Reviews by Duvi
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Edward: A Brief History

Here I am. I hate fanfic sometimes. It's so easy to read and user friendly but it sucks!!  Why do we have accounts if not to screen for youngins. Make it all private and then you have to sign in to use it!!! Ugh. I'm done now. 

 

I love over this sad story already. I hope he gets many happy times to make up for the teasing. Like an awesome life!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Kisses and Karambas

Karamba's is a gay dance club!!! Just so you know.  Lol. 

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923185
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Great update!!! I love these cute little moments in between. They make it all worth it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419215
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Epilogue

I'm so glad you are here!!! I was so scared a little while ago. I can now breathe again. I love this story!!!

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Rat Race Part One

Tell her!!! Ugh, he needs to tell her he loves her! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Gray Matter

Thank you for writing this story so well and for just, everything!!! I'm a teacher and I've had students with autism and I hate, HATE, when people say something about them. As if being autistic is a illness or disease. It's not. Anyways, back to the story. I love how Edward and Bella respond to each other, not just physically but emotionally. They are growing so much and just make me so happy to see how good they are together. They support each other and finally Edward opened up to Bella. I thought it was never going to happen. LOL. BTW, what an EPIC cockblock!!! That was just cruel! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Panic Room

I love this story so much. I found this while cleaning my inbox. I have never been so happy in my life!!! I love these two! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152447
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ahhh!! Lolo, you kill me!! This update was wonderful. So creepy guy and Victoria?!? I'm guessing creepy guy is James. I can't wait for more!! 

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oooohhh! I can't wait to find out what the plan is! I have a feeling he won't be happy...at first. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aw man, did Esme leave with Bella or looking for Bella? Did Bella run away after what happened with Edward? Poor girl. For any one to think that sex is a form of payment has been in a really shitty situation. She needs so much help. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dun, dun, dun!!!! Argh!!! What a great update. I loved it. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Noooo!!!! OMG, where did she go? Poor baby. She's not used to men like Edward. In all honesty, he probably scares her more because she doesn't know his motives or what he's thinking. She doesn't trust easily either. Oh, Edward...go find her!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

YAY!!!! I knew he'd find her. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay!!! I knew he'd come around. He was just acting out, out of fear. This story is going to get so good.  I can feel it!!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272447
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hate what happened on fanfic but I love that I get to experience this story all over again as if for the first time. It was one of the first stories I ever read on Fanfic and because of it I decided to keep reading and found a wonderful world full of awesome stories...for FREE! Eeeeekkkkk!!! I love it so much and I can't believe I never commented before. I was very scared to do so...I'm still a little scared to leave comments but I have to tell you how much I love this story. I'm happy it found a new home where I know it won't be pulled. Please update the rest of the chapters when you can and know that I will comment on each one and even add more to it since I know what I'm doing now. LOL. HUGE HUG!!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ugh!!!! Why is fanfic so ridiculous. My previous comment there had to do with me wondering if Bella is pregnant!!! I'm dying for tomorrow's update!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

My thoughts are that they need to run I to Leah and Jake. Bella needs to see how happy and healthy she is compared to the unhealthy and toxic relationship those two have. I'm pretty sure Jake never told Leah about the baby, he just wanted a baby with Bella. I don't even think Leah can get pregnant because of all the abuse her body has gone through in order to be stick skinny. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think she knew about the baby. That's why she broke it off. She loves Edward so much she was willing to take what she could get. When she found out about the baby she knew it wouldn't be enough for the baby. She was already being a good mommy!! I knew it!!!! I've never been so happy to guess correctly before. They needed this!! 

Hilda

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I think that she is overwhelmed at the moment. She just wants to heal and be taken cared of right now. I'm so happy for them. I think that later when she's better she will really think of every thing and freak out. Right now she's tired and hurting. 

Hilda

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awwwww.....these two are so cute together. Mike needs to be run over by a diesel. What a jerk!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

They are too cute for words. I'm still wondering about Jake and Leah and I don't even have an idea of how that's going to play off. All I know is that they are horrible people and I hope they're miserable. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

No, it's over. *sigh* I love these two!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I loved it!!!! Loved it!!! Thanks so much for writing, you two rock!!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9511
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So freaking cute!! I loved it!! Alice was a psycho. I'm glad everyone saw it and she disappeared from their lives...good riddance. 

