Reviews by Roon1
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

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Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427976
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Experience

She is a greedy wannabe sub, isn't she?  All Edward will have to say is heel and there she'll be, he has nothing to worry about.

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Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Conversation

I love that these two have not wasted any time at all. Excellent stuff.

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Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2

Wow,what a chapter. I am looking forward to the playroom scene. 

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Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 **Playtime**

She has taken to the whole thing like a duck to water or a flogger to an arse. 

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Panties

Very hot.

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Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Oh my jealousward is hot. Loved the playroom scene. It looks like Bella is not going to be a virgin for long. 

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Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Coitus

I am sure Bella will take to being a sub as she has everything else. 

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Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Declarations**

Loved the chapter

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Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Discipline

I think Edward will be thrilled she is wearing no knickers. lol 

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Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dinner

Happy New Year.  I cannot wait to hear what Tanya said.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Open

They seem perfect for each other and she is as pervy as he is. lol

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Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Breaking

That was kind of sad but Edward was so cool.

A Redeeming Love by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Can you forgive the ultimate betrayal?  What if he didn’t deserve the girlfriend he has?  Can you forgive your fiancé?  Your brother?  Can you find love again?  Let’s find out…


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10553 Read Count: 1851
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2011 Updated: 15 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Redeeming Love

Wonderful, really wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

The Mistress by filmmaker007 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

This is the sequel for The Master. 

That pretty much sums it up.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Royal Blood Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33 Read Count: 843
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the start of this. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is the story of Pierce. She used to think she was a normal girl, but normal is not the norm in her family. She is a freak among freaks, almost unnatural...

To put it mildly, with out giving anything away... she doesn't fit in with the family business, or half her town.

She thought that after she left for college, things were going to get better. She couldn't be any more wrong.
Instead of going to medical school, she should have been a Vet.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77148 Read Count: 11950
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 28 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100874
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
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Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions

Oh my what a start to the story

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Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: New impact

Hmmm interesting. I wonder what Edward and Newton want?  

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Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Second chance

Hmm guess we know who requested Bella's presence. He obviously wants a rematch, after he has tormented her a bit. lol 

Summary:

49 Banner

A collection of short stories, o/s's and other very short dark graphic tales that come from dreams, ephipanies, and plot bunnies. These are the tales from the very bottom of our imaginations. They are ours and ours alone.

Story I:

Fourty Nine. : Chapter 1-5: {Story Intermission} 10-11 {Story Intermission}

Follow a young man on a short journey with the love of his life. All is not what it seems, and for every action accounted for, there is a reaction. Even if it takes years to come back,all Karma will eventually show up. Be careful what you say and how you treat people. You never know who's counting...

 

Intermission-

Story- II

A Heavy Load: Retold Ghost tale. Chapters 6-9

One non believer, one dare, one horror filled night, and one entity set on being freed. How do you kill what is already dead?

Story-III

Mary Had A Little Lamb. Chapter 12.

 She followed her to school one day, school one day, school one day, this was against the rules..."    

Parental Advisery is advised. If you aren't old enough to buy cigarettes you aren't old enough to read this .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Humor, Mystery, One-Shot, Poetry, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6843 Read Count: 4318
[Report This] Published: 24 Sep 2011 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Reason Number Twenty Two

Who is this crazy sob? You write it so very well. Its scary. lol

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: You Got me Open Wide.

OMG what are you doing to me. Beautifully written and horrifying at the sametime. Well done bb. 

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: What have I done?!

I want to start each review with OMG but I am trying to hold back. This is amazing, disturbing but amazing nethertheless.

Summary:

:  When they say the split is amicable, do they really mean it?  Is that even possible?  The title says it all.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4646 Read Count: 427
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
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Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Marriage Ending

Fantastic. Part of me wishes Jacob was made to pay more but then he lost out on the one person he could have ever trusted. Is it punishment enough, I hope so.



Author's Response:

The thing about unconditional love and acceptance - you don't really know how important it is  until you lose it.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

 stories/8628/images/Beauty_and_the_Beast_font.jpg

31 Days of Halloween / Picture prompt 18 / Can a Halloween Ball change everything? Can beauty find true love with an evil beast in one glance? Edward and Bella will find out when he exposes his true nature. Darkward

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1821 Read Count: 1001
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great o/s

The Hex House by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

BannerFans.com

Bella had a bad feeling about it. She knew that they shouldn't have gone to the Cullen's haunted house. Little did she know how bad things were going to get...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Mystery, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11043 Read Count: 1054
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really loved this. Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

BannerFans.com Aro laughed again and his smile returned although it was more menacing than inviting. "That is where you are wrong, dear child. I'm quite sure that you could be persuaded. Are there not more members of the Cullen family?" A horrifying AU ending to New Moon...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Alec
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3816 Read Count: 751
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2011 Updated: 21 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow Alice and Edward dead and Bella a prisioner. I cannot wait to read more.

