Reviews by judyblue95
Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

ok well i guess they will go at their own pace...which seems now to be racing off the page!!!!  go go go!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

oh damn....they still want each other....fucking LOVE that! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

oh you are so evil!  the master of the cliffie!  I love being teased....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

wow, so not the reaction I was expecting from Edward!  Can't wait to see her reaction to the cardboard  cutout of her that she encounters in the shop at her next appointment!  not so good, I imagine...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Ha ha! The joke's on me AGAIN!  Not so what I imagined or expected! The cardboard cutout was among the things she sent for Jacob's daughter!  That's what I get for expecting things!  Now lets see the real deal....

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG.....what ever does he think of her now? doesn't he know she's the same girl he fucked two weeks ago??  I bet not...

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

it never ceases to amaze me what people can build up in their minds about a situation that is so totally not what is really happening....just fucking talk about it, people!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

thanks for the background on Edward....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

still with you, and happily so, my dear!  oh I can't wait for this....but I will, of course!

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

what a way to find out!!!!  I bet he feels like a first class perv now....LOL!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am very excited to see what comes next between them...I am really enjoying this story a fucking LOT and hope that you do finish it.  I have started more stories than I care to remember, only to find the author never finished them...I resisted starting this one a long time ago because of that very reason. It caught my attention a while back but I only started reading now that I see you have started adding chapters again after a long haitus.  Please finish it.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

these 2 need to synch up and talk.....hope the do later on down the line...will he relent and look her up, google her?  sorry my reviews aren't really reviews, more like stream of consciousness rant-like comments....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't believe he still thinks her claim to fame is being a porn star!  LOL! He couldn't be farther off the track. Oh this is really good!  I can't wait until her finds out....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh poor girl....i think she will find that she has underestimated both herself and him...eventually...

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow what's this? she's feeling shy all of the sudden...oh I forgot how young she really is...what a way to start a relationship!  i am assuming there will be one....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

more like a scared little girl coward.  she is feeling way too much and has no experience with situations like this....selfish, yes, but I don't think that's the main emotion here.....I feel very protective, somehow, of these 2....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm not sure he's still thinking porn....I don't think he's thinking with his big head at all right now....more like with his other, more sexy, head.....he's in for a big surprise when he finds out who she really is....part of me hopes he never finds out!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

me *raises hand* I want them to keep going....

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh god, the imagination runs wild....tongue, fingers, cock. more of all....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

he has no idea....oh this is going to be fun...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

so slow, such a tease....more, please!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh kay....I would love to feel a pierced tongue on my clit....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh you tease....lol!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh Edward, please make a move.....

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOL!  He thinks she does porn.....oh little does he know....I was right, too soo for lemons but not for fantasizing....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wouldn't call him a manwhore....most men are like this....just hope he's not a cheater. I don't like cheaters....will Bella return tonight?

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I bet Edward will be willing to make her scream....

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

lemons already?  I bet not, but could be wrong....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

26...I said mid 20's so I was very close!  An 8 year age difference is nothing!  Mutual attraction at first sight....nice!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

mid 20's would be my guess...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

still here. ok here we go. sad about charlie. love the ink idea...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love tattoos....have 2.  This will be interesting to watch....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 ok lets see....hot tattward....tattoo virgin Bella...hmmmm...what's not to like?

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so far, so good....I hope Bella gets what she thinks she wants....and then some...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

still reading....like that the chapters are short....makes it easy to catch up. Love snarky Bella....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey there, I haven't read one of yours lately and this looked fun.  I see you have started to pick up chapters again on it so I thought I'd take the chance to start now. Yes, she seems bratty, but hell what 18 year old isn't!  I really enjoy reading FF and count you as a favorite among authors.  See you again down the road!

Judy

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Jasper's reaction is very cute and can only be good for Alice in the long run....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Men!  Edward is very turned on at the sight of 2 woman having sex, even if it is simulated!  What man wouldn't be? I find it very amusing...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

loved the superhero roleplay!  I kind of know how Alice will react, but can't wait to see how you write it...Esme recognized her but I don't think Carlisle did....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Hot Bubblegum

what's up ?  I got 3 of chapter 66, one of which was called chapter 68, but they're all the same chapter

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Hot Bubblegum

I wonder what Tanya is up to, because it's clear she is up to something!  Why did she shoot Edward such a look, and why is she calling their relationship "first love" when she doesn't know a thing about them?  I don't trust her. I hope he is not cheating....

