Reviews by TheLadyKT
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

punishing them while they're drunk would just be stupid

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

uh oh  hope angela is ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

ewwww  jim is gross.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

b needs to say no to A



Author's Response:

you try telling her that - you know what it's like when you think that something is a good idea - until it isn't...yeah that's what she said!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

cant blame alice for being mad after hearing the backstory

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

can blame him for being mad.  I just hope he catches her before she leaves.



Author's Response:

I still say he'll tackle her before she gets to the door!

Thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

oops



Author's Response:

say that again...

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

hmmm aro the nice guy..... we'll see



Author's Response:

I decided to swap things up a little

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

hmmmm  glad she is moving in with him



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

ugh....jake and james working together......this wont be good

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

hmm hope em or someone cleans out her place, not B



Author's Response:

stop reading over my shoulder!!! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol  but  I love to preread over people's shoulders.......  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

woo hoo.  glad she is moving in......wonder who is going to spill the beans to the evil twins where b is moving too.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review - hmmm - that's what I want to know as well *winks* - wait and see! They can be quite slippery when they want to be

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Well I'm guessing that the James' are the same person so that explains his comment after the spying thing. 

Poor Bella.  Such crappy selfesteem



Author's Response: good guess - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Love the rings and the necklace.  the cufflinks were cute.  SOOOO Love that song.  Yummy Angel lingeree (SP?).  Yummy mini honey moon.   That lodge and all are gorgeous. 

Ugh you silly  self hating man.   idiot.  butterfly...... arsehole he is being. Who is being the emotional child now eddie?   ugh  men sometimes.    Glad she suggested he talk to Paul.  Well at least he held her before he left.  Stupid man not even kissing her goodbye.  At least Anderson is there for her. 

Gawd Heidi is a bitch and Felix is an arsehole. Glad B got home ok.  Well Jazz isnt Paul but at least he is talking to someone.   Ugh Victoria showing her head.    Glad Jazz is there to knock him upside the head.  Glad he called her.

Well at least Brian is paying attention  to stuff.  Felix is such a jerk.  Too bad vicky didnt shoot him.  crap  both J and E were hit.  Poor B and A.  Glad the family is there for them.    lol  like those nurses were going to keep her out regardless....HA.    Woo Hoo for sparky waking up!!!!!

As you can guess, I was writing the review as I read this time so you get an extra long one.   :-)



Author's Response:

I loved your review!  Thank you so much - lots more fun to come! Update next week xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

my only issue is that he either should have warned her that others would touch/kiss him, or not allowed it at all.   I dont think he properly prepared her at all.



Author's Response:

I think you're right and he should have prepared her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

glad they cleared the air but I think those conversations should have been had before the party.   Ah well.  still love the story.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

so glad Garrett called him on the B situation in the beginning.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

hmmm hope laurant does the right thing in the end.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Jake should have been shot......

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

lol for daddy em

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

hmmm yummy chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

great chapter.   glad aro is on their side.



Author's Response:

thank you, it was fun to write him into a goodguy role

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

great chapter.

 

I'm already reading two of your rec's as welll



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

great chapter.

think i've read or am reading 80% of your recs.

 

will always like to see pics.



Author's Response:

thank you and that makes me think that great minds really do think alike!  Will post pics in outtakes in a couple of days

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

yippee for the dungeon master



Author's Response:

thanks for the review

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

oh billy has some balls considering jake was in her house, hurting her and her friends.  hope she makes him look stupid as hell for doing this.   probably looking for money to make it go away.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review ltkt - sending you some love in the mail!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Loving the For the Love of Domination.    gonna go try Twilight reflected.  Thanks for the recs

Wow  renee really is a bitch.    Glad Charlie is doing do well



Author's Response:

thanks so much 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

gotta love kate.   alice keeps getting into more and more trouble

 



Author's Response:

yeah, little Kate can be scary! Thanks for the review

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

great job as usual.   Gotta go read the Kiss story.  its on my list of "need to reads"



Author's Response:

thanks sweetie and you won't be sorry to read that one

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

the thing with esme was really wierd but I like the chapter anyway.  glad the therapy is going well.

Yumminess

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

its the holidays.  take some time for yourself.   I'd rather wait for a well written long chpater than a quickie thrown together.

hmmm   wonder who decked riley.



Author's Response:

thank you so much and you will enjoy the out take next week as well as the next chapter on new year's!  and you will find out who hit riley and how it went down

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

great chapter as always



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

great chapter



Author's Response:

thanks so much - outtake up this week sometime

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

wow   super great chapter.  So much going on dont know where to start.   LOVED IT.   Big Brother Seth is cool



Author's Response:

thanks so much xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

great job... thanks for the really long chapter.    Glad they talked it out.



