I am happy for Rose and Emmett. They will be great parents. Bella and Edward will heal with time. I think Bella realized this time that her actions have consiquences that are far reaching. She needs to think of more than herself and the case. She has to think of her family.

I hope Bella finds happiness at the police acedemy.

I am so glad that Bella is finally ready for the new beginning. She is ready to let go of the past and just live.

I think Bella caused most of her own problems. Bella wanted to keep their relationship quiet. Edward should not have been with Tanya, but he needed a outward relationship. Bella should have been braver, so Edward could have acknowledged her in his life. Edward did not make Bella run into the street without looking. He tried to be there for her, but her parents wouldn't let him at the hospital. Bella not contacting him for a month afterwards didn't help either or her not telling him about the pregnancy. Bella chose her path that made her a bitter woman. Now Edward needs to get rid of Tanya and if Selene is really his daughter, he needs to fight for sole custody.

I love it. The kids get it from some one right.

I am so glad they made up.

I can't believe it took Dr. C so long to figure out that he was a Dom at heart. He is very demanding, but very caring.

Camping always sounds like fun, but it is always so much work. I need a couple days off to recover.

I think it is so funny that Edward was crying over her vagina.

They were lucky it was her dad and he has a sense of humor.

I really enjoyed this POV. It was good to see where his heart is and he is really a good guy. I hope everything works out with Mary.

I would have said please do not touch my baby again. I have grown to love Al.

I can understand Edward's feelings in this chapter. They were suppose to wellcome CC together and he still wanted to keep that plan. CC will not know the difference, but Edward will know that he stayed with Bella and they welcomed him together.

Edward should have been smarter. They should have asked more questions of where they were going. It is ok to not fit ino a scene. They are adults. They need to act like it.

Little EJ is a cocky one. CC was always a little different. I feel we missed so much of Alex and Michaels lives. I will miss them.

Luckily they are all doctors so they were attended to so fast. Jacob should not get out of this mess. I hope he lives a long life in jail as big Bubba's sex slave.

I am so glad that Edward is awake. He will be able to reach Bella. She needs to hear his voice. He needs to hold her hand. They need to be in the same room.

You have to love these two. They will make it now that they are next to each other.

I am so glad they are home to finish healing.

It is almost a shame his father didn't die. Then he couldn't drop the charges against his son.

I loved this chapter. I learned quite a bit through Charlies eyes. He is more reserved so he watches and listens. I am so glad that the family is all together because this is how Bella and Edward will heal.

I am so glad that Bella and Emmet were there to see the slut in action. They could see that Edward tried to get away from her. Carlisle needs to get rid of her for inappropriate behavior at work.

Bella needs to get her anger out, but not on her family.

This was such a beautiful and romantic chapter.

I think they should all plan a 3 ring wedding. They are all ready and they would all invite the same people. It would be the event of the year.

It  is so good that Alice found her soulmate as well as a bigger family. That is 2 boys

at Charlie's. Edward already knows he wants to marry Bella. He just needs to get his arse over there to get the blessing.

They are all ready for the 3 ring circus.

What a sweet place to propose. Edward always does it just right.

Of course Jacob is watching. How do they think he got all of those pictures of her at intimate moments. He knows exactly what is going on. He knew she would come back to Forks if her Dad died.

Of course the police can't find the killer since he is right in the office.

Bella is rather selfish. Her family love and want to protect her. They lost Charlie also. Edward was filmed also. This didn't just affect her. She can't just push them away and expect it not to hurt them. She needs to respect their feelings as well. They are hurting too.

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For being the youngest, Bella seems to be the bossest. She seems to run the show. If this is the case, she is to blame for them not having security. I also can't believe she is not responsible enough to keep a cell phone charged. 12 year olds are that responsible.

Bella is being stupid. She did not kill them. The crazy person killed them. She needs to face reality and maybe get a federal help. She does not know all. She is not in charge of the actions of others.

I am so glad that Garrett put GPS on Bella. Some one has to look out for her since she won't look out for herself. I hope she isn't playing the martyr. She needs to be smart so she will live for Edward.

I am so glad that he is dead. Bella won't have to testify against him.

Bella needs some serious therapy. She can't be in  control of this decision. Carlisle needs to find some one for her.

I hope the Webers and the Cheneys brought Bella some peace.

Bella seems a little better. She needs to talk to everyone about her ideas about the new label.

That was a huge step. Bravo. I think it is so funny that Jacob is gay in this story. I laugh every time I think about it. I would love it to be that way in the real story. I can't stand the cockiness of Jacob and Taylor Lautner.

This was a great chapter. Everyone is happy again.

Edward is in deep, but he has to tell Bella the whole story, especially about the creep. He also better tell Emmett the free ride is over. Edward was trying to be so sweet to Bella. I hope she takes that into consideration while she is thinking about his punishment. He loves her so much and he knows she won't be happy without her own dungeon. She needs to see it from his view. She would do anything for him also.

When it gets to stories where Bella is a dom that is where I know it is total fantasy. Bella's character does not have a dominant streak. Edward is also not a sub, but I find these stories fun to read. They are different.

I think the female doms are much meaner and less understanding than the male doms. It is like they have something to prove.

I think Edward is right. Bella has to get her head right before she can be with anyone else. She is a mess emotionally. She has major trust issues. They can't start a relationship until she goes through her closet and cleans out all of the skeletons. She needs to learn to love herself before she can love Edward. When she has herself ready, Edward will be waiting. He now has 12 classes and he has to work. He is going to be so tired he won't have time to wallow over Bella. She better take this opportunity.

I am so glad that Edward feels better. It was about time that he got some relieve.  A beautiful cock like his should not be wasted.

Bella can thaw her heart and still do BDSM. They might only do it on the weekends and 1 evening a week. She can still treat him better, but still have rules. Rosalie was just rude. They should have just had a nice lunch. She should have never come. It should have been Jasper and Emmett. He has to learn how to be around them again. Bella should take of Edward and not leave marks. She should have better after care.

I think they both need to do some honest talking and as Bella and Edward. What Edward has going for him is that Aro said that the ink was new. For people who want people to mind their own business, this community are very gossipy and back biting. They seem very cruel to each other.

Where is Bella? It is about time that she thought of Edward as more than a sub. I don't think Bella has been doing a good job as Edward's dom. She is suppose to take care of him and his needs. She is only making sure her needs are met. A sub is suppose to put the needs of the dom first. This is how both of them will find happiness and both of them will get their needs met. It is just a different perspective. This is the first chapter that she actually thought of Edward. I was proud of her.

I think Edward should have brought some more details like how many clients Bella has had in the last few years. How profitable her dungeon has been for the last few years. Edward should explain how she lost her business.  This is the information you have when you want an investor. Even if the investor is your parents. You have to give them the cold hard facts of the business. You have to keep the emotions out of the tractions. Edward needs to explain why he wants to do this for Bella. That is when he puts his emotions into the presentations, but he has to have the profit margins.

I am so proud of Bella for stepping through her wall and claiming her love of  Edward. Edward will help her figure out how to make it work. He won't let her hide again. Carlisle was so cool. He helped Edward so much in this chapter. There relationship has healed from this experience. Edward had distanced himself from his parents and I think that has ended. He realized he can have them both.