Reviews by judyblue95
Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

higher

Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 127111
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Poom Pooms

I love how you write about, talk about, the stuff that real people do while having sex....like squirting, ass licking, stuff like that....I don't read that anywhere else. It makes this more real....more like life.  Yeah, I'm crushing on this story, big time....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Cake

Funny what getting a tattoo can do....happy birthday, Bella! Carlisle is cute, and a bit slick! He did good for Bella's birthday....but so did Edward. I love the slice-of-life style of this story, the sort of stream of consciousness writing style. I'm sure it's not as easy as you make it look...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Future

Bella's so cute. She missed her own birthday cake....LOL! I like Carlisle's advice to Emmett but doubt he'll take it. I like the story. It's nothing deep, just a look into some interesting characters....Your thugward has a good heart, and I like that!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Honest Mistake

oh no. i don't like the sound of this....i hope he doesn't get himself in too deep. i don't like the way he's treating her. just my opinion.....she's a bit immature and dramatic, but she has a point....j/s.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Steps Ahead

he's living a pipe dream....once he's used to that kind of money, it will be difficult to stop dealing....maybe not....i hope not.  what happened to bella??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Charcoal

these 2 are a mess.....they fit so well together....I hope he's done and I hope she knows he loves her...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 39: The Journey

well, well, well.....I can't say this is my favorite of your stories, but I did enjoy reading it. You write some very interestingly flawed characters, and in it's own way, that is a rare talent.  This Edward scared me a bit and this Bella is scary in her own way. The match perfectly, then, don't they. Thanks for the ride.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

  ordinary people, ordinary lives. just like most of us. thanks once more, Lexi, for giving us your self through the writing. i, for one, fucking love it.

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

Banner created by Evilnat

Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

Favorite Scream


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130202
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

yay, the cast is off. slowly, everything is returning to a semblance of normality.....love this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

Is she really? She doesn't want to live with him??  Poor FBIward indeed!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

I see that this time I got no alert for this chapter from FFN. Did they take this story down?  No matter, I like reading it here better anyway!  She is getting her trust for him back, and that's good, but she may have nightmares for a while to come from the horrendous experience she went through.  I look forward to each new chapter from this engrossing story. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

lovely, wonderful, heart-wrenching chapter!  Full of break-throughs, break-downs, but thankfully not break-ups.  thank you.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

Much as I want them to stay together, you're right. She needs her independence back. She needs to recover physically and emotionally from her ordeal.  Do I sense a growing closeness between Rose and Emmett??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Favorite word of the chapter...."weaseliest"...LOL!  Love how Rose threatened to hug Edward....I'm so happy that all is out in the open so now everyone can be their real selves with everyone else!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

oh Bella. A mother's love you wanted and I think your prayer was answered in the form of Edward's mother. lovely chapter.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

I'm so glad I favorited this story here too as FFN is a total fail in alerts today!  I love that she's even considering letting Edward back in at all. She must love him. I get that she doesn't trust him yet, but she will.....I know she will. What a nightmare she went through. It's a wonder that she isn't totally fucking bonkers!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

feel weird reading this here...love that she is willing to try with him again. both of them need individual time and healing before that can happen. love this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

its weird, I got this chapter here and the previous one on FFN....anyhoo...It seems that it will take a very long time for them to heal after this ordeal. I see that they are in it together, whatever that looks like and becomes, and love will triumph after all. I know it!  Maybe time with Charlie can help her start.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

I'm reading this now on TWCS. I got both alerts, one from here and one from FFN and they both say chapter 159. This one is really 159 but the one on FFN is 158.