Author's Response:

thanks so much!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Wow   just Wow.  So much going on.  Glad A & J have some yummy times

Renee needs to step in front of a bus.  Hope Edward reads Phil's notes.

Aww charlie came.  Damn Papparazzi.

 

Loved the pictures.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Wow   HUGE chapter.  So much going on dont know where to start.    Woo Hoo on Bean being born.  Em is such a goof but will be a great father.   Bella has come so far.  So glad she was there for Alice.    LOVED you Carlisle and Jazz pics,YUMMYYYYYYY.



Author's Response:

hmmm, Jazz and Carlisle - sigh, Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it - next chapter up soon xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

wonderful chapter.  Loved the pictures.   Tahoe can be so beautiful.    Was wondering when the Renee letter would come back into play.



Author's Response:

Hi there, thanks for the review. I would love to go to Tahoe sometime, it looks really beautiful and the letter will come out soon xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

wonderful chapter.    Oh eddie...you can be a screwup sometimes.   Love that bella finally gave him what for in the hospital.  glad he is home now too.   Sleeping in your own bed can do wonders.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review and comments xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

GREAT CHAPTER.   Prego hormones suck.   LOVE!!!!what the uncles did.   PRICELESS!!!   Woo Hoo for new baby.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Wonderfully long chapter.   Woo hoo for new baby!!!   sweet name too (thankyou for not having some wierd name like Renesmee).   Yipee on nomination and for figuring out play time.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

wonderful end to a superb story.  Loved it even when you left us with evil cliffies.  Thank you for taking the time to write and share with us.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

WOW... HUGE chapter.  dont know where to start with comments.    Glad everyone seems to be doing well if not grumpy sometimes.  LOL.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

hmmmm the workout /spanking part:   I agree she needed to be punished but he should have had the talk first.   She was obviously confused.

Glad they are involving Paul.    Not sure involving Carlisle is the best option.  I'm not sure he can be objective.  not to mention the embarrasment talking to your FIL about that stuff.    Bad call.   Felix or someone else, fine.  Ah well.   JMHO    Glad she challenged Eddie about it though.

Glad she saw a specialist about her weight.  Also Glad she is challenging Alice.  She is really being awfully judgemental and bitchy. 

Yummy Music room time.    Wow   Cant believe alice said that to Rose or to Bella.  Glad bella stood up for herself.    Alice is lucky Rose or Bella didnt slap the crap out of her.     Ugh  Now bella feels like she doesnt want to be in her home?  Unacceptable.    Jazz thinks Bella is stubborn?   Bella doesnt even know what the hell the problem is?  She's tried to ask Alice and kept getting blown off.  Dont blame Bella for getting fed up.

hmmm now Alice is avoiding Edward too huh?  pathetic.   Glad bella has finally had enough.  Jazz obviously knows what's up her arse.    Princess Alice indeed.   She is acting like a princess.  Most of her conversation was me, me, me.   Glad she got put into her place.  Jazz should have done it before bella got hurt though. 

Ugh getting up before 5 to cook.  wow.    Glad they are all there together.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful review! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Dont even know where to start with this huge ass chapter.    LOVED bella going off on Heidi/Felix.   LOL for Garrett helping with the Alice spanking.   GREAT idea for the road trip.

OMG for the big reveal at the end.  I was expecting something like that but more of Charlie not really her dad.



Author's Response:

Hi there, the thing is I love Charlie in this and he and Bella are so similar in so many ways - yeah she was always going to be his!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

woo hoo for babies!!!  sweet normal names.  (yeah i hated reneesme).    Poor first time moms always freak a little, and with twins, double hard.   Hmm domward.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Great chapter.   renee is a real piece of work aint she.  Hmm for the cliffy.  Im thinking she has been asked to go away somewhere or something similar.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review darling xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Super Gianormous chapter.  Woo hoo for new baby and new pregnancies.  Love Kate/Garrett.  



Author's Response:

thank you so much :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Wow  mom and dad are acting like idiots.

Wow for twins and poor bella and her hormones.

That means eight fluid ounces of liquid per day....  I think you meant 80



Author's Response:

Mom and Dad are idiots - but all will be well.  Bella will even out and I meant to say "80"  thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Baby Boom indeed.   glad Car and Es are back to gether.  She does need a therapist too it seems.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

wow  so much going on.   Glad they had a great xmas with Charlie et al.   The ranch sounds (looks) wonderful.  



Author's Response:

thanks Darling xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

superb chapter.   loved dana and bella at the spa.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

 

Jeez eddie. Trying to scare her to death. LOL oooh the collar comment was not smart little girl. The man owns you regardless (as you do him). Yummy. lol for jack hogging space. hmm her hiding behind the sheet should be an indication of something up with her. After two babies she is prob self conscious of her body again.

