Reviews by Alexsgirl311
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Big berthas bitch!!! Hahahaha I lost it:) very funny

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

I just wanted to let you know that i think you are a beautiful writer, the story just pulls me in and I can just feel the emotion of everything. I love to read and honestly your writing is better than a lot of published writers. I love Emmett in your story... He is a breath of fresh air and a comical relief to her sadness. His comments do get me sometimes and I find myself laughing out loud. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story and that it is from Edwards point of view! I love that and I found sm version a little lacking in the characters. I have honestly enjoyed what the people on this site do with her character more than she did herself... But a big thanks to sm for creating tanthony that sites like this let people get more creative:) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Em.  I think he is what keeps the story from being depressive and overly angsty.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story but... I did think the end chapters were rushed. The comments in the end notes saying that you were trying to just get it done really showed in your writing. The rest of the story and it's progression was believable but the whole James scene, then the rushed barely one and a half chapter marriage/honeymoon part and then the Voltera part... Seemed like you were just ready for this story to be over and I was a little disappointed because up until then I thought your writing was a breath of fresh air with all of your details and realistic timing. Very good job with the whole thing, I just wished the last part would have had as much effort put into it as the beginning. Keep writing because your awesome! :)



Author's Response:

I love your review.   I really do and I agree with most of it.  It wasn't that I was ushed to get it done it was that anytime I tried to add filler and fluff it sounded horrible to me so that made all the rest become rushed.   I really hate how the end worked bcause I don't think it flowed well.  Sorry to disapoint.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

The writing in this chapter seemed different to me. All of the other chapter were more sophisticated and this chapter seemed like the wording was more a teen.

Edward is kind of getting on nerves but i still love this story and cant wait for more chapters:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Proof

You are a really great writer and you have had me actually laughing out loud at some parts! And your lemon scenes, HOT! Please write more stories! :)

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

Way too long between updates. I want to know what happens but weeks between is too much and if i didnt have this story saved in my bookmarks i would totally forget about it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Silent Lucidity

Wow i got to say i was disappointed with the act... had high hopes thay it was going to be hot but it was rushed and didnt have any spark

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923133
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

not happy!! i didnt realize i had caught up already!!! when i got to the end and saw there was no next to click on i said out loud, aww are you f*****g kidding me! hehe and kind of woke my husband a little bit:) eek i so want this update to come fast! i am loving the sweetness that has entered the story. At first i was like this is truly sick and i wasnt going to read more but i was strangly intrigued and couldnt stop. i just kept thinking after all this build up when they finally get together it is going to be AMAZING! update fast please



Author's Response:

Awwww sorry u ran out! We've all been working hard on the next chapter. I opened it up to everyone in the wreck room. I guess ur not in there cause they've been helping me :)