Reviews by ubuhall
Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Naughty Birdie

yep I certainly remember that part! well she wondered what it would be like to get caught...sometimes we actually get our wishes LOL  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Biding Time

no she sure didn't have any idea that Jasper was her new neighbor & that he would bring Dr Cullen over to introduce himself but what a damn first meet they have LOL ok I am sitting on the edge of my seat & not reclining back anymore. darlin you have a way of doing that to me every time I read this story LOL  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Surprise

well what did they expect? she had to get some control back over the situation. not to worry boys, fun is just beginning & TexasBella always satisfies LOL ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Research Proposal

and here we go...let the fun begin! Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Making the Grade

ouch, what Dr Cullen just said did kinda sound like he was going to give her a good grade for sex. though I imagine he was really saying that she was confident in her knowledge of the subject she would be writing about based upon what they just did. however, that was hot to read darlin!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Two's Company, Three's a Fantasy

"she's a squirter" best line in this chapter LOL so Jasper in a sense was Bella's first real cock in her, will she be closer to him now? I love coughing or laughing during/right after sex, husby loves it too LOL ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: The Fantasy Continues

big bad Cullen took over but Bella was still craving The Bone ;) I bet I would have passed out after that too LOL  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: After

well it was awkwardness was only after the morning-after sex, but I am thinking it was worth it LOL so will Bella have more feelings for Jasper now that he stayed with her?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: What Now?

awwww poor Jasper, but Edward is smart & took control. But will it backfire in his face? good cop-bad cop, which will Bella chose? or does she have to?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Eyes Wide Shut

so Jasper is back on her home turf, so to speak. what is Edward gonna do to Bella though? will Edward be able to share Bella? I am thinking at some point she will have to decide since they are all having feeling? or will they all just live happily ever after? hey, it could happen!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Decisions

oh my, what will Bella do when she sees no Jasper?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Are You Amiable?

LOL, Edward is such a damn tease! he is soooo not gonna give her what she wants, lil shit :P  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chastity

well Edward is bringing out feelings that Bella didn't know she had. what will she do with that?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Cracks in the Armor

so Edward but Angela in her place, whoa! but is Jasper really wanting to take Bella from Edward & keep her for himself? I know Edward seems to have strong feelings for her too, but who would Bella chose?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Appointments

well Jasper certainly was pissed, guess jealousy does that to ya. so how will Edward react?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Freedom

um...I think I need a minute...yea definitely, please excuse me ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Doubling Up

Bella really did well, of course she is dealing with experts. so are Edward & Jasper going to talk now? what the heck are they going to decide about Bella? they are having fun, but will their feeling get in the middle?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Mad World

awwww, she ran to Jasper! well of course she doesn't know where Edward lives & it definitely isn't right next door, so yeah she ran to Jasper! cuddling up on his chest wouldn't necessarily put me to sleep though LOL

on a more serious note, I will be praying for your son and your family! my husband has a rare heart disease. he is currently ranked Stage 3 Heart Failure. we don't have long and he is only 46 years old. I certainly pray your son is getting treatment or hopefully is in remission. I will be praying, forever, for all of you darlin  Love, Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: To Wrap or Not to Wrap

hmmmm, someone new? I am soooo curious now. yummy doctor was making me drool & now we get to have even more fun. I just love how you always mix all the characters up, love that crazy mind of yours & that you share it with us!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: New Girl In Town

I am so glad Bella took charge a little. she might be the wallflower but she is uninhibited ;) so how quick do you think Jasper will get there? LOL

I certainly hope you got some positive news at your son's second opinion. I am praying for you guys! am always hear to listen darlin, I know it gets rough sometimes Love, Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Sticks and Stones

wtf? so Edward lost it & took it out on Bella, though I don't think he really did it intentionally. thank goodness Jasper was there to stop it. so what started out as a great idea ended pretty badly, sucks for Bella. I bet that ass will be sore for awhile. so will Bella even be able to continue taking his class? will he open up to Jasper & explain what happened? will they be able to remain friends? Bella seems forgiving type so if she knows what happened to Edward & he apologizes, then maybe she will forgive him. damn girl!

still praying for your son and your family Love, Tracey xoxox

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

awwww, Jasper is taking care of Bella so sweetly. so wtf is Edward gonna do now. I know Jasper wants to kill him right now but will he talk it out with him in future or just ignore him? can't wait to see what you are gonna do to this storyline :) Hope you are having a good day!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you Tracey... for all the reviews over on FF and for following me over here.  I can see the light at the end of the tunnel that is this story, but there are still a couple of bends in the tunnel that we have to get through.  But now that I've finally mapped out what I think is the rest of it, I should hopefully be able to write it faster!