Sigh Bella is spiralling out of control. He needs to force her to see Paul....soon. Oh Eddie is far from perfect dear but he loves you. Glad he called Riley. Glad he told her off a little too. Kinda agree with Bella. She needs him to take control for a little bit because she is not coping well. Awww poor B sad for Alice going. Silly girl, you'll be there soon. Terri and Shelley seem really great.

Garrett is smart. old rules first. Interesting plan eddie. The safeword thing worries me but if he is a proper master she wont need them anyway. Glad she is thinking about it first and not just blurting an answer. Movie sounds great. Glad she is supportive of that. Maggie is such a blessing. Ponytail? thought he wanted a high braid? ah well he can change his mind.

Wow playtime away for so long she doesnt remeber. well she remembered quick enough. Are her non verbals written somewhere to study cause she is gonna need it I think. lol they need a milk signal. Glad he taking time to talk after dinner. Well at least she decided to talk to paul on her own and not him making her. hmmm his thoughts on the new playroom are interesting.

hmmm making him tremble and explode. good girl. Oh bella so you could ask the Dr.... couldnt you have asked someone else? off kilter indeed. naughty girl needs to learn to school her reactions again. hmmm all sorts of play toys huh. oops her big mouth did it again. She's remorsefully then gets angry again so quickly? Are her hormones that out of whack? hmm this new "mini" contract should be interesting. awww he changed his mind about her sleeping in the subs room huh?

Hard to leave that house huh B. Can understand her being upset. Jackson is a demanding little thing isnt he. OMG House is gorgeous. I WANT that bathroom. GAWD to have money. sigh. lol. 11,000 sq ft and only 5 bdrm? hmmm maybe one more sert of twins and thats it. lol.

She better be careful about rolling her eyes at him. lol. gotta be wierd calling your brother sir. Wow big baby rose. Jazz' place is mega beautiful too

a/n TY Hopefully no one will ever forget as this is when we become doomed to repeat mistakes.



Author's Response:

Oh kt, I love your running commentary!  I get such a kick out of it, but you have good insight too.

Thanks again,

Michele

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

great chapter.   Irena needs to get a life.  Damn skank.   Garrett needs to have a talk with Ms Skanky before Eddie really blows up at her.   I have a feeling she is going to try something for the papparazzi effect.



Author's Response:

Too true! She is a skank and damn Edward is just too goodlooking for his own good!  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Glad Bella challenged him for his behavior.   He really messed up yelling at the kids.  I agree with the no more sharing clause int he contracts too.  LOL for Reg and Maggie when they came back from their "walk" 

 

ROFL for when Esme came and got the kids.  Aww for mama bear freaking over them leaving.  New moms.... lol.     Woo Hoo for yummy alone time.

ROFL for Jazz' comment to her about tied up.  Aww for esme's talk with her.

Great date.   Glad she challenged the Papz.    Titanium.....ROFL.    Glad Ed and Jazz talked at the club.  Go Bad ass Bella!!!.   LOL for hormonal Bella when they got home. 

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that I could make you chuckle this chapter! xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that I could make you chuckle this chapter! xoxo

Forbidden Desire by RosaBella75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

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Banner by: Anonymous

In an alternate all human universe, where society reached modern times with the equivalent to an Ancient Roman appearance and level of technology, sexual pleasure is paramount; the Cullens are a breed apart: sexual vegetarians, if you will. 

Bella is an "Innocent" and so off limits for deeper sexual gratification, a role she gladly embraces, taking pleasure only in giving to those around her. 

That is until she meets Edward.  Suddenly her Father's insistence on her remaining an Innocent and Aro's desires to keep her for himself have become an unwelcome burden to her life.  How will Bella and Edward survive their desire to be together when it is forbidden?

This story is a thinly disguised excuse for steamy lemons in the vein of a Roman orgy, yet there is also a deeper story about selfless giving and how love might just be worth waiting for...and fighting for.

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Banner by: hologramGal

*WARNING*  This story starts out with intense woman/woman imagery, and will depict graphic multi-partner pairings in future chapters.  DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY GRAPHIC SEXUAL CONTENT OR IF YOU ARE NOT OF LEGAL AGE TO DO SO!!!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42320 Read Count: 12030
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Oct 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: It's Not Just A River In Egypt

poor bella.   afraid of what aro has cooked up



Author's Response:

It does seem rather ominous!  ;D 

Thanks for reading and responding!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: When Worlds Collide, part I

lol  runaway chariot



Author's Response:

I thought it was pretty funny too! ;D

Thanks for reading and responding!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Collision of Worlds: Part II

poor eddie.  



Author's Response:

Yes, poor baby!  Good times with Aro is up next!

