Loved the Elizabeth chapters just read them and this. Oh Edward! He's so frustrating at times! He can't bail on Bella and the babies that would be such a crappy result after everything they have been through. I hope they talk and sort it out they love one another!! So relieved they are finally off that island and getting medical attention.  They are all gonna need a whole lot of counselling on top of that I'd reckon!! I don't know why but I have a bad feeling about the future of Tanya. I am also hoping that as well as Edward and Bella sorting out their heads together that the situation about them and Emmett and Rose comes out and is all ok quickly. I think it time everyone started spilling their guts tbh! lol

Another good chapter! OMG I can't believe Tanya talk about foot in mouth in more than one way! She knows how Bella and Edward feel about each other then starts talking to Bella about how much Edward loves blow jobs like she is going to want to think about Tanya doing that with him!! That came across as so insensitive. Ok good now she's pregnant so that gives them more space to breathe doesn't it? Or will James now demand he be allowed to fuck Bella? Now they have to plan how they are getting off that bloody island I don't even want to think about what will happen to the baby if its born there :-(  I have very violent thoughts about what I would do to those men before I left that island. Thing is you don't know how you would react in an extremely stressful and strange situation but while I am comfortable and safe in my home typing this I am thinking there would be a lot of blood and appendages hanging by a thread at my hands and slow painful deaths!! loL!! You said I could pm you to get a spoiler on the conception date and I would love to pm you Noc but that function is disabled on here - something about abused facility which is sad for the people that wouldn't abuse it. So how can I do that?

Its seems its all going quite well so far for them considering what they have been through. It's nice to read. I'm sad and pissed for Bella and I started off feeling a little of understanding for Edward and how he felt unsure of how things would be in the real world but he just assumes too much and acts on it. Doesn't stop to ask and communicate. He just comes across as a coward to me now and someone that is running away and using some shit he knows nothing about as an excuse.  I hope Bella makes him work hard to earn her trust again as she is going to think he will just run off at the first hurdle again. 

I am glad the consummation ceremony didn't feel dragged out when reading it I felt sick for Bella and Edward about that part. Poor Edward, he doesn't realise that all Bella needs is his reassurance and comfort.

I have been reading this for a while but this is my first review (shame faced admission) this has me gripped, its so twisted and messed up that its compulsive viewing, its so disturbing that you just have to know what happens next!

There weren’t words to describe how I felt at that moment, joined as one, knowing that he’d done something with me that he’d never done with anyone else, and that at this exact moment, we could be creating life from our love.

I am happy for Bella that her first time was a good experience esp in the circumstances but after reading this sentence which reminds you that they are in love with one another and would likely love a baby they make together I can't imagine the stress they will feel if she does become pregnant in that place, I am really hoping they escape before their baby is born if they make one :-/

Abuse breeds abuse I guess. Doesn't make me feel any sympathy for him. Physically he is dishing out the same and sometimes worse than he has suffered imo.
I guess the difference is he loved his abuser. Still no excuse.

I won't pm you Noc re my thoughts about whats in the real world for Edward and Bella because I have been reading this for months and months and been enjoying
it as its been updated. I will carry on being patient and read it as you post it rather than you give me any idea of what they will face. I can't wait to
see how it all unfolds and ends! It's such an addictive story!

I have loved this story to but I have to agree entirely with jess641 I think there needs to be more about what is going on with Edward and Bella as the story was mostly focused on them before they escaped. I am also frustrated and angry at both Edward and Bella for the way they are both behaving. Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass and start acting with his brain and not his ego and Bella needs to toughen up and not let Edward abandon her the way he has based on his assumptions!! Because of this I didn't feel happy for Alice and Jasper as I probably would have if something more pro active was happening between E&B as I am so frustrated about them!! And although Tanya has suffered and moved over to the side of E&B and A&J I can't believe E&B forgave her so easily for getting them to that island in the first place. Still I am sticking with this to the end its been one amazing ride but I am just frustrated with it at the moment but patience was never my strength.

Yay, glad Edward kicked Laurent's ass and Bella is ok!  Aww, I wondered if a baby was on the way when she was feeling faint when she stood up in the bath. So pleased for Edward as Bella will happily have his baby, not like that evil Kate.Can't wait for more - love this story :)

I have just read your Across the Hall story since I typed my last review (pretty fast reader) - thats a great story too! Great writing!

I have been reading this story and absolutely loving it over all other stories lately, its been exciting and well written, but I now feel fed up with it because I have come to the realisation from this bar scene that Edward really is just a typical bloke that thinks with his knob! I was under the mistaken impression that he really was feeling something that he had never felt before for Bella, but I think its his dick thinking as his reaction to that Blonde was a real eye opener. He really seemed more interested in being with her and spilling his woes to her but grudgingly trudges up the stairs to Bella then only reacting to her again because she is naked in the bed. Its just a sex thing for him, whereas for Bella I think she really has fallen for him and is going to be hurt badly, just like Rose said. Shame I was hoping this was going to have a HEA ending :(

Oh man, I seriously want to bang their heads together now! I am a Cambridge England Woman, born and bred - love that my home town is in this story and yep gotta get the pronunciation right :)

Sounds to me that he's still contemplating having some sort of personal thing go on with Jane, probably to try to get him over Bella (never works) and kissing is still cheating. I just want to hug Bella after what he has put her through, that said I am fairly frustrated with them both tho I must admit. He is so selfish that he had to assault James to make himself feel better cos what good will that do Bella? S'pose maybe it might protect other girls from him?Thanks for updating so regularly, I am addicted to this one!

I have loved this story! Its been so good all the way through. Can't wait for the last chapter but don't want it to end! Love that Cambridge was in your story too, its my hometown and was born here. Varsity is nice, been there for a wedding reception. Will we get a glimpse into their future in an epilogue?

I have just discovered this story in the last few days although was sceptical with how disturbing the behaviour between Edward and Bella is in the beginning  I am now addicted. It's a really good story. I hope more give it a chance and read it, its totally worth sticking with!

Great story! I look forward to the updates, so keep going :)

reading few of your stories at the mo, they are great esp this one. I just wish they would be a bit quicker about acting on their feelings! I'm impatient! lol :)