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I'm a Fan Fiction Addict who adores the genre's of Twilight, Harry Potter and Mortal Instruments. I love canon and non canon pairings for Twilight and Harry Potter as well as canon for Mortal Instruments. My favorite non canon pairings are Bella/Jasper, Bella/Caius for Twilight and Hermione/Draco for Harry Potter!!! It's hard to find stories about Bella/Jasper and Bell/Caius. With Harry Potter there are many, many Hermione/Draco or Dramione stories and I love reading them. I also love reading Erotica when I can find it and the pairings are my favorite ones.
I'm a retired/ Senior Internal Auditor and I have tons (28 years to be exact) of professional writing experience. I only wish more imagination so I could author some stores of my own. However, my writing experience makes me an excellent Beta and I do an excellent job when making suggestions to enhance the story or provide assistance with flow and detail when writing erotica or BDSM scenes.
I have several hobbies such as reading, making jewelry, sewing, gardening and spending time on the beach in any season. I love them all!!!! I also have plans to study piano and take up drawing and painting again after I take some classes in technique and style.
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I'm a late joiner to the story. I am also familiar with abusive behaviors. Everything you've shared is very realistic. You are an execellent writer and I have truly enjoyed reading it. I hope you do a sequel. Great job with the characters.
A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 33358
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
What an incredibly beautiful story. Kudos upon kudos for writing it. You should've had many more reviews than you had. Thank you so much!!!!!
2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST
COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.
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REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167582
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: A Labor of Love
Something is wrong. I cannot get to the last chapter. Four is posted twice. It is a heart breaking story and beautifully done. Does it really end here?
Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129687
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Outtake
Absolutely incredible story!!!! Loved it. Thanks for writing it. Ten's for every chapter!!!
She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159843
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Don't break my heart for to long, please. Great story. See you next time.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
BB,
This story has grabbed my heart and won't let go. It is simply amazing.
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Please don't give up on this story. Excellent chapter.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
I am so glad to see this posting even if I cry with every chapter I read. Thank you.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue
I cried every chapter. Awesome read!!!!
"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic.
Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard
Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.
Beta'd by aeglow
Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672036
Date: 09 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella
I was thinking about you and your amazing stories. So, I decided to read this one again. It's just as awesome as the first one around!!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella
I was thinking about you and your amazing stories. So, I decided to read this one again. It's just as awesome as the first one around!!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella
I was thinking about you and your amazing stories. So, I decided to read this one again. It's just as awesome as the first one around!!!!
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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!
Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?
Rating for future content.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Visiting
I am so happy to read a new chapter of this wonderful story and so sad to hear of your serious illness. I pray you get some relief, soon. Take care and God bless you.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Birthing
I am so happy to have a wonderful new chapter to read. It was really good as well as sexy despite the cliffhanger.
I do hope you get some pain releif soon. My condolences on the loss of your Nannie.
Quiet Storm Sequel.
How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.
Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward.
Edward/Bella.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532819
Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two
Oh how the plot thickens. I do hope Bella get a real parent out this situation. I am late to joinyoyr fan base. You are incredible writer. Double thnks for tow chapters this week. I really look forward to Wednesdays.
Date: 14 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only
Excellent chapter. My thoughts are all over the place. I hope this doesn't mean someone is goong to whack Bella. Looking forward to your next updatee. I hope you will have good things happen to you yours.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
More beach please. This adventure is fun and also very insightfull looks into their innermost thoughts. Loving it always.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do
I really got a kick about this chapter from Sonny's POV. It was too much fun!!! As ever, I'm loving the story.
Date: 21 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit
I thought this chapter was a lovely reprieve from all the pain and suffering the Cullen's have experienced!!!!
I love it when you rite about the children (All of them.), Bella, Edward, Carlisle, Grandpa, Nanny and Edward's men in a family environment!!!
Your writing is realistic, gutsy and totally incredible. I hope you've taken advantage of blocking whomever you can from PM's and guest reviews. I've asked before because you dropped out of sight f you were okay and well and I think of you every time I come across a good Mafia FF. The way some of these idiots carry on you'd think they never heard of the Godfather and read the book or watched the movie.
God Bless You Sweet Lady!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
Dumbasses!!!! I don't think some of your readers comprehend the English language in any way shape or form!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later
It's awesome!!!!!! It's also scary and intense!!! I think Edward would be lost or dead without his Bella!!!
Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 The Letter
I am so happy he still loves her. Ithought how you handled the last chapter was perfect. I hope RL gives you time to write. I love all your stories and I really appreciate all your efforts.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 Approval
Amazing chapter! Looking forward to the next update.
Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 : Shattered Comfort
Please end their misery. You keep breaking my heart. I hope tgungs get better soon. It's a great story. Well done.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different
Still reading. Still enjoying your updates. Lovethe story and thanks for writing it. Don't give up on it.
A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: VIP party
Very interesting chapter. Execellent writing skills. Please update sooner rather than later.
Jasper missed his chance in college, but when Bella and Edward's marriage falls apart 15 years later and he helps pick up the pieces, will Jasper finally get the chance at happiness he always longed for? J&B Eventually. Fair warning, this is major heartfail in the beginning, but will end up with a typical ACW ending.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42200 Read Count: 16464
Date: 12 May 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue
This story was a perfect ten from beginning to the last word of this story!!!!!
Thank you so much for writing it and leaving it for people like me to read!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue
I'm so glad there life turned out so beautifully. They deserved the life they had made for themselves. I know you wrote his story long ago and are published author so I'm happy you left it here for someone like myself to find!!!
The doctors at this busy, New York hospital all have the same goals; saving lives, setting the on-call rooms on fire, and maybe, falling in love? Grey's Anatomy concept with Twilight character twist. Canon Couples. Rated: M - Romance/Humor - Bella/Edward
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199786 Read Count: 177641
Date: 16 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I totally understand why Bella doesn't any to be involved with her Resident!!!
