Reviews by cjngrls
Only hope by militato123 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

edward bella

After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this chapter.... please update soon...  I hope that Edward and Bella can make it work out...



Author's Response:

i have no idea how the start the next chapter so it will take away. have any ideas?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

Okay.. now I have read a ton of different stories.. and loved them all, however... Is this a HEA for Bella and Edward.. or do they never come back together??  I know that Edward can be completely straight laised.. but come on... He and Bella are so good together...



Author's Response:

Well, I don't want to give the ending away for obvious reasons. But I think if you read the title, it is easy to guess than Edward is going to try his best.  I hope you will stick with it. More chapters will be posted real soon.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

Too funny... I just love Emmett.... He may be a big goof, but he is right... I hope that Edward will bare his soul to Bella and tell her the truth.. she deserves it...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. We have not heard the last from Em....

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Over My Already Dead Body

I have enjoyed reading this story, and I really like Bella a little kinky... however I would love to see Edward be open and tell Bella how he feels.. I would love to see Edward and Bella open up and have incredible sex....he could be very hot!!!!



Author's Response:

Don't give up on Edward yet...lol.  I will be posting at least two more chapters tonight.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Research

too funny.. I love it!   I would love to see Edward and Bella together, maybe have Julian lose it and almost kill her, to push Edwards hand.... show Bella just how much Edward would do for her, and then can be complete mates!!!



Author's Response:

cj:  I'm so glad you like it.  I will be posting more today.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections

Oh.... how I do love it when you update.... i love this story.. and there needs to be something to push them over the edge...just the thought of Edward and Bella together.. oh the possibilities....yummy stuff



Author's Response: C: thank you. Will they or won't they? That is the question...lol

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

hahahaha... I love this Bella... Edward needs and good blow job and then to bend Bella over the bed and give it to her... like she wants it... or maybe spank her for her dirty mouth....



Author's Response:

C: You are going to have Edward blushing...figuratively of course

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

I really liked this chapter... I'm sure that everything can't always go smoothly, we need a little drama.  I just hope that you do believe in HEA...I can see how torn Bella is.. her one true love in her life and the man that has help put her back together.  It must be extremely hard to her and for Edward to back off.. maybe this will the catallyst for Edward to want to change Bella and completely seperate her from her former life...I'm sure that the love that Bella and Edward have a true undieing love and it is time for them to move forward...



Author's Response:

c: you're review and faith in love is so touching.  I'm not giving up on B&E yet..that's for sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice

I love it.. what a great chapter... I can't wait to see Edward and Bella together always...



Author's Response:

Aww,,,thank you cj.  Next chapter should be up by the end of the weekend.  A teaser will be posted tomorrow on the forum.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

I hvee loved reading your story.. and of course.. this chpater did not disappoint.  Keep going.. I hope that he turns Bella, all though, I think that his hand will have to be pushed...



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you have enjoyd the story.  Will Edward's hand be pushed to change Bella....maybe

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420974
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lingerie and Lasagna

I'm loking forward to see what you do with Colonial Williamsburg.. I love 45 minutes from there.... and love the place



Author's Response:

I hope you find it satisfactory and that I did it justice. I have only been there once. Happy Reading!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Mom Jeans

hahahahaha... I love it!!!! Oh.. he is gonna spank her ass good when he gets out of those cuffs!!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Southern Deviled eggs

this was such a cute chapter.. I love it...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Complications

Oh gosh.. that was a tough chapter... I personally felt it, I almost died while having my second child ten years ago... that is a tramatic experience...update soon...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Quagmire and the hag

I loved this chapter.. to cute.  I think you did a great job with the little corks that the family has, no family is perfect.. and sometimes we need a little help...

Summary: Past Featured Story

sl

Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251334
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I absolutely love your story... a wild Edward to be calmed be a sweet and loving Bella... and now a baby.. maybe Charles can show up at the hospital... after the baby is born.. while Edward is getting Bella some food.. and apologize to Bella for everything and ask for her forgiveness... maybe welcome her to the family and tell her that a name only means so much.. without the family to go with it....