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923133
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ouch. that could be pleasurable if it was consensual, I guess, but since it was punishment then maybe not.  that was pretty brutal.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad I found you Wreck Room, and through it, all these lovely kinky stories you have written. I wonder how it is that I never came across you before in my travels through fan fic?  Oh well, I'm here now and loving this. Is it complete? It's not marked complete. Will you finish it? I know you're busy with publishing and all now, but please finish this....oh and tell me if Midnight Caller will have a sequel...please? I'll be a good girl...



Author's Response:

Ok, yes Midnight Caller will have a sequel, and yes I will complete this fic. Updating today!

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

thanks for the back story. on with the kink...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

yep, they are all crazy sadistic mutherfuckers....i hope one day they all get what's coming to them!  I don't suppose I can count on a HEA for this story, can I?



Author's Response:

of course u can count on one!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yeah, I don't much like Edward fucking Tanya, but I understand that he was imagining her to be Bella, so that mitigates it somewhat.....i know it's your story and you can do what you want....and boy, do you!  i can't wait for all the lecherous pervs to get what's coming to them....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

remember what i said about James last chapter? well double that now....then end part of the chapter was like a breath of fresh air! Like a cool breeze on a hot day!  I think I like Tanya a lot! Not to mention E and B making out for hours....he was so cute when he offered to help milk her breasts....she went right into the yes before she fell asleep....give me more of that!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I just want to carve up James, Aro, and Demetri into little chunks, but have them still alive while I feed them to sharks....is that a bad thing?  How dense is Edward that he didn't know Bella was feeling guilty for getting wet during James torture? Sheesh!!

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

God that was awful. James is truly hated....by me at least.....I seem to have a morbid fascination with the sadism and masochism in this story, god knows why...



Author's Response:

I know, people can't explain it :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi there, Noc!  I read your book, and while I'm waiting for the sequel (there WILL be one, won't there?) I thought I'd read this little ditty.  Ooh, Edward is a manwhore! I love it! But Bella with Emmett and Edward with Rosalie? Sorry, but that's just wrong! J/S....but I'm reading anyway cuz you write so well, so hot!  on to the next chapter...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yep, he's a manwhore alright....and a beautiful one at that! your a/ns are unique and I like 'em....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh oh....we aren't in Kansas anymore, Dorothy.....

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Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

pervy kidnappers....they don't want ransom as they made it look like everyone died.  i wonder what little gems of sexiness you are going to foist upon us.....i'm game!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well that was unexpected....sort of.  tanya is quite the bj artist, isn't she....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

well this is pretty twisted, but I find it interesting. I wonder if Emmett and Rosalie are really alive....and why does Aro call Bella Elizabeth? because of Edward's grandmother?  James is always a sadistic twit, isn't he?  this is my kind of story....but then I like all kinds....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

James is always one sick motherfucker.....

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Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aro's  house of kink!!  I must say this intrigues me and I can't wait for more! Where is Edward? 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

My sentiments exactly! Tanya is almost portrayed as a victim here.....and the surprise for me is an almost offhand mention that Rosalie is not dead!!  Does that mean that Emmett is alive too?  Thanks for giving more depth to this little tale with some back story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm so glad to hear they are alive! That gives me a ray of hope that B and E will make it out of that hell hole alive too!  Not unscathed, but alive....a very sick part of me is really enjoying this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

anal rape. ugh. i hope victoria heals up right and doesn't get septic or anything like that when she has to poop...

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Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward, poor Edward.....and Bella too....