Anyway, its a good chapter and shows how Bella really loves Edward despite everything. How does Charlie not know the truth already?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

I'm not a fan of doctors or hospitals. I think this scenario is entirely within the realm of possibility. Scary! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

I love that she said it back!  I love how he cherishs her and shows her with more than words how he loves her. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

I'm so glad they're back in Seattle.  I wonder is Charlie has known all along....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

If Charlie knows, then why is he asking for a DNA test? If he knows they why not admit to it?  What will a DNA test show?  I agree with him that it doesn't matter about blood. They ARE father and daughter every bit as much as they always have been...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

oh yes! I am so glad to hear this!  I knew that Charlie was her father in every way that counted, but now to hear that he is truly her biological father is like icing on the cake!  I knew Aro had no balls....LOL!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

Even thought I haven't mentioned it, it hasn't escaped my attention that the Dr.'s name is "DuRoy"......shades of Bel Ami......It will be good for Bella to get out on a "girls"day. She needs both the time out of the house and to be with other females.....have I said that I've grown very attached to this story?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

Isn't somebody going to off Aro in prison? Wouldn't that be nice?  She IS getting better....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

This is sad. I get what Bella thinks she needs....and maybe she does!  I get that Edward is hurt. It feels to him like he is being pushed away. He's taking it personally while knowing it's not. Sometimes we can't help putting up walls. It's less painful than being emotionally pummelled. I get that. Still, it's sad....

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334735
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

this was a wonderful read, ladies!  thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Did Leah kill Harry? It sounds like you are wrapping things up here and that all is coming out as it should. Love the story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This has been an almost fluffy chapter and it is a welcome addition to the story! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

I don't know how I missed this one of yours!  I'm reading it now, on a rec from Love Twifics. I have read many of your stories so I know the quality you put into stories. BDSM stories are some of my favorite and I look forward to immersing myself in this one. The first chapter sets a great tone and I am eager for more. I may not review every chapter as this is a completed story, but I just wanted to make my interest in this known to you two...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I enjoyed this chapter, and the scene, very much!  Thanks for explaining your own past and how you put it into so many of your Bellas.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope Edwards ruins all of them in any way he can.  They all deserve whatever it is he dishes out.  Bella has got to someday see that this is not her fault, as I don't think she does now.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm loving everything about this story and finding it difficult to stop reading it in order to take care of other things around my house today.  LOL!  I really love where their relationship is leading and wonder if there is a leak somewhere that allowed Jacob to slip into the college undetected...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I like how he is easing her into their play time. She will fuck up at some point and I have confidence he will give her the correct punishment that won't make her feel like she is a failure, that everyone does things to fuck up and that doesn't mean they ARE fuck-ups.  Renee, I think, does not love Bella any more than Charlie does, but I hope to be wrong about that....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

JFC with a family like hers, Renee and Charlie, Bella doesn't need enemies!  No wonder she really doesn't believe that Edward will stay with her....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

as for Tanya, I think she will try to retaliate against Bella in some way.  as for Renee and Charlie, I think both will ignore her for Christmas. I love that Edward gave her the building for her new dance studio, but hate that she still has trouble thinking she deserves anything like this.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

stopping here for today. i must say, although i'm sure the retribution and revenge was deserved, i really can't see any difference between what all those people did to Bella and the revenge Edward and James and the others took out on those that hurt her. 2 wrongs don't make a right.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Running for Love by Sarge's Girls

Bella is the daughter of the vice president of the United States.
Edward is a new member of her Secret Service detail.
Will they be able to fight their attraction,
or will her eighteenth birthday mean a green light?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19150 Read Count: 12439
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have mixed feelings....I love this story, it was a delight to read, but altogether too short for my taste.  I'm happy, though, as that was your choice to make it so short and still the same quality as the others!  Such possibilities for later expansion, aren't there? Just sayin'......

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Gah! just fucking ewwwwww!!!  I hope Mike gets a payback for his piggish ways.... The nicknames Grumpy and Dopey are just hilarious and precious all at the same time! So Mike noticed how Edward and Bella were around each other, did he?  I wonder if anyone else noticed.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Happy Birthday, Bella!  I hope she gets the one present she really wanted.....although the time with her parents was nice and the necklace Edward gave her was even nicer....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh the best birthday present, EVER!  this was satisfying on so many levels!  I so very much love a HEA....I know it's coming.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

again, I read this twice....did anyone else mention the typo in the first date listed in this chapter?



