Reviews by SoreBluntTongue
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315755
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: ColoursCollide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

Ok, so first - I really loved how Bella was trying so hard in her head to feel something, anything for Jake, but came up with nothing.. that made me squeee internall! ;)

Then, to have him all but maul her.. wow.. I kinda wanted it.. lol.. but was glad he had to stop it ;)

Then, the over-protective Edward steps in. Ung. Kill me! So hot... but I gotta say I really wish they were just say what they mean and not jump around the words.. or maybe that's just because they're young. lol (yes, I'm showing my age now!)

I'm excited for EPOV - and where this will go from here. *giddy* Great chapter bb! *mwah!*

Reviewer: ColoursCollide Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Ugh. Only two more chapters??! Damn! I love, love, loved getting EPOV of events on this! So good!!! *love*

Reviewer: ColoursCollide Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

If you hug your laptop really tight and you get a warm feeling from it, that's just me hugging you back with the love! ;)

Great chapter - I'm so glad the angsty stuff was left behind for this one.. but I'm anxious to see what Monday will bring for them! *squish*

Reviewer: ColoursCollide Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

Oh, Bella! Why? What is it you want? Dammit!! lol

Enjoy your trip bb!! Sounds exciting! :)

Reviewer: ColourmeCullen Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

I think I hate you. *pouts* I don't like emo Bella! Damn!! Didn't you say there were only a few chapters left? What. The. Hell?!!!!! OMG! You seriously can't pull James back out. Ugh. I. Am. Ded. *sulks*

Yes, I am a baby. lol ;) *love*

Reviewer: SoreBluntTongue Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Ok.. I think my heart has exploded.. Ugh. Too much to put into words. Damn. *sigh*

Reviewer: SoreBluntTongue Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

F*ckawesome ending! I would have waited months for that shit. *squishes*

Summary:

Elle is an energetic, independent woman with a successful business and new start in the big city. The bustling streets of New York are not what she expected, yet she finds the freedom exhilarating. One interaction at the mailboxes with her shy, strikingly handsome neighbor is all it takes to turn the strong- willed young woman into a bumbling mess.

 

Jonah Quinn is withdrawn for good reason; he harbors a dark secret. He lives his life in the shadows, playing his music in late night bars and hiding himself from everyone but Elle's cat. His tattoos bear his pain while his music is his outlet, but it is his silence that keeps his shame at bay.

Can one night of passion between the two of them lead to more than casual glances exchanged at their mailboxes? Will Elle be strong enough to help Jonah with his personal demons. And will Jonah break his silence regarding a past that haunts him?
The Rules for this relationship are Unwritten. 

A story of longing, love, and forgiveness.

Only the first chapter is available.

If you want to read more, my debut novel is available here.

 

 

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2497 Read Count: 1230
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2010
Reviewer: ColourmeCullen Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh bb! I loved this! So excited to see where you take it! *squish*

Reviewer: ColourmeCullen Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Unwritten Rules

Oh, Elle is so adorable! I heart her crazy tendancies! ;) Jonah is quite the enigma though.. I like it! :)

Reviewer: ColourmeCullen Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Unwritten Rules

The raw intensity and aftershocks were sadly beautiful. And who can really pass up a knight like that. I just hope that Elle isn't too far gone and at the very least Jonah can help her deal with what she went though and it doesn't come back to bit her on her ass later.. *sigh*

Reviewer: ColourmeCullen Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Unwritten Rules

Oh, sadness.

So I'm thinking that Jonah had been watching her all this time, but maybe he's more shy and reserved than Elle even realizes. He wanted to be there for her, so he let her in and when she was so close, he clearly couldn't sit back any longer. But I'm thinking when he woke, he didn't necessarily regret it, but he didn't know how to process it... so he did all he knew to do and left her there??

Yeah, either way, I feel badly for Elle and I hope she doesn't shut him out completely after this.. although, no condom? That's awfully trusting if it wasn't just ommitted from the text...

I loved the last line though. :)

Reviewer: SoreBluntTongue Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Unwritten Rules

Oh, Yes! I'm wondering if the author of the book id Jonah, or someone very close to him? It would explain the tattoo, maybe... I love that he has a band and plays.. this just keeps getting better bb! :D

Reviewer: SoreBluntTongue Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Unwritten Rules

The Jonah in this chapter seems so different from what we've seen to date... I love it though! Great chapter bb! :)