They were both a bit adorable!!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I totally understand why Bella doesn't any to be involved with her Resident!!!
They were both a bit adorable!!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I totally understand why Bella doesn't any to be involved with her Resident!!!
They were both a bit adorable!!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I totally understand why Bella doesn't any to be involved with her Resident!!!
They were both a bit adorable!!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
It's a fun and funny chapter!!!! Edward is in deep trouble with his attraction to Bella!!! You're adorable together!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
It's a fun and funny chapter!!!! Edward is in deep trouble with his attraction to Bella!!! You're adorable together!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
It's a fun and funny chapter!!!! Edward is in deep trouble with his attraction to Bella!!! You're adorable together!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
They're so cute and adorable!!!!!!! Neither one of them knows which end up!!!!!!Excellent chapter!!!!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I read this story several years ago and reading it again was just as wonderful as the first time!!! It's an interesting, realistic, extremely funny and erotic story!!!!!! You really rocked it!!!! I've always loved your Jasper characterizations and I loved the "Mallet" in this one!!!
You've not written anything in a long time so I hope all is well and healthy for you and yours. You're an amazing writer if you've gone pro then I'd love to know so I could check it out and buy what you've written!!!!!
Take Care I love you for writing Fan Fiction!!!!
As it was the first time, AHDN's is still an incredibly excellent read!!!!
Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir. Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.
Banner by Rosalynn
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
This story is so exciting, treacherous, loving and beautiful. I do wish it updated more often. I am so grateful you are writing it.
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
You're breaking my heart. Please let this nightmare end soon. The plot is incredible. I wish to on to solving the mystery and clearing Edward. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Outstanding chapter!!! As ever, it was well written. Thank you.
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
You're breaking my heart. I hope you update sooner rather than later. As ever, excellent writing.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue
I am so sad to see this story which is really a book end. It is beautifully written. It isan incredible love story with lots of excitment. I hope you some future takes to show how the children's lives progess and the King & Queen enjoy or are challlenged by their retirement. I really hate to see it end. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great begining. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Another ten. Wonderful first meeting and rescue.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
They keep getting better and better.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Interesting chapter as the plot thickens. Edward's gentleness and care are so like the original one. Excellent job catching the essence of Edward Cullen.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I really liked the end of this chapter. Excellent as ever.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
So they are married an the deed is done. Greatjob writing it.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Another wonderful chapter. It is no wonder I look foward to updates. Keep up the great work. Awesome plot so far.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Exciting news. It is another great chapter and the thickens. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
What a surprise. Miss Spitfire, Alice took issues imto her own hands and married her true love in the process. Exciting stuff.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Outtakes Part 1
I am so glad you are writing outtakes. These were wonderful. I was glad to hear you have your power an heat restored. My family did well this time. In Eastern VA and NC it can be tough when power can be out for a couple weeks after a big storm.
'That which does not kill us, only makes us stronger', at least that's what they say. Bella and Edward meet as children while on vacation with their families. A lifetime of summers follow, and their relationship is tested beyond its strength. Follow their story through the years as they come to learn that each day spent with someone we love is a gift not to be taken lightly, but to be cherished forever.
Thank you to Coleen561 for the lovely banner!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94085 Read Count: 9100
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I knew it was Chincoteage as soon as I saw the picture. I am a native Virginian. The story has an unusual beginning. I'm looking forward to the next one. By the way my brother owns a farm in Waverly butt does not live there. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: I live in Virginia and love Chincoteague. I also like the little town of Waverly very much. I'm so glad you like the story! more to come soon!
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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for. She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given. Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him. Can an uneducated Bella teach him something? What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263178
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: New Job
I don't always review stories I read. This one is so special to me that I have to tell you how wonderful it os. Happy writing.
Author's Response:
LBD~ Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. We also want to send oyu a special thank you for reviewing since you often don't. Your reviews and everyone we get mean the world to both Nikky and I, so Thank YOU. We are both extremely proud and excited at the response this story continues to garner. Thank you for being one of those who leave us some love. To heed off a bunch of extra questions, we want to be clear that all three of them (Bella, Seth, and Leah) have birth certificates, social security cards, and were born in hospitals. Bella lived with her birth mother for a while (more will come about this soon), then she went to live with her father and step mom (cough.. MONSTER). Bella does not know anything about her actual information; she has been kept ignorant for MANY reasons. Bella does however have all the needed info for the kids, a part of that is because of Zafrina and Aro assisting her in getting the needed paperwork found. As for Edward, you will continue to see the changes she causes in him, and at least they are for the better. Thanks for the story love and we look forward to hearing from you again!
Kasi (& Nikky)
Here is the teaser for chapter 8… Subject to changes during BETA process… of course.
I shake my head. “We are fine Isabella, you can return to what you were doing.” She gives me a nod, turns, and walks away.
“So that the famous Isabella then?” I can’t tell by his face what he is thinking.
“Yeah, that is her, so first thoughts?”
He lets out a sigh and rubs his head. “She’s what, twenty-four?”
I nod my head. “Well, in three weeks she will be.”
He walks with me towards my kitchen. “Well, she sure is small and not just in height. She looks like she has missed some essential nutrients over the years. She’s very pale and the dark coloring under her eyes would lead me to believe that she doesn’t sleep much and she looks to be extremely tired. Her pupils show that she needs more Calcium, and Iron. She also looks to you for permission to call me Jazz. She seems to be unsure of what she is, and isn’t allowed to do.” He stops talking while pouring himself a drink. I pull at my hair having not learned anything new about her.
I make us lunch as we continue to chat some more, but not about the topic I want to discuss, Isabella. I make some extra food for her on the off chance that she hasn’t eaten anything yet. After what I saw at the mall and what Jazz just confirmed, I assume she more than likely has skipped lunch. I decide to make up some sandwiches to go with the soup I am making. I can’t decide on what kind to make, so I make four different kinds. Everything is done, and I carry the covered pot of soup to the table.
