hmmm, his heartbeat sped up huh? poor Bella, lonely lil V card still in her deck. sounds like college will be collecting that card, but will it be Edward or someone else? this is a cute story, really like it so far :)  ~Tracey xoxox

sorry I didn't review each chapter but I loved them all. I couldn't believe it when Em heard their first time & figured out it was Edward. of course the double-standard for the daughter, plus I think Dad's like to believe their daughter's don't have sex at all LOL. so happy they worked out the college plans in NY, great story & wonderful ending :)  ~Tracey xoxox

dang, Bella handled that really effin well! I guess after clueless Edward thought he was allergic to her because he fell in love with her, she should be confident that he doesn't care about his past conquests. so Edward stood up for Bella & Bella stood up for Edward, awwww. so what do you have planned next for these too? can't wait to find out!  ~Tracey xoxox

awww, that was sweet! thank goodness nothing happened to Bella before. Jasper is so creative lol  ~Tracey xoxox

we are finally to the wedding. so sad when Tanya asked if she still had a nipple :(  ~Tracey xoxox

wow!! I cannot believe he had volume up high enough that they could hear it outside. so nobody is having sex, wtf? Bella is lil V holding out for whatever. Em is/was manwhore. but they both think of each other more as sibling, however, still willing to have sex, ok? noticed no Rosalie POV. I just love your A/N, lil conversations actually explain a lot. plus I think I have a FanFic crush on TexasBella, so I will definitely be reading more :)  ~Tracey xoxox

uh oh, looks like party is getting started. so who is after them? why? Em really screwed Edward with all his comments about Bella, well almost. looking forward to next chapter :)  ~Tracey xoxox

ok I will admit that I love me some egg rolls too LOL! so many questions but I am just to eager to get to next chapter heehee  ~Tracey xoxox

This is all kinds of messed up! still think Alice is Edward's lil sister. Does Jasper really wanna help Bella? is Aro gonna take Bella's virginity while she is freaking passed out? man, I have more questions that I could even ask in this review! love this crazy plot you guys have going on, can't wait to see where this is gonna take us :)  ~Tracey xoxox

um, definitely NOT bdsm play!! holy crap!! wtf is James gonna do to Bella? obviously he won't take her virginity because Aro would kill him but he can do a hellova lot of other damage. when the heck are Bella & Edward gonna see each other? great chapter  ~Tracey xoxox

so Edward still doesn't believe Bella is a virgin huh? surprise, surprise Edward. Aro is beyond words at this point! but seems like Bella & Edward have both agreed in their heads that they will have sex together to satisfy these crazy asses! now they just need to meet to discuss it. will Jasper still be having Parent Teacher Conference with Bella? lol  ~Tracey xoxox

um, no way, not liking Tanya, not gonna happen. Edward kinda screwed himself a little though cos he could have used her to get info. now she is pissed & hurt, woman scorned is not typically gonna help ya, unless it ends up hurting you.  is it dinner time??  ~Tracey xoxox

wow that was brutal. this is example of what all the uneducated, uniformed people assume bdsm relationships are like! just sad for those idiots! at least Aro didn't force Edward to have sex with Tanya, though it might have been better for her. so we finally get to see Edward & Bella react to each other, been waiting for that!  ~Tracey xoxox

so what is gonna happen when Bella cannot avoid climaxing by one of them? how will she react? I am so glad Edward & Bella get to talk!! I usually try to put some humor in my reviews but these chapters are just too dark to find much humor, sorry :(  ~Tracey xoxox

huge chubby? I am still laughing at that line. too funny! well at least Bella & Edward got to talk a little. but Bella is so dang insecure she can't realize that Edward is being forced to do sexual acts just like Bella is. If you want to get a little freedom in that hellhole you gotta do those things. obviously Aro will not agree to Edward's plan, just hope he doesn't torture Edward after it. crazy shit man!!  ~Tracey xoxox

OMG, I just, whoa, don't even have the words for this chapter!  ~Tracey xoxox

James is effed up beyond words! I would do the same things to him that he is doing to the girls, but he would probably like it!! I am so dang glad that someone finally got those two talking. It was Tanya, so maybe she does actually want the best for them & will try to have a few normal moments during her stay here. so how bad will it be tomorrow?  ~Tracey xoxox

so they are engaged & barely get time together :( that was just so sad for Bella! both of them taking her like that, ugh! that had to be humiliating to have Jasper check her like he did. that was definitely are hard chapter to read but well written because it sadly made me feel there.  ~Tracey xoxox

well dang, first part of chapter was just humiliating! then James trying to get a rise outta Edward, grrrrrr. cannot believe they put a shock anklet on her, ugh! when is this torture gonna end?? nah, I didn't mean that cos that would mean story was almost over, I take it back LOL  ~Tracey xoxox

haha! Aro put James in his place while putting Dimitri there too!! two birds with one stone, oh yea!! but since Aro has so much on James, I wonder if he also has stuff to force Edward & Bella to stay as well, grrrrr.  ~Tracey xoxox

Alice is really starting to show her true self, bout time. so they didn't ask how she got there, where her mother was or figure out that she is Edward's sister???? James is just so sick, he deserves what Aro did to him & a whole lot more!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