Author's Response:

What typo? There is no typo... ??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I couldn't wait to read this here, so when FFn posted first I had to start. I then read it again here. OK you guys are so awesome. I'm eagerly awaiting more of this!!

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

HTF banner

 

Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54714
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I'm late getting ready for work just so I could read this. I'm so sad that it's almost over, but ecstatic that they are back together. I understand her reasoning, but so happy that he came back to confront her in person. I cried tears of joy reading this. I'm so looking forward to the epi and outtakes.....and to your next story!! Thank you so much for giving this to us!



Author's Response:

Aww...I'm glad you were so excited about it!  And you cried!  WOW!!  That almost makes me cry...  ;)  I'm glad you understood Bella's reasoning.  To me it made sense, but it hasn't to everyone.  Epi and outtakes will post soon, and the epi will have a bit of a tease for the next story in the A/N.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

No memories triggered yet for Edward. I guess it's too soon.  It must be very hard to rely for your very existence on people you don't know....you chapter posting schedule for the next 2 weeks sounds just fine to me!



Author's Response:

Nope, no yet.  This story's a bit of a slow build, but we'll get there, I promise.  And yes, I can't imagine how hard that would truly be, especially if the person is normally independent.  Glad you're happy with the posting schedule--I arranged it so that a particular chapter will post at the end of the month.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hi there, I'm excited to read your story. Sounds good so far....



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you have fun trying to figure out who Edward is!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

well, this is certainly going to be an uphill battle, isn't it?  I don't like how they (you) are calling him John. I guess you have to call him something as he can't remember yet, but I don't know, John just doesn't do it for me.....LOL! j/k....I love that they irritated each other at first sight. This is going to be a bit of fun! For now, at least....



Author's Response:

Yes, it will be a bit of an uphill battle for a while, but maybe not quite in the way that you're thinking.  ;)  Well, he needed a name, and it should be generic...for now.  I don't like him being John really either, but we had to start somewhere.  LOL!  I think it's hard not to be irritated when you can't remember anything and everyone is telling you it'll be all right, and conversely, when some jackass you've never met is yelling at you.  Yes, it should be fun!  I hope you continue to enjoy it!

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

It looks like our Bella is gaining some inroads with John. I love how he reacted involuntarily when she said his, or presumably his, name....



Author's Response:

Yes, she is.  He's not a bad guy, he's just in a bad situation.  I loved the name thing too!  :)  So glad you're taking this journey with me!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

It was a good chapter!  It really is something to consider, what you said about mayber Bella being the reason Edward was in the Forks area.....I love how they are with each other. He is so cute when he is berating himself for getting a hard on over her. Like he can help that?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There are lots of possibilities for who he is and why he's there.  You'll get some clues shortly.  ;)  Aren't they cute together?  LOL!  That's true, he can't really help how he reacts to her, can he?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh Bella, what have you done!  I think it's both a risky and brave thing for her to do, offering him a place to stay.  She wants him near, that's for sure, and I suspect he has no problem with that.  I look forward to the story unfolding and to the journey along the way. Thanks for writing an entertaining, and hopefully sexy, story!



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Well, the summary does say NC-17 for lemons, so you know that someone will be getting some somewhere along the line.  I think you'll be pleased...  Oh, Edward has a BIG problem with being wanted by her, as you'll soon see.  It's not gonna be that easy.  But Bella is brave, and determined.  :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

His dream was what happened to him in the forest before he was found and brought to the hospital, wasn't it?  I'm guessing.....I'm loving this story. It has a pleasingly different plot than most and so far is keeping me guessing. Finding out just who Edward is and why this happened to him is going to be a fun journey!