“Isa. . . Ouch, what the fuck, Jazz?” I ask rubbing my head where Jasper just slapped me.
“She is not your pet, Edward.”
I glare at him. “Jasper, I know that, I was just. . .”
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background
Wonderful chapter. Learning more about lsabella's past was very sad. However, there were some very happy, sweet and loving things in the chapter to balance it out. As ever, I look foward toyour next update. I just wish they were more frequent. One can dream!p
Author's Response:
Thank you once again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. As you can see Edward’s view is changing and for the most part it is better. His time at Aro’s will take a drastic downward spiral soon, once he realizes that without thinking of Bella he is rendered unable to perform. He will struggle with this mentally, and as you will see from the below teaser he will finally seek some assistance. A lot of you are worried over his reaction to her age, and how soon that will all unfold. I don’t want to spoil it for anyone, but I will say that you will all want to be sure to read chapters 17 and 18 rather closely. Jess2002 who has been on board for discussions since the beginning ideas of this story said to tell you that in her opinion chapter 11, will be over-shadowed by chapters 12, 13, and 14. There are some really great chapters coming up here and according to what I am hearing from the pre-readers they will make the story even better. There are also a lot of questions coming in about Charlie and Sue Swan. First Charlie Swan will most certainly not be making a show in this story, he is dead. His death is what sent Sue into premature labor. Second, eventually even if just for court, Sue Swan will make an appearance. There are a lot of people in this story that will bring drama to the surface, and there is a lot of story yet to come. Thank you for your continued support in us and our story. We hope to hear more from you again soon. We will be right around 30 to 35 chapters when complete. See you next Thursday.
Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 12 teaser…subject to changes during Beta Process.
Jasper sets the bag he carried down, and lets out another sigh. “Edward, as your friend I am here if you need to talk. As a psychologist, I strongly recommend that you talk to someone soon. Edward, I do mean soon, because you’re not helping anyone by getting so worked up. What just happened is a form of an anxiety attack. Your fear almost caused you to have another panic attack. They are not just going to go away. You need to talk to someone to help deal with it.”
I look at him, then close my eyes and pinch the bridge of my nose. “You can’t help her if you stay on this path, Edward. She needs to talk to someone too. Just think of how you would feel if she doesn’t talk to someone. What if it was her who keeps putting it off, and you have to watch her slowly lose it and get closer and closer to the edge.”
I nod my head at him, fuck I would drag her to see someone if I have too. “Make me an appointment, for at night not during the day. Just let me know when it is, I will be there.”
Jasper nods his head at me. “Have a good night, Edward.” My head rests against the door after Jasper leaves. I feel the restriction in my chest, the sharp pain, shortness of my breaths and my heart is pounding. What is fucking wrong with me, I can’t believe I get myself so worked up about Bella, but fuck I am so fucking glad that was not why he was here. It doesn’t mean that she is okay. She could be lying hurt in the fucking park all beaten and broken. Well, more broken than what she is. Fuck, don’t think like that. Zafrina would have called me by now. Bella is fine. She is at home in bed. I’ll get to see her tomorrow; when I drop off the bags of clothes. If she is all right, that is. She didn’t go to the police the last time. Maybe they went after her again, knowing she is an easy target. God only knows if it has happened before. Just because she went home, doesn’t mean that she’s okay. Anything could have happened. Fuck, it is after midnight, it’s not like I can go over there and knock on the door. I just want to check on her, but if I go over there she will think I am nuts.
I pace my floor pulling at my hair. I should call her. I would know by the sound of her voice if she okay or not. Fuck, I can’t call her at this time of night. Why in the fuck can’t she just take the fucking bus, instead of walk? You know what, just fucking call her. Fuck!
I pick up my phone and dial her number. Just after four rings someone picks up.
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123
I am liking and understanding this Edward more with each chapter. I look forward to every update. Great job
Author's Response:
Teaser for chapter 11.
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. Well in this chapter you were given the chance to know Edward a little better, in the next chapter you will get to know a tad bit more about the kids and the background story on them, but you will also learn more about Bella. Alice and Jasper are still together, but Jasper does have issues with Alice and her behavior and he will continue to call her to the carpet on it. Rose wants the world to revolve around her, and when she rages there will be all kinds of fun things going on. More to come on their bad behaviors, lots more... Don’t everyone lynch Carlisle, he is just worried for the welfare of the children, and he will be a saving grace in Bella’s life because he is now the children’s doctor. Edward and Bella are both going to be learning form the other. Edward doesn’t realize what Bella is teaching him yet, but he will figure it out. Thanks again for having some faith in us, I know we can’t redeem him in everyone eyes and there are a few of you who are still very upset about his time at the club. If you are still upset, I hope by the end of the story, you’re not dwelling on that, because the basis of the story is so much more than that.
Thanks so much. Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 11 teaser… Subject to changes during beta process.
“I am Seth Charles Swan.”
“Do you know your date of birth?”
He nods his head. “December, 31st, 2003.” So that makes Seth seven years and almost nine months.
Carlisle looks to Bella. “Was he born in a hospital, or at home?”
She looks at Seth. “Hospital, mom had a few weeks left before they were supposed to be born. The police had come to tell her dad had died, and her water broke when she was shouting at them. Then the EMT people came, one of them was a lady and they took mom away to the hospital.”
Carlisle looks at Bella and nods. “Do you know how early?” Bella bites her lip and shakes her head. “After he came home, has he seen a doctor?”
Bella nods her head. “I had to take them to see Aro’s doctor and he gave them all the immunization shots they needed. Zafrina took them for me if I was at work at the hotel. Zafrina is Aro’s mom and she promised that they would be okay and said that they needed those shots. She told me that they were very important for them to have so they stayed healthy.”
Carlisle looks at her. “Can you tell me who Aro is, or the doctor’s name?”
