Reviews by leAnn0388
Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Closing A Door

I'm glad Bella is finally stepping up and getting the answers to her questions about what happened.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

hmm, i could never make it work with my ex after he cheated but our situation was very different.  I think they'd need to be friends again first.  Especially since she doesn't trust him and he has a constant reminder as she stated.  A son that resulted from infidelity.  I don't know if i'd be strong enough to do that myself.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Changing Tides

I'm glad you made their relationship develop back over the year.  It would've been so realistic if it'd been any quicker.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Dance

Oh my gosh, I loved both endings, but this one was just so sad.  I cried when i realized what was going to happen.  A part of me wants to beg you to write another chapter to go along with this last ending.  Just to have it all be a bad dream that Bella woke up from.  :(

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

aww man!!!!  When i read the teaser for this chapter on Monday, I was a little worried, but after reading it I'm really happy with what they did.  Sneaky.  Loved them waiting up for her too.  I'll end my review with what has become my standard question.  Is it next Friday yet?  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Great chapter!  Anxious to read more, but that's not anything new.  Lol.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

aaahhh!!  That's an awesome A/N.  This is my #1 favorite story right now and has been since I started reading it.  So so excited about the idea of getting a Tuesday update along with the one on Friday!  Loved the chapter by the way.  Not anything new there.  :)  Is it Tuesday yet?  Lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow, i'm hooked.  I hope you'll be able to update more soon and regularly.  Please say "yes".  Great story idea!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for the kind words and giving my story a chance!

 

<3

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great chapter!  Thanks for updating so soon.  I know how boring JuryDuty can be. 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^


Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work. 

Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.

Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.

"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.

"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her. 




Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays! 

There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/

Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance!    <3

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm Team Edward, so not loosing any sleep over Jake in this story.  Just glad that he's gonna be moved out of the picture earlier than he is in some.  Can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^


Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work. 

Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.

Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.

"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.

"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her. 




Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays! 

There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/

Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance!    <3

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter.  The Jake drama was great for the story.  I can just imagine how that will give you all kinds of possibilities. 



Author's Response:

 

Hello, loves! Thank you to those of you new to reading, as well as my lovelies who have been here from the beginning! Here's a snippet from the next chapter.


Also, don't forget to check out http://pictease.blogspot.com/ and http://www.fictionators.com  for a couple of more teasers from the next chapter! PicTease is up now and Fictionators will be up tomorrow sometime!

 

Love y'all! 

 

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Bella stared in shock at the envelope in her hands. She looked up at Alice, who merely smiled and nodded for her to open it. 

"Alice," she asked, her voice thick with emotion. "This is from HarperCollins Publishing. What did you do?" 


Allie clapped her hands in excitement. "Just open the damn thing and see what they said!" 


With shaking fingers, she ripped open the flap and pulled out the paper. Alice bounced in nervousness and tried to peer over her shoulder.


"Holy shit," Bella breathed out, her wide eyes shot up to Allie's. 


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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Thanks for giving us an idea of where we're at in the story from your A/N!  I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.

On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well. 


Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!

~Shel~


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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.

"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."

Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face. 

"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"

"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."

The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.    

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I'm really excited about getting to the chapter where Bella finds Jack's family.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. 


Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing. 
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Ugh, I wish we didn't have to wait til next Friday for the update.  I've been waiting forever for the Prologue chapter to get here.  Can't wait!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I'm so glad you posted this early.  I really love this story.  Great work.  Can't wait to read Friday's update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