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

I loved this chapter, It is so wonderful to have the family find some peace...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

it's been a while... what a great story... love it

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yay!!! Please continue on with this story....let us follow their life together...;)

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Yay... my only thought is... will this story lead Bella and Edward together?  I love the story so far and I can't wait to see where you are taking it...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for pressing that little button....  E & B better end up together... it is their destiny... Alice will kill both of them if they srew this up... lol.... I hope they end up with a happily ever after but they are going to have so many things to over come.... Cross your fingers

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Awwwwe... I love it.  I just hope that Bella can comeouot of this and her and Edward can have something together...;)  keep going....



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing..... I will keep posting and I won't make you wait too ling fro the next ch

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I really like this story... I'm just really curious as to where you are taking it.  I can see that Edward and Bella are going to be together.. but I can't wait to find out what Aro is gonna do.... 



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review... I am so happy you are enjoying my story... Aro is a naughty evil man and you will find out very soon what he is upto

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

This was a great chapter... i'm glad that things went well with Charlie and Billy.  I only hope that they are all ready for when Aro finds her...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review... Gold star for you!!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

love it... glad that Alice is getting some action... poor Alice is usually left out...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and big hugs to you for reviewing.....

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Ahhh... way to  cute... I can't wait for Bella and Edward to admit their feelings to each other.. and can develop their relationship...



Author's Response:

me too... Thanks a bunch for reviewing

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

another great chapter.. a tough one though.  Poor Renee.... I only hope is that Bella can beat them all....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I was a little worried about the reviews I would receive so imagine my relief that so far noone hates me....hehehe

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh.... I can't wait for the Cullens to get a hold of James... He will not get Bella!!!



Author's Response:

lol.... Yes it will be interesting to see how far James gets..... hehehehe

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

There will be no hate mail from me.... I am loving your story... the craziness of it and the calm... I only want to keep Bella and Edward together...



Author's Response:

lol..... That's so good to hear and I promise E & B 4 Eva..... hehehehehe.... I have people begging for some E & B Action and I keep teasing them... hehehe

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well.... dance then... because I really like the connection that Bella and Edward seem to have, with her eyes going from black to a golden ring around them... once Edward had fed.... I can't wait to see how seem is as a vampire... maybe just one bite from Edward can turn her quickly.. instead of the three day burn period.. she could be more powerful than the Volturi combined... save the entire Cullen family from them....



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! HAPPY DANCE happening as I type..... thanks for your super fast review.... I can't wait to see how she turns out too.... but we can't make it too easy on them... *SPOILER JUST FOR YOU* I think it may take a bit longer than the normal 3 days for her to complete the transformation.... hehehe... shhhhh don't tell anyone

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Yes... still completely captivated... the story is being quite addictive. I can't wait for James to come into the picture... I see him losing!!! I love watching her learn to use her gift...



Author's Response:

AWE!!!! Thanks a bunch... Big hugs to you... I am glad your hooked cause zi am loveing writing it

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well... that was a mouth full.  Poor Bella has truly been through hell.  I only ish that Edward and Rosalie could have had a chance to have a chat with Phil.  I can only hope that they can protect Bella when she needs it the most... James and Aro... frightening...



Author's Response:

She really did go through hell... and I am sad for Edward and Rose that they cant seek revenge it would have been nice to see Edward tear Phil apart...hehehe... everything is starting to come to a head and you will have some serious shit happening in the next few chaters... Thanks for reading and reviewing... YOU ARE ACE

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Okay.. so I'm so tickled that Elizabeth is her guide... I always knew that Bella and Edward were made for each other.  I hope that Elizabeth can help Bella to protect herself and the family..... maybe even to take out Aro...let Marcus bring peace back to the world...



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more... I hope they don't have too many issues... hehehehe.... 22 reviews SQUEAL!!!! I just posted ch 39

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

What a great chapter... now that James is gone... they will have to deal with the Volturi.  I'm really curious as to how Bella handles that.  Also, I think that Renee needs to have a chat with Bella... and Bella needs to find a way to make Renee see exactly what happened to her. For a mother to bury her head in the sand and not believe her own daughter.... ugh



Author's Response:

YAY!!! Thanks for your review.... My lips are sealed on the upcoming Volturi arrival... hehehe I know I am mean... I'm not exactly sure what will happen to Renee there are a couple of possibilities right now, it will all depend on the part everyone else plays, she will see one day what happened to Bella and the pain her actions in not believing her caused, I think Esme will have a few choice words for her at some point.... hehehehe

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh my... how yummy!!! I would love for Edward to drop his manners and dive on in...maybe explore her body..if he is frightened of having sex with her... maybe he can just enjoy her body... a little oral sex.... maybe if he tasted her sex then he wouldn't crave her blood as much....i'm just sayin'



Author's Response:

hehehehe.... hummmm taste her!!!! my lips are sealed as to what will happen in the next ch but you kind of read my mind...

