Reviews by TheLadyKT
Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

lemme guess.  tanya messed with the phone.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

a blue audi coupe

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can see seth as a computr geek

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Smack Kate and Tanya.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

 Go Bella....  Gotta love Big Brothers fro helping.



Author's Response:

big brothers are definitely going to help! she's going to need it! thanks for reading it, michele

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LOL  Eddie is in so much trouble with everyone "against" him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

aww the boys were so sweet to help her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOL  Go Bella.   Get em

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ALice is so funny



Author's Response:

Thenk you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

woo hoo.  Great honeymoon.   Just had to sneak in the feathers huh.  lol



Author's Response:

I couldn't resist the feathers and it was a perfect lead in to the pillow delivery and no too much movie watching!  BTW the honeymoon isn't over yet, more of the weekend to come!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hmmmmm hot  hot hot

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter..... now I know someone is going to call or something and tip off Charlie....just gotta happen.   lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

he or jazz can be in my bed anytime.   Love land shark and almost all the skits with john belushi. 

 

Cheeseburger...cheeeseburger...Coke....no pepsi...chips

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great job.  Gotta love Emmett.  Charlie is being so cool.  Glad Sue is being nice.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  I so love Emmett, he's so much fun.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

The kitten become a tiger.   kewl



Author's Response:

We alway knew she had it in here, lol.   Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167625
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Games

Why do I have the feeling that Alice is going to cause a big rift.  Sure hope Royce doesn't hurt Bella.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Comfort

oh E  you were doing so well....  Poor broody E is back.  Bella is gonna get whiplash soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Moving

lol for the Jake/Edward little love story.   yey for moving in.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Commencement

their banter is tocute.   Uh oh  Jealous E coming out to play

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Brunch

glad their meeting went well.  Considering the hours she'll be putting, I think the salary is good, esp if benefits are included too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Interviews (Part Two)

Get him Esme!!!    Aww for poor embarrased B

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Dates

oh Alice.   You bad girl.  Royce is a real piece of work.    E to the rescue!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Interviews (Part One)

 wow for Jake's issue and for the skank  twins at the interview.  love  esme.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Alone

ooooh Em avoiding E.   That's not good.  Prob under threat by Rose as not to spill the beans about B.    Wonder if B will show up to the interview or not.

E sounds like a work meanie.   Love the girls and how he is with them though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Change

Great start.  Cant wait to see where you take it.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Endings

well James is a horndog but at least he doesn't sound abusive. oh wow for the way she found out about her dad. glad she didn't wreck the car or anything. lol for the kid based ok intervention

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown

Glad that we don't have to worry about Jake sniffing around B.   Sounds like they are good friends.   Hmm now why does E not like Rose?  She seems pretty cool in this story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Possibilities

poor B.   Glad Billy was there to help her.   Alice is a force of nature that's for sure.    Ah E gets his first peek at B.  Hope he doesn't make an arse out of himself.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Nuptials

Both our kids have some things to get over huh?   Ugh Newton.     Alice's wedding sounds lovely.

Aww for E trying to look out for her.  So sweet.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Flirting

oooh they are getting to know each other a little.   Oh B.....dangerous game you are playing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Lemonade

Wowzer Wowzer Wowzer  What a first meeting!!!

 

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Uncertainty

ooooh  naughty B sneaking out.   Ya know Em is not going to be able to keep his mouth shut.

Kate seems pretty cool.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Surprises

Pixie and her parties.   aww for the ending and the private gift giving.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Progress?

kinda bad timing.   Glad Carlisle was there for her.  was wondering who she was talking too.  Kinda figured Billy or Carlisle. 

Silly E thinking the worst that B would up and leave.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Revelations

lol for frustrated B.   lol for getting caught making out by the kids.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Dilemma

Only Alice would deliver dinner invitations to FAMILY via messenger.   Silly woman.

