Reviews by RAH07890
Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183783
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

Wow, that was Intense!! I loved it though :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

Wow, amazing job. Slowly but surely :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

Oh Edward/Miley ;) So glad she said yes again :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

Wow, amazing again :) Go Carlie! I would LOVE to be able to do that but I cannot read music :(

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Wow, that was incredible :) So happy for them :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

Amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora

Wow, I really loved this. Glad that Carlie finally accepted the news ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper

Wow, poor Bella! But, at least little Jack is healthy :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

Amazing job. I guess having a 11 year old girl and 2 yr old boy can be hectic ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Holy Sheet!!! That was shocking!! I wonder what Bella will think of this?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much, despite the loss.  I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really loved it!  Go baby Ruth ;)

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, this story is amazing so far!  I really cannot wait for more ;)



Author's Response:

Glad that you're entertained by this story. Hope to see you next update.

Thanks!;) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, that was amazing!  I have a question though, why does Bella call him "Masen" and everyone else calls him "Cullen"?  Maybe it was explained earlier and I didn't catch it, sorry :(  Anyway, really cannot wait for more of the honeymoon :)



Author's Response:

She knows him as Masen in New York, that's why she didn't make the connection of him being Cullen. The times she used it was when she wanted to spite him, and that time in bed where she accidentally called him that. So there, hope I clarified some things for you.;)

See you on my next update. Thanks for your thoughts!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was incredible!  I loved the start of their honeymoon.  Although, like Edward said, they do need to talk eventually.  Bella is so sassy, but in a good way ;)  



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was. Our Bella is one feisty girl, and Edward loves it. :)

They will soon be talking about what happened, don't worry.

Thanks. See yah next update.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my gosh!  I wonder what Bella will do now?  I love that Bella got a break from Edward (not that it is a bad thing to be having sex all the time, but sometimes you need a break).  I hope Edward goes with Bella to her parents' graves.  I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)



Author's Response:

Yes, she definitely needed a break! :) lol

Edward might go visit the graves with her in the future....I'll see what I can do. :) 

Anyway, thank you for telling me what you think. Really appreciate it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it all so, so much.  I really hope Bella can understand what Edward meant and can forgive him, eventually :)



Author's Response:

Glad you loved it! Every time somebody does, it makes me giddy! ;D 

Edward was/is an asshole but he was able to profess his love to Bella so their future together looks really good. :) Trust, Bella is well on her way to forgiveness.

Thanks for your thoughts. Until next update!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh my gosh!  I wonder who sent the text?  Will Edward tell Bella about Victoria's true attraction?  Loved it all, so much!  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Bella will learn about Victoria's attraction to the same sex soon. It'll be interesting to see Bella's reaction. =) 

Thanks for the love hon! Kisses to you! ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, that was amazing!  I love the dance Bella did for Edward (and what followed it, hehe) ;)  I really don't like Jacob and hope Bella and he can be over with (so she never sees him again).  Amazing job, once again :)



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm portraying Jacob as the bad guy here. =) lol

I loved writing this chap so I'm happy you liked it. Thanks! =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OH NO!@  This is not good!  I really hope Bella is ok!  Please?  Amazing job, once again.  I loved it all so much.  I loved the smuttiness :)  I am sad that it won't be happening again for a while but I understand.  I cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

So sorry for that cliffy. I'll try and make it up to you next chapter. It'll be in EPOV. ;)

Thanks for all the love dear. I really appreciate it! =) See you next update.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, that was amazing!  I am so happy Bella is ok.  I cannot wait to see how everything turns out!



Author's Response:

Thanks sweets! =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was amazing, even if I already read this on FF.net. I really am happy for Bella and Edward :)



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you bb for reviewing this chap, even though you already read it! =) Kisses to yah! ;D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This was amazing!  I am so happy they are back together :)  I really cannot wait to find out who caused the accident and what happens to them ;)  



Author's Response:

Don't worry hon, everything will be revealed soon. ;) *muahz*

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait for them to have sex again, although I know they cannot wait either ;)  I also cannot wait to find out who it is!