Bella frowns at him and then looks at me. It is clear she is confused as to why he doesn’t know who Aro is. “Zafrina lives next door to me, she very kind and looks after Seth and Leah when I am at work because you’re not supposed to leave them by themselves, that is very bad. Aro is her son; he helped me get my jobs. They help me, but I know that I should have been there, but… I… have I done something bad?” She looks like she is getting upset, and at no point has she told him that I know Aro. I grip her hand and rub the top of it and give her a smile to thank her for keeping my secret. I turn to look at Carlisle and tell him who she is speaking about.
“I know Aro and the doctor she is talking about. His name is Jason Jenks, I am sure you are familiar with him. I will give him a call to fax all the paperwork he has on them.” Carlisle looks at me nods his head, and gives me a clear look to say that he wants to know more about this. I stand up heading to the door.
“Okay, Leah can you tell me your full name?” She smiles and nods her head.
“Leah Sue Swan,” she smiles at him.
“Do you know your date of birth?”
“Yes, it is January 1st, 2004.”
“Ah, the twins have different birthdates, so that tells me that you Seth were born very late at night, and you Leah were born very early in the morning. Am I correct?”
They nod their heads all together, and I smile.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
It is heart warming to see Edward begin to open up to trust and be kind. As Isabella's story come out my heart aches for her pain and fear. You ladies are doing an awesome job. I hope you can update more often.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.
We know that the more the story develops the more we all want Edward to just post haste stop going to Aro’s club. I wanted to give a clear run down on the girls that he sees there, so that we can keep things straight. Edwards’s girls at Aro’s: Sally: sex addict 27 tall she about 5ft 8 red shoulder length hair thin and tall. Likes roll play. Irina: 6ft tall slender and Blond Hair to her cheek bones like rough sex and anal sex. 29 years old. Carmen: 5ft 6 long black hair enjoys being controlled by men, average weight and size. Likes BDSM and being restrained. Maria: 5’5 180 pounds curvy and thicker than other girls. Sandy blonde hair, cute features and very large breasts. More relaxed and sensual. Edward only sees her maybe once a month, sometimes longer than that between visits. He controls her too, but it is all about sensual and erotic pleasure with her than it is about rough and controlling hard core sex. Some question if he chose Maria the last time and more often, because she reminded him of Bella. Truth be known Carmen would be the one who resembles Bella the most. He is not with Maria to pretend she is Bella, but because from Maria he gets the softer more sensual erotic side of sex. Edward had made the decision a long time ago to make himself this untouchable person, and when it came to the girls most of the time he went with the hard core domination side of the act. I can’t say that Edward’s visits to the club will cease right away, but I do assure you that soon our professor with the extremely dark view of all women will soon realize that he just can’t do it anymore. He may be smart and he may be a lot of things, but sometimes when you shut yourself off, it’s hard to wake up those pieces of yourself. I hope that this helps a little in the explanation of Edward and his tainted views. I will tell you this, I just got done with my part on a chapter where he comes clean with Bella about what he did when he spent time at the club, and telling the truth can be quite cleansing.
Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 9 Teaser… Subject to changes during BETA process.
“Mr. Masen, I don’t mean to be rude, but where are we going? Do you need me to work at your house today?”
I shake my head as we keep walking. “No Isabella, as you know all my employees have to have a medical check. I am accompanying you to yours.” We stop walking when we arrive at the bus stop. I look at Isabella who is looking upset.
“Mr. Masen, I didn’t bring any money with me. I can’t afford to have a medical check, I am sorry.” I look down at her and frown. There is something in her expression that tells me that it’s not just money she is worried about. I look up seeing the bus coming to a stop beside us.
We both get on, but this time I lead her to the seats at the back. I motion for her to sit and I sit next to her, leaving a little room between us. “Isabella, I set up a medical plan for each of my staff including you. Your medical is a part of that so you don’t have to worry about payment, it has already been covered.” I am not really lying, more like stretching the truth a little. “I know that you don’t like people too close to you, for that reason I am taking you to see a dear friend of mine.” I smile thinking about how to explain Carlisle. “His name is Carlisle, and he is much more than a friend to me. I guess you could say that he is like a father figure. He is a very compassionate man, and he has an amazing ability to relax people. He will not hurt you. I would never allow him, or anyone to hurt you.” I didn’t really mean for what I said at the end to come out, but as I looked into her eyes it just came out. She looked me right in the eye for much longer then she usually does. I watch her reaction and notice her bite her lip, as she nods her head.
“Will you stay with me, the whole time?” She asks, as her eyes fall to the floor.
Without meaning to, my hand moves to the underside of her chin. I feel small sparks on the tips of my fingers as I keep my fingers against her skin. These are those same comforting sparks I felt the night of my panic attack, I dismiss it. I slowly tilt her chin up, making her look at me again. “I will stay with you, if that is what you want. This is your choice Isabella. I know that I have been ordering you around a lot, but this time it is your complete choice and decision. If you wish for me to stay in the room with you, then I will. If you want me to leave, then I will. This is all about you, and what you want.”
She keeps looking at me and I could feel her shaking a little, but she never pulls her face away from my hand. “I would like you to stay in the room please, Mr. Masen.” I nod my head letting her face go.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names
What a wonderful chapter. I knew I could get through the sadness, it would get better. Thanks for writing such an incredible story. As ever, I am looking forward to your next installment.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. There have been a few questions regarding Edward and why he is so tainted by women. More of his back story is coming out, but between having a mother who was mentally ill, who subsequently abandoned him. The one girl he gave his heart to was only using him for money. One girl pretends to be his friend to gain access to his friend and for all accounts adoptive brother. And don’t forget the person he looked to as a mother figure who lied to him and hid the truth of things from him. When you put all of those things together, it is hard to trust and believe that there is honesty and truth in caring from a female. I know lots of women who think men are worms because of this or that, which happened, so it should not be so hard to understand how Edward may have this view of women. Next we have had an overabundance of questions regarding when Edward will find out Bella’s true age. That will happen, but first we need to build a little more of their friendship together. I know that many of you are not happy of his time going to Aro’s, but I assure that those times are coming to a close. It is important we felt in the story and as the story goes to show how he is dealing with his own reactions to Bella. There will not be any more explicit scenes from the club, however your knowledge of him going will not stop until he stops… AND WE PROMISE he stops going. This is a rather slow burn, but for this to be realistic, in any way, shape, or form it needs to be. With that said we will not drag it out either. You will continue to learn more about Edward and Bella, as well as a few of the other characters, but it is all going with the storyline. There are some great chapters coming up, and for all of you who still have some hate or anger for Edward, I am sure that you soon will find that hate or anger directed in another place.