Author's Response:

Yes, that's right, and that won't be the last we hear of it, either.  ;)  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I'm looking forward to taking the journey with you!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

my gut reaction says that maybe he was an undercover law enforcement person who was discovered, hence the beating.....or maybe he was a criminal who wanted out of whatever he was into....but I like my first idea best.

love that he can cook!  very interesting and telling that he knows his way around guns, evidently. even more interesting is how that knowledge freaked him out. maybe it was the way he took apart that Glock without even being aware he did it that freaked him out.....the growing attraction between he and Bella is lovely!  I am really attached to this story and can't wait for more! thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Hehe...I'm not going to comment on any guesses--you'll just have to wait and see!  I'm glad everyone is really thinking about it, though!

Yes, I think cooking is an awesome skill to have, particularly for a guy since it's a bit less common.  Yes, his apparent intimate knowledge of the Glock freaked him out--he knows he would have to own one to know it that well.  And being someone he won't be proud of is his worst fear, and this suggests things could go that way. 

I'm glad you're enjoying the interplay between him and Bella--it's been fun to write!  Thanks for reading, and for reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I like that you're not saying anything about who Edward is one way or the other. I want to be surprised!  Maybe he's not, or wasn't a good guy, but maybe this experience changes him.  I always like to think the best about people, real or ficitonal!  I am enjoying this story. It is well written, engaging, and hopefully will be sexy soon....



Author's Response:

Nope, I'm not gonna say.  Give it 2 weeks, and you'll definitely know some more things, though.  Possibly less than that for something sexy, but that's all I'm saying.  ;)

Thank you so much for the great compliments on the story!  It's so much fun to share it with everyone like this!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

I have, so very much, enjoyed reading this story. I saw Domie's post today and must say I didn't realize that this was your FIRST story!  I'm doubly impressed now. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work. When your 2 outtakes are posted, may I save this story to my Kindle for future enjoyment?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I

I had almost forgotten just how much this story affected me. I read a LOT of FF and most of it is good, some more than others, but I very much enjoyed reading this outtake. It took me right back to the heart of this story and I remembered how wrapped up I was in it all the time I was reading it.  This is a very satisfying ending to the story. We get to know, to witness, the outcome. Next OT will finish it off, right?  I very much want to keep this when it's done and hope you don't mind if I do. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272625
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you so much for giving us this story again after it was so rudely removed at that other story site.....I am a faithful fan and reader of all your stories....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He didn't mean it!  It's that damned front he has to put on in front of others!  God, I love this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So good again this time through!  Did they pull My Beauty too? If they did, or do, will you also post it here?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so happy to see that you are posting this lovely story here on TWCS.  I am reading each chapter again as you post it and it is just as enticing and delightful the 2nd time around.  So sorry you had to endure the purge of FFN's witchhunt.....So sorry your life is hard right now. I work as an assistant to a wonderful woman, a therapist, who works with autisitc children. I hope you can find some help and support in this area where you are. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They have much to learn from each other.....I am sincerely enjoying reading this again as you repost it here.  This is one of the most lovely stories I have ever read and I fervently hope that you are able to finish it one day, despite all the difficulties in your life right now.  All my best to you....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: My Viking

This is such a sad time for both of them.  I love this story and each time I read another chapter, I am reminded of just how much.  I am very happy you are putting this back up.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You posted chapter 5 earlier today but it wasn't this chapter. That chapter, it seems, belonged further down the line in the story. You pulled that one and posted this one in it's place, yes? 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So very enjoyable this second time around for me.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ah, my favorite chapter!  How sweet is reconciliation and the admission of true feelings!  thank you for giving us this beautiful story!  twice!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thank you so much for reposting this wonderful story her and on FictionPad.  I have read it twice now and love it so much.  I eagerly await it's continuation...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hi! It's good to see you back into writing again! I'm reading here as I want the most uncensored version to read of this story. Although they are fail with notifications here, I get word when the chapter posts on FFn, so I go and read it here. So Bella has been kidnapped! Ugh! At least someone back home knows she is pregnant. I hope she can hide it from her captors until she is rescued. Thanks again, dear. With all you've been through lately, it is very unselfish of you to give us your stories again. Be well...