Author's Response:

Don't worry, you will know who's responsible next chapter. I'll try to fast track things so they can have sex again. Lol! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was incredible :)  I really loved it, even though I don't like reading about torture.  It proves that Bella is not meek at all!  I cannot wait for the babies to get here :)



Author's Response:

Babies? Hmmm...I have to think about it. Anyway, thanks. Happy New Year to you! =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  Way to go Bella :D  I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed the chappie, sweets. =) I'll try to update very soon. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

that was amazing :) I really love the dirty talk/sexy times ;) I cannot wait to see what Bella gives Edward for Christmas and what happens next :)

Author's Response:

Glad you did.;) lol. Thanks!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh Edward...  Cannot wait to see how everything works out for these two :)



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward. lol! anyway, thanks! =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait for things to get better again :)



Author's Response:

Glad you did. Your review just made me smile, and I thank you. ;) 

I'll try to update as soon as I can. *hugs*

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OH MY GOSH!  I really loved this so much!  I cannot believe Bree was bad all along :(  I cannot wait to see how James and Bella are connected.  I also hope that Edward is found innocent and Bella gets all of the truemate rights :D  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap.

Thanks so much! I appreciate it!

xox

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OH NO!  Please let Edward be ok!  Please?  I know how Bella feels but she is still learning about the difference between Human and Vampire males.  Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Yeah, don't worry. Edward will be fine. =)

Thanks so much. I love hearing from you

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, that was amazing!  Even if it will be a while before she is changed, I know it will seem a short while for them :)  I cannot wait to see what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Thank you  so much =) Yeah, it won't be long for them....I would say about a year tops before she is changed. It's a slow paced story. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is absolutely amazing so far!  I really love it so much :)  Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

Oh Hey RAH07890! *waves*

Thank you so much! I'm happy that you like so far.

I hope that you keep enjoying it. =)

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH NO!  Poor Bella!  Not the most pleasant of first days of school.  Hope she can meet Edward soon ;)



Author's Response:

She'll meet Edward really soon ;)

Thank you =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, that was amazing!  Why can't Edward's I read about in Fanfiction exist in real life?  Ahh, dreaming of this Edward tonight (I hope).  I really cannot stand Tanya, but what else is new?  Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

LOL. I wish I could dream of Edward too.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Yay for being mates :)  One tiny mistake I found that needs correcting, if you don't mind. "“I want you to,” should be "I want you too".  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for pointing out the mistake. I'll correct it tonight.

Thanks again

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella with taking the pills and having to donate TWICE in one month.  I hope Edward changes her ASAP ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing!  I REALLY loved Edward's carving ;)  Can I ask a weird question?  How big is Edward (and yes, in the way you are thinking, I have a dirty pervy mind sometimes)?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story.

As for your question *giggles* I also have a pervy mind, too. Now since Edward is around 7 feet tall because all my vamps are huge esp the men, I would say larger than 10 inches? LOL I never mention the size of ...his....peen....because it can be whatever size you want it to be, but yes he's BIG. LOL Whatever size floats your boat, he is. *giggles*

Thank you for reading and commenting. I enjoyed answering your question.

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH SNAP!  I really loved this so much!  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really loved it so much!  I wonder how they will defy the vampire law of changing Bella?  Also, how much longer before he changes her?  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked. *looks at outline* Oh boy, it's going to be a long time before he changes her. I'm not even half way through the story yet. I have so much to cover. lol  Oh there's a certain way they will be able to defy the law. ;) I hope you'll like it when time comes.

Thanks again,

~jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved the watching of vampire porn ;)  Also, love them talking in LOTV.  Wonder if Edward can have a dirty talk session in LOTV to see if Bella can understand it?  Wonder what Aro wants now?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad you liked. I still cringe when i think about chapter 11. lol

Hehe. Oh I'm sure there will be a scene or more when Edward speaks dirty to Bella in LOTV. ;) lol

Thank you

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  Really loved it so much!  How old is Edward?  Just wondering since he is the Ultimate Vampire.  Cannot wait to see what will happen with Aro, Tanya and everyone else ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I should have the other update soon.

oh I believe Edward is around 17 or 18 yrs. He's older than Bella. But he's young since my vamps can have offspring.

Thank you again. I enjoyed hearing from you.

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, that was AMAZING :)  I really loved it so much!  I wonder what is wrong with Bella?  Also, I don't think I could have watched Adriano die either...ew.  Cannot wait for Chapter 17 and Living Amongst Hell update :)



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves* Thank you so much =)

Yeah, Adriano's death was quite gruesome. Aro is literally a monster. =/  I should have ch 17 posted soon. And I'm close to completing LAH chapter as well.