Kasi (& Nikky)
Chapter 10 Teaser… Subject to changes during Beta Process.
Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett, and I, all meet up on Saturday for a workout and lunch. The topic moved to Bella, and Emmett was not happy that he was the only one that had not met her yet. I, well we, explained that she did not like close contact with people and might say things out of the norm. Of course, this all fell on deaf ears, because his only response was him promising to be on his best behavior. Now, we all love Emmett - most people do - but he is a large hulk of a man. Emmett is six foot six and must be tipping the scales at close to three hundred pounds. His biceps are the size of my thighs. He also has a quick mouth, and often says things without thinking. We tried to tell him this, but he didn’t get it. We all knew that he would end up trying to hug her, or that she would end up saying something and then he would joke about it, but either way, she would end up hurt. I just couldn’t allow that to happen, not even by one of my best friends. He pouted the rest of the time we were together, even after Jasper and Carlisle both said she could not meet him yet. I was a bit worried at the end of lunch when Emmett looked as if he was hatching an evil plan.
I look at my watch, seeing that it’s almost nine-thirty, and I know that Bella is about to walk in. I have set up the table with some of the supplies I need to help teach her, including alphabet cards. Since she can already recognize some letters, I know teaching her the alphabet should be pretty simple. I know the best thing for me to do, is to start at the beginning. This means that the alphabet song we all loved as a kid, is first. I look to the door as it opens, and see Bella walking in. She glances at me, and I can see in her eyes that she looks both excited and apprehensive. I am sure she is a bit nervous about today, so I smile at her. We already decided that we would do an hour and a half on Tuesday mornings, and an hour and a half on Thursday afternoons.
“Bella, hang up your jacket and come over to the table.” She nods her head and does what I ask. “We will begin with the alphabet. There are twenty-six letters in the English alphabet; twenty-one are consonants, and five are vowels. I will show both the capital and lower case letters. Are you ready?” She nods her head before putting her glasses on. She has them sitting at the edge of her nose, which will make her look over the top of them rather than through them. I push them back to sit on her nose correctly. “No looking over them, Bella,” I say, giving her a smile.
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In
Such a sad yet heart warming chapter. This story is my favorite fan fiction, ever. You girls Rock!!! My guess is it was Alice. As much as I love Alice in the Twilight series, I don't like her at all in this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Wow what else can Nikky or I say...once again the overwhelming response and the amount of story love we are receiving from so many people just makes us both feel so loved. I know that this story may have a few minor flaws, but we have tried all along to keep them to a minimum. So essentially thank you as always for reading and reviewing our story it makes us all giggly and excited to see all the reviews we are getting.
We asked you who you thought it might be that broke into Bella and the twins apartment, and I must say we were a little surprised that a lot of you have it figured out. With a wide range of evil or rude nasty characters, many of you said it was Uncle Harry...and you are right. There will not be resolution for a bit when it comes to Uncle Harry, so if you want to figure out what he was looking for all I can suggest is watch for clues. There are some very important and much asked for things coming soon.
We have been asked many times for Edward to stop using Aro’s girls for his pleasure. And where we understand why, we also knew it was very unrealistic for a man with so much anxiety, pressure, cynicism and tainted view to jump into a healthy relationship and give up the release and hidden pleasure he has surrounded himself in to get by for the past five plus years. He has slowly been weaning himself from the place, and very soon he will open up and tell Bella why he went there. We have been asked when you all get to know a lot more about Edward...well very soon actually, and by that I mean the next few chapters are chuck full of things from the past.
We have been asked if Renee will come back...(A LOT ACTUALLY)...Renee was Bella’s biological mother, who died when Bella was only three years old. At the age of three after her mother died, custody of Bella was given to Charlie Swan who was her biological father. Charlie was married to Sue Swan, who is the mom she talks about leaving all the time. Sue Swan is the person who left Bella to care for the twins. Since this story is not alternate universe, neither, Charlie or Renee will be making any grand entrance, unless via a dream. But don’t get too happy, because Sue Swan is still out there somewhere, and she has a few things to say.
We have been asked a lot if Alice, Rose, Siobhan, and Esme will make any redemption...Esme already has begun her turn around, and we think she is doing well. Siobhan, well she wore out her welcome quite completely at the ball, at this point there is not a real plan to drag her back into the storyline. Alice...well this is a hard one for me. I actually normally always LOVE Alice, but this Alice is a tough nut to crack. She is not going to bring in the roses and become a fan favorite anytime soon, but you will notice some changes. As for Rose, well...I just can’t wait to hear your opinions of her...and I am sure you’ll have plenty next week.
Updating...we had planned all along to only update every other week on Thursdays. However since posting the first chapter we have been on an every week posting schedule...and we have NO INTENTION of changing that at this time. Nikky and I have a comfortable cushion, and the next chapter to post is with the beta now. I got this weeks chapter back from the beta on Tuesday afternoon, so realistically we are posting around when they are ready. Nikky is working on her part of chapter 26 right now, and I am working on 24 so we are not looking at any lapses in time. We are both so excited you are choosing to come down this road with us.
Where the next chapter has some major info and angst, we promise that chapter seventeen will make up for it. Thanks again for always being so supportive and showing the story love HCV deserves.
Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 16 Teaser...subjected to changes during the BETA process...
