Reviews by Mart
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 86: Edward

Oh I can't wait for the next.

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 87: Bella

Squee!!!!!!

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 90: Edward

oh my................

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 91: Bella

DAMN

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 92: Edward

Make tomorrow 2 long chapters and all will be good. love it!!

 

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 93: Bella

Yummy, lemons are good

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 94: Edward

Yummy, can't wait till tomorrow

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 96: Edward

Yeah, yummy, love this story, and keep it up please.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 102: Edward

fabulous 4 chapters! Why don't the girls stay a little longer?

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 103: Bella

I love the Charlie!!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 104: Edward

Woohoo!!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 106: Edward

Oh my,,,,Mad Edward is sexy as .... no word to describe.

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 108: Edward

Love it, fabulous story and look forward to the updates daily.

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 109: Bella

Love it, I have so enjoyed this story and the fact that post daily is the da bomb as my kids would say.

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 110: Edward

Damn

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 118: Edward

Fabulous 2 chapters. I am glad that it wasn't officially party time with the guys after the girls left to cope. Very nice

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

Damn yummy! Was out of time and missed a couple days but good stuff.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 126: Edward

Fabulous 2 chapters. Enjoy as always.

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

I have never written so many reviews in my life. Again, love the story, love the image of Irina you made for me. Fabulous story.

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

Woo hoo, I love it!! Bring it on!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Oh he could keep me captive and I wouldn't mind/

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 136: Edward

Love that, fabulous 2 chapters love me Sarge!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 138: Edward

Love it!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 140: Edward

Where are the shammy's? Damn good stuff. Looking forward to more!!

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 146: Edward

Fabulous I just love this story. keep up the good work and writing

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 147: Bella

mwah!!! Love it

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

You better not stop now!!! Sarge is home!!!

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 150: Edward

Holy cow where is the shampow!!!

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 152: Edward

Fabulous!! I love this story and while I don't always review, you guys are favs.

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward

Fabulous story and great 2 chapters today.  Looking forward to more. A Sarge sundae sounds might good.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 156: Edward

Love it, you guys are great!! Love the comraderie with E/J/E and Charlie!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 164: Edward

I love double chapter days. Just keep bringing on the love!!!

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 166: Edward

Yummy, damn that was good.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 170: Edward

No, don't stop!!! Love this and look forward to reading more from you two,.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 172: Edward

Oh I love it!!! bunches!!!!!

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

Love it. Sad that it has too end soon, but I guess it wouldn't make sense to write it forever.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

Oh my that was a great chapter with such passion and love for family. Love it

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142052
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: V is for Vendetta

I want Charlie to take a leave of absence and solve the case! Great story

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 24: The Straw

Please don't make me wait for the update!!! I love this story and all of your other ones as well. Please, please are Bella and the girls going to make it?

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Lies and Deceit

What, you stopped here???? Really , no

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

What!!!!!! nooooo come on update soon.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Reunion and Distresses

Fabulous chapter. Please post soon!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324431
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

Fabulous story. Love it, and look forward to more.

 

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107118
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Just found your story and read the whole thing tonight. Excellent stuff

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's been 4 years since the Cullens left Forks. Bella is working in a bar when one night she hears a voice that she thought she would never hear again.What happens when Jasper shows up without Alice,but more sure of himself.

   

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69529 Read Count: 17212
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Happiness

Fabulous story. Chapters could be a little bit longer but I am selfish.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. This was my fist fic and I didn't know much that's why the chapters were short. Thanks for reading. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419207
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What the hell? Please post soon, verry soon, like now.

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

No break up and no breaks! Love this story

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

jasper is an ass and my bet is jacob paid charlies bond. looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Love this story and anxiously await the next chapter.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Go Bella, bring those bitches down!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it, looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ugh, what is going to happen when Bella gets home? Maybe her dad will be passed out and she will have a Merry Christmas.

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love it and I am glad to see Bella is a real woman with curves and not some damn stick.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh no you can't stop it there!!!! love it~~

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was a hard chapter to read but you did a good job writing it. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Go Bella, give that arrogant little ass, his ass on a platter. Looking forward to the next chapter and hope it is soon.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Woohoo, finally she tells off Jacob and Mike!!!! I love this story and look forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Fabulous chapter and look forward to the next one.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love, love, love it, please post more soon!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Please please post soon!! Excellent chapter.

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87332
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love this story!!! That was hysterical!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4.  We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love.  The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’.  Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story.  Kasi~

PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!