*Very small teaser for you.... hehehehe*

Ch 45 EPOV

How it possible a flavor exists more potent and sublime than her blood is unfathomable.

I WONT KEEP YOU WAITING LONG!!!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I can't wait for Bella to meet with Jane... I only hope that she can pick up her power without touching her. I would love to see it turned around on Jane... I'm loving this story... I can't wait for Bella and Edward to get together. Now... can't Edward and Bella "play" a little... give them both a little release.... it could be yummy!!!



Author's Response:

hehehehe... So happy you are loving my story!!!!! your wish is my command yes E & B can "play" a little.... and it will be very yummy... stay tuned it is written..... thanks for the review

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Update.. update.. update... I want Edward thoroughly enjoying Bella when Tanya arrives.... and to watch as Bella puts Tanya in her place...



Author's Response:

hehehehehehe..... patients my dear one it will all happen very soon, however before and cat fighting or bitch slapping starts you get a delightful ch filled with tense lust, desire and need.... You will be shocked when you read the next ch, as it plays out beyond how I thought it would.... hehehehe.... even I shock myself sometimes.... MWAH!!!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh my... this chapter was so yummy!!!! I love it.  but a big problem.... oh no!!  update soon....



Author's Response:

hehehehe, Yummy hey, that's great to hear and don't worry there's more to come.... hehehehehe I won't give away what the problemm is but don't worry you are sure to love it!!!! Thanks soooooo much for reading and taking the time to push that button

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Yes... let the games begin....



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, I couldn't resist... lets hope I can come up with some evil stuff to torture Tania with .... MWAH!!! Thanks a bunch for your review...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I am sooooo loving this story... I hope that Bella is turned and wipes out Aro... only after he suffers for every death that he has committed....he should feel it all.  I thnk that Bella should rule the vampire world with Edward and the family by her side....



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Thanks so much for your review, I have just posted the next ch, I couldn't keep you all waiting too long with that cliffy, I'm evil but good evil hehehehehe, Don't worry Aro will pay, all in good time my dear, I think B & E will influance a major change in the rule but they won't actually take over.... MWAH!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

hahahaha... take that Tanya.... I had complete faith in you that you would not let Tanya win.... I can't wait to see how Aro is handled.. I only hope that Renee didn't make it.. I know it sounds harse... but she knew that her daughter was being abused and turned the cheek..... no way in hell would I ever choose I man over my daughter....



Author's Response:

YAY hehehehehe, I'm so glad you never doubted me hahahahaha, I know what you mean about Renee but I personally want her to make it, wouldn't you just love to see her face to face with Esme, OMG that's scary thought, Esme would have a fit and tear her a new one.....

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Girl... you must sick and twisted... just like me. I chuckled as I read your favorites....I have read them all!!!!   I love a great and twisted story.. all I ask is that Edward and Bella are happy together in the end... but I do love a bumpy ride along the way...;)



Author's Response:

LMAO... very twisted.... hehehehehe, if you've read any good ones that I haven't mentioned let me know, MWAH for pushing that button

Summary: Past Featured Story

cblw

Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse

This story is completely yummy... of course I'm a hea kind of girl... so I would love to see them fall in love.. still keep the dom/sub relationship, but let Bella open up and love...

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45295
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

What a hot and funny story.. I love it.  I really love that Charlie and Renee and all about being naked... to funny. And you make me laugh with Emmett. I hope that Edward makes a honest woman out of Bella...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great review!!! Em is my favorite to write because I can get away with just about anything with him :)

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15 Eager Beaver

oh my goodness... I can't believe that Bella may say no....they are going to have a baby and they love each other....



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry :) I have a plan if that helps :) thanks so much for reading <3

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255218
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Another awesome chapter... I love Dougies underroos....to cute!!! 