Its Thanksgiving today, and I am on my way to pick up Bella and the kids. Bella and I decided that, after dinner with my family, they would all stay the night at my house tonight. I will run them home to get their things for the camping trip in the morning, and see them off to camp. Bella will make sure that Jake has enough food, and then she is coming to spend the weekend with me. I’m looking forward to this weekend, but I am worried about my growing feelings for her. I knock on the door before using my key to get in. Bella gave me a spare key so I could let myself in. The new door has a double lock on it, and is reinforced with steel; no one is breaking this one down.
I walk in, seeing Leah in a black, knee-length dress with a cream ribbon around the waist, and black shoes. Seth is wearing a pair of black pants and a cream colored button down shirt, with a black tie and shoes.
“Wow, look at you Leah! You’re very beautiful, and Seth, you look so handsome.” They both smile at me and look up as Bella walks in. She is in a cream colored dress, with a black ribbon around the waist. The dress goes to just above her knees; she looks fucking beautiful in it - so fucking beautiful.
“Wow, Bella! You look sensational...really beautiful. Are we all ready to go?” I look her up and down, I am so glad she allowed me to buy us all new outfits for today.
I got around her apprehension by telling her that I wanted to go to church with them this Sunday night. We are attending the evening service after Seth and Leah return from camp. Since I was buying something for myself, I wanted to get them something, as well. As usual, getting Bella to let me buy Seth and Leah something, was easy, but her...not so much. I was so fucking glad Seth and Leah helped me. I have on black pants and black shirt with a cream colored tie. I push my fucking guilty feelings down and smile at the three of them.
“Yes, we’re all ready.” Bella picks up their bags, and I quickly take them from her.
“Let’s go,” I say as I usher us all out the door together.
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!
It was an incredible chapter. Y'all sure keep the surprises coming. I'm looking forward to "Confessions".
Author's Response:
Hello our faithful readers and reviewers! We were expecting a bit of a lashing from some of you, and we have gotten a few but nothing like I expected. Please let me remind you all now first and foremost that we are both happy ever after kind of gals. Little refresher is needed about ages, and a few other things, since there were a few questions. Edward is 28 and will soon be turning 29. Bella just turned 11 when the twins were born, Sue left when Bella was 13, and Bella has been working for the university for over 5 years. Bella just turned 19 in chapter 8. Edward is 9 and 1/2 years older than Bella. Before Sue left, she obtained a fake ID for Bella that said Bella was 18. Therefore everyone surrounding the apartment building assumed she was of legal age. Sue needed everyone to think Bella was 18, and she was sure to scare tactic that into Bella. All these years, Bella has continued to maintain the age Sue said she had to say she was, in fear of not being able to stay with the twins. Now for Bree Tanner and James...Bree Tanner was the female student from Edward’s Summer school course he taught. In the summer for the past several years, Edward has been helping his good friend Marcus by teaching the kids who struggle to pass, or are so far behind they may not graduate high school. Bree Tanner was the hoodie wearing shy and quiet girl from chapters 1 and 2. Bree lives in Forks and attends high school at Forks High. James Hunter is a Math teacher and the truancy officer for the Forks school district. We don’t want to give too much away, but if you think back to the earlier chapters, when Edward had to take a break from his panic attacks, he was clear to tell Marcus his concerns about Bree being abused. Bella is naive about many things, but she has grown a lot in the past few chapters. We want to be clear that Bella feels as if she lied to Edward, she started trusting him a long time ago and when she started trusting him she feels she should have told him then. Edward doesn’t feel betrayed by the lie, but he is more of in shock by the lie. When he thought he was almost 5 years older than Bella he was concerned with the age difference, mainly because of how innocent she is. Now that that almost five is almost ten, he is confused. The next chapter will have you cheering Edward on, and hating his guts too. We don’t want to give too much away, but I will say this, we are both excited at the prospect of the reviews after the next chapter posts. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing this story, you all have no idea how much your words mean to us. Thank you, Kasi (& Nikky)
Teaser for Chapter 18: Confessions (As always subject to changes in the Beta process.)
Leaving Bella’s place, I get in my car and drive. I don’t even slow down when the speedometer hits one-hundred-thirty miles per hour; I just keep driving. I am racing to get away from the fear and the rage that is inside of me. I still feel so angry; how the fuck did I not see that she was only nineteen?! I mean, she looks so young; I am so fucking pissed at myself. She is still a baby, and the fact that she is only nineteen, doesn’t keep me from wanting her. I want her, and I need to be with her. I want her in every way, which is so fucked up. I shouldn’t want to be with a nineteen year old girl.
She was thirteen when Sue left her to look after Seth and Leah. She was so fucking young, and she ended up in Aro’s club at thirteen! Fuck, if he would have said yes to her…if she was in the pictures I had to choose from…I would have picked her…I know I would have… fuck! I could have really hurt her. I am really fucking sick! Thank God he said no! Fuck, the dip shit pimp that said yes...shit! I’m sure she would…fuck I don’t even want to finish that thought.
“FUCK!” I scream out and I do an illegal U-turn at eighty miles per hour. I decide I need to see Aro. If I find out that fucker knew her real age, I am going to add that motherfucker to my shit list. I am going to hurt him so fucking much, and anyone who tries to stop me, too.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family
Great and wonderful chapter. Sue's behavior did not surprize me. It seemed normal for the poece ofwork she is. I am going to miss thiis storybwhen it ends. You guys are a awesome team.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. I am very sorry for the lateness of getting this review reply to you. I always write them out and Nikky sends them to everyone on FFN and I send them out to everyone on TWCS and Twilighted. With the move, I am without internet, so needless to say we got a bit of a delay. We are hoping that the delay will not cause an issue in the normal posting, however we may run late getting chapters 33, 34 and 35 posted. This has put me behind by more than a week, so I hope you all are understanding in regards to the situation. The reviews have been wonderful, and Nikky tells me that there haven’t been a lot of questions. The next chapter will be loved and hated, but trust in the fact that Jane has a plan for Sue. Thanks for being such loyal readers, we love and appreciate every wonderful review and comment you all leave us. HUGS! Kasi (&Nikky)
Teaser for 32 subject to changes during beta process
“What do you want Pet?” Sue sneers out.
