caller-ebook/dp/B00CZIOIUI/ref=pd_rhf_se_p_img_2_49BF

kindle



http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/midnight-caller-NJ-Cole?store=allproducts&keyword=midnight+caller+NJ+Cole


nook




https://www.createspace.com/4269934

createspace paperback

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

That was sad poor Bree never getting to see her baby girl grow up.

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Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

As much as I hate Victoria they should have taken her she is the only female left on the island and the men will just abuse her, they are finally free I just hope they make it home safe.

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

OMG it's all happening in this chapter, one of the best chapters so far.

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Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 71: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue

I have read it before ( I think on ff) but its a good story to tideme over till the next chapter of IR.



Author's Response:

yes, it's on ff  :)

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 72: The Second Elizabeth Interview

How sweet are the old people in the picture

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

Edward will never learn he needs to be with Bella and help her just as much as Bella needs to help him.

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

I thought Tanya had been dreaming then I started to believe James had come back for her glad it was just a dream or I should say nightmare. Where does Edward plan on going he needs to stay with Bella.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65

I hope Edward stays safe but get James and Aro they need to both go to jail and drop the soap which I'm sure James would love (the sick bastard).

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Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 66

Alice is adapting well I thought she might panic with all the changes but she seems to be loving them. 

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Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

Alice has come along way but she still has so much to learn.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

I hope someone finds Aro and James and hand them into the police, I'm intrigued about this Bree person.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are... she has her own entire book in my mind. 

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Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Edward better hurry and find Bella before someone else does.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

No how could you leave it like that, I knew James was planning something and would be at the house.



Author's Response:

Well, your reward will be the next chapter...no cliffie and you get what u've been waiting for. :)

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Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

I really hope the twins aren't James, after everything that Bella and Edward have been through I don't think you would put them through that. Glad to hear about James he gets everything he deserves.



Author's Response:

now we both know that those babies were concieved in love the day before the wedding on that blanket in the meadow....  :)

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Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

Good chapter but I would have liked to keep reading.

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Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

It's almost finished what an amazing ride.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

Just when you think it's over it brings you back in, love it.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Could you please update this story.

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Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Could you please update this story.

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Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Thank you for updating. 

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Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 81

I can't believe that you updated it's been so long. This was a nice chapter glad all went well.

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

I'm going to say either Edward or her Dad.

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Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Love it.

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Would love a teaser. Finally they have had the talk, I hope they take things slow they both need time to deal with everything.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I have been reading this on FF and love it.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I have just read this story again from start to Chapter 10 and this chapter is interesting did Edaward get Emily pregnant then something happened to that baby is that why he is so upset at Bella.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

It was worth the wait I can't stand Irina shes just jealous I'm sure Alice will put her in her place. 

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

I wish Edward had seen her then she runs away.

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Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

I hope Edwards intentions are good but we will wait and see.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

what sex is the baby, talk about cliffhanger.

Into The Deep by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After an accident took Bella's parents, she is forced to live with her new guardian, family friend Edward Cullen. She's been drifting through life for the last year in a daze. Will Edward be able to get through to her and wake her from her living nightmare? Will her looming eighteenth birthday separate them, or bring them closer together?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11496 Read Count: 13092
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the end bit so beautiful.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just started to read this fic and love it.

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Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Finally they are giving in.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
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Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I didn't think that would happen, I hope whoever tipped off the media gets payback.

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Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for the birthday update.

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Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It was worth the wait. 

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Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Cute little family, but thet do need to work on their issues. Im loving this story.

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I like it even with the time skips but I'm not keen on their child being so smart why cant he be a normal 3-4 year old. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow that was one good chapter and I love the picture.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I like this story.

A Thin Line by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

They say there's a thin line between love and hate, even between enemies like Bella and Edward. The problem was there was mostly hate. They can't decide if they'd rather kill the other or rip each other's clothes off. What they do realize is that they can't stay away?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25851 Read Count: 4233
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 12 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Cute little story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Love this story.

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Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

This is an amazing story. 

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Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Edward should get Alice to help him. 

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Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

It's about time Bella got her act together, I'm glad Edward confronted her it's what she needed.

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Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

How cute is Edward. I'm enjoying this story.

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Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Wow that was HOT.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

I'm enjoying this story.

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Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

I wonder if Edward will remember the vomit part with Bella recreating that night. I like this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478798
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm happy to wait to find out who Bella is and what her plans are. I love this story it's different to all the other story's out there.

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Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I think Hawk might end up killing Edward the way he is going, Hawk was hilarious standing outside the door as was Edward.

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Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Love it.

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Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Love this story but you should of just made the twins Bella's although that would still need explaining.

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Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Please update soon that was to good to stop there.

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Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Love it. Looking forward to read where it goes next.

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Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm very intrigued. I'm enjoying reading.

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Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have no idea where this story is headed or why Bella is so interested about Edward which is one of the reasons I love it. 

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Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

As I was reading I thought about all the names and if they came from the movies and as it turned out I was right, I'm interested in why she gives them all nicknames but I guess that will all come out eventually. I'm enjoying reading.

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Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is getting interesting Wondering what "Stark" will say.

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Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love all the mystery that goes along with this story. 

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Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love this story and all the mystery it's very interesting and I love all the names Bella gives to people.