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Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183823
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
Great chapter! Loved your A/N at the end. Lol
Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14810
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Letter : EPOV
I'm glad you did this outtake, but I'd really like an outtake from EPOV for chapter 12 or Parachute.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Broken : EmPOV
Great outtake! Keep'em comin. :)
Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Closure
I loved this chapter! Can't wait to see what Edward meant by his comments at the end. Happy Holidays!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case
I'm so glad she said yes! Thanks for updating so quickly after last chapters little cliffhanger. Hope to read more soon. :)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Working Out and the Arrival of the Cullen Clan
Lol, I love the whole lesbian part you added to their prank. It's gonna be great.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
Lol, I love how Bella & Jasper interact. Like brother & sister.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
Please say you'll be able to update soon???? I'm so anxious to see their little prank play out!
Author's Response:
I will be posting an update very soon. I already have the next chapter written. Trust me when I say you will love it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
aww, that's so mean to leave it like that! I hope you can update soon. :)
Author's Response:
I will update it soon. I promise I won't leave you hanging for long. Thank you for continuing to read. 8o)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
Great chapter! I love how their relationship has progresses. It just works for them. :)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Great chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the stuff with Tony. Always funny. Lol
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I loved reading this story. That last part at the end was hilarious. Perfect way to end the story!
Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79309
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I'm glad they helped Jessica. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. You've written Jacob to be a real big ass, so I can only imagine how interesting the next chapter is gonna be. Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
LMAO! I'm gonna assume that's Leah who answered the door. Love this story. You've made Charlie such a funny guy too!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Lol, I wanna know about Stevie!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Good chapter. I'm glad their conversation went so smoothly.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Lol, I love that Carlisle is now a little afraid of Bella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I wouldn't mind taking a bat to Jacob. Was that too violent? Maybe just spike a volleyball in his face. Lol.
Author's Response:
Nah, not too violent at all:)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Tanya really is a loony. I think Jacob deserves to have her as a stalker. Lol.
Author's Response:
*snort* That's a great idea!!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I agree with Carlisle. Nice prank
Author's Response:
They all had it coming:)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Great chapter! Loved how the girls kidnapped Alice. So funny!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I wish I had a friend like James
Author's Response:
Me too!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
How sweet is he!
Author's Response:
I heart Edward....
Here are some outtakes that I promised for my story Lonesome Hearts. Please refer to that story first!
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3033 Read Count: 1203
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Drunken Cowboys
Lol, this was so funny!!
28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61968
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Seems like a funny romance story. Is that what you're going for? Will there be more than just Bella's POV? Hope you can update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :-) I'm going for a bit of a Rom-Com, but there will be a good helping of angst too - we need to have some in there, if not the lemons wont be fun.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I loved Esme's reaction to Edward & Bella dating. It was so damn cute.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
wow, i couldn't tell this was your first lemon. love this story.
Author's Response:
It's not my first lemon - but it was my first "All Human" Bella and Edward. I've done them in my "canon vamp/Twilight" stories and I recently wrote one for a friend which was a different pairing (Bella and Carlisle) but the whole "human" Bella and Edward thing had me worried as there are SO many of them out there, I didn't want it to sound identical to all the others I read on a daily basis :-) x
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I hope Edward lets her explain
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
oh that's so sad. After reading what happened, I really hope Edward is understanding about what happened and why it's not easy for her to talk about.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
To answer your A/N, Edward's very perfect
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
yeah, he better put that girl straight or he's gonna have some problems. Can't wait to see how he handles this :)
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
of course, gotta do something to offset all that happiness. Lol, can't wait to see what happens next!
When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134480
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Loved this chapter. I think it's funny how they keep shocking everyone with how their relationship. The ending definately left me wanting to read more. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Lol, this is gonna be great!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Oh my gosh, I wish there parents would just get a clue and disappear. I know that's easier said than done, but geez they're annoying. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Nice to see Bella can kick Edward's ass if necessary. Interesting how everyone kept looking towards her when they were discussing Edward at the gym. Can't wait to find out more of her background.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
oh i hope she kicks her ass. one punch knock out!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Great chapter. Those last two lines made me laugh. I guess arriving at school with the principal is just as bad as a police cruiser.
