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He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself? AH/AU
A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Edward is an idiot. He will not get any better until he admits that he has a drinking and drug problem. One would think that he would wan to prove to Bella that he can change, but no, the stupid ass thinks that it would mean nothing to Bella. Again, can I say idiot. I am also sick of his assine behavior. He is like a petulant baby. Well, we have seen how Edward is "coping" with the breakup. Now all we need is to see how Bella is "coping"? I do give Bella big props for cancelling her phone number.
Thank you for the update. We all know that our favorite writers have real lives too, and that is why we will wait until the cows come home to get a new chapter.
By the way, congratulations on the house!
Author's Response:
Yup, Edward is an idiot lol. I think that's why it was harder for me to write this chapter. Even I'm getting sick of his behavior - but things will start to turn around in the next two chapters. And when Edward does finally grow up, he's going to prove how much he's changed. Bella's POV will be next so you'll see how she's coping next :)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Wow, so much happened in this chapter that this is going to be a long review. So, here I go...
Well, that ws interesting. I do not think that I have ever seen Eleazer as a bad character in any FF. I like it though.
Of course, we all know that Tanya would lie to daddy about what really happened to her. She knows that Edward is the one who did all of those horrible things to her, but she is so jealous of Isabella that she will say or do anything to get her out of the way. Only, her daddy can handle that. Brilliant move to use James as the sabotor of Isabella's career.
Wow, James is more messed up in the head than I expected him to be. He only cares about himself. I can believe that he would violate Victoria the way he did, and to imagine that it was Isabella was just so sick and perverted. I loved it, but it also made me sick.
Huge props to Coleen561 for wonderful James POV. I really hope we can hear some more of his sick twisted mind in the future?
I am so glad that Bella went to see Edward. I am pissed at Emmett for treating her the way he did because he has been her champion in so many chapters. He needs someone to take the guilt off of himself. and Bella was there for him to blame instead of himself. I do think that Emmett needs to apologize to Bella at some point. I think it was brillant to have Bella write her feelings in Edward's song book. She knew that he would read them. He uses his songs to express his emotions just like Bella does. I am so happy that Edward asked for help finally before he chickened out.
I come from a family of addicts and one month in rehab is not enough. It takes that first month to totally get all the drugs out of your system. It is in the second month that a person starts to talk and realize what drove them to becaome and addict. The third month is where the person starts to live life again inside the facility. Real rehab is at the shortest three months if someone is serious about getting help. Then after the three months the person slowly eases their way back into their life. I know that this is FF story, and it is all fiction. I was just hoping that it could be mentioned that true rehab starts with three months and for the sake of the story it was shortened to one month.
Please do not take this review as being bitchy and rude because I love this story so much!! I really can't wait to see what is going to happen next!!
Author's Response:
I totally appreciate your review :) I spent a long time hashing out a timeline before I wrote the last two chapters exactly for the reason of how long he should stay in rehab. Realistically, I know that one month is not long enough. However, I didn't want him coming out right before Christmas and having to deal with all their baggage and emotions by adding in all those Christmasy feelings with it. It's just not how I want the story to go. I've actually talked about it a lot with my beta and I think the fact of how long he stays in rehab will be a concern in the back of everyone's mind - will he relapse? Chances are most addicts do relapse...so I want to take that all into consideration to make this story as realistic as possible and to do the characters justice. Hopefully, you'll agree with the choices I've made. :)
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Aro and his plotting are making me sick. All he cares about is Edward's band. Bella is just a tool for him to use to help get Edward good PR now that he is out of rehab.
Don't let me get started on James. He is such an asshole. I really hate that my nickname is James. It has been for many years even though I am a female. I wonder what his next plot is going to be to sabotage Bella's career?He is jus pure slime. I really wish that Bella would have told Edward that James has not been around to help lately. I really hope his plans blow up in his face.
Edward. What can I say? I am glad that he apologized to Bella before the show. I understand why he said what he did when he was introducing Bella. He never received the chance to really tell the truth because of the gag order. If this was the real world, I would have not thought that his words were sincere, but this is fiction so it was sincere.
I love how Bella took Jacob's phone away so that he would not drunk dial Vannessa, and she turned around and drunk dialed Edward. I can't wait to see what happens when they come together for a talk.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Congratualtions on the baby!
I have waited a year for a story to update. I always keep the faith. This was an amazing chapter. It was so full of information. I am so glad that Jacob was able to open Bella's eyes about James.
I am pissed that Aro threatened to sue the band if Edward was not out of rehab in 30 days. All he cares about is money. I do hope that Edward can keep it together. I hope he has a great support system around him on the road, but Edward will relapse. It might only be one time, but 9 out of 10 people will breakdown and use once they leave rehab. It is only the strong ones that realize what they have done and work even harder to stay clean.
I am proud that both Bella and Edward have started to turn into different people. They both have a long way to go, but at least they have opened the metaphorical door.
Thank you for the update. If the next one comes the day before you deliver, I will not care at all. ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward having to rush back on tour is definitely going to put an extreme amount of pressure on him. All those issues of possible relapse will show up in later chapters :)
Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub. After several profiles are searched she interviews two. Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out. Is he the right one? BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons. AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story. The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com. The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest. Thank you to all my loyal readers.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48038
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I so love where this is going. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
How long is it going to take Bella and Edward to realize that they have chemistry outside of the playroom as well as in the playroom?