The prologue finally!  I'm anxious to read next Friday's chapter.  I've been waiting for this part of the story since I started reading this.  Great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I'm so glad that Esme is standing up for not trying to rip Jack away from Bella.  It'd do more harm than good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Will we be getting any EPOV?  I'm curious to know what he thinks of Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I'm so glad that Edward apologized to Bella for his behavior. 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

oh, that part at the end made me cry. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

uh oh!  The next chapter outta be pretty interesting



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I wait all week just to read this update!  Love, Love, Love this story.  So original.  Keep up the great work!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I like how Edward reacts to things around Bella.  Especially liken his little jealous moments that have happened.  Is it Friday again yet?  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I read these chapters and they always leave me wanting to read more.  I'm glad Emmett and Bella worked out their problems.  Love the stuff between Edward & Bella too.  I think it's cute how all the girls brought it up while they were out.  Can't wait til next Friday!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I'm glad Edward didn't freak out on Bella.  I hope there relationship grows more before they have to deal with Victoria's family knowing the truth.  As always, wishing the chapter was longer or another Friday was here sooner.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Great chapter!  Loved all the interaction between Bella, Edward, and Jack.  Anxious to find out on Friday what's got Tanya showing up to see Bella. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Great chapter.  Wish it was longer.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Wow, loved this chapter and I'm guessing there might be some fireworks in the next chapter.  I remember that Bella didn't think it was a good idea for her to ever be near Victoria.  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Great chapter!  Can't wait to find out what Edward's reaction is when he finds out James is not his friend. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Great chapter!  I hope they can find some proof against James soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

aww, man this chapter made me cry!  Love it, Love it, Love it!  Next Friday can't get here soon enough.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Great chapter!!  I love how Edward smoothly told Bella he wanted to marry her one day.  So sweet.  Also, I didn't get to review the last chapter, so I just wanted to let you know that I loved that chapter too!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Great chapter!  Don't want this story to end, but can't wait to find out what happens!!  Love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

aww man, i was hoping we'd get a little more before this chapter ended.  At least i know the next chapter will be really good!  Happy Holidays!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

ok, you made me cry.  As soon as I started playing "This Ain't Goodbye", ya, I was bawling.  I'm so sad that this story is coming to an end soon.  I've been reading it since the beginning and have loved every bit of it.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

This was such a sweet chapter.  Even with the story coming to a close, it's still the most anticipated update of my week.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

:(  So sad that it's coming to an end, but I really loved reading this story.  Out of all the stories out there, I've looked forward to this update the most.  Can't wait to see what your next story will be like.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I've loved reading this story and even though I'm sad it's over, I really enjoyed reading it from the beginning.  :) 

Outtake idea:  If you already did this idea and I missed it, just let me know.  I'd love to know what EPOV was from chapter 11 thru 19.  This would cover Edward & Bella first meeting up to him asking her on a date.  I'd love to see what was going on from EPOV.  :)



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

On a park bench sits a beautiful and yet grubby stranger. What will happen when Bella literally stumbles across him?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34913 Read Count: 8751
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

how sweet is that

Summary:

Isabella Swan couldn't care less about Edward Cullen's perverted perception of her relationship with his teenage son, Seth. And yet she keeps finding herself on the defensive with the need to change his mind at every given opportunity.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116998 Read Count: 25021
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 26 Aug 2010
Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Bella.  Until Edward gets his act together he better not go looking for booty calls to forget. 



Author's Response:

Hahahha Booty calls. No definitely not!

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope these two will get their act together from here on out. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I want to slap Seth and not sure if i want to scream or cry about what he's causing.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor Eric, he's really scared of Alice. Lol

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I like how you've written Alice's character.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Glad you'll be updating again this weekend.  I really wanna know how those boys ended up so drunk.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope Bella gets back at Edward some way for his drunken reenactment of her accident.  Plus, Emmett not telling her about Alice wasn't right either.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Bella should pull some sort of prank on Edward & Emmett in response to what she saw during their drunken time.  Perhaps waking them with a bucket of water or something.  Of course, it'd be funny if Alice helped her too. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm glad the boys are gonna have to grovel

