Reviews by TheLadyKT
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2

oooh yummy yummy.....ah so we get the name of E's sperm donor.....I won't call him father.  pfft

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

Of course Esme is going to be petty and make a phone call

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Uninvited

Jeez Louise.... Could u give James any more powers?  Ugh

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Checkmate

Go bad ass Edward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:The End

Ugh B is a moron. Esp knowing what Esme is going to do

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Truth

Wowsers you are killing me

Dead Quiet by Riverminded Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SPOILERS FOR DEAD AND GONE. Set several weeks after the events of D&G. Eric/Sookie. An attempt to answer some questions raised at the end of the book. This time, Sookie is in charge. Complete.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45026 Read Count: 359
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Always thought Sookie should have just let the Bert kill FdC.   Gawd how I hate what CH did to our favorite pair.

Great job.  Ty for writing and sharing.  Congrats on being selected as one of the featured stories of the week.

ty

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

imteresting names...... backstory or you just like them?



Author's Response:

angelica because she must have an angel on her shoulders. she is the one who had to be revived/ anastashia because she will be their princess.  i had wanted to my daughters this but hubby veto-ed my vote!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

just knew it was charlie

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Short but Sweet

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

A little boy for Leah I think.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ugh.  Glad Charlie is gone.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

thankgod for the pack



Author's Response:

I like them as the good guys! They will not take a back seat in the future.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

glad to see you posting again.  poor bella

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

ugh  everyone wants bella.



Author's Response:

Yeah but it's not always in a good way! Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

poor bree.  caught between a rock and a hard place

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well hopefully Tanya wil leave eddie alone now.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wow  new baby and three crazy visions.



Author's Response:

I had a great time writting this little chapter, next one will be much bigger so i hope you like it! thanks for always reading and reviewing, you're really great!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

hmmm ok so Renee is either a complete biatch or just ignorant.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

whoopsie.   in the hospital???? dingle berry

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hmmm looks interesting.....but if it were me, there is NO WAY i would stay in the hospital if there was no hope/treatment at all.

Wonder if Rose is going to be a biatch since she is dying.



Author's Response:

I agree with you on that, but Bella's homelife isn't what one would call ideal. You'll see more later.

Rose is going to be Rose. She just might surprise you, though. ;)

Thanks!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

gotta love emmett

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Before Her Last Breath

go alice.  she is so cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Go  Bella.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

poor bella prob doesnt feel good enough for him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

uh oh.   makes me nervous for who will show up and feign interest in her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yummy ending.

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Details

looking interesting



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review, I hope you like the next chapter :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 First Impressions and Second Chances

aww it was sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!

Katie

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Friends No More

awww eddie is being sweet...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!! 

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All Falls Down

hate to think that there are those kind of parents out there, but sigh  there are.



Author's Response:

Yes, sadly they are those kind of parents, I tried to have Renee and Charlie make up for how badly Edward's parents suck lol 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Playing Nice

oh that was just evil.



Author's Response:

hahaha sorry bout the cliffie, next chapter will have some answers! Thanks for reviewing!! 

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Seeing Red

Ugh  I would have put the beat down on em too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Big Day

that was sweet of the boys



Author's Response:

It was sweet, huh? ;) lol 

Thanks for reviewing!

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Summer Blues

glad B is helping him with his money.



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks for taking the time to review, hope you like the next chapter! 

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Killers, Frogs and Turkeys, Oh My

hope eddie is ok.... and b too



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! You will see how Edwards Thanksgiving went in the next chapter :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Breaking Point

ok now report his parents for  being fucked up people and see how long it takes social services to step in



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :) 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Panic

jeez  poor eddie



Author's Response:

I know, can't catch a break. Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Arms of Your Love

awwww   sweet.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Christmas in the ICU

those poor kids



Author's Response:

I know, it's sad. Thanks for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Goodnight, Travel Well

kinda knew he would die at some point.  Sad chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing :) 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Pain and Promises

poor bella.  gotta say though you portrayed her pain well



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I find pain can be a very hard thing to write, I'm glad it's coming across well. 

I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Pain

hmmm  what is ed's mom gonna pull at the funeral I wonder.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Aftermath

glad he can be there for her.