Author's Response: James~ Thanks for reading and reviewing it means a whole lot to me!!! I am not sure how long it will take them to figure it out, but neither of them are what you would call dumb. We will see.....I am sure getting there will be, interesting?!?!?!? lol Hope to hear from you more after next chapter! Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
That was a wonderful chapter. Bella was a fantastic Domme to Edward, and I love the fact that she allowed so much time for him to be able to speek freely. I know that she wanted toprove something to herself and to Edward, but that was just a big mean dirty trick ahe palyed wiith him. All in order to punish him to see if she could get him to safeword? I am so confused by her actions.
I am afraid for Edward. I really do not want Bella to break his heart. He loves her, and she says that she can tell. I thought she had feeling for him as well, but know she is talking about it being just lust. Again, I am so confused.
Thank you for the update. The chapter was fantastic, and the story is wonderful.
Author's Response:
Hi~
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I know that right now she is coming off as if she is not nice. She was setting him up to test herself as much as him. She is scared stiff by her feelings and she has a great reason to be that way. I am sending you a teaser of the next chapter. It comes to you via email through the contact button on your twcs profile.
Kasi~
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
I am not sure how patient I can be with Isabella. She was a royal fucking bitch to Edward!! She could have found a better way to treat him while she works her shit out. In fact, she treated him like shit on her shoe. BITCH!!!
I feel so sad for Edward. Every word she spoke cut a little deeper and deeper. If I was Edward, I would have walked away. Honestly, that is what the bitch needs. Then maybe she will admit to herself that she really wants Edward and stop being such a fucking coward.
Yes, I know that the reason she is who she is is because of that sociopath Mike, but this is her chance to be with someone who is a gentleman and a almost perfect submissive.
She really needs to talk to someone. First she needs to get in touch with a therapist and discuss the deplorable Mike and what he did and has done to detach her from true love when it is right in her face... After that I wish that Peter will tell her off about her treatment of Edward on the ride home.
I am pissed right know, but as always that is a great thing because it means that your writting moves me. Thank you for the update.
MIKE IS A CLASSIC SOCIOPATH....
Author's Response:
I know, I am sorry. please have faith it needed to be doen to make the story go the way I want it to go. I want you to know that I really struggled making her be a bitch. It was really hard for me to do. I never even sent my chapter off to be BETA'ed until Saturday. I have a wonderful Beta who had it back to me by Sunday I fixed a few things and then sent it back and she got it back to me right away again. then both my pre-readers who also are busy writing their own stories got back to me right away. I am very lucky to have a wonderful support system. Peter and Charlotte will both play a big part in gettign things straight have faith. Edward knows why she is hurting and scared and he will be strong for her. Remember that a Domme or Dom is only as strong as their submissive allows them to be. I am grateful that you enjoy my writing so much and I LOVE that you give great reviews. I am sending you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. Check your email. Please have faith in me, there will be more angst, but I promise it will all come together in a great way at the end.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
My first review did not take so I am writing another. The first one was very long and passionate.
So here are my views:
1. Edward needs to opt out with Bella. He should not believe that one day Bella will change her mind.
2. Bella needs to cut Edward lose or tell him that she is in love with him too, but she is scared. She admitted that she was in love with him in this chapter. All she is doing is hurting him over and over again. Truth or cut loose.
3. The Bella in this story is the biggest BITCH I have ever read, and I have read hundreds of stories. I actually hate her. I am so waiting to find a redeeming quality in her.
Please take my review as a compliment. If I can get as fired up from one chapter, then y'all are fantastic writers. Thank you for the chapter and waiting until next time.
Author's Response:
I hope that after the next chapters talk that you do find redeeming qualities in Bella, she is acting out of her own fears. Unfortunetly fear is a huge force that can drive you many directions and not always in the one that is best for you.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
That was heavy. Mike has gone off his rocker. I am sure that he will find a way to get to both Bella and Edward alone without any witnesses.
I am so happy that Bella is holding onto Edward and not pushing him away. I was afraid that this whole situation would set Bella back in her progress.
Thank you for the update. I can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. Mike is off his rocker! Mike will not be around too much longer, I promise. This story was never supposed to be a drama or really angsty. Mike has done a great job helping to push those two together! Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Next Chapter Preview………………..
Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
I am very glad that Edward and Bella are working everything out.
Mike is a psychopath. I was shocked at the damage he did to Bella's house. That is a lot of rage. I really think that Mike is lethal in this story. I can't believe that Jessica had been giving Mike money under Jason's nose. I guess she doesn't believe that he is dangerous.
I think that Bella should tear down her house and build on the other side of her property. I think she owns like 8 plots of land? I could not go back into that house. I would not want to go back into my house if I was Edward either. The first weekend that Bella and Edward spend as a vanilla couple was ruined by Mike's stalking.
I am ready to see what happens to our favorite couple next. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella owns her entire block. Lot's of stuff int he upcoming chapter, it will be really good. I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company
I am trying to wrap my head around Bella's attitude. Edward and she are dating. Heck, he is trying to adopt her baby. She wants Edward, but she acts like she wants nothing to do with her daughter. If that is the case, why would she look at schools in the state? She is a walking contridiction. Maybe it is because she is so young, but she needs to get her shit straight.