xoxo

tb

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

dun, dun, dun! so who is standing in the hall staring at Edward?? it would be obvious to think Jasper & Bella, so what do they have to say? what did your pretty lil head conjure up darlin??  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

um, no condom? so they are declaring their love for each other, which is amazing & maybe conceiving a child! are they ready for that, if it happens? so is Edward going to try & tear them apart? was not expecting stupid Angela to do that, UGH! great chapter! Hope you have a wonderful weekend darlin :)  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

nice going Tracey... not many caught that, or if they did, didn't comment on it :)  

xoxo

tb

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

so Jaz is freaking out about telling Bella. Bella just realized what they did & what consequences may be. while Edward is wallowing! ok we can feel sorry for Edward cos he had a effed up childhood but no excuse. is he gonna apologize? will they even listen? please pull the band aid off quick!!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

so Jaz is taking over for Edward's class? how convenient. I agree the song fit the chapter, but who the eff is grabbing Edward? are ya gonna give Edward someone new as Jaz & Bella get together? so much going on, glad they are going to the farm :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

you sneaky lil woman...Mary is Mary Alice? why didn't I catch that? GAH! seems like Edward is in for some more shit LOL. so is Jasper gonna tell her now? good a time as any  ~Tracey xoxox

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34750
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

is that an introduction to next chapter?? seems like the boys are definitely enjoying themselves!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Oh they are having so much fun!

TB & True x

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

of course we like!! You guys rock our worlds!! so glad your vacations are over LOL. back to work time :) Now we have something to look forward to ALL summer YAY!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

*looks at Tracey*  slave driver! haha... ya ready for more?

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well that is one crazy ass version of 'mile high' club! So were either Edward or Jasper already members? freaky Kate enjoying the show. I don't know many straight women that would turn down watching those two go at it! If they deny it, they are lying! I think we are gonna have lots of fun in Greece!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Who wants a quick f*ck in a tiny toilet when you can have the whole of 1st class? lol. Loads of fun to cum hehe

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

no cock-blocking? OMG, you better not be teasing us!! so they will be full partners in all aspects of their relationship now, I think these two will do rather well at that :) so what kind of toys will these boys be playing with? can't wait to find out LOL  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

As little CBing as possible... they are on their honeymoon after all!  Next batch of toys coming up soon!

 

xoxo

tb and True

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yum! the toys are definitely starting to come out & play now! just what Jasper needed after exhausting day at work :)  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Lol, they have a very playful side to them lol

tb & true

xXx

Summary:

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh how cute! Jessica was the sister instead of Alice huh? well at least it wasn't Rose. so dang cute, this just shows off your amazing writing skills even more darlin!! loved it!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Hehe, thanks Tracey! And yes, when I do these bday shots, I try to find a character to use that is as close as possible to the bday girl to 'write them in'.  This time it worked really well. LOL

 

xoxo

tb

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Bella, a fledgling lawyer, has better luck in a courtroom than with men. Enter the hottie in the pricey suit who offers to pay double her going rate, and he’s not talking legal fees. The pair find themselves deep in a compensation-based misunderstanding until a few months later when she realizes she may be in love with her one and only regular. *Entry for the 2012 Taste of the Forbidden Contest**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10814 Read Count: 3791
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

amazing!! addicting from the get go!! so glad you won, great story!! and darlin, I seem to love all your work, don't I? must be that amazing talent of yours ;)  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

You are an awesome reader Tracey! Always love hearing from you! mwah!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241002
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: You Own Me

um, so did they keep bathing in the jiz-water?? just wondering?? lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: You Own Me

well seems like Edward is healing & adjusting to his new life well. Bella is certainly taking care of him lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

oh yeah, Edward fell hard & fast! Bella sure did tease him at the beginning. makes me wonder how she ended up with Alec? is he dead yet? I am planning the funeral lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

Surprise Sunday, YAY!! well we already knew that Edward was ok but glad they got to talk. still don't trust Alec, he was defintely doing Vicki on the side & is now jealous that she is gone. Mystery POV sure sounded like James. an outtake from Em or Jaz would probably be fun to read. great chapter ladies :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Alec is cruel, but I imagine could be Edward doing it if roles were reversed lol... looking forward to reading this TLS rec :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: You Own Me

wow! that sure was one wild effin night! of course, it cannot simply end there! so why has Bella been pretending with Alec the last 2 years? does she really want Edward as much as he wants her?   ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: You Own Me

well Jasper figured that out quickly, hope he keeps it quiet. poor baby Alex, glad Bella is giving him silent treatment, he deserves it.  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: You Own Me

so how soon until Alec suffers an accidental death? hope soon. addicting energy between them. sad history for Bella :(  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Tracey,

We wouldn't want to spoil the story for you by giving you answers. :) Let me just say this... there is a lot more to come! 