Summary:

A tattooed loner moves to a small town to appease his deceased mentor. He stumbles across a modest Isabella at church. He wants her but balks at the age difference, and there’s nothing respectable about him. Is she as proper as he thinks, or does she just hide things well?

 

smy

BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9085 Read Count: 7400
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me Yours, and I’ll Show You Mine

Great story! I'm new to your stories having read only 2 previous contest entries. I'm very happy to have discovered another talented writer of Ff, in your case 2 women who form this fabulous team! Count me in to read more of your work!

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106202
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Santino Chapter 8

Please write more of this. I love this whole series and just finished reading all 4 stories again.  This is the best ever fan fiction!

Dreaming in Blood by Discordia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Emotionally distant investment banker Edward Cullen struggles with his attraction to the mysterious vampire who changed him. Angry and denying that they're mates, Edward must reconcile the pull he feels to her. When her past threatens the fragile equilibrium they've established, Edward must decide if he'll forgive her, or abandon her to the monster from her past. Dark, non-canon


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62307 Read Count: 3927
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Oct 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So nice to get a new chapter of this story!  It still draws me in, but I need to refresh my memory so I'm going to go back and skim through the first 9 chapters again this weekend when I have time.  I wonder who the vampire in the woods was? Who would she go  and talk to about this? Edward seems more drawn to her, or at least more accepting of those feelings now. Thanks for writing this for us.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

just when they were getting closer, when his guard was melting away and the willingness to give in to his feelings, his desires, was making a breakthrough....her maker shows up?  what does this mean?  will he want her back?  Edward is too new to fight an old vampire, isn't he?  Oh jeez, so many thoughts run through my mind.....I love your take, your slightly twisted take, on the canon. I've said this before...I know...but hell, I am intrigued by this story. I want more. I'll wait.....dammit!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh yes! I'm loving this! A twist of canon indeed! I don't read many vamp stories as they tend to get semi-tedious to me usually before they are done. I hope that doesn't happen to me here because I love everything I've read of yours to date. I won't read on FFN anymore and you're not on FP, but TWCS is cool. I will read this here!  Glad your life is slowing down a bit now and hope you can stop and smell the roses more now....I'm in and reading this!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh the possibilities of for tension, angst, love, hate, lust, you're weaving such an interestingly intricate tale here. It's so unlike any other I've read.....I'm really attracted to all aspects, all possibilities here. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm eager for them to finally mate! I see he's moving closer here but you stopped in mid stream! His body seems willing but his mind still lingers on who he used to be while human..... I do wonder what the doctor will say about Edward resisting the mating. I do wonder why he couldn't smell her maker.  I'm really  glad you are still writing this story because I love to read it!  I have come to love reading WIPs when I know the writer will finish them. I have learned who I can and can't trust with this after several bad experiences.....I love reading what you write. You are one of a handful I do...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love what you've done here. You've twisted the canon and come up with a deliciously sexy story. I love the attitude Edward has!  He's being a bratty baby vamp and torturing Belly in the most fun ways. I really look forward to reading more of these two as they figure this all out. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a delicious chapter!  His ambivalence definitely shows!  Love the growl she gave the red-headed woman he flirted with.....such posessiveness!  I wonder how long it will take him to surrender to his passion for her.....you did leave us hanging a bit and I suspect it won't be the last time. You always deliver in the end so I'm not worried in the least. A very sexy story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I loved this!  How lovely she was when she took care of the young woman from whom they drank. Your vampires have compassion, well at least Bella does.....Edward is so busy holding on to his stubborn pride that he's missing out.  I love how she say he will be hers at the end....I believe he will!  Sexy fucking story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Are Rosalie's eyes red? Does she drink humans? She chided Edward about Bella's "moral" preference and you indicated Emmett's eyes were amber but said nothing about Rosalie's. Just curious....I'm really intrigued by your twist on the canon here. I love what you're doing. I can't help but think that Edward is doomed, destined if you will, to succomb to Bella, but the trip along the way will be so much fun to watch!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

you have woven a story with many amazing twists on the original. it's almost like an original, it IS original. interesting theory on the origin of vampires....since they have no presiding officials, is there no body who knows the real story? I suppose Emmett's version will suffice since there is no one to say differently....mutation IS how many other species have come about, so it seems logical....you reveal here just a hint of Bella's back story and I'm eager to hear more. Also about her origins.....with each succeeding chapter, I fall under it's spell, this story, just a bit more....Lovely job, dear. You do always grab and hold my attention with your diverse works!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for the best chapter yet. Edward seems to be relenting a tiny bit and their scene against the tree was very erotic!