I hope that this cusotdy fight will snap her mind into the right place.
How dare those bitches sue for some custody. Renee is a serious bitch. I hope that they bring the letter that Renee wrote to Bella. That right there is proof that she could give a shit about her grandchild!
I love that you made Edward a virgin. So sweet.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Huge part is that she is young, she wants to be with him, she loves her daughter, but given how her mother raised her, she doesnt believe she would make a good mother for her daughter. she doesnt want to get her hopes up that things will actually work itself out, she is full of self- doubt. feel free to ask anything :)
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Well worth the wait! I cried....
Thank you for the update. I am hooked onto Married to the Mob as well.
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In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?
AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
How is it fair that Bella was punished because of Carlisle's lies and lack of compassion? And the punishment? Sodomy...WTF? That is just cruel and unusual punishment. Edward did not have to do it!!!!!! He could have faked it. Their was noone else in the room. He is just as bad as Carlisle.
SHE DID NOT DESERVE TO BE PUNISHED THAT WAY!!!! I HAVE HAD THAT HAPPEN TO ME WITHOUT MY PERMISSION, AND I WOULD NOT EVEN WISH THAT ON MY WORST ENEMY!!!!!
I am so pissed at Edward and the entire Cullen clan except Maxine. She did nothing wrong. Everyone else in the family deserve to be punished for their lack of concern for Bella. An apology after being SODOMIZED is NOT good enough!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
That was intense. I wonder what Jacob and Quil did to James?
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Holly Cliffy, Batman!!!
I am proud of Bella. She does not want Carlisle to control her life with Edward...which he totally is. Edward it seems has never grown up. I understand the lesson that Carlisle was trying to teach Edward, but it was a bit harsh. Then again, it was the swift kick in the ass to get a 16 year old Edward back on track. Edward is a 35 year old man, and he is still letting Carlisle control his life. What kind of pussy is Edward if he did not have the nerve to punish his girlfriends and let his repulsive, domineering father do his dirty work.
Edward new she would not understand, but she did in some ways. The whole story was about a 16 year old Edward who never grew up and took control of his life instead leaving his daddy in control. I am proud that Bella would give up her "sugar daddy" and love of her life because she didn't want to live under the thumb of Carlilse. Besides, Bella has her father now. He would give her anything she wanted. All she has to do is ask.
This is another swift kick in the ass for Edward. He either takes control of his own life, or he loses the love of his life. Carlisle or Bella? Which choice will he make? I think he will chose Carlisle, and Bella will leave him. He will have an ephiany at some point and stand up to Carlisle.
Bella could take what Edward did to her, but she would not live in fear every day waiting to see what Carlisle might do to her.
Please update soon. This is the type of cliffy that everyone is going to be upset about, but hey it keeps us coming back for more.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Loved it! I wonder if Bella will say, "Yes?"
Thank you for the update.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I am so glad that Edward admitted that he was wrong and apologized. He was in the wrong. I read the reviews for the last chapter, and it appeared that the sides were split in the middle. Some thought that Bella was justified in her actions, and others thought that she should be in trouble. I am Team Bella about this whole Jane incident.
I pray that Bella is on her best behavior for Christmas tomorrow. I would hate to have Carlisle get his hands on her. She would leave Edward for sure.
Thank you for the update, and I think I can wait two chapters to see why Carlisle is a major dickhead.
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I never saw that coming. I am in my OMG moment right now!! It was all a sick joke that the entire family played on Edward. I can understand why he is upset with his family. It is/was kinds low down and dirty to trick him like that.
I am also so releaved.
Thank you for the update. I am ready for "Operation Ignore Cullen" to start and Bella and Edward's wedding.
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Edward made his bed, and now he is just going to have to lie in it. He just made the biggest mistake of his life.
You are right. He is the biggest dick. How could he ever think that Bella would cheat on him? He is an idiot. I mean come on!!! With the amount of sex that they have had, how can he not think that the 1% is possible? They couldn't keep their hands off of one another!! If she is over two months along, I know for a fact that they were having sex all the time..like every day if not more than once a day.
I want Edward to suffer. I want Bella to actually stand on her own two feet for a change and not have a man take care of her. She needs to prove to herself that she does not need a man. Edward can suffer and grovel for a couple of chapters. When Bella does let him back in her life, could you keep her on her own for a little while before she moves back in with Edward? Please?
I was shocked that it was Carlisle who decked his son at the door. I am starting to like Carlisle in this story.
If Bella is calling off the wedding because of the way he treated her about the baby, is he still stupid enough to think that it is not his????
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I am so proud of Bella for sticking to her decision. I hate that Emmett owns the building that Bella's apartment was located. I knew that $700 a month for all that room was way too good of a deal, and now I know why it was so cheap. Emmett owned the building. I can't believe that Charlie would lie to Bella about who owned the apartment, but I am still proud of Bella for getting her own apartment.
Of course well all knew that Edward knew deep down that the baby was his. He has been screwed so many times with lies that I understand his trust issues. Hell, his own family lied to him for years, but that does not excuse how he treated Bella. He deserves to suffer.
I am so glad that we were able to get the test results in this chapter. Thank you for that. We all knew it was going to be Edward's. Edward better get his ass into gear and find a way to get Bella to forgive him so they can eventually get back together. I loved how you had Bella walk out of the office when Edward asked if she was going to stay for the results of the test and say that she already knows what the paper says.