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82046
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow!!! I was not expecting that. Gah!!! This story is so exciting! I love it!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving it!!! I can't wait for them to meet. I know something is up with Bella. She can't meet men...interesting. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sorry for the writers block I really love this story!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Who does that extra DNA belong too?!?!??? I love this story so much. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it!!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Couldn't find a stopping point, score!! More for me to read. Aro and Caius will be mad but if what Bella said is true about them becoming extinct they need to realize that for the race to succeed they need to adapt. Part of that adaptation is matting with your imprint no matter what race they are. Extraterrestrial lemons!!!! Can't wait!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I loved it all!! But...there is a but, Charanel stole the show. At least for me. That uncle is awful. Poor Charanel!!! I wanted everyone to take turns beating Norex for what he not only said about Charanel but made him believe was true...what an awful being. The whole thing was lovely!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I use to think it was the uncle but now I think it's the brothers. The uncle served a great purpose, distraction. However, he's in jail. It was the Elders for sure. Unless, you plan on breaking our hearts and making it Charanel. Please don't!!! I love him so much!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Work. Blah!! Why must we work. Lol. I understand, friend. Thanks for the update I can't wait to figure out more stuff. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I actually think it's NOT the uncle. He's a jerk and jealous but I do think he loves his people he's just so jealous he can't see straight. He is being used as a puppet by someone much smarter. I think it might be the other council meme era but I'm not sure yet. I can't wait for more clues. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm glad he decided to help even though he thinks it's useless it's not. He knows he's going to die either way. Why choose to help Bella? That was the nicest thing he's done so far. I have no idea who it is!!! I can't wait for more.....but I don't worry, I'll wait patiently.

Thanks for the update!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Who is it??? I have no idea. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Is it because she's already pregnant????? However, if Prince Jakob is truly evil that wouldn't matter, would it? 

 

Agh!!! Update soon please!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I don't think it was his fault. He was tricked by someone he trusted and truly believed it was a game. Poor Charanel. 

Love this story!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Aaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! This was a great chapter. I'm so glad she is back with Edward. So, Charanel and N'essie? Maybe? Or is she a liar and a spy? 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I definitely think it's one of the other council members.  I just don't know which one, maybe all three. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hey, now. Take care of yourself in RL. I can't say I won't miss the updates but as long as they keep coming, how ever long the wait is, I will be happy? It's worth waiting for!! 

 

 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Lots of love!!! This update was action packed. So much happened. It was epic. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't know how I missed this update. I. Must have deleted it. Lol. Yay!! They won the battle/war.

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow. It's almost finished. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Aw, that was such a happy ending. Till the next story, friend. 

Fairy Godfather by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Young doctor Edward pulls a beautiful girl out of harm's way, and finds that he may have just stumbled onto his greatest desire. Daddykink, so if that's not your thing, go elsewhere. For abadkitty.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33156 Read Count: 40029
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Woah!! That was steamy!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Match made in heaven. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jacob was an asshole. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving it!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

will Jacob make an appearance later? There was a lot of Jacob in this update. I kind of want him to suffer. Also, dayum!!!!! It was hot!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Buahaha!!! What creams your Twinkie!! Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She's going to meet the family. Yay! 

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192181
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oooohhhhh, he's fallen hard. He's already thinking of only her and being only his. I wonder when he will get jealous and want to be the only one to touch her? What if "guest" showed up later. Would Edward be comfortable with other men touching his baby? I can't wait to find out!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh, I can't wait!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait!!! 



Author's Response:

:D xxx

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really hate the parents. Almost!!!!! They are almost meeting!!!



Author's Response:

I hate their parents too xx

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Like always....wow. These two are just so very hot together. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow!!!! I have no words. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

My goodness this story is on fire. I can't wait for these two to get it on. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Uhm, Heidi seems like trouble. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yes!!!!! Two chapters!! Now if only you updated twice a day!! Gahhhhhh!!! That would make me so happy. ;-) The innocent one totally fits. these two are so in love with each other and don't even know it. Let me clarify, they know it but don't know the other feels the same way. Love this story!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Poor you! I hope you are at least feeling better now. 

