Reviews by jg0107
Summary:

Who was the trucker who picked up Christian and Ros after Charlie Tango was saboutaged?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2735 Read Count: 581
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I finally got to read this one.  It is great, just like all your other "one of's".  I really like how much you add to the original story with all these parts.  Keep up the great writing.  Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57747
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awesome story from Taylor's point of view. I was hooked. Please keep writing!

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is great writing! You make me crack up with the way Taylor reacts to what is being said.  I totally see Jason Statham (spelling?) playing him in the movie version and could see him saying and thinking what you write here. Awesome job!



Author's Response:

Can't wait to see who they cast. I love your idea!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please keep writing! I love this story!



Author's Response:

You got it!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent story! I picture Jason Stratham as Taylor while reading your clever and witty writing.  Please continue and I will keep reading!



Author's Response:

Thanks, JG. Yes, Stratham could be the one, for sure!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness

This story is so great! I love the humor and insight.  Please continue...I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, jg :)

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man

Great as always! Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, jg. ;)

Dinner with Elena by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

How did Elena persuade Christian to visit Anastasia in Savannah? What was her motivation? How ‘happy’ did she want Christian to be? Read on…


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3352 Read Count: 911
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your writing is so great! What an intuitive take on Elena.  Thanks for keeping me reading!



Author's Response:

Not at all! Thank you for taking the trouble to read. ;)

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow! Incredible storytelling! You are amazing. EL James should collaborate with you for the next set of books. Your research shows and your knack for suspense is a gift.  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate it.

E.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awesome writing! You really capture each character's inner feelings.  Please keep writing so I can keep reading. Love it!



Author's Response:

As long as people read this I will write it. 

Thaks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So suspenseful! Please write again soon!



Author's Response:

Another chapter probably tomorrow. 

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love it; love it; love it! Once again, great storytelling. As always, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So sorry to hear that some were so critical and offended by your last chapter.  I think you did a wonderful job in covering a very sensitive topic. Pay not attention to the haters!  I really enjoy reading your work and will continue as long as you keep writing.  Thank you for keeping these characters and story alive for all of us 50 Shades fans.



Author's Response:

Hi,

Sorry I didn't respond to you sooner. Sometimes the reviews don't  always pop up for me to see. I appreciate the support and the kind words.  I appreciate your reading and leaving the kind words.

E

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bravo Bravo! What a fantastic story.  You had me welling up at the point when Ana is explaining to Teddy what happened to Sam.  I will keep reading.  Thanks for keeping this story alive!



Author's Response:

Thank you. On to book 3.

E.

Summary:

Andrea is personal assistant to Christian Grey. How did she get the job and what did she really think when Charlie Tango crashed?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2223 Read Count: 557
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2012 Updated: 27 Jul 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As with all of your writing, well done! You truly have a gift!

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Great Christian Grey Sulkfest of 2011

Great job filling in the gaps of the wedding planning between the two books!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: The Takeover

Your storytelling is great. You have me laughing and sighing at all that is going on between Ana and Christian while preparing for their wedding.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

No... Thank you! :)

Red! Red! Red! by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A one-shot about the start of Christian's relationship with Elena. A tough story about a tough time in Christian's life. Very dark.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 1070
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2012 Updated: 04 Aug 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was intense. Majorly insightful!



Author's Response:

Ah, good. Intense: definitely what I was aiming for.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You had me smiling when Christian helps Ana plant her flag a little deeper!  You are such a great writer; I'm hooked once again.



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

E.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hot Hot Hot! Love it!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I so enjoy reading your books! The dialogue is fantastic and the descriptions are so vivid.  Keep up the great work!

O Brother by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

After his marriage to Ana, Christian finally comes clean - almost - to Elliot about his relationship with Elena.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3353 Read Count: 693
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 27 Oct 2012
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent! You really know how to use the dialogue to identify these character's emotions.  If I didn't any better, I would think you were EL James herself!  Thanks for giving me an escape and for keeping this story alive for me.



Author's Response:

What a lovely comment. You're very welcome. Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

"It's canon, Jim, but not as you know it."  This is Kate and Elliot's love story as it unfolded alongside Christian and Ana's. Ever wondered what happened on their first night together? What about those conversations between Kate and Christian in Portland? What went down in Barbados and how did Elliot get invited in the first place? And the big reveal of how much Elliot might already know about Christian's lifestyle. This story follows the plot line from Fifty Shades of Grey, with some borrowed dialogue to add authenticity, however, you need to forget all of the assumptions that you may have made about them and their relationship.  They won't exactly be OOC but they have a lot more going on than you ever knew.  Their love story is a lot more powerful than EL James ever told us.

 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45069 Read Count: 5197
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2013 Updated: 11 Jan 2014
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Smart

Excellent story. Please keep writing!

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: My Month in Review

I love this story.  I'm often checking for the next chapter.  Please write soon!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Ta Kill Ya

Love this story, especially the potential romance between Luke & Severine!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Guns and Posers

I love this story! So well written and so interesting. Please keep going; I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Will It Ever End?

Such a great story! I really enjoy it. Please keep writing!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Piano Works

Great story! I can't wait for more! Please write again soon!