Reviews by EdwardsVampTramp
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315695
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

AAWWWWW!!!  I always love Alice and Jazz stories..................very sweet and very "them".  :)  Can't wait to hear about the date with Jake and why Edward took off before Bella woke up.....................*taps chin*

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

Wow..............Edward probably feels like he entered the "Twilight" Zone, for sure!  (No pun intended) ;)  First his father and now Jasper coupled up. 

I did really like the fact that he realized he wanted to get back to Bella and made it back in record time.  Such a shame it was a little too little, too late. 

I'm guessing Edward is going to run into Bella and Jacob tonight and things are going to get mighty interesting.  Can't wait til your next update.  Hope RL eases up on you, Hon!

 

 

 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

'Then it hit me: I needed her. And I was pretty fucking certain that she needed me, too.'

AAwwww.......just beautiful.  I always appreciate when you show both POV's, but I'm definitely a little biased towards Edward's.  Everything seems more pure and honest coming from him somehow.

Thank you for this heartwarming chapter.  I was starting to go through BDR withdrawals wondering when I'd get my next fix!

I'm sorry to hear it's almost over, but I've so enjoyed the journey so far.  You've done a wonderful job with the story.:)

As for the hangover cure?  HHhmmm.........*taps chin*.............not sure.  Still trying to figure that one out.;)  But a full glass of water before going to bed definitely helps since alcohol dehydrates you and causes the headaches.  Won't help now, sorry, but maybe it'll help for future nights!

BTW.............thank you for having Edward finally put plastic Rosalie in her place!  That was classic!

~Paula

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

TY! Even water didnt help me with that badboi hangover- lol. I swear its 3 days later and my muscles STILL hurt!

Thanks for reviewing!! xx

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

What can I say you never cease to humor me and make me sigh.........I loved these two lines!  The best of both worlds.;)

~ (Jacob) "What, and be stuck in the middle of you and Captain Charisma over there?"

~(Edward)  “You and me against the world, Swan,”

I can never aptly express my love for this story, but hope you know you've got a fan for life!

~Paula

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

'Emmett, of course, was oblivious to anything that wasn’t directly benefiting his dick.'   -   *gigglesnort*

Interesting how Edward admitted to Jessica that he and Bella were together, but Bella kept denying it to everyone.  I believe it's self-preservation on her part and I totally get it.  ALWAYS make the guy come to you that way you don't risk getting hurt..........*wink*

Jasper always the voice of reason. *sigh*

Perfect ending to this chapter, Bella deciding to come out of the proverbial closet and give the school a little show.  I believe a standing ovation is needed for that little peep show!

Excellent (as always)!

~Paula

 

 

 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

“You let me have you whatever way I want in my car.”     -   Dayum!  *wipes drool from chin*

Wow!  Bella was into girls?  That's a new one!  Loved her entertaining the idea of inviting the waitress to join her and Edward if it had only happened a week earlier.;)  You saucy minx!

Sex up against Edward's car in the parking lot??!!  *rubbing thighs together*  I think my shower massager is calling to me.......

And what is up with that last line? *shaking fists*

'We were exclusive, together and only together. What I didn’t understand was why I wasn’t happier about it.'

There had better be a perfectly good explanation for this, Woman!  You can hide in Turkey, but you will have to face us again at some point. *wink*

~Paula

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

It's okay, Chicky.  I totally get Bella's behavior.  I have been prone to do that in my youth as well.  You expect it, and when it doesn't happen, you tend to push the boundaries to make it happen or make it happen sooner rather than later.  Very good point on Bella's behalf.  Shitty.........but understood. 

No, I don't think Edward was with Rosalie.  I think Rose is still pissed that Edward rejected her at the club and this is her way of "payback". 

James??!!!  I figured he would make an appearance, but now I'm a little scared!  I just hope Edward rescues her in time!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

 'I presumed she felt like I did, like a day without seeing her or spending time with her was a day wasted. I thought she’d felt the same way.'

OH........poor Edward.  I feel so heartbroken for him.  He's so confused and I just want to give him a hug. :(

I knew Bella was lying about James.  She knew the only way Edward would let her go would be to lie to him.  This story kills me because unfortunately, it's what a lot of people really do do in real life. *sigh*  So spot on.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

“Edward…”   -   *sigh*

That pretty much sums the whole chapter up. ;)

Thank GOD he got off his butt and went to Seattle to find her. 

I love that Esme has become someone that Edward can turn to for support and it's wonderful that Bella has found her own two legs to stand on. 

I'm getting weepy just thinking about this story ending. *sobs*

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

'It was me and him against the world. '

*Sigh*

Yes, Bad Romance was perfect for this chapter; completely them.

I'm so glad they didn't really have a big blowout like they probably would have done had they both still been living in Forks.  The time apart allowed them both to mature; adopt new lifestyles and outlooks on life.  It shows that they were meant to be together.  Regardless of where you are, if you still fit with that person no matter what else has changed in your life.........................it's just meant to be.

Thank you for taking us on this wonderful journey.  No matter how fucked up the characters may be, they still hold redeeming qualities that make us love them all the more for it. 

Mwah!

 

 

 

 

A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59616
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*swoon*

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I was imagining them in the UK, outside London mainly. 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bwahahaha!

Well that answered my question about her not eating meat!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He is definitely a control freak, what with the uniform and now no ponytail?  Perhaps she wants to keep it out of her face while she works??

And when she eats dinner, I notice she never eats meat.  She only ever eats the starches and veggies.  Is this because she's vegetarian or because she doesn't want to eat the meat he pays for because she feels its expensive?

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can you say DICK??!!!

Geesh..... talk about an ego!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hhhhmmmmm...........interesting that he never made Mrs. Whitlock wear a uniform.

Just sayin'...........

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well Edward is certainly a mystery at this point!

Thank God for TBR lists and RobAttack or else I would have missed this. ;)

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you for this beautiful journey.  It's special to me since I've loved older men and had even fallen in love with my boss.   Well done.

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm definitely going to attempt a few of these!

Thank you!!!!!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272396
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I only started reading this yesterday and only because I knew you started writing again.

 

For years I had heard everyone in the fandom talking about this story and I'm so glad I finally sunk my teeth into it and haven't been able to let up until I got caught up.  The hype was well deserved...............I'm swooning over Vikingward!

 

Thank you for continuing this epic love story.  And I'm so very sorry about your Mom. :(  I'm glad she had you towards the end; that's all that matters.  

XOXO

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He's home!!!!  Squuueeeee!!!

 

I coul dnot WAIT to get home from work so I could read this.............you have no idea!

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91379
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank you so much!  I truly enjoyed it!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Who wouldn't love 2-3 months in Italy???!!!

Will Edward recognize her immediately?

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Dayum!!!!!

Aro isn't wasting any time.

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found this on Twifanfictionrecs and couldn't wait to dive in! :)

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64410
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Yowza!

Talk about brutal!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

I'm nervous for them in San Francisco!

Who will spot them?

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39651
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am bawling!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

God, I love that song.  I cry every time I watch "Furious 7" and that song is played. 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Smooth, Edward......   Just like Carlisle. ;)

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Beautiful!

Thank you!