Thanks again,

love hearing from you

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

GAH!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved the cherry lemonade...why can't this Edward exist in real life to help me through my time of the month?  I cannot wait to see what happens next and how they finally change Bella ;)  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

I ask myself that  all the time. Why can't there be an Edward like this? hehe Thank you, i'm flattered that you like Edward =)

Thanks again,

I'll post more asap.

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it!  Yay for Bella and Edward ;)  I wonder why Aro cancelled?  Also, cannot wait for their first date :)  YAY!  Wonder how much longer before Bella is changed?



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much =)  Glad you liked it.

It's going to be at least 10 more chapters before Bella is changed. I hope you'll continue to like. =)

Thanks again. Love hearing form you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OH MY GOSH!  I really hope Tanya doesn't cause too much trouble!  Also, I hope they find out what happened to Bella, that is serious!  I really loved this so much :)  Cannot wait for the next update of this and LAH :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.  And yup it's LAH that I finally finished. =D I sent it to my co-writer for her to preread and I'll post asap when I get it back.

Thanks again. Love your comments.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OH NO!  Please!?!?!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

Sorry for that cliffy, but I'll post ch 19 today or tomorrow at the very latest. I decided to write a full chapter.

Thank you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OH MY GOSH!  NO!!!!!!  I really loved this so much!  Great job!  I really loved it so much!



Author's Response:

Hey!! *waves*

 

Thanks so much! I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

 

I'll have a small update towards the end of the week, I've got a bit of studying to do first.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

Thought this was cute lol

fangs

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OH MY GOSH!  NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I really loved this!  I thought Bella and Edward wanted younglings as he put it, oh well.  Claiming sounds like it will be an amazing experience for them ;)  I really hope Angela and Ben's baby is alright, please?!  I also cannot wait for Bella and Edward to have a bonding ceremony ;D



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

 

Thanks so much for reading. =) I appreciate it. I'm working on the next chap. Claiming will be euphoric ;) And good things will happen for Edward and Bella and Angela and Ben very soon =)

 

Thanks again, RAH! 

 

Jells

 

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay!!  Cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm re-editing ch 22 since I ran into some problems. Have 23 completely written and 24 will need some more work, unfortunately. However, the story will be completed =) Sorry about the hiatus.

 

Jells

 

ch 22 teaser

 

Bella's POV

 

At every corner and crevice, a torch was mounted onto the stony walls. The flames seemed to flicker menacingly, mocking us. Massive court guards stood at each torch with weapons strapped across their chests and more at their sides. Their cold, dark red eyes always ended up snapping to me, watching every little step I took as we passed by them. I couldn’t help but wonder if the three judges would look just as cold and unforgiving as the guards. My heart stuttered in my chest at the mere thought of losing Edward. I quickly pushed the ill thought away as we continued our trek further into the cold, dimly lit cave. With each step, the air grew colder and denser. I shivered next to Edward. He quickly took off his grey pea coat and draped it over my shoulders.

 

I glanced up at him and smiled my gratitude. Even with the thick sweater I wore, I had been freezing ever since we entered the ominous cave. The entire atmosphere down here felt chilling and foreboding yet the beauty of the stalagmites helped put me at ease slightly. The ceiling of the cave had to be at least 200 feet high. We came to a stop by a stone archway guarded by two heavily armed court guards dressed in gray uniforms. Their dark eyes narrowed on me before flashing to Edward.

 

The burlier of the two guards spoke. “Edward Anthony Cullen?” he asked in a gruff tone.

 

“Yes.”

 

“You’ll need to get changed and restrained. Follow me.” The burly guard turned on his booted heel and stomped away, expecting us to follow.

 

Edward pulled me behind him and snaked his arm around my waist when the tunnel grew more narrow and darker. Not even the flickering flames helped aid my sight. The torches were placed too far apart. I leaned against Edward, letting him guide me. The walk through the tunnel didn’t last long. We came to a stop in front of a small cavernous room filled with shelves full of uniforms and black chains. In the center of the room, a huge platform made of stone stood ominously as the centerpiece.

