I'm so sorry you've had a bad time, from idiots.  I don't understand why they continue to read if they don't like a story, that's what the little cross at the top is for, just go away and leave the rest of us to enjoy reading.  They're not worth you're time stressing over the things they say.  I have been reading Quiet Storm and this story none stop for the past couple of days.  I can't tell you how much I fucking love reading about this Edward and Bella. The benefit of reading a completed story is that I know you'll finish writing it.  Please continue to write other stories you're to good a writer to give up. 

That's just cruel leaving it like that. But yes nice happy chapter,  hope there's no more cruel James now. Like the way Alice is teasing jasper. Please let it be Edward with Bella in the shower please. 

so excited about the update, and others to follow soon.  grrr just wish you could get rid of james he makes me so mad.  so lovely that Edward and Bella get to have so much time alone, they are so hot for each other.  Jasper was funny at the end  loved it.  

oh god what has he done to her? cant wait for two weeks to find out. 

Oh more please .... Soon. Such a sweet chapter. Thanks too for the mention at the top. Amazing. 

like it !! no i loved it. but you already know that.  so sickening at first and then so good.  whats going on with alice how do you explan that and good for jasper stopping james. wish someone would stop him permenantly.  edawrd and bella are so great together the wedding cant come soon enough.  hope edward doesnt get caught in bellas room dont thinki could takemuch more drama.  please keep bella and edward safe. 

Yes love the idea of pics with the chapters. As always Noc a great chapter nice and relatively happy, I say relatively for the fucked up way they live on the island. Looking forward to but also dreading the wedding and its getting so close now must only be a chapter it two away. Just wish Edward and Bella could have a really good heart to heart talk so they can tell each other exactly how they feel now and have always felt about each other, think that would help them both a lot to get through this fuckedupness. 

Agsin wishing my life away longing for next Tuesday to come quickly for the next update. Thanks xx

Oohhh we are getting so close to the wedding now.  I forget how long have they been on the island now? Will they make love today like Bella wants?  Will they be open about how they feel and have felt about each other for a while now? Do many questions to be answered and now I have to wait for the answers. Please update as soon as you can and thanks for this amazing (scary) story. 

Amazing amazing chapter.  So lovely and tender . lol how they both freak out at the tiniest moan and groan.  So glad they've finally done "it" on there own terms (or at least the best option they have)  looking forward yo lots more lemony goodness in the future and Edward and Bella making a fool of and getting one over on James . love you Noc , and you to Bec you do a great job . 

truely a scary chapter. Didn't think I could hate anyone more than James and Aro but then along  Vladimir and Stefano, they are truely evil. What must everyone else be like thats coming to  "wedding"? Poor Tanya hope she can hide away for a few days until they're all gone. 

Well didn't think I'd ever feel sorry for James, but I really do.  you sort of made me gasp and rethink, and I feel for Victoria too.  But it's still no excuse you would have thought they should be more against using and hurting people.  Wouldn't want to be around James now that Hank has used him again. Brilliant as always Noc. Looking forward to more soon.

Thank God they're off that demented island. But Edward had better get his arse back to that hospital and Bella damn quick. They need to be together and telling each other their love is for real. Wondering where James is ?? 

Hope Charlie can organise for someone to help Edward and that he'll be safe and not alone in finding James. Can't wait until he can get back to Bella and they can sort their feelings out. Lovely.

Great to have wisp back. Xx

Would love that so much. 

Beautiful picture and amazing chapter. I can just imagine how intense the orgasm would be. Lucky Butterfly. 

Lily here too. I'm feeling hot all over and my ass hasn't been spanked, worse luck. 

oh god yes please consummate the relationship. 

Oh god, I really want to get to when they meet but also would like to hear about the other phone calls, oh decisions decisions. Ok details please I'll have to wait until they meet, but don't make me wait to long pleeease. 

I would definitely say it for Edward. It would be a turn on for me to. I have to let a few chapters build up then read them together. One at a time was frustrating me to much lol 

I love "I love you's". So pleased they got there in the end. 

Me too, me too, can I have a blindfold please Sir. So excited they're finally gonna meet. 

Noc don't leave it there. What will he do now??  I wouldn't like to be Emmett !! 

Reading this after the one shot you wrote. Great to have Edwards pov. It's going to be so good. 

beautifully written. So good.

Oh please please please keep writing this story. I love reading Edwards pov. I can't wait until actually get to meet. 

Hope the favour is just to get her to do something to Jessica or her boyfriend. Can't wait until they actually meet. I've read the original one shot so know where this is going but it's do much fun getting there from Edwards pov. Love this story thanks 

Then you say yes please and thank you Sir.  What else is a girl supposed to say. Lol 

Would love to see Bella being blindfolded and Sir using a riding crop while she is fixed to the wall. Wishing I could go to the playroom. 

Is it possible that anything is bigger than Sirs hard on. Haha. We must be getting so close to them meeting now. Can't wait. 

So so hot. More please. :))

That was amazing. Just read the last 10 chapters and oh my god that was so hot. Need a cold shower now or a hot man, never one around when you need one. Also saw the teaser for IR, lodged on and waiting with bated breath. 

i want to be Sirs dirty little girl.  I want him to flog me then cum on me. Then to be so pampered and cherished. Thank you Noc. 

I like that Bella feels at peace in the playroom. As she's becoming much more relaxed and noticing things around her, even though blindfolded, will she begin to notice that Sir seems familiar? Someone she knows away from the playroom. 

Love the chapter and Soapy Mayhams picture. I'm glad she called rose its better to stop now and discuss rather than take the punishment for cumming without permission. 

Why do the others want Edward to go out with them next Wednesday and only for 1 hour??  Can't wait to find out. Thanks for the extra update. 

Of course I'm still reading i constantly check for updates. Emmett is such a bad boy teasing Edward. Can't wait to find out why Alice needs Edward to be at eclipse

Great picture to go with the chapter.  It just seems so wrong to think ofcarlisle and Esme like that, I always think of them as Edwards parents, and no one likes to think of their parents having sex. Oh and loved it as always. Gonna go catch up with Bec's fic now. See you 

You never let us down Noc. You do what you have to and I (and I'm sure everyone else) will be thankful for whatever you can give us, and will be here waiting for you. Oh and great story. I like that Alice is giving Edward hope for the future. 

Hot seeing a woman with a strap on, but men in women's clothes is a real turn off for me, but great chapter as always. 

Can't watch. That's scary big. 

So hot. Did he really move her at vamp speed?  Did he call her Bella? Did he hurt her? He's really forgetting himself. What would happen if she had sucked his cum of her fingers?  

Great story. Jacobs ladder looks amazing but poor Jasper that must hurt like hell to have done. Can't wait to see why Alice wants Edward at the club 

Oh hurry hurry hurry sir. 

Oh yes at last she gets to taste him. Love the pics  

What's happened?? Has his cum given her powers ??? Bet that will freak him out

I know exactly what she means, Edward as Sir and I would never leave the playroom either. 

What's happened?? Why was this time different?? 

oh Edward what will you do now??!! can't wait to find out . I hope he will be honest now and show himself . But Will he turn her? more more very soon please . Off to read New chapter of IT now . great day today . :)) 

thats so sweet. :))