Reviews by CullenHunter
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127519
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another wonderful chapter!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Touching memorial. I know I'm late to the party but kill that heifer off. Emma will be better off. Trust me. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope she doesn't push Edward  away. what's up with Emmett?

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Migraines awful! I've suffered with them for the better part of 20 years. 

I hope no more "running" for Bella. In fact I think these two should go ahead and marry no matter the length of time they've been together. It feels right in their case. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'll bet Jessica has a freaking conniption about the dance classes & heaven forbid she finds out about Emma wanting to call Bella mommy. Need to kick her ass to the freaking curb! Slorish cvnt!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Crap - I so need to go to sleep & then you leave a teaser like that!?!? I must read another chappie tonight (early morning) now!!!

 

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella is so damn stubborn!!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay new home, living together, SEX!!! Now to just get a ring on the fingers, get rid of Jessica permanently & kill off that sadistic fvck James!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Damn... How much is Bella supposed to handle??? Die Jessica it'd be easier on Emma in the end. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

;-)

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

;-)

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

All right now lets get rid of James. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sounds like a wonderful vacation!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yay!! Now let's end the James drama...

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

On pins & needles here!!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

All right, got my big girl panties on... Soldering on now...

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks for not drawing it out that much! Now for the healing & the baby!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Hard for the adults to cope, even more so for a child. You're writing Bella wonderfully in conjunction with her dealing with Emma! (not to say your not in other areas)

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

They should have a boy. A good name for the baby would be Jonathan (god has given, gift from god). Partial to marry before baby is born & don't go back to work until after.  But if waiting on marrying then go back to work before... Ok there is all of my opinions. Anxiously awaiting for this to be updated! Now I'm moving on to another of your stories!

Summary:

When Bella saw Edward for the first time, she became obsessed. What will she do to make sure Edward is hers? TFA 2011 Summer Fantasy Contest- Public's Pick Winner

This is the one shot version.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8927 Read Count: 1773
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was absolutely awesome! I'll be anxiously awaiting the expansion!

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661145
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

I've been reading a lot of stories lately with this underlining theme (based on your summary) - they usually start with Bella's side - I love this started with Edward! Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

another great chapter(s)!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Love that they will email!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

Bella is a girl after my own heart! *Venti Peppermint White Chocolate Mocha* is the absolute best!!!

Love the banter and learning more about them. Glad you cleared up about his parents.  

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7: Bella

;-)

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 8: Edward

The thought of losing any of our heros saddens me. I know it's needed for the progression of this story but it happens all to often in real life. Many extraordinary men & women have lost their lives and I pray every day for them, those they left behind and the ones still fighting. 

Heroes by naughtydreamz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A struggling single mom, a fatherless boy with big dreams, and a man on his way to fame and fortune.  All of them could use a hero.....

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23148 Read Count: 37148
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This is a wonderful story but this chapter was weird to read since Lebron just won the NBA title with the Miami Heat, during his second year there. 

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49588
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Outstanding start! Glad I found it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it :)

 

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh- he's bit rough around the edges after what Kate's done to him... (understandably so) 

Can't wait to see inside Bella's head. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's still hurting and lashing out at Bella. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh man - love when a story has the two them thinking the others reactions are from other reasons than denying their own attraction. Bella backstory is interesting. Really didn't form an opinion about Jake yet other than I love when he's gay an not a "threat". 



Author's Response:

I won't ever write Jake as competition! I'm glad you're enjoying their ignorance :) 

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Continues to be interesting. I wonder if Tanya will be a problem?



Author's Response:

You prolly know by now, she isn't an issue-thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Damn you scared me with that warning but that was nothing! If that's all it is it's not too bad. Please say that's all there is! ;-)



Author's Response:

Sorry about that-a lot of people were sweating the Tanya thing. I thought it was better to warn them off rather than lose them.

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can't wait until the Jake reveal ;-). 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you again for reading, and for all the reviews! I really appreciate it :)

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

;-) another wonderful chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! The BBQ is up next, it should be a lot of fun ;) 

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter but damn what s plsce to end it. Can't wait for the next update!

 



Author's Response:

You'll be happy to know that Ch 9 picks up right where 8 left off ;)   Thanks so much for reading!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419218
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start! Excited to read more!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What a great Edward! Love a "perfect" E & an "imperfect" B. Totally funny him calling Tyler out on what he says & to whom!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't wait to read about Bella taking control of her life! Again - wonderful Edward! I'm there with you on shoving the crutch up Charlie's ass! Can't wait to nurse Stanley & Mallory taken down a peg or two!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope that isn't some foreshadowing there at the end and is just Edward being concern about his new friend!

Love this story! Can't wait for you to update!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please ignore the haters out there! People in general are mean - ie makes your story very realistic and rooted in truth!

Another excellent chapter with another awesome E shining through! I'll admit though I've got to go back and reread the first 4 chappies - after I had read them I started "A Fresh Start" now I'm confusing the to Edwards! ;-) can't wait for your next update!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So much happening in this chapter! Moving in, sleepovers, KISSES!!! Oh and Royce :(

Cant wait until next chapter!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wonderful chapter, had a little bit of everything but the sexin' ;-) - understand the need for some angst but thank you for not dragging it into multiple chapters!