 

I believe Bella is okay with the guys and girls because she trusts them. If another person joined the group I don't think either of them would like to share. Especially Edward. Bella might want to try it out since she's so young and new to it all. I think Edward would go crazy with jealousy. Lol. I can't wait for more but only if your not to tired. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The same connection....interesting. I can't wait for them to meet!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Buahahahahhaha!!! He totally came in his pants. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Please hurry up and get to the house already!!! I just know it's going to be so very, very, very steamy. I'm looking forward to it but als a little scared. Lol. These updates already leave me all hot and bothered I don't know if I'll be able to handle more.

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeeeesssssss!!! Please put more than two updates a day!! I'm dying. Dying!! I didn't read it the first time around. Thanks for writing such an amazing story. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yay!! Weekend updates are the best!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't wait for these two to finally talk!!!!



Author's Response:

Ohhh, just wait until they meet up for the first time. I loved those chapters :D xxx

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward is going to shit bricks!!! Or uhm, show his like some other way. Lol. 



Author's Response:

LOL Time will tell ;)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Upon just made my weekend so much better!!! Weekend updates!!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yup, Mother Nature is going crazy. I'm in arizona and after a month we are still having detours because the roads are closed due to road damages caused by the floods. Whole pieces of roads were washed away. Houses and cars were destroyed. It was so scary. I hope you don't get tornadoes today. 

 

Woah!!!!! Bella was so sexy and took control. That was so very hot!! I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm so in love with this story. Edward explained himself very well. I'm so glad they are both being so honest I'm actually surprised at how strong their bond is already. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think her response was justified. She is very smart. That does seem very strange and she doesn't really know them. Good for her!!! I'm glad someone in that car is scared and worried for their safety. Lol. *sigh* Edward is just dreamy with her. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Gah!! I can't wait for them to meet!!!!



Author's Response:

Very soon, I promise! xx

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't believe I almost forgot to read this update!!! It's been that crazy today. Now I'm going to sleep thinking of all the naughty things these peeps are up to. Ekkk! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Two updates a day. Yay!!! Ugh. I feel so bad for the girls. I'm so glad they have each other. 



Author's Response:

<3 Thanks hun!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Gah!! I can't wait!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't understand the *coughs* but I'm loving the story so far!!! 



Author's Response:

lol, All will become clear later on <3

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a first time for me. I didn't read it before and I'm loving this so far!! I can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun, I hope you continue to like it :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yup, definitely swoon worthy. I wonder what is going on in his head!!! She not only did what he wanted but he got her out of her clothes. 😏

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Omg!! How s ths possible!!! It's getting even steadier!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, that was so very steamy. Like burning hot!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so glad he already feels protective of her. I'm also glad Alice is there to take care of her. Both of them seem to understand bella and care for her. I can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response:

Bella will come into her own soon, she just needs to find out how to do it. Until then, Edward and Alice will be on hand ;) xx

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Gah!!!! I want the update now!!!! I'm on fall break and I can't wait!!! Ugh!!! I want to know what he's thinking. I'm not being very patient am I? Lol. Thanks for theAMAZING story!! I can't wait for more. I wonder why Rose changed her attitude once the girls showed up? Is she scared of competition? Is she scared of going back? I wonder what her story is?? I still want more E and B, but I'm curious. 



Author's Response:

LOL. Rose will warm up soon, but she's been through a lot, too.

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm so happy you are back!!!!!!!!!  I missed you so much!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Fun with toys....it keeps getting better!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay!!! I love it and I'm so happy to get more updates. I was not expecting what bella did at all. Mind blown!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Many, many, more!!!! Lol. I've missed you but don't worry, this story is worth waiting for. Thanks for the update!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ooooohhhh, that's hot!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Yes!!!!! I want a copy!!! Gah!!! You are the best. I'm so thankful for you and all the other writers today!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Tanya, what Tanya? She needs to be present in order to give any input. Ugh. I really hate her. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

He is going down!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 8 part 4

I love Jasper and Alice. They are totally team Edward and Bella. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Tanya needs to go!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 20 part 2

Well, now. This was all sorts of good!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Gah!!!! He wants her so badly he's going to explode!! Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Tanya is so full of shit it's oozing out of her mouth!!! I love that Edward was in the room!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

Tanta is out!!! Yesssss!!!