Author's Response:

Spidarman Under-Roo's --- lol --- i remember watching my nephews and they would waer the super hero under-roos... they would be jumping off the couch and running around ...lol... fr some reason i just knew that was how Dougie is too...with a towel tied around his neck for a cape ...lol....

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

What an awesome chapter.  I love seeing the story from Edward's point of view.  I  also love having Jane and Aro being husband and wife.. not just sadistic and hateful...I am truly enjoying your story...;)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I always thought that Aro and Jane should be together and in New Moon, she calls him Master...yup ...she sure does...lol....Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I loved this chapter... I was out of town for the Holiday week and had NO internet... I almost went crazy.... I read the last three chapters at once... It was great.  I hope that Bella can move forward from this.... and truly be happy.



Author's Response:

I would have gone crazy ,,, my phone would have been working overtime...lol

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What a fantastic chapter... I loved it. I could see how easy it is for Bella to be herself, yet let her naturally submissive side come forth. I love that even though Edward's nature it to be a dominate, he is still extremely tender...it is not all about whips and chains....not theat aren't fun too... but sometimes the tender loving is far more emotional...



Author's Response:

Yes you are right and in my story i really want to show the relationship ...with a little kink thrown in...lol

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It was another great chapter... just keep it coming....;)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm trying to keep it coming...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What a great chapter... I loved the kitchen sex... and yes.. it can be fun in the kitchen!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh poor Bella is gonna have a long tough night... but she will be ready for Edward tomorrow night... yummy!!!  Now.. who was driving that car?? I wonder.... hmmm



Author's Response:

Shrugs at your question...

 

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment…here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

            “Hello.”

 

             “Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.

 

            “Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.  

 

            “Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”

 

            “Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.

 

            “Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”

 

            “Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter... I would like to here a little more  about this "box"... did James punish her with this or did he kidnap her and hold her in it?  Also, the flash of light... Edward or James finding her... is he gone for good or waiting for another chance to get her... i loved their time in the playroom... I love that he can be her Master and still love her and hold her when she needs it... he not only wants her body... he wants her heart...



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, let me see if I can answer any of your questions...First thanks for reading and leaving a comment. You will hear more about the box in later chapters as Bella opens up more to Edward and all the trauma that she went through while she was married and living with James.  As far as Bella knows the flash of light was a passing car ... that is all that i can answer without giving away anything. Yes as Emmett said, Edward  don't know what hit him. ...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm loving this story... i  love how Edward is being loving yet firm with Bella.. showing her that sex can be wonderful...I love that they are growing so close... I'd love Edward to have a chance to knock James out... maybe even bring Emmett or Aro...



Author's Response:

All that love and then ...violence ...lol

Thanks for leaving me a comment, my readers rock !

Because you were so good, you get a treat...lml,

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” Nothing on the other end

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loved the way your did it..  I love that they are finding themselves truly falling in love with each other... but is James lurking around the corner?? I hope not.. Bella has been through so much, it's just not fair for her to hurt more, now she has Edward....



Author's Response:

Nothing worth having is ever easy to get, or keep...Is James lurking aroound??  Well he's not dead, but he's not stupid either...does that answer your question? lol    Thanks for leaving a comment ...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hey... I want a teaser... this is becoming an addicting story. I truly love it. Now... why is the truck over at Bella... frightening.... I love Edward torturing Bella....lovingly.... but defintely not James... and I dont know if I like it till he is gone... he seems so lurky...ugh



Author's Response:

The van? Got me, it's a public street, someone must be having work done....James? isn't he in Forks? You want a teaser, I got one for you.

Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment...lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I loved this chapter.. but I can't help but get a bad feeling about the collar missing.... not good.  I really love Bella and Edward together. I hope that Aro will step in and maybe repremand Irena and Caius for being so outright shitty to Bella, even a submissive should be treated with respect....



Author's Response:

Your right and the next chapter will answer some of your questions...Thanks for reading ....lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Aww... what an awesome chapter.. a tough one, but oh so good!!!!! Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

I would like to say it was tough to write, but it wasn't it just flowed..at least the part from when Bella goes into the shower, however I cried though the whole thing...i'm glad you like it...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I love the punishment that Edward chose... Bella doesn't need to be spanked to get it through her head ( taking James' abuse out of the picture) she beats her self up enough and for her to have to think about what she did was far worse.... Edward knows how to work her,,,, loved this chapter...



