Reviews by aggy73
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm suprised they were permitted to leave the house in their costumes. I also can't believe they let them leave the dance. I foget how Jasper played into all of this. How does he know Edward & Emmett?

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I did like but I thought it would be a tad more dramatic. Even if Seth was drunk and high, he got hit while going through a green light. That's not his fault! I also expected Edward to tell Emmett he met Bella before he knew she was Emmett's little sister.

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ranting's good! Your story is great. I don't mind waiting for chapters. You're entitled to a life! Take care!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability

Son of a bitch! I knew Edward was a lying sack of shit & I knew he had something to do with that headstone! He's a god damn manipulative cocksucker!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

I love it. I also love that she stood up to him & called him on his behavior! You go girl!

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

Jerk! Edward really is a moody prick sometimes. How did Edward not hear what Rosalie had said? WHy hasn't Bella talked to Alice all week?



Author's Response:

he was too wrapped up in himself, as usual. and because shes too afraid tht Alice will be in pain again, and jasper is being protective. thanks for reviewing xx and yes edward is a jerk xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Infinity

Just two comments. First a few chapters back you said they were coming home on the 29th, so New Year's eve wouldn't be the very next day. Also, Sky Harbor airport is in Phoenix, Arizona not Jacksonville, Florida. I was a little confused. I do love your story though.



Author's Response:

I thought I caught all of those errors...sorry.  I had goofed when I originally wrote it and they spent the week in Phoenix...LOL.  I handn't caught the date thing either...so thanks for pointing that out.

Summary:

Hockey is an emotional sport for the players and the fans. For TT25.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34783 Read Count: 15816
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

CHapter 7 & chapter 8 are exactly the same.



Author's Response:

So sorry about that! Didn't even notice! D:

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like your story, but fyi the word it moot, not mute. Mute is someone who can't speak.



Author's Response:

Thank you I have fixed it, so much for writing with a migraine.

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You posted chapter 13 twice.



Author's Response:

So sorry all fixed thanks for telling me its an improtant chapter to the story! Thanks again!

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161835
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I'm glad you made them wait to have sex. I'm also glad you had her go to therapy which is very necessary for people that suffer through trauma. Hopefully people will read this and understand that no one is able to get over rape just like that. It takes time, love and support.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

whacw

What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

I knew that he knew it was his Dad. He's not a dummy. Especially after he called her out on defending him.

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

Did she really expect that to go well? Where the hell is Edward?



Author's Response:

I don't think she expected it to go well at all, but anyone in that situation would want to have a tiny bit of bit that it wouldn't blow up as much as it did. Edward...I have no idea where Edward is right now! He hasn't disclosed his location to me either. Is he licking is wounds? Back in New York? Searching for answers? Only time will tell

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Ok, you should totally do an Edward point of view. Especially calling Esme and if he really did go find his mom. I love hippie Renee! She rocks!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995715
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He fucking terrified her. Then he left her. What the fuck did he expect?

Payback by pixdog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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Edward teases Bella and she comes up with a plan to get payback. Two shot.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3136 Read Count: 810
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Revenge

I think it was great. It's funny to think of Edward always being so composed, losing his load in class of all places. Good for Bella!



Author's Response: Thank you so much and that was what I thought would be funny. He didnt know what hit him.

Summary: Past Featured Story

HBTY

Jake lied to Bella the day she visited him after the newborn attack, changing her decision & the lives of everyone involved. 4 years later, everything has changed again & Bella begins a journey to try & recapture a future that was lost to her.Jake-OOC/AU/LEMONS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41676 Read Count: 8887
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Stolen Moments and Final Heartbeats

I love Bella's dress. When is Jake going to show up? I know he's coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the dress love, it took a long time to find one!  There will be answers about Jake in the next chapter so don't you worry!  Love the review~

Summary: Past Featured Story

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You're in for one hell of a ride!  Bella and Jasper's worlds collide as they find solace and comfort in one another as friends.  However, as Bella's dreams begin to unfold and she begins gaining certain abilities...it seems that maybe everything that's happened to lead them here, was all part of an intricate plan.  Can road trips, fun times in Vegas, and a crazy Peter help them find their Heaven?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215333 Read Count: 67781
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope you update soon. I really like this story!

Summary:

Story BannerCarlisle Deivers more than just Pizza while he's working at Kitty's Pizza Parlor.

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Non-Canon Pairing

Rated M For Lemony Goodness


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3329 Read Count: 340
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 22 Mar 2010
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carlisle's Delivery

Very funny! Good story, although I don't know if I would order pizza from a place called Kitty's.

My Shangri-La by GoWithTheFlo20 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:


 


'I'll march this road, I'll climb this hill, Upon my knees, If i have to.' Bella Swan runs away when the weight of her world becomes too much, and where would she end up? Where all lost things do, Santa Carla. BELLA/DWAYNE


Categories: Twilight, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16929 Read Count: 1406
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2015 Updated: 13 May 2016
Reviewer: aggy73 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Henry Lawson.

I'm so excited for this. I love the characters from the Lost Boys!