I still want her to stand on her own two feet for a while before she gets back together with Edward.
I know that they both still love each other so much, but Edward f**ked up very badly.
I can handle this kind of angst because Edward deservers to hurt, but I do feel so sorry that Bella has to go through so much pain. I hope all the stress does not hurt the baby.
Thirteen weeks? That was around the time of their Christmas vacation right?
Author's Response:
thanks for the reveiw. this chapter is happening abotu mid july so she have concived in april
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I still think that Edward needs to suffer some more. How he treated Bella was cruel and unusual punishment that was not deserved. Bella still needs to stand on her own feet longer. Besides, it took him a month to aplologize in person!!! Yes, he apologized in text messages for a month, but that is not good enough because he took the cowards way!! I really want Bella to be able to see that she can take care of herself and her baby without Edward. This is a big turining point in Bella's life. Please still keep them apart for a little while longer. Edward has not worked hard enough to get back into Bella's good graces. Two more chapters of Edward suffering and begging for forgiveness, please?
It does not matter to me when you get the chance to update. I always wait until the author is ready to post a new chapter so please feel free to do as you want. Thank you for the update.
I maybe a cold hearted bitch, but Edward should suffer more than just one month. He made his bed and now he has to lie in it. He really needs to work very hard to make ammends to Bella. I know that I would not take Edward back after a month no matter how much I loved him. Love is not the problem between the two. It is Edward's lack of trust that is the main issue. I would allow him to be there in every way for the baby, but I would wait until I felt that he had proven himself worthy to be let back into my life.
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I am glad that the whole apartment deceiving incident was put out in the open.
You are right. They both need to do some work on themselves.
I am torn because I think that Bella was justified in her actions toward Edward when he accused her of cheating when she told him she was pregnant. On the other hand, I can see why Edward would react the way he did considering that there was only a 1% chance that he was the father.
They both were wrong in their actions. I think that it is time for them to start working to reunite and make sure that their new relationship is stronger than the first. Actually, it should make it stronger statistically.
Thank you for the update.
She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159885
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
:)
I would love to know why Edward started to treat Bella like shit?
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
When will we know why Edward went from worshiping Bella to resenting her?
Great chapter and thank you for the update.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I believe in you, but that was just evil to end a chapter that way!
Thank you for the update. I do hope we will find out why Edward has been such an asshole to Bella? She was thinking divorce before this situation happened.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I am so glad that you did not let him slink their way back into their childrens lives.
I do hope that Bella does not get sexually abused by the insane man. I wish that Edward would be able to kill me.
Thank you for the update. I hope that life slows down for you.
PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.
Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Midnight Rendezvous
Loved that the sex was actually a wet dream. Edward deserved it. I am ready to see Edward and Bella repair their relationship. I wish that they would wait to have sex, but I am sure that Rod is not going to let that happen.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Road Blocks
I loved it. I like how you threw in some Lady Gaga with the disco stick referance. ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Auditions
I am proud of Edward for not having sex with anyone.
I would not mind some fake sex between Irina and Edward, but I think that it would hurt Bella even more than she already is if Edward fucks Irina.
I do wish that Bella would talk to him.
I am going to assume that the tv show that Edward auditioned for was like HBO's "Hung?"
Are Bella and Edward ever going to come together?
Thank you for the update.
Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Second chapter
Love this story!
I am a guilty for loving smut. I am a smut whore. This is very good smut so far. Please keep up the good work.
So, is Edward being honest about supporting/watching his freinds, or does he really want to get to know Isabella? I wonder if he knows her nickname, and he has decided not to use it yet? So many questions....
Can't wait for next update! I also have read and love Tara Sue Me's Triology as well!!!! If you like smut, you must check out The Training School Saga by TheSpoiltOne!!! It is fantastically yummy!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment. I like reading and writing about anything, but it so happens that I discovered people here like to read smut, so I give them what they like :-)
I have read The Training School Saga (I have read a lot of smut since last year, lol) and loved it.
To answer your questions, yes, much more smut is yet to come in this little fantasy of mine. Edward is being honest with Bella about everything he told her so far. As this story is centered on E&B, we won't really get to know if Edward's pals are the jerks he told Bella they were. I suspect they are not as bad as he described them, otherwise Bella's friends woudn't be interested in sleeping with them, would they?
Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman. A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH
First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning.
image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138743
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: I Want My Daughter Back!
Carmen has lost her mind. The horrible things she did to her daughter. She whipped her 50 times. Hell, at 15 strokes I am crying. I have not had to endure 50. I can't believe that Claire did not pass out from the pain. Then Carmen sexually abused Claire by touching her vagina to see if she was wet twice!!! She deserves some jail time and psychotherapy!!! I really hope that Edward receives full custody of Claire. At Claire's age, the judge will take whom she wants to live with in great consideration when making his decision. I am sure that Bella will be a great role model for Claire.
Thank you for the chapter, but now I am dying for the next chapter. You need to have a special offer for the next chapter like HBO is offering with True Blood on HBOGO :p
After Bella's 18th birthday accident the entire Cullen family leaves Forks leaving behind a devastated Bella.
Four months later, when Bella seems to start healing from her heartbreak she is faced with one Edward Cullen, only he is not the same Edward she has known before.