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

How sweet was that ending on the porch.  Poor nervous Edward, so cute

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That part about "Emmett's issue" in church was hilarious!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I hope Edward makes it in time for the festival.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well, I think Bella (who i'm assuming is the person at the end) has  something to argue with Emmett about if he tries to cause problems with her relationship with Edward.  Either way, she's a grown woman and needs to put her foot down when it comes to that.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I really hope Bella will stand up to Emmett.  I love Em, but she needs to make him realize that she's not a child and that what he's doing to Alice is wrong. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I think it'd be great if Bella managed to race in the horse race. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

uh oh spaghettios!  Lol, i think the cats gonna start coming outta the bag soon

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm glad Bella finally let Emmett have it for his actions.  It means things are really gonna start getting interesting!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

aww, now i feel sad for Emmett.  Not sorry, but sad

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Edward just can't catch a break. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

aww, this was kinda sweet

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I think Emmett needs to take some time to get to know his sister again.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Poor Alice, she's a mess.  Jasper's too funny. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I hope Bella and Edward admit they like each other before things start going bad. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

awww, there so sweet

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

hmm, I'm confused with why Alice thinks she can't be with Jasper, but I know we'll find out when we're meant to.  Nice cliffhanger too!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

thanks for making confirming that there will in fact be a HEA. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

oh my gosh, that ending was so funny!!!! 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

wow, poor Edward. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I'm glad they're relationship has progressed like it has.  I'd hate for it to be dragged out forever like in some stories that are full of angst.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

whoa, did not see that coming

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Lol, Jasper's slick.  I know it's not fair to Alice that he used the situation, but she needs to open up to him about what's holding her back.  Hopefully this will be the push she needs.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Yay, I knew it'd be ok once she told him.  I know that's not the end of things for Alice's problem I'm sure.  Can't wait for Edward to pop the question to Bella too. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

yay!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Great chapter! :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Great chapter!  Kind of hoping since the men are all away that it'll be up to the women to kick some ass!  Lol, great chapter.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

The boys are sure gonna have their work cut out for them when it comes to getting her back.  Can't wait til the next post!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Oh I really hope you can post again today.  I need my fix.  Lol.  I'm on the edge of my seat and can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Yay, got me another fix of this story today.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Great chapter!  I like that Edward's riding Bella's horse.  I know it's really no big deal, but at the same time it's the small things that mean the most.  :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

awww, damn it.  That's a hell of a place to leave a cliffhanger.  Lol.  :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

LMAO, I'm sorry that someone damned you to hell!  That's funny though.  It wasn't me was it??  Lol, kidding.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Lol, so funny. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Great chapter!  Congrats on officially becoming a Dr.! 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Lol, i loved reading this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183823
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

I really like this story!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

I love that Uncle Emmett gave Carlie some things to say inorder to help Edward move things along.  Love this story!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Ok, so i'm not liking the nanny at all.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

I really love this story.  It's so sweet and easy going.  Not all angsty like some stories.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

I'm not someone who likes being told what to do, so the whole Dom/Sub thing sometime manages to piss me off when I read it in stories.  So i'm glad this wont be a main part of the story.  Can't wait for pt 2 though.  I wanna know who showed up at her apt.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

I like the pacing of the story, just FYI.  I'd never be able to do the whole submissive thing.  I'd end up punching the guy within 5 minutes.   Lol

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

I'm glad Edward figured out all the things he did during their meeting.  Glad he realized what he wanted and didn't want out of his lifestyle with Bella.   Can't wait to find out what Carmen said to Bella in the bathroom and what happens after Edward finds Bella.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

I think my favorite part was Edward referring to Bella as Carlie's mother in front of everyone.  Such a cute moment.  :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

Loved this chapter!!!  Can't wait to read more.  Especially after that ending!  :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

I love covert Esme!  So funny

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

I might be in the minority, but I'm glad that this chapter happened.  Not glad because of what Edward did, cause yeah he's a jackass, but because it adds to the excitement of what's happening.  I'm so excited to see what happens next time.  Hope you can update again soon.  :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

Is it wrong that the last sentence made me laugh.  Lol, great chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Wow, i don't know what to say.  Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

I'm not laughing at anything from this chapter.  However, I love how Emmett revealed his new knowledge of Bella's health to Edward at the end.  It was so Emmett and despite the serious topic, it still made me chuckle.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

Great chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Great chapter!