Aww for dinner and for the start of after.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Declaration

he wants to talk while she's driving???  what an idiot

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Tears

OMG  what a way to find out about baby.   E is going to go nutso!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Assurance

hmmmm now what is B planning?   She needs to tell him soon before someone one else drops the beans.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Connection

woah.....why would em, rose, jake, and leah help her leave him???????    WTH???    Very cowardly way to leave B.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Perspectives

Em pov: Wow   I'm def anti Rose right now.   Asking Em to lie is cowardly on her part as well.   E has a right to know regardless of his past conversations about no marriage.

 

Leah POV:  Leah and Jake are sooooo wrong about this.   hppft...Leah is not strong.  She just tried to force Jake into a baby.   Not fair to Em, Esme or Carlisle either.   

 

Lizzie POV:  Those poor girls.   So wrong hurting them as well, not to mention keeping a sibling from them.  

 

Alice POV:  Wow Rose et al lying to Alice too.   This is ridiculous.  Can't blame Alice for being pissed.

 

Rose:  Em deserves better than Rose at this point.   Wouldn't blame him for leaving her for her forcing him to lie to his whole family.     Wow  NOW she decides that B is wrong?    What a goober Rose is.  Kinda expected Bella's response to her tirade.

 

Carlisle:  He is so nice, even when Bella doesn't deserve it.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Time

Bella doesnt deserve a new friend right now, gay or not.  Rose doesn't deserve to have it either.   She, and Em, are still lying to the whole family.    Those poor little girls.   Wouldn't blame E for trying to get custody and shutting all the liers out of his life.  

 

Jan: if not for the health of the baby, I'd say she deserves everything she's feeling.   She def doesnt deserve Sam.

 

Feb: Pathetic that Sam get to experience that kick and not E

 

Mar:  Like you deserve any better.  Glad Alice left the diatribe.  Sam is too nice.

 

April: Wow Sam is really nice

 

EPOV: Poor guy.

 

May:  glad she's uncomfortable.   Wow  Can't believe Em is participating in that shower considering he is keeping his nephew away from the father, siblings, and grandparents.   Sam is funny

 

EPOV: At this point, E has every reason to hate Rose and Em. Wow Rose is just cruel, esp with yelling for Em the way she did.  

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Labor

Wish she had to go without the epidural.  Sooooo mad at her.   Sorry but Em should have reclused himself.   sooo wrong the way he is continuing to lie to his family.

 

EPOV:  Glad the girls are doing better.  Poor E.   Em is a bad brother lying to him

 

RPOV: ah So Em is trying to be sneaky.  Thats cool.  Still don't like Rose.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Admissions

BPOV:  Sorry B.  You deserve every bit of hardness Sam et al give you.     The Cullen's would be right to never speak to you again,esp with how those little girls were hurt.   And just wait till they find out that Em knew.  

 

Awww for Sam and his new man and job.  I agree with Sam on the singing.   Can't stand Barbra or her little Celine Clone.   blech.

 

Glad Sam is being stern with her.   Although I'd meet at a neutral location, like Em's place.   They should have to endure some pain since they were complicit in the deception.  

 

Gotta love Esme.   Although how/why she kept it from Edward I'll never get.     ok  wierd note..Isnt the breast pump one of the great inventions for mommies!!!   E would be within his rights to dump her.   (yea I'm a bit bitter)

 

EPOV: You are Wayyyyyyy to good to her.   oh E if only you told her that before.  But she was still in the wrong.   Glad he asked for time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Advice

BPOV:   Yup its a mess of your own making B.  sam is sooooooo right.

 

EPOV:  I'm with E.  I'd be pissed as hell too.  Esme is so cool.  Love her.   I kinda don't blame Alice.  The effect on the girls, not to mention E, would have made me do something like that too.

 

Ch 31 (inside ch 30 lol)

 

BPOV:  Glad E wants to take it slow.   Trust, esp regarding the girls, needs to be earned.   Sam is toooooo funny. 

 

EPOV:  Can't blame him for being cautious.

