Reviews by veedubgirl17
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366618
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

I really like this Bella in that she's strong. But, I'm not happy that Edward and Alice railroaded her into doing something that she's clearly uncomfortable with and Emmett and Rosalie just stands around making fun. I dislike it when they do this. Bella should be able to say no to things without her friends getting on her ass or making her feel guilty about the fact that she doesn't want to do it and her friends should respect that when she says "no" it means she doesn't want to and when she says that she's uncomfortable with it they should respect that not pander to her telling her it will be fine and she'll thank them later. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

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-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112991
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Truth and Time

I'm glad that Bella is being rational here. So many times in fanfiction when something goes wrong Bella shuts out the world and cuts Edward out completely. I'm glad that she's going to give Edward and chance to tell his story. That said, Edward is going to have to pull out some big guns to make sure that Bella knows he loves her. I'm also glad that she kicked Rose and Alice out. I think Alice is good but Rose is one big ball of hormonal angry out for blood.

Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Seattle

Reading this chapter all I could think about was Edward may have said that Jessica was nice and sweet but all I could think was what a bitch. It was ok for her to go off and have her Paris dreams but she wasn't supportive of Edward's dreams of going to Columbia and working at JP Morgan? I think Edward takes far too much of the blame for him and Jessica's break-up. Love this story though. I love a rehabilitated Edward. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Schedules

Frankly I'm surprised people aren't more disgusted with Edward. He disgusts me, lording his position over Bella demanding that he kotow to his desires even though he knows she has a very sick baby at home. If I were Bella, I'd give a little evidence of just the kind of bastard he is. I'm sure the press would love to know what kind of smarmy jerk is behind the smooth Cullen exterior. Oh. BTW good for Seth for puking all over his suit, he deserves it. And, I think that Momma Bear Bella is awesome. 

Design For Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 111]
Summary: Past Featured Story

He's a shy library clerk. She's an outspoken tattoo artist. They come from two different worlds, but they're both looking for the same thing. Can they survive the danger that is lurking nearby and have their happy ever after?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139486 Read Count: 59842
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Jul 2012
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

If I were Bella, I would threaten to rip out that nipple piercing she put in for Rosalie. What a bitch! 

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Most of the time I side with Bella, but she's being COMPLETELY irrational. This isn't how things work in a relationship, you talk to each other and figure out what's going on. To be honest I think this story is just alright, I understand that this is Edward and Bella and they're destined to be together and all that crap but seriously, they met and two days later they were declaring their love and then five days they were moving in together. Maybe that's how you planned it so that they would have these problems now, but then it seemed a little farfetched...



Author's Response:

Please know this is short lived everyone. I will have these two together by next Sunday. I promise.

Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm all for Bella and Edward being together but honestly, that's it? No communication on what drove them apart in the first place, no admission of the deep seated fears that Bella has regarding being cheated on. No discussion of Edward's obvious abandonment issues? Just a couple of sorries and sex and that's supposed to make everything all better? 



Author's Response:

Don't take it all so seriously veedubgirl17. The story isn't over. Bella has confessed she was a fool to leave him, she was miserable, she missed him, she was a vegetable, she was jealous that Leah was touching him, she saw the love in his eyes for Leah and it hurt her, she wanted to never leave him again, what more would you suggest I add? Bella is insecure because of what Jacob did to her when she was madly in love with him and he hurt her. He screwed her best friend when she thought everying was good between them. She fears of that pain again. I wasn't until this separation from Edward that she realizes that she doesn't want to be without him again and will never make that mistake again. Would you have me drag this out and drone on for several chapters about what a twit she is? Tell me, how would you have handled this?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419198
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this new story and I love that they aren't perfect. So many times Bella is perfect but is constantly down on herself and it's annoying and of course Edward is perfect. Even when they aren't it's ok because they're Edward and Bella. I feel so bad for Bella with what she has to deal with at work and especially with Charlie. I hope we find out what made him a bitter old asshole. I'm glad that she's taking the bull by the horns and I can't wait until Bella meets Rose.

Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think your story is wonderful and I think it's real. I read this story where the characters said ILY within hours of meeting each other and then when Bella left and came back, they had make up sex and Bella said I'm sorry and it was over. I'm a firm believer that people don't react that way. As much as I love fluff and stuff, things are not all happiness and rose colored glasses. Your characters react in ways I would expect real people to react. Just because Bella apologized for not trusting Edward with Rosalie doesn't mean that the hurt Edward felt goes away. Sure, he understands where she's coming from but it still hurts and just because Bella finds an amazing guy doesn't mean that years of awfulness goes away. Thank you so much for making this story about real people and not just the canned MFEO crap a lot of authors put out. There are hurdles in real life, it's not just smooth sailing. Again, I think your story is wonderful and to hell with the person who said you wrote Edward like a 15 year old girl! I look forward to reading the new chapter of your story everytime it pops up in my inbox. 

Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

In love with this story. I can tell you that I'm not looking for the sperm donor to come back. I'd also love to know why people hate Bella. I mean, there has to be something besides the way she looks, maybe jealousy? Also, I can't believe how much of an ass Jasper. I'd love to see what in the world goes on in his head. How incredbly shallow. How would he feel if Alice wasn't so thin. As you can see I'm not quite ready to forgive him yet ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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*BANNER BY READERGOOF*

The residents of Bennett Circle are being terrorized, and none of them have been able to catch the culprits.  When they take aim at Edward Masen, he makes it his mission to find them and bring them to justice.  What he finds and who he finds isn’t anything he ever expected.  Oh, and their mother…she’s not anyone he ever expected either.

AU/AH.  OOC.  Canon couples with a few surprises.  NC-17 (as usual).  There’s language and there’s a lot of fun…well, I hope you have fun.

SMeyer owns all Twilight characters.  No copyright infringement intended.  This story and the way in which I’ve fashioned the characters…yeah, that’s all me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159192 Read Count: 39312
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2012 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: The Bandits of Bennett Circle

Ugh. Not sure how I feel about this chapter. I loved Bella going all momma bear. I think they deserved all of her ire and messing with Alice and Jasper. I mean, we all know that they are mfeo but sometimes the timing isn't right. I'm thinking that this is one of those situations. I mean, what in the world is Alice going to do while Jasper is gallavanting around all of these places and she's just tagging along. I loved Edward's guilt trip and if I were him, I'd put a boot in the ass of his so called best friend. Ugh! Love this story though.