Thanks for the review! We will be posting the next chapter tonight because we'll both be busy tomorrow with the opening of BD2. :) Thanks for reading!! Stay tuned for more...

 

Bee and Sally 

XOXOXO

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: You Own Me

yea, I don't think his dick will be able to control himself around Bella. not that he could much before but now that he had a taste, gonna be hell! powerful Edward taking out a traitor, mmmm.  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

LOL - yeah I think you may be right. Brazil was nothing compared to him trying to control his desire for Bella. ;)

 

Bee and Sally x

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: You Own Me

so when is Alec gonna die?? cos this is pure torture until then. so glad Edward broke his nose, too bad Aro came in when he did or he could have broken, well everything else! ugh, this just sucks & not in a good way. at least Isabella got to talk to him for a minute or two alone. obviously she misses him & his touch but also wants to protect him, so sad. maybe then could run away together? nah, they would get hunted down. Alec definitely needs to die!!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: You Own Me

I am still waiting for Alec to die!! lol, but sure enjoying to sneaky ways they are getting time with each other. perhaps Bella will get why Edward is saying & acting the way he is now, I hope. but the way this story is going, I imagine we will have more miscommunication. I don't want Bella to try & run alone, not only would Aro & Alec be after her but so would Edward. not a good move for her at all!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Edward is finding it hard to stay away from Bella, that's for sure.

Yeah, if Bella does run, she is going to have a lot of people coming after her. ;)

Thanks for the review.

 

Bee & Sally.

 

oxoxo

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: You Own Me

ok, first of all, I gotta ask where my motown was for Edward this chapter? gotta say I was really bummed I didn't get one cos they are great to listen to while reading. second, I am soooo happy Edward finally told Bella that he is in love with her, bout dang time! Aro definitely reminded Edward to heal & be loyal but I think he knows that he NOT going to happen. finally I am so glad you guys were nominated for Fic of the Week on TLS!! I just voted & you guys were in 4th place, hope you win :)  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

LOL - sorry Tracey. I've added it now. It's 'I can't help myself' by the four tops. ;) 

Thanks for voting too. oxoxoxo

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: You Own Me

I think it is Em. he is on his way & doesn't know about them yet. yep, definitely Em. at least I hope so lol. so glad they FINALLY started communicating, and in more ways than one lol. So does Aro know yet?? he has to right? looking forward to next chapter ladies :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

so sorry to hear about Katalina, very sad! that was another amazing chapter ladies!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 May 2013 Title: You Own Me

oh yeah!! he will definitely have something to celebrate tonight & not just the all clear from the doc. I think Edward will be flying high after this & then he will have Bella flying higher LOL  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 May 2013 Title: You Own Me

whoa, I am shocked Edward behaved that long. I gave him 10 seconds. he was a very good boy  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 May 2013 Title: You Own Me

ok, I know I keep asking, but the heck is Alec gonna die?? you are killing me here with this shit!! Way to go Boss  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 May 2013 Title: You Own Me

sounds like Bella is talking about her own little girl past & not just anyone??  ~Tracey xoxox

Hot Shot by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

“It’s just a job, she’s just a client.”  That’s what freelance photographer, Masen Cullen, has to convince himself of as she changes personas like she changes outfits and strikes her poses, each one more tempting than the last.

 

*written for the 2012 Fandom for Suicide Awareness Compilation

** Thank you to JA Mash for the amazing banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10092 Read Count: 5283
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just what I needed darlin! that was so cute & pics were *jaw drops* effin amazing! you NEVER let us down, your brilliantly wicked mine is a better than, well a lot! thanks darlin!!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

TWCS was being a butt and wouldn't let me add the pics like I usually do, so I figured I'd just include the PDF...lol.  Thank you so much for all of your continued support over the years!  I know I've been crazy busy with my original stuff, so I was glad I had the opportunity to put something out for all of you to enjoy in my downtown.  I'll be finishing my book and getting it off to the editorial team in the next couple of days and then I have to do my toys4tots compilation piece and finish Wallflower before I dive into book 2 of the trilogy.