 

BPOV:  Glad she's acutally thinking about his feelings now.  Glad she's being responsible about BC now.     Seattle:  yea she should have told him sooner.   sigh she really needs to communicate better.   Glad they are getting some alone time, but I know it was hard leaving my first child.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Finally

They need to have counselling if they want a chance to work.  Don't blame Lizzie for being gunshy at the thought of B coming back.   B cause almost all of this.   Sweet talk with E at Ang's grave though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue: Part One

Woo Hoo for Wedding.   So Em, Rose, Leah, Jake, and Alice weren't invited to the wedding?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue: Part Two

Glad E and Em made up.   B&E are insatiable huh?   Awww Peter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 34: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene

Sam is such a great friend for them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot

Gotta LOVE when all the kids are finally in school.  LOL for getting caught though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Outtake One

oooh LOVE this chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake Two

yummy yummy.  get her E.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Outtake Three

not that she wouldn't have deserved it.  LOL

 

Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Summary: Past Featured Story

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You're in for one hell of a ride!  Bella and Jasper's worlds collide as they find solace and comfort in one another as friends.  However, as Bella's dreams begin to unfold and she begins gaining certain abilities...it seems that maybe everything that's happened to lead them here, was all part of an intricate plan.  Can road trips, fun times in Vegas, and a crazy Peter help them find their Heaven?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215333 Read Count: 67840
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

awww for Lilly.   ROFL for jailbreak story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

oooh for the Alice memories.  ROFL for the cop car plans.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow Lots of info to mull over.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

aww for the presents

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ooh guessing this is why B was made human in this iteration.  punishment I bet

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

dun dun dun...Petey 's got lots of secrets.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Glad she got to tell off Edward.  At least Alice is being more reasonable.  Guessing she can't see Alice because Alice doesn't remember?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yea I'm guessing the dreams are important.  ROFL for E&A getting arrested.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awesome Vegas time!!!!  Woo Hoo for married.   Buhahahah for E&A showing up.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ROFL for drunk Bella causing an almost orgy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You go Bella.... get your man!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love Em's idea for the first time.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awesome first date and first time too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad Rose and B got some things straight.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The dream thing would be very disconcerting.  Hmm Wonder where Alice went?  LOL for the diner events.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ROFL for cops interupting again!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hmmm Wonder what the dream really was about?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

lol for drunk bella

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ROFL First Felony and Getting interupted by cops.    Another?!?!?!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Think Bella is going to have separation anxiety for awhile.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oooh dark jasper indeed. Yummy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sounds like an awesome drive. Glad he made her feel better about what that waitress said. hmmm sharing a bath.... almost. LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow  Renee is one nasty biatch.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Glad J got to her in time.  they both have lots to work through.

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Of Big Bows and Birthing Babies

lol   hmmm alice is there now.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

lol   messing with Carlisle....gotta love it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

liking Samantha

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

sneaky man

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

Ice cream is always appropriate.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry

ok you've got my attention.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it... thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you like where the story goes from here...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration

lol  Poor B.  If Carlisle only knew..... and the control line had me LOL.  I thought Bella would laugh when he said it as a human



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Of Suffrage and Seduction

wow   a great chapter AND a history lesson

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Poor B..... gotta be hard to sit there and watch everyone around you die.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper

awww.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions

oops

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

oooohhhh  Was not expecting that ending.



Author's Response:

Good... that was my evil plan! Bwaaahahahaha!!! :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Of Dancing and Dark Alleys

poor alice



Author's Response:

I know! :-( We'll see what's happening with her in the next chapter...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

maybe she's going to realize that staying there will make more of a mess



Author's Response: I think she's worried about that... but at this point she has no idea how to leave if she wanted to...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

Hmm The challenge is on.



Author's Response:

Yes it is... :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

awww  i love cracker jacks

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

Naughty girl.  His parents will fight tooth and nail from him leaving.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

duh.....I forgot about her blood being immune.....but would it be immune to that 1918 version though?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

poor confused Bella.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

lol  for Bella smacking Carlisle  and for the prego thing,  I knew that was coming.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Of Tombs and Tea Parties

lol  she hit a cop

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

hmmmm yummy chapter. Hope maggie is ok in the end.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it... I hope she'll be okay too... :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

aww  their first married fight