Reviews by desintx
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: desintx Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my, I can not believe people complain about the most silliest of things. Your takeing your own personal time to write for us for free, hello this is free entertainment....enough said! I say thankyou for useing up some of your personal time to entertain me when I am trying to hide from the kid and housework. Edward is an ass, but hey we all wanna be put in our place by a sexy man...right? I think your updates are great, I have some favorite stories on fan fiction that take a month to two months for updates, yeah it sux, but I still love em. Thanks again for your time, your mad writing skills, imaginitive mind and most of all effort! Look forward to your next post!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: desintx Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1

I have seen so many stories where they have switched roles with Edward being the human. But wow, not only did you switch, but you made Eddie boy a halfling, very good! I love Bella's character, she is a bitchy lil' thing and I love it! Very good story. I also like how at the end of each chapter you add the pics, the car was gorgous, what a shame it got wrecked. Look forward to see what exactly he turns out to be...the glowing green eyes is what got me confused



Author's Response:

YES, Eddie is as you say. I felt like in remaining true to some canon it was a good idea. I am beyond happy that people are liking this story and my version of Bella...or Cursella. I played with the idea of this story for a while before I actually sat down to write it. I am so glad I did. And the pics...I feel like I need to show my readers what I see when I write, so YES a pic for every chapter. The glowing green eyes is my tribute to Queen of the Damned...Anne Rice introduced me to the vampire world as a teen, and since I cant play with her characters why not take some of their features, right? Daybreakers also gave me the idea, lol. Hope that helped. Thanks again =)

Reviewer: desintx Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

so we have two Edwards, sounds great, it could be crazy if Azreal ended up attracted to Bella as well as Edward. Bring the drama. I wanna see Edward tear James apart, this should be fun, so much going on in this chapter. Happy big 3-0 , mine will be here in September, I am not sure if I am ready to let loose on the twenties, lol! Great story and look forward to the next chapter and as always I love the pics you post, just makes the end that much sweeter



Author's Response:

Thanks desintx for the review. AND oh my did you bring up an interesting concept...hmmm...Azrael and Bella...ooooh, you got my wheels turning, lol. I dont outline my stories...ever, lol, I have an idea of what I want to do and stuff but alot of the ideas for the chapters come to me in the form of theories and questions from my reviewers...I think you have brought up a possible twist for the future, so thank you. Lets see what we can do with that now shall we...because of course  there will be a confrontation  with Azrael...and yeah there was alot going on in this chapter. It was a filler, but a much needed one. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it!

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: desintx Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am really enjoying this story, thankyou for sharing it. I love period peices, I am a history nut. So any time you mix Edward and the past; I'm a gonner. Look forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: desintx Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

when you mentioned "not proper" spanish.....I am from lower Texas, right on the Mex border...its called tex mex here...you won't here spanish the same anywhere else! It's a mix between texas drwal and spanish, very interesting; since I took spanish in highschool and college...moved here and thought I'm good I know spanish, yeah right. Great story...love the spanish mixed in cause I hear it all the time here in the valley! Look forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: desintx Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Wonderful update, so glad that Esme and the baby are okay. I won't lie, I hate leaving reviews, but I feel a HUGE congragulations is in order for the doctor! Thats a hard road to accomplish and you have, so big hug, pat on the back, and congrats (again)! I hope no one hassled you too much on updates, people need to understand the authers on these sites do this for no money and it is just a hobby, so the way I look at it, if yya update you do....if you don't oh well I will just be that more excited once you do,lol! Thanks for the update, congrats again, and look forward to the next chapter...no promises on an update, like I said I am a lazy ass when it comes to that, but I love your story and have been around since the first chapter posted and will continue on till the end and any other works you may put forth later on!

ruins by sinister thing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

isabella is the forth oldest child out of 13. she loves her life, in her small village and beautiful house.

her siblings are forced to flee their beloved village making them go and live with their uncle.

but when the same troubles come not all of them make it to freedom, and they meet the reason behind their trouble.

please read and tell me if i should keep going with this story

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7453 Read Count: 2303
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2010
Reviewer: desintx Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: preface

ooohh please do continue, seams very interesting. Nice to see for once James used as a good guy. Hope you decide to continue