As he reveals the reasons of his lies and actions Bella has to make a decision that will change her life forever...
New Moon Alternate Universe - canon couples (perhaps a little OOC later on). Rated 'T' but if everything goes according to plan the rating will change in the future *hint hint*
I know the NM AU is a very popular theme, but give it a try it's not your usual NM AU story! And yes, I did just shamelessly promote myself... An author's got to do what an author's got to do.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31557 Read Count: 4532
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures
I am liking where this story could possibly go. Go forr the NC-17 rating. I am sure that you will be just fine writing lemonade for all us perverts. :)
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping
Still have not had the talk yet. I am dying to see about the rest of the family.
I love that Bella is confident. As you said in your authors note, "She is the one who has been human." It is so cute that they went to the store together, and I was so happy that Edward and Bella acted like the couple they used to be. Also, happy that Lauren saw them together and was jealous.
Now that Edward has been changed into a human, does he still have any vampire characteristics? Kinda like mates? Is Bella still his mate?
Ready for next chappie in the kitchen. Thank you for update.
Author's Response:
hey there, thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
I thought it was high time Bella and Edward started acting seventeen instead of seventy. They only get to be young once. As for Edward's vampiric characteristics: well, he's still unbelievebly gorgeous (but then again he is portrayed by RPattz so there's really no escaping that.), still is s speed demon and yes, Bella is is his mate. This hasn't and won't change in this story. Although, now that they are both human you could say that they are each other's soul mates. They were made for each other. Enouh said.
I'll be wrtining the next chapter soon.
till next time,
Mimozka
Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79498
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Tissues. It is all I can say.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Needed several tissues during and after this one. Loved it. :D
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I read the original. I am curious to see how you spruce it up. I thought that it was fantastic when I read it. Will be waiting for future updates.
Thank you for ALL of the stories that you write. You do it because you enjoy doing it. I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Maybe I have read too many stories, but this seems completely different then the first time I read it.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love re-reading this story. I loved it so much. :)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Still loving reading it again.
:)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Still loving the revised version. Are you going to change any of the story?
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Still a wonderful story. Thank you for reworking it. ;)
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I loved it better than the original. I wish you would not have talked yourself out of it with the first one. It was perfect.
Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I liked this chapter. You did not give us every detail of the delivery like some authors do. I am sorry that you are suffering from writers block. Maybe reviews will get those creative juices flowing.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
These two have a very, very long road ahead of them. I just hope that they can make it through everything unscathed.
Thank you for the update.
'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
I really do love this story, but I get so confused after every chapter.
Gosh this Bella is even worse than the one SM wrote. I just do not understand her behavior. I can't get a feel on who she is as a person.
Edward. I do not even know what to say. He is all over the place. I have panic attacks, and I take medicine prescribed by my doctor when I get one. I always have that medicine with me. I also use a method that my therapist taught me. Edward's therapist should have given him medicine and ways to help him pull himself out of a panic attack. It can be done.
Thank you for the update and a wonderfully written story that keeps your readers on your toes.
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I am chapters in, and I am still so confused. One minute I understand what is going on, and then the next I am completely baffled. I love the story, but I really am annoyed by this Bella. For her to be an adult, her mind sure as hell runs like a teenager. It is very hard to keep up with her.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
I am still so confused as to what is going on. I do not find myself an unintelligent person, but I just can't get a handle on what is going on.
Please do not take this as a flame. This is all about me. We are 18 chapters in, and I am still as confused as I was after I read chapter 1.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
There has defintely been a shift in demeanor for both Bella and Edward. Maybe they can let each other in. They are in a way kindred spirts.
Thank you for the update.
Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done. The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her. Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I was at the beach when this chapter was posted. I was able to read it from iphone, but as always never able to post a review.
I am glad that Edward has not raped her physically yet. Mentally she is probably gone. I do appreciate the slow education, but it is going to get way worse rather than better with time.
Thanks for the update. ;)
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I wish that Jasper could beat the crap out of Edward. Edward might call to get Jasper's advice, but he will not follow it. He is too damn egotistical. How can he be so sensless? Bella will never learn to like him. He can think that way until the cows come home, but she will never like him if he stays this course.
He is so stupid. Damn, did he even go to college? I am sure that they had a mandatory science class he had to take to get his degree. Shit, I teach high school, and we have delved into the issue I am about to mention. Again I ask is Edward an idiot? Mentally ill?
Yes, Bella's body is going to react to what Edward is doing to her physically. That is the way our bodies are built. She is going to get wet, she is going to make sounds, and she will orgasm, but it is only her body reacting to the stimulation. Her mind tries to fight the feelings, but the body will always win. That is why some rape victims feel even worse about themselves after all is said and done because at first they were dry. but their bodies betray them and get wet with the continued stimulation. The reason they feel worse is because their mind was begging for it to be over and that it did not want this to happen, but they feel gulity toward themselves because they physically got excited. Also, some rapist talk trash while they are committing the act, "Yeah, I know you like it because you are so slick and wet." Some of the victims wind up thinking that maybe they secretly wanted it to happen/continue because of the biological response of the body.