Author's Response:
Exactly!! lol, thanks:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Poor Bella. I don't kow if I'd be able to deal with all the high school drama she puts up with
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Esme sure isn't acting like much of an adult since she's taking rumors to heart instead of looking for the truth. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response:
You hear enough rumors, you start to worry. Plus, it's more of Edward's change in behavior that has her concerned.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Really liked that last bit with Carlisle. Anxious to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wow, that's not a good start to their day. Great chapter. Really like that Carlisle & Esme seem to be on their side. Did not see that coming. Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Great chapter! I actually like the idea of Bella never forgiving her parents for what they did and allowed her to go through. I much rather prefer her and her brothers to just consider Edward's parents their newly adopted family. I like everything you've done in this story so far, and I doubt that's gonna change. So whatever you have happen is gonna be great I'm sure. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
wow, that ending was great!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Great chapter! I liked what the judge had to say.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Lol, i have an idea where they're taking their plan. Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Hmm, I wonder if you are close???
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
aww man, that's not how i wanted their prank to end. It sure was funny though. Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Great chapter. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.
Banner by:Ange de l'aube
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I so can't wait until Bella gets a chance to put Edward in his place. It's gonna be funny. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you.. I am sure there will be many times she does that! LOL
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Love this story so far. I like reading stories that are different like this! I think my favorite part so far is how you've written Bella's character to be. I get tired of reading about her being a shy naive girl. It's always nice to read stories where Bella is a feisty woman who's not afraid to speak her mind. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
So glad you like it..Thank you for reviewing. I love when stories are different too..
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
hmm, i have a feeling that Bella & Edward are gonna get off on the wrong foot. should be fun! :)
Author's Response:
hmm a little suspense! Thanks for review
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I hope Bella manages to put Edward in his place. It'd be kinda funny since he thinks she's not able to do the work. Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
it should be fun watching these two..thank you for the review
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great chapter! A part of me hopes that Edward heard Bella's opinion of Newton. Plus, I'm hoping we'll see some of the tomboy in Bella make an appearance. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing..you never know when tomboy Bella will appear :) Tease time...
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I'm so glad someone finally said something to Edward. Anxious to read more this weekend! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.. next chapter is a doozy! almost double in size LOL
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
ugh! damn Mike Newton. I hope he gets his ass kicked. :)
Author's Response:
Now that would be fun...we will have to see if or who does that!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Lol, this chapter was great! Loved how the brothers took turns making the other sweat about courting their sisters. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I loved that too...Had to let James have some fun
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
That was great. Loved the way Bella played that.
Author's Response:
That was pretty good, she had to get Em's butt in gear
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
aww, this was such a sweet chapter.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...I cant wait to see what happens next too! LOL
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Great chapter. I'm glad you worked through your writer's block. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad too..it was seriously upsetting me :( The next one is coming along so hopefully by next weekend~
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Great chapter! I hope you can update again soon. I'm really anxious to see what happens next. Especially what happens when Edward realizes Bella isn't in their room.
Author's Response:
Whew, I hope he doesn't freak out too much LOL
Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Anxious to see where you're going with this story. Hope to read more soon!!
Author's Response:
Hope you had a chance to check out the other posted chaps so far!
thank you for reading & reviewing - I hope to update fairly regularly!
xo
jaime
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
You know, as far as Charlie knows, Edward really was just a surprise guest. You'd think he'd be a little more polite to a 'guest'. Oh well, I really liked this chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
uh oh, i think Edward's secret is almost out
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
I hope once Edward explains it all to Bella she'll be a little understanding. That's if he tells her the whole truth, keeping my fingers crossed that he does. I know she has a right to be mad, but he was there for a job. Can't exactly show up to do a review and tell people if you expect to get the real idea of the service there. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope to have a new update out soon!!
I hope your holidays were wonderful as well!
xo
Jaime
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I truly appreciate it!
Update coming soon!
xo
jaime
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
I'm so glad they're back together. Now they just need to figure out what happens next.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Lol, I love how Bella played Edward at the end. That was funny. Great chapter!
Social reject Bella Swan finds her whole life changing before her eyes after her first encounter with the cute boy at the Concrete Canal. Three years later, she shows her uppity classmates that she's so much more than they ever thought possible.
Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 29.
I actually won Kharizzmatic's Pick in the A Picture Says It All Contest! I'm so honored and excited. This was my prize, make my Khar herself!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7251 Read Count: 4259
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Someday
This was such a great one-shot. I'd love to read this if you ever decided to add more chapters!
Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty. She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog. Instead at twenty eight sh
e breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family. With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.
I have a banner!! I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it. I think it's pretty nice. You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner! Thank you!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
aww, such a sweet evening they had.
Author's Response:
hi and thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it and hope you will like the rest of the story!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm all for Bella & Edward time. :)
Author's Response:
Hi and thanks for reading! There is a little more B&E time coming up....Jacob will get his time later! Chapter will hopefully be posted tonight some time!
