Reviews by GreyFan513
Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just found your story and I love it. Hope you are able to update soon. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533069
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

Just found your stories and I love them bread the quiet storm and now this one. I can't put them down. Read when I'm supposed to be working. I think your brilliant!!! I love that Bella put Viagra in his coffee. That's classic!!

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263186
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

Your story was fantastic. I enjoyed it very much



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59281
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the update and extra long chapter. Hope your parents are on the road to recovery. Hugs. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Amazing. I love this story!!!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923172
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Great update!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028764
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

I realize now I'm a greedy little bitch because with every chapter I just want more...

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Very hot. More please. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Can't wait to find out. 

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Great chapter. Can't wait for their first scene in the playroom. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 196: Chapter 196

Still reading!!  Love emmitt. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 192

Love your updates!!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 193: Chapter 193

Great update!!  I was missing the story!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

Amazing chapter. Is Bella finally going to figure out Edward is her Sir?

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

Great chapter love Carlisle. 

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

Fuck Noc!!!  Every chapter leaves me wanting more!!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

Love. Great chapter. More please!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

More more more. Please!!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Oh. Poor Em. He's in trouble!!!  

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

Fucking Emmett. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 248: Chapter 248

That was fantastic. Noc you are a genius. 

 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Hmmm. Another great update. 

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 250: Chapter 250

Oh shit if she is almost vampire strong when she drinks his cum does that mean he could fuck her without hurting her?!?

-dee marie

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 254: Chapter 254

Great update. Thanks Noc!!  Can't wait or her to see him!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

Great update!!!!!!

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Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 259: Chapter 259

Great chapter and LOVE the pics....

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 284: Chapter 284

OMG. Love it!!  Can't wait for the next update. You're a genius. 



Author's Response:

thank you, and thanks so much for the review. I'm so buried in the rewrite, it's nice to get the positive feedback :)  Thanks for making me smile :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

And it just keeps getting better and better. Genius. I swear you're a genius!!

~dee marie

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 287: Chapter 287

So good. I know I keep saying this but you are so amazing. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 292: Chapter 292

Eek!!!! Finally. Have I told you lately how absolutely brilliant you are??  



Author's Response:

love to hear it!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 307: Chapter 307

Just keeps getting better and better. I can't believe it's almost over. 

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

Wow. Amazing. I can't wait for the sequel. Well done!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 312: Chapter 312

What an amazing surprise. I was missing Sir and butterfly. Thank you!

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Always read the story on both sites to make sure I didn't miss anything. So glad I do. Quite a nice scene cut out of the one on fanfiction please keep writing. I love your story!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes. Sometimes I just have to slash out entire paragraphs for FF. Thanks for reading both sites. Sometimes I do change a few things around, but  story stays the same. More story lines coming. 

Thanks again.

E

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Glad Christian is home

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I guess.

E.

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Your story is amazing. Just breaks my heart. The talk with Kate was awesome!!  Well done.  Glad that bitch is dead!!!



Author's Response:

Me too. I think. She made a really good villan. We all love to hate her. I just wanted to be the first to actually kill her off.

E.

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I loved book 2. Your writing is very good. Can't wait for book 3



Author's Response:

It's posted , finally.

thanks.

E.

Kismet by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary:

Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?

Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?

 

kismet


Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Someone Like Me

Wow. I REALLY love your story!!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - My Boys

Wow!!!

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806522
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

Wow

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

Ok first. Love your series. I blew through the last 2 stories and I am almost caught up with this one. Little torn intue whole Sonny/Maggie marriage.  Always thought it would be him and Katie, but I like seeing Sonny happy. Katie needs to wake up and see her mom for who she is. Lauren that Bitch I wish she was killed years ago. I hate what she did to Dame.  i hate seeing Dame in so kuch pain. 

 

I also hope Aro and Sonny can put the bullshit aside. I love the dynamic between Aro/Edward/Bella. The friendship is hate it if this came between them.  I think your an amazing writer and I can't wait to see where this all goes.  

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Great update. 

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter. Can't wait to see the confrontation and find out what the hell happened to Ana's ring. 



Author's Response:

Comming up.

Thanks for leaving a review. I appreciate it.

E.

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Another fantastic chapter. Thak you. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

This story just keeps getting better and better. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us. 



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you so much!  I'm grinning from ear to ear right now.  :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

You are amazing!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much!  :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Finally!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  It was a bit of a wait, wasn't it?  But honestly, I hate stories where Edward and Bella are in love or in bed by the end of chapter one.  When my characters fall in love, you're gonna know why, and be able to see exactly how it happened.  :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Beautiful... Just Beautiful!  From the first chapter to the last this story has been amazing.  You're right is impecable and the journey you took us on with these two was just phenomenal.  Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

 

I also would like to put my request in now for a future take sometime down the road!!

 

Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you so much!  What a lovely and fantastic review!  I apologize for the lateness of this response.  I think I felt like some of my readers who waited to read the final chapter-if I didn't answer the last set of reviews right away, it wouldn't be over yet.  I want to thank you for taking this journey with me.  I know at times it was hard, but you stayed with me, and I can't tell you how much that means to me.  I do believe there will be a future take down the road--watch for it!  :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

You're awesome!



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks so much!  :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

An update on Thursday too!  I totally love you right now!

 



Author's Response:

Heehee!  Thanks!  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 7 (Part 1)

I don't usually like when it deviates from Edward or Bella's POV. burns love this Alice. I love this story. I adore you and all you do to feed my fan fiction addiction. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Way for Jasoer to put his foot in his mouth!

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Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 7 (Part 4)

Can't wait to see what Alice chooses for their contest. 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What comes after Betrayal? Revenge. Bella's world has been thrown upside down. Her family has betrayed her, and her brother is missing. Her new husband wants her to move on and forget the past, but some things are harder to forget than others. Revenge - Betrayal Part 2 A Mobward Drabble

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25769 Read Count: 89449
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2015 Updated: 31 Mar 2015
Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this story sand I loved betrayal. I get so excited when I see an updated in my email. Thank you. 



Author's Response:

No, thank you!!!! x x x

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Love. That's all I have for this story is love. 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thank you for posting again so quickly I was on pins and needles wondering what was going to happen next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your review. xx

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I loved it!! Thank you!!



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x