 

The court guard stalked over to a shelf and grabbed a pair of baggy cloth pants that were burgundy in color with black stripes. “You will need to put these on while I prepare your restraints and the bite cuff. After you finished changing into the convict garb, sit down on the restraint table over there and wait for me,” he instructed in an icy tone while pointing to the big stone platform. “You can change behind that wall over there, the changing divider.  Just leave your clothing on the shelf when you’re finished. If you’re found innocent, I will escort you back here to change back into your clothes. If you’re found guilty, you will remain in this uniform I have given you to be immediately escorted to the maximum security prison by the prison guards assigned to you. Any questions?”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh wow! Poor Bella. I'm hopeful she'll get out and be reunited with Edward, soon. If you'll still have me, I'll still beta for you! 



Author's Response:

Hey! I missed you 😊 My email addy is vampgurl1331@gmail.com  Email me since I don't have yours anymore.  I'm still in Arizona and it's been a rough time lol. Trying to get back home to FL. 

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/be_my_sub_banner.gif

 

   

Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, that was amazing :)  I am SO happy for updates :D  I cannot wait to see if Edward can get her to squirt ;)  Pervy me!  Hehe.  I will def. check out the original story, so glad to have you back :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

That was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Those douchebags that hurt Bella got what they deserved, although I would have wanted to be a part of the action ;)  Anyway, cannot wait to see what happens next!  I hope Edward reconsiders making Bella a vampire :)  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Wow, this story sounds absolutely amazing so far!  I cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Wow, that was amazing! Only one little problem.  Instead of Edward's email saying "Re: Instructions", it should have said "Subject: Instructions", the "Re:" implies that it is a reply to an email Isabella sent to him about his instructions, not his original email about the instructions he has for her.  (I hope this made sense).  Amazing job, once again, I loved it all so much :)



Author's Response:

I will fix that right away! Thank you!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Wow, that was incredible!  I really love it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

Wow, that was amazing!  I really cannot wait to see what happens while Edward is away ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

Wow, that was amazing :)  I loved it so much!  I think her Domme was Leah and the sub was Jake.  I really cannot wait for more to figure out what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really enjoyed it all!  Poor Edward, I hope he can forgive Esme :)  I really loved their first class, cannot wait for the next one ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

Wow, that was incredible!  I really loved it all so much ! Yay for Esme trying to understand their lifestyle :)  I really think Edward should blindfold Bella and make her anticipate his every move.  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)  I really cannot wait to find out what happens next! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

Wow, that was incredible!  I really hope Edward decides to change her soon!  Maybe for the next class Edward could enjoy going down on Bella or they could have a special class devoted to the "art" of squirting ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy he forgave her and maybe now he will realize how much he loves her :)



Author's Response:

There is no denying its love now. now the question is how does she feel?

Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

Wow, that was AMAZING :)  I really enjoyed it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next with these two ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy they finally admitted their love for one another!  Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, this story is AMAZING!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

SO AMAZING!!!  YAY!!!!  Totally worth the wait!  I really cannot wait for more of this, and The Third Wife :D  

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was amazing :)  Poor Bella though, dealing with Phil and Renee.  So, let me make sure I got this right, Bella is 14 and Edward is 16?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, that was incredible!  Poor Bella, but Edward is right, at least the Cullen's got a hold of her instead of some creep.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, that was amazing :)  I cannot wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, that was amazing :)  I found one tiny mistake that I think you need to correct.  "There was an adult bar and a kitty bar that served cokes and waters in martini glasses."  Should be "There was an adult bar and a kiddy bar..."


Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, that was amazing!  I am so happy Edward stood up for her :)

Punishment by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Summary:  Edward has auditioned to be Bella's sub.  However, he has a problem keeping his hands to himself and for that he must be punished.  Sample entry for the Dommella's Dungeon Contest because nothing is better than a strong Bella and an Edward who knows his place - serving her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5305 Read Count: 2673
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Punishment

Wow, that was amazing! :)  I love your writings, so much!  I cannot wait to read more of Anonymous Meetings (and your other stories too) :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much! Ahh, the SBDs...I only had one brother but sometimes my dad acted much younger than he really was so he taught my brother and I about SBDs from an early age (my brother is actually 4 years younger).  Anyway, cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Everyone always likes Emmett...even if he's only in the chapter for five minutes.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Workouts & Sex Drinks

OH WOW...that was amazing :)



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Wow, this sounds amazing so far!  How old are B&E?  (or should I keep reading to find out?)