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Enlightenment

ugh   Aro is just nasty



Author's Response:

Yes, he is a vile piece of work!  :S

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Traitorous Nirvana

poor kids.  hope they can get together soon.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but at least they're on the right track now (as long as E doesn't go and get all angsty!) lol

Thanks for reading!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

HBTY

Jake lied to Bella the day she visited him after the newborn attack, changing her decision & the lives of everyone involved. 4 years later, everything has changed again & Bella begins a journey to try & recapture a future that was lost to her.Jake-OOC/AU/LEMONS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41676 Read Count: 8887
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: The Storm That Broke the Calm

Ugh Jake just has to try something.  Surprised he didn't just order the Pack to help him.  ah he wants to fight E.   Moron.

EVIL CLIFFY.  Glad the next chapter is there to read.

I hate Jake.  He's abusive and manipulative just like he was in New Moon and Eclipse.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Stolen Moments and Final Heartbeats

I'm on Beth's side.  Her sperm donor hasn't done anything to deserve respect.  

 

Sweet of Bella with those gifts to him.  Ah Leah's imprint.  Thats cool

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Wolf That Cried Soulmate

Wow  Jake is a real piece of work.  Poor Charlie.  Wonder what started the fight?  Did bella find out about his lies?   Oh wiait  She mentioned a Hilary.... Jake's real imprint I assume.

Wonder how she'll be received.  Think Rose will be esp nasty.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Every Light in the House

Hope Leah gets an HEA for helping support Bella.   Wow  Jake was a piece of work.  Setting up a divorce without telling her anything.  Sucks that Billy needs to be around Jake.  What a wanker.

Glad the family, esp Rose, are being nice. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Shooting the 800lbs Gorilla in the Room

Glad they talked it all out.   Would serve Jake right if Hilary threw him out on his arse and refused to be his imprint.

So Happy Bella had Leah and Seth.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Blurred Futures and Bloody Messes

oooh a teen wolf already....hmm maybe sweet seth could imprint on her.    Ugh why do I get the feeling that "daddy" is gonna show up soon?    Another random thought, wonder what Tanya is going to do now.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Choking on my Leash

Time for Jake to be deposed from his dictatorship.  COuldn't he tell one of the other elders to tell Billy?  Ugh  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: House of Healing

Don't blame Beth for not wanting her father in her life.  He's a jerk.   Will be more of one if he tries to pull Beth under his thumb.  

hmm  Beth living with Leah huh?  what is she up to I wonder.  

awww glad they are engaged again.  LOL for Alice sceming on the cave stuff.  Woo Hoo for first lemony goodness for the kiddos.  Happy Lemon Dance

dl

 

 

Yey for Leah.  Glad she's going to have someone. LOVE the Hobbit House.  Hope Billy calling isn't Jake manipulating him.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: A Changing of the Guard

Go Beth!!!! I was hoping Seth and B would imprint.   Dunno if Jake will truly stay away or not.  

 

Wow Coma Edward.  That is scary.  ooh hearing loss.  That can't be good.  Glad he is mostly ok though.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: As Time Goes By

Sweet little marriage ceremony.  Em is too funny.

Sweet ending to your story.  Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

CL

Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Cinnamon and Caramel Rolls

wow....whole bunch of real were's



Author's Response:

They aren't as closeknit a group as the LaPush wolves, but there are a lot of them.  They try to stay low-key. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Hungry Like the Wolf

go bella. and the were's

Author's Response:

Don't worry, they'll kick some Volturi butt!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Brothers in Arms

go bella the Light Warrior.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - It all comes tumbling down

go bella

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Aftermath

woo hoo  they got married finally

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Late for Class

ok this isnt the story I was thinking it was.  The teacher story I remember is that B gets turned to a vamp before she meets back  up with cullens so Now I can't wait to read your story

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

hmmm  Me thinks June is going to start something.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

ugh.  poor charlie. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

whoops

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

poor b.  Hope that man gets whats coming to him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

hmmm  wolfie baseball.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conciousness

poor thing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cain

yea..... she is going out of the hospital.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

poor B

 

Kewl game though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Investigations

poor b

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Matrimony isn't a dirty word

woo hoo They're married.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Back to School

ugh   cain is defintely delusional

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Every move you make

I was gonna ask how alice didnt see, but DUH Jake was there.    Stupid boy Cain

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Back to Reality

Hmmm the memory thing looks to be interesting.

Yummy forest time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Timeslides

The memory thing is cool.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Shield you from pain

wow  intersting power.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Experimentation

wow   cant believe jake pushing her for a kid when he imprinted and would end up leaving her eventually

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Ghost

poor confused b

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Asylum

wow  rough for Bella having to live with this stuff.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Helping Hand

she is so sweet.

 

Check formatting hun.  One big paragraphs.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

great ending.

 

Thanks for letting us know how everyone got on

Thank you for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Biloxi

wow   glad she took the memories now.

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmmm  Will give it a shot but I think she would have waited till he left before she did anything if she was serious.