Bella look at her, and I nod my head in encouragement. “I want to know why? Why you didn’t love them?”
Sue shakes her head. “That’s easy, because they were meant to be mine and Charlie’s, but instead they had to come out being HIS. Every time I looked at them, all I saw was that stupid fucker.”
Bella looks at her shaking her head. “Well I was Charlie’s child and you didn’t love me.”
Sue laughs sarcastically, and she shows her teeth as she makes a face. “NO, you are right about that. I don’t love you, I never have and I never will. I wanted something that was mine and Charlie’s, I deserved that. What I didn’t deserve was for your whore of a mother to intentionally get pregnant to try and steal my man from me.”
I chuckle out loud at Sue’s delusional attitude, and Sue growls at me.
“There are only two people I love in this world that is Charlie and Harry and you took both away from me,” Sue says caustically as she turns her glare at Bella.
“I want to know what you were planning to do with Seth, and the baby that belonged to Tanya, what was your plans?”
Sue laughs at Bella’s question in her evil sarcastic way. “You really want to know? Well I’ll tell you,” she says with a now huge happy smile.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times
Incredible book guys. I'm so sad to see it end. Please make sure to include what everyone dead or alive is doing in the future. Thanks so much for writing this book!!!! Every chapter is a ten!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete. We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short. When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both. Nikky has written hers and I have written mine. Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on. I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS. We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten. THANK YOU! Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it. Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!
Kasi (& Nikky)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
I wish you ladies had.continued with a sequel. This story has been an incredible read. Ilove all your characters, especially this version of Edward and Bella. Thank you so much for writing it!!!!! It was a ten rating from start to finish of the story. Love you girls.
Author's Response:
This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed. Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post. There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written.
Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too. We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out. We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest. We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.
I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.
We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
As the end times approach the battle for souls on earth begins, so many people have yet to choose sides.
Heaven and Hell have opened the gates and let loose the best they have to offer, the gates closed and
nothing may re-enter until the battle is won, unless, that is, you perish.
Amazing banner by; My husband
Fantastic beta's js18 and RAH07890- who also Americanises this story
This story will contain lemons...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25453 Read Count: 12625
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon
I feel your different was an outstanding love story. I throughly enjoyed it. I am reading your current posting and decided to check for other stories. I am so happy that I did. The ten rating is for the entire story. Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your lovely words here and on my other stories, it is terribly flattering when people read and take the time to review. I hope I don't disappoint, and you continue to enjoy.
President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?
Banner by the lovely vbfb1
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones
I am so happy your son is doing okay and things are a little better. Will keep you in my prayers. Interesting chapter.
Las Vegas, Nevada, 1980. In a city run by some of the biggest mobsters in the country, only the strongest survive. Entry for the LikeTotally80sContest. Now expanded. AU.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13744 Read Count: 3571
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Execellent story. Awesome job!!!!!!
Edward and Bella had dreams, and a plan to chase them hand in hand.
Side by side they thought they could do anything, but what would happen when Edward had to leave Bella behind and chase them alone? **Drabblish little love story.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48417 Read Count: 33237
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
This story is so beautiful and realistic. I love it and look forward to you updates. It deserves a
Thousand wonderful reviews.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Hello. I think you are doing a great job writing this story. I hope everything works out with B&E. I also hope you update again today. Keep those chapters coming chapters coming and
I promise to send rating or a review or both.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Tears, my tears make me sad. What a beautiful chapter. So beautifully written. I thank you.
"Bella is like every other girl until she touches an unfamiliar stone at the museum, an event that now links her to an astronaut with a strange tattoo. When the end of the world is near, only they can solve the mystery behind it before it's too late, or more precisely before December 21, 2012."
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Til The World Ends Contest Entry 2012 - Winner Biggest WTF Moment
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3739378/TillTheWorldEndsContest
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9492 Read Count: 559
Date: 25 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Hunab Ku
Amazing and incredible!!!!! I do very mich hope you continue this story. At the very least write the completion of the ritual. I am totally hooked and enchanted. Excellently writtn.
Summary : When my life started spinning out of control, I overlooked the dark depths of the bay and wished it would wash over me, cleansing all traces of these last few weeks. Instead I met a boy who changed everything.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4552 Read Count: 308
Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Submerged
I don't know why you didn't win. Incredible!!!! I AM STILL CRYING.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks so much for your kind words. There were 96 other entries, so I didn't expect to win. But your kind words put a huge smile on my face. Much appreciated & have a lovely day.
Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
I love this little story. I'm so sorry to hear Cayden is not well and you are so exhausted. I pay he is better soon and you get some relief. I still miss "The Presidential Treatment", A sequel would be awesome but more importantly I felt Cayden was a character in the story and is was kinda cool.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Good bye is so very difficult. Instead, I say I'll talk to you soon. Please keep us up to date on your son's health and growth physically and emoyionally. You will never know how much you've impacted my life and I deeply appreciate it. This stiry was a perfect Swan Song for your Twilight Fanfiction career. (No pun was intended.) Thank you so much for all yor stories. Much Happiness to you and yours.
Take Care,
Lana
Finally free from Edward's control, Bella decides to move on and move forward with her life. She wants more for herself, someone to love her of who she is. Will she let new love in right away or will she learn to love herself first? A/U - Hum/Vamp.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59311 Read Count: 35928
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
10 is for is for every chapter!!! it's truly an amazing first effort!!!!
I know it doesn't matter now but I would have hoped Jasper would have followed her to Brown!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I love protective Jasper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Bella is quite brilliant when it comes to Alice and Edward!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
What can I say, Jasper is sex on legs!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I'm glad knows they're mates and can point them in the right direction!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Jasper's such a love!!!!