OMG, PLEASE POST AS MANY PICS AS YOU WANT!! not like this story isn't giving us enough pics in our mind anyway, might as well have yours to enjoy even more! that was a very nice chapter. so how the hell are they gonna get out of there? will it be before the wedding? I am thinking after, but how long after?  ~Tracey xoxox

well they definitely have a lot in common and enjoy care about each other. they both worry about each other. so what with Edward think of Bella's photos??  ~Tracey xoxox

awwww, I love how you met your husband!! Fate had a special plan when you got that email :) I love that Bella is getting close to him, sometimes you just know! I met my husband at a local gas station. We both happened to know the clerk & were there at the same time. We have been together 20+ years now :) great chapter & wonderful A/N  ~Tracey xoxox

why didn't Tanya take the outs when she had the chance?? not that I care to hear her reply. my daughter is joining the Army, next year. I am so proud that she wants to join but worried at the same time. I like the story so far & look forward to reading more. Thank you TLS :)  ~Tracey xoxox

what a perfect beginning. they gave each other a little of themselves and both were very appreciative. I loved it!  ~Tracey xoxox

I think the pace you have both set is perfect. They have never met & not even shared photos yet. So sad about Edward's parents. he also lost a man in his platoon, that is life at war & it sucks!   ~Tracey xoxox

awww, they got to talk. But what was wrong with Bella?? Is she worried Edward is going ot hook up with some English-speaking German chick? not a chance!!  ~Tracey xoxox

of course Edward told Bella like it is! he is hers & only hers, awwww. So how soon are the girls visiting them in Tampa??  ~Tracey xoxox

*catching breath* well that PS was, um, well just yeah! Great that they will be able to talk & stuff, but dang that PS, sorry can't focus right now ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

cookie monster LOL  great chapter :)  ~Tracey xoxox

all blue for Edward LOL, too cute! so glad they made it & the girls got gifts to them. the slow burn is killing but at the same time loving it! so glad you guys update so much :)  ~Tracey xoxox

well sometimes tomorrow cannot come fast enough heehee. I love that they can text now, so instant & fun! I am really looking forward to what you guys are going to do with this new form of communication. so June 20th? I cannot remember shit in RL & you want me to remember this date in fanfiction?? ugh, it is a birthday? um, shit I don't know & won't waste your time guessing :)  ~Tracey xoxox

of course Sarge was able to calm her down, like only he can. I still can't believe he has no idea!! so excited!!  ~Tracey xoxox

WOW!!! that was just beautiful & perfect & amazing & everything you kept promising!! And they are staying a couple weeks?? just too cool!!!! I have my sham wow ready for next 4 chapters :)  ~Tracey xoxox

holy hell & this is just the beginning?? omg!!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

so glad they are not nervous or being too quiet around each other. Edward made sure to hit the erotic points for Bella's pleasure and then gave her one of things she always wanted to do. he is being so sweet & wanting to just take care of her. now she wants to take care of him, they are just so perfect together. just lovin this story ladies :)  ~Tracey xoxox

awwww, Edward's 'not yet' was so cute & he didn't deny it later with her. so sweet. bet those soldiers get a tough workout tomorrow lol.  ~Tracey xoxox

well Charlie wasn't hard on him at all. Guess he figures Edward has had a rough life & he deserves this happiness. great chapter :)  ~Tracey xoxox

those skanks always try to come back later & make things bad for the guy!! I think in their effed up minds they think because they were with the guy for a little while that they are entitled to him in some way, like the guy she have no one else. Since the guy is with someone else (and better) they get jealous & the skank comes out. so sad but I think Edward handled it perfectly. I bet Garrett is definitely in trouble!!  ~Tracey xoxox

WOW, so sorry to hear about our surgery & the complications. glad to see you are feeling better & writing! this was a great chapter, so glad they are finally getting to the bottom of this Maggie shit & will get rid of her. Carlisle even called Bella lil sis, awwww. can't wait to see what happens to Maggie & Lauren!  ~Tracey xoxox

oh Dr Cullen, you have no idea! do you think college girls still suck on lollipops to get noticed by the boys? heaven help us if they are still using that LOL ~Tracey xoxox

what a way to lose it, a threesome! well I guess that is just how you swing darlin' so will Jasper always be just the wingman?  ~Tracey xoxox

so Alice is trying to seduce Jasper into staying...but will it work? guess Alice better give it her all!  ~Tracey xoxox

awwww, poor Jasper. not sorry for Alice cos she asked for that.  ~Tracey xoxox

ok so when Edward was in shower sobbing after he was basically raped, I look back & think that I did not perceive it that way when I read the chapter. is it is because he was a guy.? perhaps because I remember how distant Dr Cullen can be coming up so I am just pre-judging. who knows but I really didn't read it that way :(   ~Tracey xoxox

so we learn a lil about our wallflower. not too much, just a lil taste. seems she is just as excited by Dr Cullen as he is by her. will she like Jasper as much?  ~Tracey xoxox

OMG, cannot believe I forgot about 'The Bone' oh how I have missed you LOL things are heating up aren't they :)  ~Tracey xoxox

forgot TWCS also has ratings, sorry started rating now :)

I think Bella getting her belly button pierced was perfect idea for her first. damn, she didn't even have pierced ears? too funny. can't wait for their evening out :) Tracey xoxox

probably all Mike's negligent acts leaving her body begging for attention? LOL just love Em in this story :)  ~Tracey xoxox