-Lisa
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I'm glad Bella finally mentioned meeting Jacob to Edward. Didn't like the idea of that being kept a secret if there's no reason for it to be one. Now she just needs to mention Edward to Jacob. Great chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. It's not so much that she is keeping each other a secret, it's just that she is confused. She really like dJacob back in the day, but he's getting married and in a way still unreachable. Edward, she feels is out of her league due to his celebity status. She is considering Jacob and Edward both friends. But she will be bring ing Edward up to Jacob, all in due time! Hope you enjoy the next chapter (hoping to post it tonight some time!).
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella isn't interested in Jacob anymore. Her telling Alice that made me less nervous about future angst. Plus, loving the stuff between her and Edward. :) Anxious for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I hope you like this next chapter!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great chapter! I hope Bella & Edward's relationship gets stronger before we have to deal with Jacob's little crush he's got on her now. :)
Author's Response:
There will be more B&E goodness coming up before Jacob comes around.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
yay, i'm glad they told each other how they're feeling. I'm also glad that Bella was up front with Edward about having feelings for Jake in the past and why she hasn't mentioned Edward to him yet. She needs to do that sooner rather than later though. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hello and thank you again for reading. I hope you like the next chapter.
-Lisa
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I like Jasper's name for Esme, "ice bitch". Lol, it's fitting for her. I hope Bella & Edward don't let things come between them. Will this story have a lot of angst? Just curious. :) Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Will there be angst in the story? Ha! There is a slight possiblity! :)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
-Lisa
PS-I am hoping to finish up the next chapter tonight. FIngers crossed!
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Bella sure is looking through rose colored glasses. How hard is it to mention to someone that you have a boyfriend. I just wanna slap her and say wake up sister! Lol.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the last chapter! Thanks for reading and I hope you like the next one!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapter is being posted in a few!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter Forty Five
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks....next update will be soon!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Loved this chapter! I think it'd be so funny if Jane is rude and Bella takes Renee's advice. I can just see her getting up without a word and leaving the room. Which is then followed by Renee laughing so hard she cries and then following after her. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! the next chapter will be posted shortly. I hope you enjoy it!
-Lisa
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
As long as Bella puts a stop to the Jacob misunderstanding, she's ok in my book!
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thanks for readiing! I'm glad you liked this story! Jacob is coming up in the next chapter (I'm working on it now and will try to get it out before Thanksgiving! Try being the key word!).
-Lisa
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Guess they have some thinking to do. I still want them together. I'm a true Bella/Edward fan. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! Things will come their way. The story outline is completed I just need to time to write. i am too a true Edward/Bella fan!
-Lisa
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Keep Jacob in the friends zone and I'm all happy. :)
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for reading! I like Jacob a lot and kind of feel bad when he is written as a bad guy, so in my version of their world, they will be friends. Next chapter will be posted this weekend or early next week!
-Lisa
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Someone needs to give Edward a kick in the ass and then send him groveling.
Author's Response:
Edward is in his own world. Unfortunitly, he might continue to act like an ass a little bit longer. There will be many people who would be willing to give him that kick in the ass before the end of the story.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
-Lisa
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Edward needs a good kick in the ass or he's gonna be too late when he finally realized how stupid he's acting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Edward does need a swift kick in the butt! Updat (for real this time) should be in a day or so).
-Lisa
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I still wanna smack Edward and then step on his crotch. stupid, stupid boy. great chapter though
Author's Response:
Ouch about Edward! He and Bella will see each other in the next chapter and well, you'll have to read what will happen!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.
-Lisa
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I swear, if Edward pulls an asshole move, which I know he will, I hope someone punches his ass! Lol, love this story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Next chapter is being posted in a few...
-Lisa
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
wow, i don't know if i could do what Bella's doing.
Author's Response:
Bella is a tough cookie! Wait to see what happems next. Thanks for r/r!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I do not blame Bella for being upset about Edward being with Tanya before what happened to Charlie. He supposedly loves her, but he's been keeping things to himself. Even if or when Edward realizes his mistakes, I don't know if I'd do anything more than slam the door in his face at first.
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for r/r.
Edward is confused and in his own world (obviously). He's being stubborn and is refusing to let Bella in any more than he has. He has all ready broken hi promsie to himself (not to get as close to anyone as he did with tanya and the baby). All i am saying is I promise there will eventually be a resolution.
-Lisa
PS-I am thinking about doing an outake from Edward's point of view. I haven't decided yet.