(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.

~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~

~I did! Where are you?~

~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~

And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.

~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~

~No, I’m okay. Night.~

Now what will I do with myself?  I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again.  I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.

~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~

~Okay. Night.~

And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man.  I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug.  I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Go Bella, give her hell.



Author's Response:

I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all.   Kasi~ 

Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story.  Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time.  Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10.  All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually.  We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself.  There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you.  Kasi & Jess.

Teaser for chapter 10:  “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.

“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”

“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”

“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.

“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.

“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”

“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.

“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.

“Yes, I’m okay.  Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.

“Why are you calling so late?”

“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.

“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”

“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow didnt see this coming



Author's Response:

Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit.  Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper.  A few of you think post-partum depression.  There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters.  Things will really roll along here story line wise.  Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon.  I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon.  Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward.  They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well.  The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & Jess~

Teaser:  “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.

“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.

“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”

“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.

“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.

Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues.  My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little.  Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 37: And They Lived Happily Ever After

Love this, what a great story. Looking forward to the epilogue and hope Alice and Jasper get back.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: The End of an Era

Freaking fabulous story!! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 34: X-Rated Fairy Tales

Oh snap, oh no, knew something was coming but wow, post soon.

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: You Own Me

Fabulous story, just found it two days ago and read the whole till this point. Love it and look forward to the next chapters.

555-TALK by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella dials the wrong number one night and instead of getting her Mom she gets an erotic radio station's hotline? "Hello, this is Edward speaking, tell us your deepest fantasies or real life sexy stories."555-Talk banner by ysar




THANK YOU SO MUCH YSAR FOR THE BANNER! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44950 Read Count: 31096
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Disputes

More, more more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113786
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I was so happy to see this here this pm. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow, just wow, love the chapter

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please update, great story

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please update, great story

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please update, great story

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please update, great story

Summary:

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Edward is a bit of a wild child; he drinks and occasionally smokes weed or does some lines of coke, even though he is studying to be a doctor at MUSC. One day Bella sees him at a party, held by one of her friends. She doesn't like the path he is on in life. Can she stay away from him?

 

All human/HEA

 

 

 

This as well as all my other storys are beta'd by  RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2040 Read Count: 5073
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Longer chapters, good story

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Best friends since she was ten and he was twelve.  She had a hard home life, his family love and accepted her as their own.  She accepted him and his family for who they were, mafia royalty.  As they grow up, she becomes a dancer, and he gets groomed to take over for his father.  Follow Edward and Bella as they fall in love and take on the world together.  Violence and Lemony goodness.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177484 Read Count: 221133
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 61: Future Take

Just found this story and I love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please post soon!!!! Please it has been too long

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, that was a good chapter. Please update soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102267
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh my what a fabulous story!!! just found it today and read the whole thing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 92180
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hahahaha I love it, some Calisle and Alice action would be a hoot!

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh no poor Edward, please post soon

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 29 May 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Awe how sweet, love it.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow what a fabulous chapter! I look forward to seeing how the rest plays out. and good for Edward knocking Call out

Reviewer: Mart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Damn, well update soon.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Dang, I want to know what happens with Edward, will he forgive her?

 

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

Favorite Scream


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130198
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

Oh Bella you dumb ass

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

Good chapter, I just wish it was longer!

 

La Cantante by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 625]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a freshman in college studying to be a music teacher. Edward is a pre-med student at the same school but secretly wants to be a musician. They both meet and sparks fly. However, Bella's past may make it difficult. ExB, AH EDITED and REPOSTED!

La Cantante

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594750 Read Count: 327922
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Badass Bella Rocks!!

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Holy crap, was so hoping his character was dead.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285577
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for

I love this story and how you are including Bob and Carol in the family. Makes it more realistic.

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

Love it, please update again soon, Just found your story this weekend and I love it.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

woo I love it. Great chapter and hope you post soon

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

God love them indeed.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Love this story. I was afraid you had abandoned it. Please post soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I personally think this is a great story. I like that Edward's struggling with his emotions for Bella and being a Dom, etc. This type of neglect you were talking about occurs more often than not. Keep posting



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh dear God, what a fruit cake

 



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

awe hell no she didn't. Please post again soon.



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What, evil, really evil to stop the story right here. I love this story even though I don't give feedback often. Keep up the good work and post soon.



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

love it!!



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Mart Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Woohoo Esme got what was coming to her.  I had been looking forward to this, glad you posted.