Reviews by ellaryne
Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i bet alice was watching them

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

love it and can't wait for more. now edward better keep an eye on bella because james might try something

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

i do like a good cliffy every once and a while but hurry it up!!! lol!!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

everything looks good and can't wait fro more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

love it and i think that she should make emmett worry about what she is going to do

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

love it and how nervous edward was in asking bella to ride with him

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

oh my

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

i think it is jacob

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

love it and i can't find the forum for this story



Author's Response:

If you click on the coffee cup under the banners for this story it's linked to the forum for this story.  If you want to go directly into it, login to the forums, click on Twilight under the Fanfiction section.  From there click on All Human and then the NC-17 secition.  Lonesome Hearts is the first entry under the forums there.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

you better not kill my emmy bear

 

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

love it and the end of the chapter was so funny

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

love it and can't wait to see what her gift is

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

love it and wished that i had a black horse

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

perfect

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

i would to have an outtake about bella's thoughts about what emmett was saying. that would be funny

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

never saw that happening

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

that was funny between edward and emmett

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

perfect

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

love it and i wonder who was watching them

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

oh shit didn't see that one happening

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

see her worrying was for nothing

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

YEAH!!!! he is gonna ask her

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

very funny jasper running from little alice. can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

if i was edward i would have killed emmett for jumping the gun but i love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

i want more right now

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

you have me on the edge of my seat. can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

love it and can't wait for edward to kick james's ass

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

love the idea of alice helping out

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

james is one sick puppy

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

i want more right now

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

wow carmen was rude

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

love it and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

yes it has and i can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

love jenks

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

i missed this story because i was moving and was getting cable set back up and that took a week

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

love this bella alot

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

what a cliffy? now i want more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

love it and cant wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

lmao  big time

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

love it and the ending was funny

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

don't worry about posting. congrats on passing. just can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

perfect cant wait for the sequel

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so sad



Author's Response:

The first chapter is very sad... Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

that nurse was a bitch but edward was nice



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I don't know that I could write a mean Edward! :)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i really love this edward



Author's Response:

Me too! :) Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i really love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Also, thank you for your review!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i think that it is victoria



Author's Response:

Yes, it is. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

love it and edward against a car is yummy

 



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more! :)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

perfect



Author's Response:

;) Thank you!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

you can't end it there. update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I'm so sorry for the delay in updates! I'll be posting the next few chapters here soon!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

so sad



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. It was sad... There were a lot of parts of this story that were hard to write!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

so cute to see him with her



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review... I love the Edward/Abby scenes!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yeah love it



Author's Response:

Sigh... me too. :) Thank you for another review!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

loved his thoughts on what happened



Author's Response:

Yeah, he wouldn't shut up so I had to write something for him! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Epilogue

what did they have?



Author's Response:

A boy! Thank you for the review... I hope you enjoyed the story!

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238934
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love it and cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Glad you enjoyed it!

I should have the next chapter finished much sooner.

Thanks again for reading / commenting.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love the idea



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Makes me happeh that you like!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

Glad you are enjoying this story!

Summary:

Here are some outtakes that I promised for my story Lonesome Hearts.  Please refer to that story first!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3033 Read Count: 1203
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Drunken Cowboys

love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

MFBR Banner

28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61968
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Tanya is a bitch and deserves more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

it's perfect and jake is stupid for not getting what she was saying

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

love it so much

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

love it and how much edward has changed

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

Go Edward for puking on tanya's face

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

love it

Summary:

stories/16321/images/untamed_Hearts.JPG

Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

just can't wait to see where you take this

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wonder what he is goning to do

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

wlb


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159905
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so sweet

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i dont think that i could ever make that choice. love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

love it