Reviews by Cerulean
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923532
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So I über sad for my Jasper :( I know that totally broke him.

Buuuuut! Edward having "3" goes on Vic was insane! It was too good! I was rolling with glee all over! I'm just a little upset cause I know this is going to bite Edward in the butt-cakes later.

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool that you're gonna add the rest of the chapters here. I am obessed with the psycho-ness of this story. You're 27 chpt on fanfic blew my mind. Poor Bella :(



Author's Response:

thanks soooo much! Chapter 28 will come out soon. I'm working a bit on Midnight Caller's drabble and also the drabble for the April Drabble Wars. I'm writing the story of the second Elizabeth.

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Jasper's out burst was epic. Though I thought James random focus on Victoria speaking without permission was super funny.

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

... I almost forgot Aro was the bad guy. He stands up for Bella (for the wrong reasons) but, take gosh James knows what his own medicine taste like!

Oh and had no clue that Aro could give out a worst punishment than the usual...

James won't sit on the bum again for a few days. Ha!

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

While time I thought he might have accidentally popped her cherry. Thank goodness. I couldn't handle anymore anticipation other then the wedding. Yay. The wedding day is so close.

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Aww Man! Tell me it's not James. The creep shows up when you least expect him. 

It's probably not Demetri, for ehat reason would he be in Jasper's room?

Praying for it to be Edward.



Author's Response:

gotta wait and see :) teasers will be in the wreck room this weekend

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Yayyyyah! About time!

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

And just when I thought things couldn't get any darker...

Who knew there was a worse character than James. After a minute with Vlad, James is barely a scare.

Poor Tanya. I'm surprised I didn't breakdown crying like a baby. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Whoa! Just... Whoa!

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

James makes it really hard to feel sympathy for him when he's the type of person he is.

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Awwww. The ending J-POV was so sweet. It's crazy how its still possible to find happiness in a place like that. I'm starting to question will everyone get a happy ending when this all is over... It if it ends. Dun-dun-duhhhh!



Author's Response:

it does end...and no, not everyone gets a happy ending. 

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

MY BIRTHDAY IS MARCH 10th. (Random fact)

I saw this coming but I started to think it would never happen. I wonder if Edward is still cool that Jasper has been banging Alice for awhile now... Awkward.

Reviewer: Cerulean Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Damn. That's basically all I can say! Damn!!!