Reviews by ENTER THE STARGATE
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What? This is starting to get a little weird.  Which of course means I love it!  Don't keep us waiting like this!   I beg of you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Where have you been?! I love your stories, but I was worried you were gonna leave us hanging! Please don't scare us like that again. Nice chapter, but it's something of a cliff-hanger.

Summary:

I have searched for her since the day she was born, My singer. A singer is a precious gift. Its one I will protect and treasure always. That is if life doesn't screw it up! AU reg. pairs OOC  EXB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43691 Read Count: 24312
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well, I have to admit, I didn't see that one coming.  What other twits do you have up your sleeve?



Author's Response:

i wont tell but you can count on one things from my stories dont look for the usual because i love twists! thanks for reading michele

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

She changes.  Else I shall hunt you down and force you to rewrite the story.  Let me repeat...SHE CHANGES.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I have no name ideas, but would green and brown eyes work?  One from Edward, and one from Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373286
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

That's really sweet!  I love your ending.  All the loose threads tied up, like a good story should end. 

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

Well?  Now what?  Are you going to give us an update or what?

 

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: New games at the club

Since I have a fairly low tolerance for pain, I will simply give a review.  Takes less time too.  Awesome, but I was hoping for some B/E action, do we see it next chapter?



Author's Response:

Ok, you're forgiven and I won't spank you ;-) Edward is coming up in the next chapter, right now he's showering and rubbing off to the thought of the brown haired beauty ;-)

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Master Aro

The background is extremely important, I agree.  Write on.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

It is probably a good thing that this Tanya is not real, as I would be showing her just what I think of those who abuse the trust people place in them.  Good for Bella however.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

Go forth and write then.  I really like this chapter, and find myself hating your Tanya more and more throughout the whole thing.

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I have always liked (ish) Aro.  Like a creepy old uncle who tries to be charming.  I think you written him well.   

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

If Alice sees this, methinks Edward is not gonna be very happy...am I right, or am I right?

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Italy?  Really?  That's bad.  Really really bad.  Poor Bella.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

They should have buried Jame's head.  Why does no one ever bury the head?  It's not like they couldn't go back and burn it later!  

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like scheming Aro more than out and out creepy/cheerful Aro.  Good characterization.  

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor Bella, so sad.  So...paranoid?  Is that the word I'm looking for?  And as for Edward...idiot.  But we love him anyway.



Author's Response:

paranoid works well, and we do love edward even when he is an idiot! thanks for reading michele

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Ya know, I love Edward, I really do, but he's an idiot right now, and about to cause Alice's vision, if I'm no so far off the mark.



Author's Response:

I know. I know. The question is will he learn his lesson?  i think you will find it enjoyable to find out the answer to that question if you keep reading. Thanks for giving this story a try.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

Poor Charlie.  Poor poor Charlie.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Not bad.  I look forward to more.  Don't keep us waiting, don't lose the momentum and fans you have now, or you will lose some of it.  Just a little advice.



Author's Response:

Thanks...I do plan to start posting soon after a short break.  Please stay tuned...

Summary:

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This is Edward's side of Dreaming of Edward. Many have wondered what was Edward thinking when he would visit Bella at night, well here's your chance. Be warn like with Dreaming of Edward, this is not a light and fluffy story. It has bad langueage and sex as the main theme! So dont read it if you dont like that sort of thing! These chapters were originaly sent out as a reward for reviewing but now I have a stories worth. Cannon couples, no incest or slash or rape!  OOC

This story doesn't stand alone you must read Dreaming of Edward to follow it.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15544 Read Count: 5155
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2010 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Edward.  Although, with all the noise they, make, how does Charlie not hear them?



Author's Response:

It's hard not to feel bad for him. He is always the tortured soul. I can't say what charlie is hearing or not hearing at this point. Maybe i should write his side of the story and we can find out. Thanks for reading it.

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

I am glad justice was given, but I wonder if Rose would have really stopped at scaring Mike.  Dosen't matter, I suppose.  What's done is done and all that.  Now, what on earth are Esme and Carmen doing?!

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

I really don't know who to feel sorry for.  Esme was lied to, Edward was nearly raped, and poor Bella had to deal with all those girls going gaga after Edward, just after taking care of him.  What a chapter.  Please send an update soon!

Summary:

ONE SHOT Bella Swan is forced to return to Forks where her father abuses her. The Cullens have been waiting for her to complete their family. She is mate to Carlisle and bond mother to Edward. How will they save Bella? Read to find out.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2281 Read Count: 791
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, is this the basic plot for the other Mate and Mother?  If so, or if, not, I would love to see it updated.  I like this.

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Not bad.  Now all it needs is an update.



Author's Response:

I'll have an update tomorrow:)

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389613
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

I like it, please keep going, but don't make the chapters short - they're the worst.



Author's Response:

ummm...okay... I thought 7,000 words was pretty good... so what do you think.... lol... I´m not really a fan of short chapters either, but I don´t want to tire the ppl out... thanks for reading and reviewing...


Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 145038
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow. It's amazing that all you need to scare Marines is a really loud voice. I'm not sure that raised my confidence in out armed forces. Nice chapter, though. Very amusing.



Author's Response:

Interesting you raised that point about Marines, because when I was doing a bit of research about them-apparently, the first thing that happens during boot camp is that they are yelled at or as the guy on the video described "spoken to in a very loud voice."

Thanks for reviewing.  XOXO