Reviews by jeanineandjaida
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I love this story however what i don't understand is if edward is falling in love with bella how could he treat her in the manner of a spoilt brat when she wanted to orgasism as often as possible. I get that he didn't want her spoiled but what he did to her in that scene to me did not represent love.....rather callous......even if he has rules in his playroom......how could he treat her like that if she is unaware of what her actions may mean? How does he figure out to claim her orgasisms when he is not her dominant? He seems to be making the rules up as he goes along and that is not safe maybe safe and consensual but not safe. I understand that she wants to play in the playroom as their scheduled usual but to me he seems to constantly go into being a dominant......and what i don't understand is how is she supposed to know the rules if he keeps withholding them and then changing them to suit him....

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

love your version of tying events together...i can't wait to see how you unfold the rest of the story....when will the people after bella be put away for stalking and conspiracy......bella's ex husband is a jerk....i love your story....thank you for making time to create more suspense.

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hi Louise,

 

I love your story.....ditr.......when can we expect an update....i miss them and your version of lemons.....lol.....

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389603
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

love this story......i hope you got over your writer's block.....can't wait to see what happens with Marcus......and the mystery POV.....I think is Marcus.....

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

it's good and interesting every time but i want more....damn what are they going to do get married or have a fight damn it needs some action....i still love the story.......



Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

love the teaser thank you and sometimes this edward is just a little shit....if my boyfriend did that to me....damn...i don't know what I would do....but what she is into I am not by any means.....but the dynamics of their relationship that you have developed is truly awesome and I hope that you one day will publish some of your writing aside from Twilight....love the fanfic but love some of the other stories that have developed...thank you for your update...TRULY AMAZING....

 

Jeanine

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

this is the same chapter from two weeks ago....love it anyway....more pls.....god will they get married shit I would like to see some progression....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491592
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

oh god what a place to leave the story.....damn....i want more pls....i love ur imagination and twists.....excited to see what is next......damn don't need to ask for more lemons.....hehehe...love it.....

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923133
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

God this story is scary...Aro, James, Demetri, Victoria I hope Edward, Bella, Tanya, Jasper, and Alice get them and get them good....along with the Swan and Cullen family.... 

Author's Response:

I hope you write for the alernate ending thing I have planned. :)

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

good now we are getting some where with the original characters....i like emmett, esme, and carlisle.....god i hope there life changes drastically....it will be about time...they deserve it....normalcy would be nice and also edward is in love with bella and that is great.....

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65

got to love jasper.....damn he's funny......what is it about edward, he truly wants to be bella's hero.....and not the selfish man he was.   

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

god I am so glad edward is coming home....boy is he ever in for a surprise when he realizes that Bella did not have an abortion....I just wish that Carlisle or Edward would kill Aro and James and any other sob from that island or who came to get Aro's advice or guidance.

 

thank you for an update...



Author's Response:

Oh, there is a plan in place. Who do you think has Aro???? It sure isn't Stefan. :)

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think he is with James and I think he is with Caius...I think that is his name. The man that brought Bree to the island. god what is Rosalie had Aro just to try to keep Edward and Bella away from each other....



Author's Response:

I'm super confused... ok, Aro and James could be together... The man that brought Bree to the island was Peter (i'm pretty sure). He could have Aro. He'd be pissed though... no Bree, no baby... wouldn't want to be Aro. Why would Rosalie want to keep Edward and Bella from each other? She's in love with Emmett.

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

damn James is getting what he deserves......aro and james treated edward and bella like farm animals.....that scene where bella had to walk on all fours with james or demetri I don't remember ex

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Where there is love

there needs to b a sequel....i love this couple.....more pls....the lemons are fantastic

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717323
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

i really like this story....thank u.....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a single father and a police officer in Rock Island, Il. His new neighbor is his boss, Mike. What happens when Edward thinks Mike is beating his wife, Bella? Can Edward help save Bella? Does Bella need to be saved? Written for Jess2002, happy birthday to our friend. AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66334 Read Count: 26445
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 19 Jul 2013
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

god what a reality check.....how edward's life seems like something i went through as a child....

A Healing Touch by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Roughly six months after Bella and Edward meet at Cook County Hospital, their relationship is moving along and life couldn’t be better. However, one frightened child, two parents, one doctor and one nurse are presented with an illness that baffles them all. What will happen and will our favorite doctor and nurse be able to figure out the medical mystery before it’s too late?

Written for Fandom4LLS

Outtake for A Prescription for Love 

A Healing Touch


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9012 Read Count: 3444
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Aug 2013
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwww....that is so cute of Maggie but I want to see them have children and their lives together please.....I want to see how Bella deals with her father's situation and the HEA of edward and bella.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

god that was f**king hot....thank you.....I love their relationship......the way she deals with Lizzy was amazing....and for Lizzy to want to go to her Aunt is so cool.....not only but bella understood immediately....fantasy is niiiiice.....thank you for that visual....i love the different perspectives and layers of the characters and their relationships it is like i can picture the scenes and conversations....

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow what a chapter....I usually don't review but this chapter is the end of something new and can be wonderful for Edward......he finally got he's revenge and what a reward.....To be able to love his family without any strings.....painful strings to hinder his life.....if only real life was like that.....

This really would make a great ending!!!!

This Edward and Sam I like after all the animosity between those two and Sam giving him a pass, I would assume that Sam knows the reason for all the pain and anguish that Edward went through....

KIdnapping Bella, for Dimitri and Eddie was the beginning to the end....there is now bigger pain for anyone to have their family almost taken and the only relief is to kill them......and for Sam to acknowledge that was a heck of a closure for Edward.....He would be happy in his life now and be the mob boss we all know and love....lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

i have enjoyed this story and hopefully there will be a sequel as I want to hear about what has happened to Charlie just to verify he gets everything he deserves....also for making me aware of how child sex slavery is very real here and other countries.....

 

Jeanine

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 20 Part 10

Truly enjoy your  work..

Look forward to more

 

Jeanine