Author's Response:

He does know how to work her...Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a yeaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I loved this chapter... I think that lunch was wonderful, they were able to laugh and have a good time, but Bella could see Jane in her element.  Bella can draw from Jane and have a friend to talk to about this lifestyle...I thought the scene was well done... he told here that until her eating was better, that she wouldn't have him finish in her mouth.. I'm quite certian that he would rather have finished in her mouth than her face and neck, and I'm proud of her for holding it together and taking her punishment like a woman.. she held back the tears and accepted what was dealt her... my only hope is that Edward doesn't dissapoint her in the end... show her that not everyone will dissapoint you... give her the hea she derserves....



Author's Response:

I can tell you that my Edward doesn't lie and keeps his promises, so he will not let her down...I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading and leaving a comment...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I absolutely loved this chapter. I also loved that Edward let her have him cum in her mouth, it showed her that he loves her and is giving her a reward for doing as she should.  I can't wait for James to rear his ugly ass head... I only hope that Edward and Emmett get a good chance at him....



Author's Response:

Yes Bella got her shot of protein ...lol... Everyone wants to beat up poor James..Thanks for reading and leaving the comment ...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Im not so concerned with her having to ask for permission for things... I think it her way of giving complete control to her master. He holds her heart... why shouldn't he hold everything else. I do feel so sorry for her with the fact that she does have panic attacks.. orginally I would have loved for James to come back around and get near her without truly hurting her.. but Im concerned with the mental damage that he could do.. the physical will heal.. the mental is far worse.



Author's Response:

I won't say too much...but they have their trip to Forks and she doesn't like to go there just becasue she knows he is close. So yes James showing up, would freak her out...but, well I guess we will see where the story goes ....thanks for reading ...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

What an awesome chapter... I love that Edward is there for her. I can see how much he loves her.  And vitamins or not.. I'm still not swallowing...



Author's Response:

No swallow?....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

 

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

This chapter was wonderfully yummy... I'm glad that Bella coochie is getting some lovin'...

Author's Response:

yup ... Bella's coochie is open for business..lol

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I loved it....  girl Iam so hooked that I stop everything to read...the husband.. the kids...hehe...  I love that Edward and Bella can be dom/sub and still a very fullfilling relationship....I would love to see Bella pregnant with Edward's baby...



Author's Response:

hmmm... you are not the only one who would like to see a baby.... thanks for reading ..lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

What an awesome chapter... yes.. panties are wet.. and totally reconsidering anal play...I do feel sick and sad for Bella... James is one sick fucker and I can only hope that he gets his one day... and that Edward can help Bella through this crazy shit....



Author's Response:

I think the crazy shit is only begining ....Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I know that it is going to be so hard for Bella to open up to Edward. I can only imagine what he will be thinking when she comes clean about everything... but I'm sure that she will feel so wonderful when he tells her how much he loves her after everything is said... I'm sure he will be fuming while listening though....I would love to see Bella be able to conceive with Edward one day... oh and I would love to see Edward confess his true love for Bella in front of Tanya....



Author's Response:

I think the storm will get worse before it gets better...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I am so loving your story....it is awesome...



Author's Response:

good..I'm glad you like it ... I have a teaser for you...

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

This chapter was awesome... I love how he always thinks about her punishment and doesn't strike her in punishment... he always seems to have a punishment where her thoughts are involved and she punishes herself far worse than any strike he could give her.  I hope that she stays strong through her visit to Forks.  I didn't order my coy of Eclipse, however.... it will be the first thing I do on Sat. morning.... Target at 8 am!!!!



Author's Response:

I was at Boarders at Midnight and then picked up the Target exculsive at 7am ---I think Forks is going to be eventful in several ways....thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yes, I'd say you were successful.  I love how Edward and Bella are growing, together.  I know I've said it before... but somewhere, I'd love to have Bella pregnant....



Author's Response:

If a baby happens ((If)) it will happen much later and it will not be easy for either of them ,,,,, glad you liked the chapter ...lml

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Incredible chapter... the whole peen kissing things was tough, but if she is truly going to be submissive, then she has to follow every order to the letter...she is learning alot and I love that Edward will punish her when she needs it. I also love that he finds the right punishment for her everytime...



Author's Response:

Edward is amazing isn't he???   