I hate Edward everytime he does anything physical to her. He is basically raping her body, and what is even worse is that he is raping her mind even worse than her body. It is hard to recover from situations like that. I personally have been forced to committ physcial acts that I did not want to do, but my body betrayed me after awhile and I got off. It is the biggest mind fuck that I have ever been through. Eventhough, I am not in the exact same situation as Bella is, I can empathise with her.
I really do hope that Jasper can talk some sense into Edward.
I am also pissed that he is surprised that she let her hold her while she was crying. He may be a monster, but he is the only and I mean the only person Bella has. I am sure that she was pissed at herself that she let him comfort her, but she needed someone. Edward was/is the only available person period. Sometimes you take what you can get.
Thank you for the update. Maybe Edward will find some redeeming qualities between now and when you post again.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Well, atleast he has not forced her to have sex yet. I am sure that issue will be coming sooner rather than later.
I really like this story, and I want to apologize for not reviewing every chpater. My iphone will not let me leave a review on this site, but it will allow me to review on fanfiction.net.
Until next chapter...
Author's Response:
I really appreciate you review & please don't apologize for not doing it before. I'm just glad that you are reading and enjoying the story. I know what you mean about the smart phone. I can't even get TWCS on mine only ff.net. I love to try to catch up on stories when I'm waiting someplace else. Thanks again for your review. :)
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I am disappointed in Edward. Just because Bella had an orgasm from Edward's menstrations, does not mean that she wanted it to happen in the first place. He mentally and physically raped Bella.
Men really just do not get it when it comes to a women's body and sex. Our body's are physically and chemically designed to produce secretions and responses to stimuli. I am a psychologist. There are so many rape victims out there that blame themselves for the rape because they got wet or even had an orgasm. Of course, the rapist has to spout out crap about how she must like it because she is so wet and that she is really enjoying it. Her body might be reacting, but her mind is screaming, "NO, NO, NO!"
Edward raped Bella by giving her oral sex when she did not want it. Yes, again she had an orgasm, but that was her body's physical and chemical response to his mouth and finger stimulation. Edward being a man immediately assumed that she enjoyed it just because she got off. You know what they say about people who make assumptions, "They make complete asses out of themselves." Poor Bella is so confused, and Edward just does not understand why. I wish I could have him in my office for ten minutes to explain how the human body works when it comes to sex.
I am so pround of Emmett for knocking the shit out of Edward. I really can't wait to see how that confrontation plays out.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I am so proud of Edward for not forcing Bella to have sex.
I wonder what Edward's Dad is up to? Why does Aro want Isabella so much!?!
I am glad that Edward pulled his shit together and comforted Bella after the Aro incident. I knew that the other shoe was about to drop, but I never pictured it happening in this way.
You are so evil for leaving that chapter like that. Who was screaming, and why were they screaming?
It had to be Bella. What was going on? Where were Edward's men? I am glad that Edward came in when he did! Maybe the meeting with dear dad was planned so they could get Bella out of the house without Edward being there?
Please update soon. I have a million questions that I could ask one after the other, but I will not.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Edward is slowly changing, and I can understand why Bella is so confused. I am glad that she feels safe with Edward now.
I wonder what "daddy dearest" and Aro's next plan will be to take Bella away from Edward?
Thank you for the update.
My one-shot for Fandom Fights the Flood. An unexpected detour changes everthing for Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5842 Read Count: 997
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, I have had my good cry for the day. Eventhough Bella died in the end, I enjoyed the story. Now I need to go blow my nose....
The unthinkable happened while Edward was away & the Bella he finds is not the one he left behind. What can he do to fix the best friend he's loved for as long as he can remember when she won't let him in. Originally written for Fandom Fights Mental Illness. Fisrt banner is mine, 2nd is by Rosalynn and the gif is from Tkegl. Thank you ladies.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28740 Read Count: 9507
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: While You Were Gone
Esme was wrong. She should have let Edward come home when he said that he wanted to. The theory that Esme stated that Bellaa eill be ok until he gets back from Europe was proven false. Bella porbably sees Edeard as selfish, and Edward is probably pissed at his mom for talking him into staying in Europe. Basically, he will blame his mother for Bella's actions. I kind of do blame her in a way.
Edward & Bella are BFA's in an acting program about to start work on their new show when they get the shock of their careers, they're both cast in roles that are the opposite sex. But through all the drama surrounding the show Edward and Bella find each other.
This fic is dedicated to randommama, for buying any fic from me in the Fandom Auction in 2010. Thank you for being so generous and letting me write whatever I wanted. Re-added this note, since it somehow got deleted.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27705 Read Count: 2309
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love it! Congratualations on your 2 years.
Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner:
Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!
Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?
Rating for future content.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding
That was so aweful. Atleast my first time, my partner who was experienced just like Edward in this story made sure that I received pleasure before he took his own. I am Anglican which is the religon of England that Edward is plotting to form. If you are fashioning this story after Henry VIII, he had many many women that he slept with. I have done much research into Henry, and from everything I have read, Henry was not stingy in bed.
Author's Response:
I am only making some things within my story similar King Henry VIII. King Edward was merely thinking of himself and previously had never had a problem with the women he slept with finding their own pleasure. Fear not, there will be pleasure for Bella to have in a later chapter.
Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing
I understand how busy you are right now. Try being a teacher from 7am-4:30pm and then attending graduate school at night. I know exactly how you feel. I also was sick for three weeks last month.