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Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yeah, i was wondering the same thing last chapter....or was it the one before?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wearing them down, little by little. my fondest wish is for James to be fucked in the ass, dry, by the fattest cock around...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella still doesn't know how Edward feels about her. Hell, he doesn't even realize the extent of his feelings, I don't think....Good of Jasper to give B and E some alone time to talk....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ugh. James is vile and needs to be tortured to death....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

edward is catching on to the game. i hope he can make bella understand that. i want to rip aro and james' genitals off and stuff them down their throats until they choke to death slowly on them....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm glad Bella confided in Edward about what James was doing to her. She needn't be ashamed, it is not her fault! I'm glad they have an ally in Jasper.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

you can have Jasper. I'll keep Edward.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I read the first part. James needs to die. Plain and simple. Will I ever catch up to this story? Right now it's 70 chapters and still going. I'm not even half way....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I had to take a break from this story because, although I am drawn to it, it sometimes disturbs me.  I read all this chapter and can only hope that James and Demetri die in the most painful way imaginable someday....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So it must have been Jasper who called and told them Bella and Edward are alive...not that they believed it......finally some consensual, non rape sex.  Go Em and Rose!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

so the Edward and Bella part was fucking awesome, and even Bella and Tanya in the shower was nice,  but fuck just when I think James can't get any worse, he does!  I want to use an extra large fucking machine on his ass for 12 hours straight!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What a difference between the way Edward thought about women then and how he is now. I guess seeing the woman you love tortured will do that to a man. At least it did to him...... one side effect of Bella being forced sexually all this time is that she is used to getting wet almost involuntarily. Maybe she will become wet enough when Edward has to rape her on their wedding night that it won't hurt he so much when he tears her hymen....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Now this, the end part when Edward was fucking Victoria, was hot!  He found a way to both get Victoria off 3 times, making James look totally inadequate, and make James look like a total fool. I just hope James doesn't take that out on Bella.....

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324377
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown

Thanks for a new chapter!  I love that you're still working on this story what with all the other things going on for you now....She got the perfect dress and will be debuting at the Oscars. Then life will change drastically for her.....I fucking LOVE the caveman stuff from Edward....so erotic....and you tell it so well!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

OH, snap!!  That was one hell of a fun chapter!  I'm so glad to see the muse in full bloom again!  Maggie and Lauren will get everything they deserve, I'm sure!  I've missed your stories so much and look forward to the next chapters of all I'm following in addition to the publication of Breach!  Thanks for persevering here for us and for yourself!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer

I don't know how I didn't get notifications for this and the next chapter when you posted them, but I didn't. I just discovered today that chapter 28 was the last one I read, so I'm catching up today!  I'm happy to hear you're on the mend!  I love this story and was very happy to see in continuing.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our First Outing

well well well!  Edward likes Bella. Surprise, surprise!  Nice tour around Vegas, hand in hand.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Our First Date

that was fast! what's he up to?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Our Mess

really? oh come on now....let them stay married and work it out, won't you?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament

ok. well then....this is cute, funny, and a bit sexy.  Lemons coming?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home

no sex yet? damn...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

nice pictures of the house!  this is my favorite chapter yet! how often will you update?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

I really hate that they are moving apart like this.  I know it's part of the story and accept that but hopefully you are doing this in order to make each of them grow up a bit and realize what they have here in this relationship.....that is what I want to see anyway....I will keep reading anyway, but not until Tuesday as I am going to participate in the crazy BD2 stuff starting this afternoon.  I'll catch up when I get back....thanks for giving us your stories!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

Thanks for the update.  so sorry about your grandmother, my condolences. I love the way you write the sexy times.  they come in all sizes, shapes, and moods. Pun intended.  so glad we got to meet Emmett.  Good luck in the contest! see you next time!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

I'm glad to see this update in my inbox today!  I love this story!  Maggie needs to go away and get that she's lost any chance with Edward!  At least I hope she has....I was kind of disappointed that Bella wasn't pregnant but guess it's for the best....So the whole school knows about her "brothers" now, do they?  Wonder what repercussions that will have? 