Author's Response:

He sure is trying! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 When it Hits the Fan

ugh.   Hope hell reigns down on Em for ratting him out and that man (notice I didnt say father) goes to jail if he lays one more hand on that kid.



Author's Response:

Yes, don't worry I have a plan for his parents. And you'll be able to hear from Emmett soon and understand him a little better. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Katie 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Confronting

Go Bella.  Just what I am thinking

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Searching for the Truth

Woo Hoo  smart Officer Dan.     Now she needs to call officer dan and tell him where eddie is so they can take CPS there.   And then run over Ed sr and momma with a hummer.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 You Have to Believe Me

ugh....have the cops ready .....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Uprising

still dont trust mom

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Moving Forward

cant blame him for being pissed.  syill waiting for daddy to show back up

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The End

Wonderful ending.   Glad the kids are doing well together.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Happily Ever After

wonderful ending.   Hurray for renee and phil.   Poor Em though

Thanks for taking the time to write and share with us. 

smile

Summary:

Story Banner

After Edward left Bella never had much luck with life: her mother gets pregnant and dies in childbirth and her step father doesn't want anything to do with them. Charlie dies from a car crash in Seattle and Jacob imprinted and left her at the alter.

Even 10 years latter Edward Cullen still haunts her memory, and what could happen when he comes to her school, and how is it she doesn't appear a day over 23? Good genetics maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28148 Read Count: 12872
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Mar 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 : Mom at 18 Part I

Hopefully she'll get better.

 

Hun I would suggest running this through a spell/grammar checker.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Book I

good start.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mom at 18 Part II

Wow  Phil is a piece of work.  Go Charlie for stepping up

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Funeral: Life is Beautiful

a little unreasonable that the premees would go home yet, but we'll go with it.  Hmmm now who was the skanky woman at the funeral?  is that some sort of omen?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Godfather and Mother

I always loved Ang from the books.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: La Push me off a cliff

Glad Leah came around.   Sue is so sweet.   Ugh Victoria huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Life is more then just the games we are playing

hmmm interesting twist to the story.  I'd be worried like Leah and Billy about the imprint thing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: This is Halloween

Oh wow.  Poor Bella.  Losing Charlie and Baby on same day

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Drive

oh wow.  Sue died too?  that really sucks.  Nice of B to let Leah raise baby though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sparkling Angel

hmm wonder if the Cynthia thing will come into play.    Stupid E.  Love Ali sometimes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Leave

Poor Embry.    Pussy move jake.   But of course he is a 17 child.  Moron.   Least he could have done was call it off before the alter part.  Guessing he hadnt phased since it happened since no one else was the wiser?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bitter Taste - End of Book I

Can understand her wanting to leave.  ummm Billions?  Not sure where you got numbers from but Harvard is about 60K per year.

TY for writing and sharing story.

ty

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 120030
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

poor kids



Author's Response:

I know:(

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

billion???  wow  grandparents must have been loaded.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

aww seth and tanya



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

wow   popular mom



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

short but sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

awwww marcus knew mommy



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

ugh poor kids



Author's Response: I know!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Guess the idiot never heard what chemo does to a person.



Author's Response:

Nope, he didn't:(

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

cthat was sweet giving up her scholarship



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

awww poor em



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

yea   go bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

that was really sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

poor b



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

hope she'll be ok in ther end



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

hope b feels better after.  ya making me cry ua know.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

hate those dreams that feel real



Author's Response:

Thank you, I do too ;(

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Go big brother Em.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

carlisle and esme are so cool



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

nice dream



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

poor Bella.   And the other for seeing it.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

interesting dreams



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

kewl dream



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

the ny thing was a nice touch



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

awww  Mom's are cool, esp esme



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

woo hoo..... go bella



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

woo hoo She's home



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Bella is so cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

poor Carlisle's gonna have a stroke.  lol

smiley

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

poor carlisle

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

woo hoo.   Record deal

Glad they let Carlsile off the hook though.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

woo hoo.  alomost a perfect place to end it, but I know there is more great things to come.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40841
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Flashbacks

hmmmm  loving this story so far.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: At the club

hmmmm hawt hawt

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"

yummy daydream

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Soap cleans all

lol  poor eddie and his yummy dreams

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Edward's morning

hmmm  Aro is his first huh.