I am so happy that Tanya handled Edward. I am happy that Edward brought Bella's daughter back, showed true emotion by crying for all that had befallen his queen at his hands, and finally, made Charles and Renee pay for the horrible way they treated Bella. Lauren received a punishment. I hope she stays in the Brank for months. I also want Lauren's parents to be punished by stripping them of their titles, their lands, and their place at court. I want them to be paupers.
Believe it or not, but I am a very, very, very, etc. distant heir to the throne of Enland. At least a thousand people would have to die for me to take the throne.
This chapter was worth the wait. I knew you were busy with real life. Thank you for updating. Take your break and relax from everything. Don't even write, just enjoy not having to run around like a chicken with its head chopped off.
God bless! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Apologising
Edward is an ass, but atleast he felt bad about both of his infracitions.
Lord Charles holds a special place in hell. He is most defintely not cannon.
Can't wait to see what is next.
Author's Response:
King Edward will have several more big moments that he displays his asshole tendancies but glimpses of the kind soul he hides inside will increase. In all my stories I tend to write non-canon; it provides me with more freedom. Lord Charles will get his comeuppance. Next update will be Sunday. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Crying
I again am appalled by Edward's childish behavior. He does not think before he reacts.
He really thought that in the time from when he bedded Bella and tore her so badly apart that she needed stitches that Bella had bedded someone else! Also, let's not forget that he hit her face so hard that it left a mark!
I know you say that he is going to make a few more asshole mistakes, but he has done some horrific things to his wife already.
What else are you going to put poor Bella through?
I am glad that he finally acted the way he should have always acted with Bella since he married her, but he is so not off my shit list yet!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dying
One step forward two steps back for Edward. Is Edward going to bring the baby back? I do not see Bella getting over this if she does not have her child with her. Edward was such a dick in this chapter because he wanted to get his dick wet in Bella. I am happy that he realized that he is the reason that his child bride is basically catatonic. He made her that way when he took away the baby.
Thank you for the update. How many chapters is it going to take for Edward to be a rational adult instead of a child in a man's body?
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Learning
Edward is growing, and James was boiled alive. Hurah!! Now, we need to have a boy child. Bella needs to get over her adversion to sex. Did Edward not show Bella that sex could be very enjoyable for a female?
Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!
Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia
Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM
Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!
Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427916
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Discipline
I wonder what the outside world will think of the young beauty on Edward's arm at dinner tonight? He is still a celebrity and one of the hotest bachelors around.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I can't wait for more. I loved that chapter. Thank you.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping
I loved it. I am so glad that Edward said that he would want Bella to be his girlfriend more than his sub. So sweet...
I think that Alice knows that something is up as well, but I think that it is a good thing.
Thank you for update. Can't wait to see what happens between the two lovers next. Like when is Edward going to pop Bella's cherry?
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dinner
I think that we all want to hear what Tanya told Bella. I could not even imagine what she would say after we heard Edward's thoughts about his relationship with Tanya.
Women beater, hard and cold, hearless, etc.....
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**
I feel so sorry for poor Bella. Her mother dies, and her father turns into a drunk. He uses her painting money to drink away his loss of Renee. He treats Bella like crap. I guess as he got sober all of the things I mentioned finally dawned on him and could not take it so he committed suicide. How was he able to get away with that in rehab? From personal experience, I know that they were very strict about everything when my brother in law was in rehab.
A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions
Yes, lets thank Edward Cullen for the nice lay in the bathroom and getting Bella fired. I am not saying that it was all Edward's fault because it takes two to tango. She could not even form a sentence around Edward, and I agree that it is understandable. This Edward really is an ass, and we have just met him! I wonder how much of a douche he can get?
Thank you for the new story and the author who so kindly let you translate it into english from french. I really cab't wait to see this lion roar.
One moment was all it took to tear them apart. Now, in a single heartbeat, they'll find their way back together one last time. My Halloween One-shot for Twilight Fanfic Advocacy Compliation. MA/NC-17
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1549 Read Count: 1283
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was so sad, but it was sweet at the same time.
31 Days of Halloween / Picture prompt 18 / Can a Halloween Ball change everything? Can beauty find true love with an evil beast in one glance? Edward and Bella will find out when he exposes his true nature. Darkward
Banner by BusyMommy
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1821 Read Count: 1001
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was a nice treat for Halloween. Thank you.
Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Visitors
I really hope that Alice had left the room. It might have been written, but I do not remember reading her actually leaving.
Author's Response:
Ha, yes, it does say she spoke as she exit the room...she must have know what was coming...or rather who was cumming. ;0)
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Erotica
Hot sex! Bad Edward! He better not kill her or almost kill her. Now, he has to come clean about what he is.
I really cannot wait until the next chapter!
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Impasse
"Edward, why are you so stubborn when it comes to letting Isabella see Charlie?"
Author's Response:
Our boy is not so good with the sharing, especially when it comes to Isabella, he needs to be reminded what it's like to be human....hmmm, wonder if Isabella is up to the job?
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Parting
I hate Jacob. I have always been team Edward. I do hope that Edward rips Jacob's head off. I am quite nervous about the fight.
Author's Response:
I am team Edward too, there will be HEA and hopefully you will enjoy the fight! ;0)
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Surprises
Bella is just going to get in the way, is she not? How can Edward fight and protect her at the same time? I am ready for the fight. I want the pack of werewolves to be decimated! Of course, I also want Jacob dead. I kinda think that I would like Bella to do that after she is turned into a vampire. That would be fun. Just rambling....