 

xoxo

texasbella

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717534
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
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Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

gez, Edward really got pissed & is scaring the shit of out Bella. I know he is hung over & confused, but damn!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

being away from Bella right now has to be killing Edward. at least he knows Jake won't get here now, but I imagine he is worried about others & how Jasper is being with Bella. I hope he gets home asap too :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

well at least Bella is smiling, a lil. sounds like Jasper is gonna be okay with Bella & Edward being together. Em was an ass though! of course he doesn't know the whole story & is probably just sticking up for Jake. too bad they won't ever find him bwahahaha. great chapter :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

pressure is on & it sucks  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I like Riley, so far at least.  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

oh boy, Godfather went to pick up Edward's Mom & woman he loved, plus they are all gonna have dinner together tonight? bet Esme is gonna love that lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Jaz sure does have a quick temper these days  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

finally an A/N, some words from ya! I have no idea why someone would read something they hate. sometimes I start reading a story & think "Yay, I like this storyline" then few chapters in, "Um, who is writing this shit?" I don't review at all cos I personally don't like it, I just stop reading. To each their own. Just cos I don't like it doesn't mean I have a right to criticize their style. I mean, UGH! anyhew, I love your writing style so I read your stories, so THANK YOU for sharing!! DEA huh? that does not sound good for CJ, nope, not at all  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

dang!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

ok, that was better. more info. so old man isn't blind or dumb & is giving Edward some respect too  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

hmmmm, lots of info but lots more questions too  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

yep, she is tough. sometimes it just takes a shove to make you strong but it is in there & comes out when you need it  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

well thank goodness sex opened Bella up, in more ways than one  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

that was just absolutely perfect for them!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

busy day for Edward. luckily he had a sexy weekend with Bella to recharge him  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

awwww, they said it & now they are really doing it. not just sex but loving each other. just awww, in their own lil way  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

well at least Alice is being helpful, pushing them in the right direction. just worried for Edward it won't happen again.  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

poor Edward  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

date is going well :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

perfect!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

ha, trying to hide her in a coat & Bella didn't even realize it, too funny.  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

uh oh... hope they still get to have date night  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I am beginning to wonder if you are a mob wife in RL? lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

RL made that a hard chapter to read, PTSD is a bitch!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

gez, they are all over the place. I loved that Jaz walked in, saw them in midst of their crazy shit, grabbed his coffe pot & just left with it, too funny!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

adreneline rush sex, yum!   ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

well the Riley situation makes sense now  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

yea but this violence is wanted, desired, deserved! Jake is gonna get his & I can't wait to read how Edward is gonna dish it out, slow & painful ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

first hickey for them both lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

he doesn't even realize that he is actually earning it himself!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

awww, CJ likes being a daddy! I guess no definition in A/N is needed for "bookyak" :)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

well most of them worked it out. they are at least talking, which is good. I am actually looking forward to Edward taking Bella shopping, bet she will have a ball lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

awww, it is cool!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

that mouth indeed  ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

of course Bella was gonna defend Edward, but dang Alice not remembering she was prego, no good. they will all work it out, they all love Bella & see will see to it  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

concussion be damned, lol!!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

holy crap! that is how Edward finds out? dang, I was not expecting it to play out like that!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

awwww, Edward is doing great job! hate those non-smoking facilities. they made every public place in Michigan non-smoking, so it really sucks up here, gotta be really sneaky now!  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

holy hell that was a lot of info. I think your longest chapter in this story! lots of questions answered. so Edward is gonna take this option right? I think Bella will agree he should. Jaz just broke some cherries lol  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

so who is gonna get to take out Joshie????  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

wait? "He palmed his face"?? how did he palm his face if he is hog-tied? oh, nevermind. with both his kneecaps shot out he isn't going anywhere anyway. this is gonna be fun. I love that Edward did that LOL   ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

man, hoping it was not the godfather who gave the order :(  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

holy shitstorm!! way to go Edward & Bella!!   ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

uh oh, who is not knocking on the back door?  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I knew, labor & sex. so funny these two  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Toni Braxton? lmao! too funny  ~Tracey xoxox

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

ok, Alice didn't need to say that! I remember watching an ER episode of an emergency pregnant lady that ended in tragedy when I was pregnant, not good. I had 3 days of labor, which sucked, but delivery was fine & she is turning 18 on 9/30 :)  ~Tracey xoxox