Peter I an enigma!!!!!
Charlie and Tori are so cute!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Jasper's been mean to his mate and he really deserves her bit of payback!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Yeah, she's crazy as a loon, always has been!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Amazing,fascinating and a marvelous read!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!!!!!
Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.
***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59280
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Chapter was outstanding. Bella has so much working against her. She and Edward are overcoming adversity one step at a time. I am so happy to see recognize real and abiding love. I lookforward to every update. Keep up the wonderful job.
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Isabella Marie Swan Volturi is the sister of the three kings Aro, Marcus and Caius. She can behold any power she wished and the true ruler of the vampires before Aro takes her spot when she leaves to travel the world. In the year 2009 does she only decides to become her original 18 year old human self and falls in love with Edward.
Only after 300 years on the day of her vampiric birth and the day he left does she return home.
What will happen when Edward finds out who Bella really was?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63048 Read Count: 39127
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This story has an awesome premise. You have an excellent writing skills. Correct word use is a little waek. The word for thrown (to have tossed out something or to throw as in pitch a ball) should be throne (a chair sitting on a dias) as you are using it. It has the mkongs of an excellent book. Please update soon.
Date: 25 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Outtake 2
It's an amazing, intriguing fascinating story field with love and joy enough to out weigh all the pain, suffering, grief and sadness!!!! I'm so happy you completed it!!!!! Its a ten from beginning to end!!!! Thank you.
Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142014
"Charlotte, What did you say your brother-in-law's name is?" I asked, hearing her coming down the stairs. "Jasper Whitlock, why Bella?"Bella's life turned upside down the moment she landed in Houston and met a couple that she hired to work on her new home.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27892 Read Count: 9626
Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences
Texasbella,
I've read a nuber of stories you have beta'd and pre-read but I've never read anything youI have written. WOW!!!! I'll be reading them all now! You are an exceptional writer and your ability to write so graphically is incredible. Ihope ypu finish this one the second time around. I am really looking forward toreading them.
Author's Response:
well thank you so much darlin'! I fully plan to see this through to the end... can't say when that will be, but we are coming into the home stretch I think. thanks for reading and enjoying!
xoxo
tb
It’s been ten years since them. Her parents are dead because of their loose end, but she has moved on with her life. Still dealing with the supernatural in a daily basis but she never thought she would hear from them again so soon. Now two of the Cullen men need her assistant but only one wants more. Will she let them in her life again or cast them off like they did her. Hum/Vamp—Jas/Belle
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Read & Enjoyed, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56116 Read Count: 47263
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I'll sound redundant but it can't be helped. This story was an incredible one and I love how original your plot was!!!! it made for a page turner I couldn't put down until it was finished!!!!!
I do hope you do a sequel and I will keep an eye out for it!!!!!
Thank you!!!!
It's been 4 years since the Cullens left Forks. Bella is working in a bar when one night she hears a voice that she thought she would never hear again.What happens when Jasper shows up without Alice,but more sure of himself.
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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69529 Read Count: 17212
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1-Meeting Again
Interesting start to your story!!! I think I'm going to really love it!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm please to head that, thanks for checking it out.
This is a look into the minds of those who have watched Edward slowly remove himself from his own cimmerian view. These are Outtakes based off of His Cimmerian View. Read through chapter 24 of His Cimmerian View before starting this. AH/OOC
Banner made by the wonderful SoapyMayhem for His Cimmerian View, we just added the word Enduring. Thanks SoapyMayhem you ROCK!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71046 Read Count: 5928
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan
It was wonderful reading about all the things that happened to her and how she felt about Edward's behavior and how beautiful and Christian her attitude about his pain and warped views. Awesome out take.
Author's Response:
Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View. A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor. Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person. I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too. There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus. In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office. Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped. I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding. As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV. A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it. We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff. Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)
Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us? We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”
Bella nods her head. “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book. There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it. I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”
They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy. “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around? That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”
Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room. “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to. They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”
Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives. “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you. I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you? If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”
They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help. “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.
Just some thoughts I think Edward had during Bella's change in Breaking Dawn, that I jotted down. Inspired by watching the film and seeing Edward's interactions with Renesmee after he delievered her.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Nessie (nonsexual)
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2534 Read Count: 188
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's a lovely chapter. I very much wish it was part of SM's Breaking Dawn. It's the highest complement I can think to give you!!!!
Edward: An overworked CEO. Bella: A tattoo covered, bar owning, biker babe. Sparks fly, along with the insults. Can they work it out?
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Hardtail Curve won the fans vote for "Frustating Cockblock", thanks for your votes!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9111 Read Count: 6052
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Hardtail Curve
Yes and Yes, Yes, Yes for the Lemon! I think you girls should make this a full length story. It has lots of possibilities!!!!
Author's Response:
Jess and I have the lemon and the final wrap up for this story to give it the resolution many of you are wanting. We will have it written and posted soon, sorry for the lag in replying to your wonderful review. THANK YOU SO MUCH< watch for the update coming to you soon! Kasi and (Jess)
Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.
Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.
Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.
Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
The first chapter I cried and the second one, too. It is well written and captures the spirit of an E. R. I love Edward's compassion. Hoping for another update soon.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hi,
This is the second time I've read this chpter. It still rocks. It seems like forever since you updated. I sure hope you will will do so soon! I truely love this Bella. She is such a real person as is your character Edward. Set your fans here from you soon, please.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I really, really love this story. Excellent chapter. Having had issues similar to this Bella, this type of situation was practically a given. What type of update schedule do you have, if any? Great job! =)!
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Incredible chapter. WOW!!! Lot'sof twists and turns.
I was really concerned when we did not her from you last week. I am glad to her you and yours are better.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Great Chapter. I really look forward to your updates each week. As far as your question on redemption, I wouldn't really think any of them were redeemable. That said, I think Jazz has the best chance because I hate that Alice's does not have her love in her life cauuse he is such an ass.
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Glad yu are better! Excellent chapter!!!