Author's Response:
Very perceptive, all will be revealled next week, must say I'm anxious at releasing the last two chapters. Thanks for your reviews very much appreciated, til next week... Happy New Year
This is a sort of follow up/sequel to Confessions of an Overworked, Underpaid Peen. This will be little one shots of snippets of his life, little happenings, and such. EPPov AH, OOC
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11811 Read Count: 9265
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It Poked Me
I loved it. I miss Rod, too. I am happy that Bella is pregnant. I know that the story revolves around Rod and Hot Puss, but are Bella and Edward married now, or are they just shacking up?
Can't wait for the next chapter. No matter how long it takes for new inspiration to hit.
I am dying for the next update of :Master May I!"
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Engaged Peen
I am so glad that Rod remembered that he was an engaged peen. Well, I am gald that Edward remembered that he was an engaged man.
I hold a master degree in biological sciences, and I can honestly say that when a penis gets hard when a female agressive rubbing lap dancer is doing her thing is completly natural. Men cannot help it unless the man is impotent, gay, or is disgusted. The penis might not have a real brain, but it cannot help getting hard when someone is rubbing all over it. It is all about the chemistry in a males body.
Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir. Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.
Banner by Rosalynn
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I wonder what will happen now. It seems to me that the Barons have swayed many court members to their plight....
Date: 24 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I hope that this is the Edward that is falling in love with Bella and not the scheming asshole who is trying to steal the throne.
Thank you for the update. I hope that you have a wonderful Holiday season.
Author's Response:
thanks for the holiday wishes and the true edward is the one you see now, loving his queen and trying to figure out how he will keep his uncles happy.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I forgot that back then witnesses had to be present during the first physical act of intimacy. That had to suck so badly!
How is Edward going to protect Bella from his uncles, or will he betray her even though he loves her?
Author's Response:
I love your reaction to the witnessing of their first time. I can't answer your question, because even if he protects her, he's betraying her by not telling her the truth.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Another cliffhanger! Arrrg! Great chapter.
Date: 18 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Shit, they are going to do something with the child, or they could do away with Isabella during the birth. Stealing the child and saying that it was dead. I think that if the Queen orders her husband to be present for the birth then no one would question her for her word is above all others.
I want to know what Aro and his crew were talking about with all the different nobles. Why is Edward not getting to the bottom of this? He is concerned, but he brushes it under the carpet. He needs to be vigilant not passive.
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I am trying to figure out how an heir would make the Queen expendable. I am waiting for Aro to play his cards and see how Edward will handle the situation. I am also now suspicious of James. I think that James was a plant by Aro to keep tabs on his nephew. The introduction of Victoria is very suspicous to me.
Author's Response:
If the Queen is out of the way, they feel that they could get Edward to see their way, with a blood royal in their pocket. As to your other questions, time will tell...and below is your teaser:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I knew that James was a plant by Aro!!! I called it chapters ago.
As to whom they found in the cabin, I am not sure, yet.
Author's Response:
Yes you did...most people didn't suspect him until his wife was revealed. Though the man in the cabin is the likely suspect...as the tease shows.
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I wonder what the brothers have in store for their nephew?
I really hope that nothing happens to Isabella before, during, and after her pregnancy.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
This is how the brothers decided to handle getting rid of Bella and Edward?
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Well, this Edward is a cad. I know he will not always be, but he is a pompus, promiscuous, prick of a man currently.
We already know that Bella is going to fall for his game. I just hope that he falls for her quickly after they are married. Please do not let him cheat. His is not the true King. Isabella has more power than he does or ever will.
Author's Response:
Well, you know by now that many of your wishes and hopes did come true. Sorry it took so long to reply, tanks for all the reviews, they mean so much.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Of course, we know that Bella will pick Edward over Jacob. It seems that Edward may already be falling for Isabella and she him.
I still cannot wait for the story to take off.
Author's Response:
I'm taking a break from chapter 22 to reply today and its so interesting looking back to the initial reactions...thanks for all the love!
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
That ghost better be Edward coming to Bella.
Author's Response:
Veiled threats...i love em! This was one of the most reviewed chapters for mainly that reason.
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Edwards uncle's are happy now, but they will continue to ask Edward to convince Isabella to give them more titles, property, and money.
Is Edward still with his uncles, or is he on the Queen's side?
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Billy and Jacob....While their intentions are to expose Edward as a fraud and to probably scure Jacob's hand with Bella after Edward is gone, I do not want to see Edward hurt Bella, but at least someone is looking out for the welfare of the Queen even if it is for personal gain.
Damn, I can't believe the way I am thinking at this moment.
Author's Response:
They're acting dangerously, because the best way to protect her is staying in her good graces, something you can't do from the dog house...Edward is true to her even if he's ill advised. Here is this week's tease:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I wonder if it really was an accident?
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I wonder where they are hiding, and I think that they have friends in the court still. I am glad that Isabella and Edward are working to mend the trust that she lost in him by lying.
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Things are happening so fast. I wonder how soon the brothers will makes their move?
Date: 14 May 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
I have a feeling of forboding...I am sure that I am correct in my gut.
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
How evil to leave a cliffhanger! lol