Happy Birthday in advance. Mine is on the 14th, fellow Sagittarius. Have a wonderful Holiday season and I look forward to the next chapter on the first day of the new year.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So good to read a new chapter!  I'm falling in love with this story, it has such romantic undertones.....despite the bloodiness of it!

I have read your 2 gay romance stories and loved  them both. Did I post a review for the 2nd one yet? I will if I haven't yet...I am eager for more...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jasper???  You got me there! I was expecting Carlisle!  This is very interesting and a twist, for sure!  Is Alice his mate?  Love Edward's growling.  He's so going to cave soon, I just know it. I wonder if "the doctor" will be able to tell the why Edward is different, why he couldn't smell her maker when he was  near, and why he resists the mating. 

I'm so sorry about the loss of your cat.  I lost a 15 year companion, my Virgil, a number of years ago and it was devastating. 

I tried to review the real chapter 12 that you just posted here, but it wouldn't let me, saying I was only allowed one review per chapter. I must have reviewed ch. 13 when it was still listed as ch. 12. This is so confusing, but you have it fixed now, so I can forget it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983457
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101887
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

This is a really sweet and touching story.  Thanks for giving it to us!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159804
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I've buzzed right through this story tonight. Sorry I didn't comment more.  I really loved it. Thanks, you 2, you write some very enjoyable stories!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like that Edward thinks Bella's full figure is just fine.....very much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm on a roll with your stories!  This one looks good too and I like the overweight Bella idea...here's to all of us round women!!

 

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94728
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

first, may I say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story, that the last chapter was so very good, and second......please remind your beta that "taut" means tight and "taught" refers to learning.

I wish you all the best publishing IPS and will pre order it as soon as it's available. 

I had hoped for an epilogue to this story, but loved it all the same.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Damn papparazzi!  They always slant things to what they want them to be, not caring about the reality of the situation....I don't like Phil, not one bit!  He can't take no for an answer. He's the kind who ends up forcing a woman because he thinks that "no" is foreplay, not a final answer....ugh!  I really eagerly anticipate the time when she realizes he's Anthony....or  when he tells her....however she finds out! Thanks, Dishie!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I must say that after all the building up, the gunshot and all the angst over Anthony, that this was much too short a reunion....just my humble opinion. It was just lovely, their talk, their lovemaking, it was all great, just not enough of it for me.....sorry if that disappoints you but I have to be honest.  I hope the epi is long...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

you gave us a teaser of part of the end of the chapter...all but that last, oh so important, part about her canceling her ride with Phil and texting Edward to pick her up from the airport....I can't believe this story is almost over!  I guess you'll be busy with IPS for publication and won't be giving us another story soon after this one....I wish you success but will miss reading your chapters. It's been constant for years now....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

yes! he is coming to!  this was a harrowing chapter to get through but I know you will bring us out the other side to the HEA we've all been longing for....I love that you make it realistic and don't just get him better in one chapter. I  love all the things she is saying to him....things that maybe she'd have more trouble saying if he were awake...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Her subconscious knows that he and Anthony are the same person.  I'm sure she will be startled and confused and hurt when she finds out. I think she will get over that, maybe after some time. I trust you to take us home here, Dishie, and give us another fulfilling story. Have fun on your trip.