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I absolutely love seeing the love between Jacob and Bella... family love..  I also love that Edward may be jealous (a little) but he sees it for what it is...the love of a family member.... I would love to see a marriage proposal...Bella and Edward belong together... also, I can't wait to find out who is messing with them...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

It is great to get a peek into his mind. I love that he can be playful and firm with Bella.. at the same time.  I love how deeply he is falling in love with her.. she is the other half that completes him. I wouldn't mind a run in with James ( to stir things up)  or even a brush with something frightening..maybe someone breaking into to the house while Bella is there..and I would love to see her pregnant.. maybe engaged or married...



Author's Response:

I love Edward's mind...he's complexed but with a simple outlook of black and white...Forks will be interesting,,,,thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Yet another incredible chapter... I took the time to read your a/n at the end and I have to say that I can't believe that people don't read and enjoy your story with out thinking you are corrupting minors...really...You can't make everyone happy all of the time, so I say...make you happy. You have done a wonderful job with this story and it has been done very tastefully. I am sorry that there are women who are in abusive relationships or are raped etc...but that is life. Sometimes I think some of the people that are constantly complaining have a hard time telling fantasy from reality...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and agian I'm sorry for my rant, i just needed to get it off my chest and that was the best way for me to do it...thanks again, until next time...louise

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Poor Alice was just a mess. I loved the photo shoot. I'm glad to see that Bella and Leah are getting along better. It does worry me that Alice was so caught up on that fact that Bella didn't come from money like they did...Is she jealous of Bella and becoming judgemental because of it?? Great chapter as always!!!



Author's Response:

She is a mess - hormones - their a bitch ..... i thik Alice isn't so much upset as she is just reminding Edward that Bella doesn't come from money. Alice assumes Edward is like her, designer clothes, expensive funishings, those kinds of things. She's just kind of warning him ... at least that's what she thinks she's doing ... ok there's a little tid-bit into Alice's mind for you .... thanks for reading ...louise

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I liked this chapter and have enjoyed your entire story... keep going..



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you are liking the story.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved the story... all of it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you fo ryour review. I'm so happy that you've enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Yes... I was was crying with you....such  a sweet,  sweet story.... I love that there was a happy ending after such tragedy....



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and wonderful comments! :)

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23069/images/MafiaPrincess.jpg

Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87585
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awww... she knew this day would come... but holy crap... Edward needs to be there to hold her and comfort her.



Author's Response:

Unluckily for her, that secret came out when she needed him the most. One good thing about it though, they will soon be talking about it so they can focus on finding the culprit of the whole accident.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh.. yummy... An angry Mase...can take his anger out on me any day!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, I'll tell him that. Lol!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh holy shit!!!!  Edward is gonna be pissed... Bella may even need to get spanked for going against her husband.... hehe



Author's Response:

Lol. 

Let's see what E does in the next chapter. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love it...yay!!!  They can be a wonderful happy, crazy family...



Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I think Bella needs to make him sweat it out!!!  He needs to be grateful that she is carrying his child...even if it was unexpected...it is still a gift...



Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

Soo good... keep going please... I would love for them to fall deeply in love... he could turn her and then they couold play forever...



Author's Response:

Careful what you ask for, you just might get it! Thank you so much for a great review and for reading it!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

What a great chapter... i do love it when they play....

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148712
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

aww.. my heart is breaking for the young Bella.. I don't like Renee... mean momma... and mommas have to be sweet.....update soon...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a review. I'm glad you like what you have read so far. I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN so I hope to update pretty quickly over here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!

les16~~

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love that Bella smella is spunky.... even after a crappy mother  growing up...update soon



Author's Response:

Hi there! So glad you like the story so far. Yeah, you won't find a shy, reserved Bella in this story...at all! Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN and I hope to update here pretty regularly to get caught up. There will be more soon! Hope to hear from you again!

les16~~

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a great chapter.. I love it



Author's Response:

Hello again~ Yeah, I figured everyone would like to hear from Edward. He's up next as well and it won't be long until a new chapter is posted. Don't forget there are now 39 completed chapters posted over on FFN. I hope to post here pretty regularly to get caught up. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I love hearing from you!

les16~~

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me

Poor Edward.. to love and loss.  I love a good twist and turn of a story... but please promise that love prevails...



Author's Response:

I am a hopeless romantic, i hope that helps.