I hope your book of Breach gets published soon. I am dying to own it!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

It was very sweet to see Bella catching up with her friend, Eric.  It was also hard to believe that Edward would be so accommodating to them, but I guess when you love someone, that comes naturally.  I wonder who the traitor is that keeps letting Maggie into the house?  It's depressing to think that Edward has a close household person who would do that.....missed my lemons but I know they'll be back...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

I'm so sad....I do understand her insecurities, I mean he won't acknowledge her in public, he hasn't said he loves her, Maggie keep feeding her insecurities, he hides her away, and all this he can justify. Now maybe he will see how he really feels with her gone. Now maybe she will gain a measure of self worth, a quality that all his actions hasn't helped in her....I am really rooting for them to make it....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

I'm sort of glad he is suffering too. Now maybe he will see what his insensitivity and selfishness did to her.  Grovel, Edward....I really do hope they work it out!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

I'm so glad you chose to take the story in this direction!  I love that Edward came to get her. Lets see now if he makes good on  him promises! I can't wait to see him kick Maggie to the curb and how he accomplishes it!  You are currently juggling lots of stories and I, for one, am very glad to see an update on this one! Happy Holidays!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - His Parents

So great to get a new chapter!  And...I'm very eagerly awaiting the release of Breach!  Carlisle is every bad thing that Edward ever said about him and more! To talk about Bella in front of her in that way just smacked of giant assoholic behavior. I did, however, feel badly for  his mom. I think she deserves a chance to at least see her son once more, but I guess that is up to him.  Just wait until Bella's classmates find out that she is Edward's wife, not sister!!!!  Oh, man, they are going to just freak about her talent. Now they assume she inherited it by being a Cullen. They will find out that it is hers alone. That will make them feel even more inferior to her.....Our Bella just shines and I can't wait for the world to find out she is married to that sexy movie God, not his sister!!  And....good riddance to Maggie and Lauren! I hope that's the last we see of them but suspect maybe it's not...I love this story, can't wait for it to be finished so I can own it on my Kindle as a completed story...that's OK, isn't it?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

Fabulous!  Now the world knows. All is right with the Universe!  Nice touch bringing Ben Affleck and Argo into the mix!

I really enjoy your work and hope all is going better for you now....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

That was pretty rough....I'm glad Embry was there too!  Thanks for giving us a new chapter on this lovely story. I know you're busy with all the OF stuff you have going on, but thanks for now letting us FF girls down!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

So nice to get a new chapter from you....I appreciate it tremendously. I have followed and loved this story from the very beginning....

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

this story has morphed so much from it's start. i hardly recognize it anymore. i love edward and bella together and now think that is not where this is going....i will still read until the end.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

you know I'm rooting for Edward and Bella, I always do, but here he seems too fucked up and Jasper is the more loving choice. Why doesn't that sit well with me? Bella and Jasper? no. just sounds wrong.



Author's Response:

If you let go of their original incantantions as Stephenie's characters, it might be easier to let the idea sink in...hehe.  They all still have some sorting out to do, but at this point I can say that yes, this is a Jasper/Bella fic.

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

this story has taken turns that I'm not sure I want to go along with. I won't drop a story mid-stream and will finish it but don't like Bella with Jasper. Sorry. This meeting up of Edward and Alec seems interesting....where will that take us!  I will read on....



Author's Response:

Well thank you for deciding to stick with it, but yes, as I warned a few chapters back, I like to mix up pairings and I knew from the start that this wasn't going to be an E/B story... though I promise everyone(characters) will be happy by the end.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

still reading....hope you do finish this as I have been reading since the beginning.....sorry but I'm still a B & E fan.....I am very much enjoying this even though it is ending up in a much different place than where it started....

Summary:

Elizabeth is bought from her father to be Aro's bride. She is kept prisoner in his home and has to endure unspeakable torture. This is an out take for Involuntary Rapture.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9621 Read Count: 5260
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jun 2012
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Elizabeth's Story

I wonder how many times things like this went on in real life, both years ago, and maybe even now.  I think this stuff, or things similar, go on much more regularly than people think.  This was a brutal chapter, this outtake, but it explains how Aro came to be who he was and what he was like. I'm so glad that Anthony came to get Elizabeth and that they made a good life together. Now back to the other story....

Summary:

"It's amazing how someone can break your heart and yet you still love them with every last piece." Warning: Angst and issues of infidelity. Written for the Driven to Desire Challenge.  A/J


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12119 Read Count: 393
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very sad.....I wonder what story you meant this to be a spin off of....I can't imagine that Jasper would do this to her and wonder what the resolution is....