Author's Response:

thanks...22 and 24 respectively.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

Wow, that was amazing!  So, based off of the information I see here, Edward is 25 and Bella is 23 (if it is 2010), or Edward was born in 1985 and Bella 1987, is that right?  Anyway, amazing job :) 



Author's Response:

the story starts in Dec 2009 ..so B is 22 and E 24.    birthday in Sept and Jun respectively.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

That was amazing :)  Emmett reminds me of my brother, only he is younger not older.  I was wondering when Emmett would watch "A Christmas Story", that is my family's favorite Christmas movie and we HAVE to watch it on the 24 hour rotation on TBS every year ;)



Author's Response:

Emmett is a combination of so many people...i have brothers...but he's more like one of my cousins...  A Christmas Story is definitely on his list most years.  Thanks very much, i'm so glad you like the story!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really liked Rose's saying about grits.  I love grits and it is so true, sugar and grits are just WRONG.  The best way, I think to have them is to add cheese :)



Author's Response:

mmm.. i love grits.  with butter and salt and pepper.  Sometimes i add cheese too.  oh great...now i'm craving them. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

Wow, that was amazing :)  I am so happy Bella said "yes" and decided to give Camille a piece of her mind :)



Author's Response:

camille is creepy...thankfully we don't have to see her too often.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Mercer Island & Minibars

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much :)  Poor Edward, but at least I know that now they have something else in common.



Author's Response:

sad but true.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

Wow, that was amazing :)  Little mister booger fingers sounds like he might be a womanizer later in life ;)



Author's Response:

LOL...I hadn't thought about that...he's already a freak.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

OMG!  Wow, that was amazing but poor Bella!  I hope Edward can explain his actions.



Author's Response:

Soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!



Author's Response:

Thanks! glad you liked it.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

That was amazing :)  I really am so happy for everyone :)  Poor Jasper, Francis Jasper Whitlock!  The little boy I babysit is Stanley Calvin and they call him Cal :)



Author's Response:

wow...you are moving right along with this story!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really laughed hard.  I am POSITIVE God has a sense of humor (I am Presbyterian), I mean have you not seen some of the things He has created (such as a bug thats butt "explodes").  I really loved this so much :)



Author's Response:

people-watching is one of my favorite things....yes, I do believe He MUST have a sense of humor.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really almost didn't want to read Bella's backstory, because I don't handle stuff like that well but I did.  I am glad she didn't go into much detail because then I really would have skipped over it.  I really loved all of it :)



Author's Response:

it was intense enough...i didn't want it to be extremely graphic because i would have needed to bleach my brain. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Pedophiles & Daddy's Little Girl

Wow, that was great!  I am so happy she is going to listen to him :)



Author's Response:

Glad you're still liking the story!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bourbon & Epitaphs

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE, once again :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Tasers & Interrogations

Wow, that was so good!  I loved Emmett's interrogation of Edward ;)



Author's Response:

Emmett's a goofball.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: First Dates & Riff Raff

Wow, that was amazing :)



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

Wow, that was amazing :)  Loved Emmett's plan for the paps.  "Beans, beans the magical fruit, the more you eat, the more you toot, the more you toot the better you'll feel, so eat some beans with every meal"-something my dad loves to say ;)  Also, July 24th (Em and Rose's wedding day) is my mom's bday, mine is the 8th, so I think they should have it on that day, but that's my bias showing :)



Author's Response:

at this point, i think the 24th is the date.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Aspen & Cold Showers

Wow that was amazing :)  I really think Edward is so sweet :D



Author's Response:

he is.  confused and nervous, but sweet.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Handcuffs & Power Suits

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella though, I hope all of it is resolved soon.



Author's Response:

soon enough.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

Wow, that was amazing!  Yeah, Kellan's Calvin Klein ads are AHHMAZING, gah!



Author's Response:

i agree.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake: The He-Man Incident

Wow, that was, wow.  I don't know what to say, Emmett is definitely a character ;)



Author's Response:

very true.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chipmunks & Oscars

Wow, that was amazing!  I really am not excited about that last line, about how things are going to get bad :*(  Hopefully it won't be too bad, right?



Author's Response:

yes but i believe in HEA.  Thanks

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

Wow, that was amazing.  I am so happy Bella got the Ranger to be put in jail :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next and how they figure out what to do about Tanya.



Author's Response:

hopefully he will go to jail after his trial.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!