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

what a great chapter... I love how Emmett is so worried about Bella...I love Anthony too....



Author's Response:

Thank you :-)

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389631
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Oh... I can't wait for Bella and Edward to come together... I was in tears.. feeling so bad for Edward.... him quietly loving Bella from afar... I can't stand Tanya... so good riddens....I know that Edward and Bella will be sooo good together....



Author's Response:

Yeah... it was kinda difficult watching him suffer silently that way.... but in the end it will all be worth it.... Tanya´s not one of my favorite ppl either.... hope she´s gone for good... then again... sometimes they don´t die... they multiply... haha... thanks for the review...


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Okay... so I love this.. Im a kinky bitch.. but thats another story in itself.  Is Bella a virgin?  Could she not go through the weddign because she truly loved Edward?  I want to see where you go with this... I love the twists  and  turns and bumps in the road.. all I ask is... is this a happy ending story....



Author's Response:

LOL... KINKY... HUH... WELL YOU´LL GET NO JUDGEMENT HERE.. BUT YOUR RIGHT DIFFERENT STORY FOR DIFFERENT DAY... LOL... SOME QUESTIONS I CAN ANSWER NOW AND SOME I CAN´T... THE ONE THING I CAN ASSURE YOU IS THERE MAYBE TWISTS, TURNS, AND A FEW BUMPS IN THE ROAD, BUT I AM A HEA ALL THE WAY KINDA GAL... THERE´S NO POINT IN WRITING A BxE FIC, IF THERE´S NO HAPPY ENDING. SOOOO THAT BEING SAID, HAVE NO FEARS... YOU WILL GET YOUR HAPPY ENDING.... THANKS SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING... IT REALLY MEANS ALOT!!!!  

 

LATERZZ....

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

LOL... KINKY... HUH... WELL YOU´LL GET NO JUDGEMENT HERE.. BUT YOUR RIGHT DIFFERENT STORY FOR DIFFERENT DAY... LOL... SOME QUESTIONS I CAN ANSWER NOW AND SOME I CAN´T... THE ONE THING I CAN ASSURE YOU IS THERE MAYBE TWISTS, TURNS, AND A FEW BUMPS IN THE ROAD, BUT I AM A HEA ALL THE WAY KINDA GAL... THERE´S NO POINT IN WRITING A BxE FIC, IF THERE´S NO HAPPY ENDING. SOOOO THAT BEING SAID, HAVE NO FEARS... YOU WILL GET YOUR HAPPY ENDING.... THANKS SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING... IT REALLY MEANS ALOT!!!!  

 

LATERZZ....

KRAZI

XOXO

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

I really am liking your story.. I'm glad that you commented about your updates... I hate it when your completely hooked on a story and then the writer falls off the face of the earth.. and they update maybe once a month or every six weeks... I'm like a crack whore.. I love my stories.  I am looking forward to seeing where you take this....

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I absolutely love you story... I know its tought to write and update allthe time, but its a great story and we are all hooked...;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

This chapter absolutely rocked... to funny that Will and Jake were one in the same...I can't wait to see Bella and Edward's relationship develop and progress...I love Seth.. maybe he could come and spend the weekend with his sissy sometimes...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!  I think that little Seth will be spending time with more than just sissy; I forsee  a pair of surrogate grandparents, aunts and uncles to spoil him along with his sissy in Seattle.   Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! 

 

Happy New Year!

Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

One last treat before I go... I give you chapter 8's title:  Twas a Night with Sir... and All Through the House..

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

All I have to say is that I can't believe that you are making us wait for two whole weeks... the anticipation is killing me... I love this story....



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Yet another Yummy chapter..... now I need new panties!!!!  I can't wait for all of this to unfold and Edward open up about his feelings...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

I absolutely loved this chapter... I can't wait for them to realize that it is Edward and Bella.... I hope that there is alot more to this story... I love it!!!  Please keep going...

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Girl... your ass should be hiding under the bed... Leaving me hanging like that... OMG!!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Holy shit!!!  After changing my ruined panties...this chapter was wonderful... girl you are so awesome!!!  I have been drawn in to your story and stop everything to read your updated chapters... I love that Edward is telling Bella how he feels...they love each other so much....just tell each other!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

loved it... loved it .... loved it!!!!  You rock!!!