Author's Response:

Hey, Judy. You are spot on...she's hurt, sad, confused, etc. But you know  love me an HEA!!!  See you Saturday. xoxo

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This is all building up to the big reveal in a few chapters and I feel the tension you're building, big time!  The slip up in his voice at the end, in the restaurant at lunch, is only the beginning of the clues she'll notice, I think.  Who the F is Victoria? Ex-fiancee?? I thought he was in love only once, to that woman who he told her about that got married and had a kid. The one from the beginning of the story. What was she, Israeli, or Egyptian, or something like that?? 

Your rec, Counselor, has got to be one of my favorite stories ever!  I've been reading it, and it's companion pieces, Cygnet and Lost, from the beginning. I didn't know you were reading them too!!  Just another thing we seem to have in common, dear.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That stuff with Victoria was some of the most hilarious dialogue I've read!  I love it when Bella told her she didn't want to meet her. Just sinfully delicious! And speaking of that.....I can't help but wonder just when Bella will begin to recoginze his touch. I mean, each man has a particular feel to them and she can't help but notice sooner or later, can she?  Well done, Dishie!  I also noticed that she kind of froze at the invitation to accompany him to Seattle and meet his parents....too much, too soon? Wise of him not to bring it up again. See you next time!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, Judy. I spoke to quite a few women regarding the issue you bring up concerning recognizing touches, etc. Especially the oral sex part, when it happens. Of all the women I internvewed, they said that they would not be able to tell, nor would they even think about it. They said they would be in the moment with the one they are with. I think this totally makes sense because I wouldn't be able to tell the difference either and nor would I compare one man to another. I believe it's because we are reading this issue in the this story that we expect it when, in reality, it wouldn't happen unless Bella was actually looking for something comparable. Which she is not. I hope this makes sense. You and I think a lot alike on many issues that it's beyond uncanny. I believe if you honestly think about this, it will make sense to you. Glad you are enjoying the story, Judy. xoxo

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

yes indeed! creepy Aro!  So I wonder if Bella finds out in Italy that Edward and Anthony are one and the same.  You said chapter 21 and this is only 2 chapters away!  I'm also thinking that Phil is a bit creepy too, so hope he's dispatched soon! 

I hope you enjoyed your trip and arrive back home safely!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh dear!  I wonder just how dangerous for Bella it's going to be to accept help from a mafia Don like Aro!  Is this a set up??   This story has me on my toes and salivating!!  I wonder how you will take us from her to the big reveal. Guess I'll wait a week to find out, you evil cliffie mistress, you!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh Dishie, you worry too much about whether or not your readers will be mad at you.  I can't speak for anyone else, but I read this chapter KNOWING that this would happen. You warned us with the teaser. Yes, it's an evil cliffie, but those are the kinds of things that make a story worthwhile, IMHO.  It's very clever of you to make it happen this way. She doesn't recognize it from his touch, she sees him going into THAT building and, although the gut feelings start to build, she goes to confront him anyway!!  I have a feeling that  you will somehow add forgiveness to the mix here, maybe in a chapter or five.....You write it beautifully and I hate to see the doubt  you express about that when you are so afraid of what  people will think.  I love it.



Author's Response:

You can always read between the lines, Judy. Not everyone can or does. Thanks for always being here. You've been a long time reader of mine and your comments are always enjoyable to read. Thank you. xox

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This truly is a tangled web of deceit!  No doubt Bella will have a bad reaction to learning that Masen is Edward. Yet another persona!  I truly hope that Rosalie will be able to convince her that Edward knew nothing about what she and Jasper did.  It could be the straw that breaks Bella's back, but I suspect you have other things in mind for these two. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You left us with quite a cliffie, dear!  I know, it isn't the first time and it won't be the last!  LOL!  I love that the reunion, which I KNOW is coming, is taking it's time getting here. That slow torture is something I've come to love in a story and you are handling it so well!  I can't believe that Seth let Phil seduce him into revealing things that never should have been revealed about Bella, her situation, and her gallery. I just hope that it doesn't give Phil too much hope or make him do something that will embarass himself and/or Bella!  I look forward to more of this soon! I know, next weekend....