Reviews by cloudiekp
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923496
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: cloudiekp Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

This story messes with my mind in so many ways.  Currently it is the shoe thing.  I love not wearing shoes but now I feel like I have to in defiance of stupid Aro's comment.  Way to ruin being barefoot!  LOL :)

 

And when is Edward going to figure out that Japser is always a step ahead?  Hehe...he keeps getting pissed off at the poor guy when, in fact, he is only helping.  Jasper knows his role to play and does it so amazingly well that he has saved the girls so many times while still appearing to be a total sicko (or hero as the case may be...) in the eyes of James and Aro.  Such a great character!



Author's Response:

thank you for getting my fic!

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: cloudiekp Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 149: Bella

I know I'm probably supposed to focus my energy on the lemony goodness but, I'm not going to lie, I got a little misty eyed when Edward recounted that memory of his father.  So sweet!

Reviewer: cloudiekp Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

I know Pepper is for Peppermint but I can't be the only one singing "Sgt Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band", can I?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113997
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: cloudiekp Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

I love that both Jasper and Emmet have alluded to the fact that drugs is less strange than breast milk.  Lol!

 

And I love Esme's exasperation over these boys and their weirdness over nursing :)  That's what boobs are actually for, gentlemen!