Taken by Missile-proof_glass Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 Taken Banner

Edward is drawn to the mystery the new girl presents, but not as much as he is drawn to her blood. Unforeseen consequences await his decision to claim her as his prey. Canon but slightly OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11244 Read Count: 884
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Taken

That was amazing and I loved it to bits. Thank you so much for sharing. 

Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mmi

Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 225250
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh the anticipation. 

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Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Still the anticipation. lol

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Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my. 

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Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

She is having fun

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Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So many treats for her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is tired of waiting for Edward.  She decides to take control back of her life.  My story for the Countdown to 2012 - Thanksgiving segment.

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5511 Read Count: 862
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was truly awesome. I loved it so much. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218362
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

This chapter was so wonderful.  How awesome are your Cullen's?  As for Roscoe, I wish my dogs were half as thoughtful. They are more likely to jump on you and try and lick you to death. sighs. 

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Date: 24 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

I loved the Cullen's.  It looks like Edward is a bit of a lost soul too. I wonder how Bella is going to cope with the family esp., as Emmett and Edward are already set against her.  Wonderful job as usual hun.

I wish you and yours a very happy Christmas and a healthy and happy New Year. XX

 

 

 

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Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I always look forward to your updates and this was no expection.  Your Bella is so very heartbreaking. Thank goodness for Esme poor Bella has a way to go.

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Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am glad that Edward and Bella would not be getting together too quickly, despite their attraction.  I think Jasper was very wrong to interrogate her at a family lunch esp., with the children there.   Poor Bella really does need to work on her polka face. I wonder how long it will take the Cullen’s to work out she is pregnant. I suspect that Esme already has inkling.

Excellent work as always. J

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I always smile big when I see you have updated.  Things seem to be settling down a bit for Bella and then BANG.  I wonder if she will lose the child?  I cannot wait to find out. 

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Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

 I can only think that Edward and Bella have a very long way to go but they are so cute together. Another amazing good chapter. Thank you.

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Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

LOL You just know nothing is going to be easy for these two.  Wonderful chapter sweets.

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Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Firstly, its great to have you back. I am loving this story. You had me tear up over the rotten hand that Bella has been dealt.   I am so looking forward to more. :)



Author's Response:

Hey Roon1! Ihave missed you!   I'm glad that you are enjoying this one, I will have the next chapter up soon! Love, Michele

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

Hey hun, this update was a pleasant surprise and I loved it. Your Bella is just so heartbreaking. The meeting wasn't the best but I would think Billy or Jasper goes after her, Edward has issues.

I hope you had a good Christmas and will have a happy New Year.  xx

 

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Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Happy New Year to you and yours.

The attraction is there. I wonder how long it will before they give into it. Having said that, I realise there is a long way to go.  Wonderul as always.

 

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Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Who in the world could think Bella weak?  How could she be and survive what she has?  Crazy people.  I am enjoying this story very much. Thank you so much for sharing.



Author's Response:

Aaaw - thank you so much for your review and comments - I personally think that Bella is awesome!

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Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another heartbreaking chapter.  I know its a wicked thing to say but I cannot help think its for the best.  I wonder how long Bella and the delicious doctor will do the mating dance?  I think it might take them both some time to own up to each other. Wonderful chapter as always. 

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Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

Oh noes he's gone.  I trust you to bring him back and for them to move on but its so sad at the moment.  Lovely chapter.

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Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

What a lovely chapter.  I enjoyed it very much.

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

Awesome chapter hun.  

 

PS Tell those flamers to go take a running jump!

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was a truly exciting chapter.  All I have to say about Edward is what a twit he was over Erin. Men, no sense half of them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise

A fantastic chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names

Poor Bella she has had it rough.  Lovely chapter though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123

Dear me these two are a good match.  I love grilled cheese and tomatoe soup too!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background

Thank goodness for Aro and Zafrina.  Wonderful stuff.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames

That was a lovely chapter esp., the scene in the park.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches

Gosh what horrible women Siobhan, Alice and Rose are. shudders.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly

Alice needs a big kick up the arse if you ask me.  I love the chocy cock. lol 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In

Poor Bella what a horrible thing to happen.  I must say that the only false note in the whole thing is the way Edward tells off women that come on to him.  It seems a tad inmature.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day

Rose is such a bitch, fancy having pops at children.  Bella should have slapped her back.  Edward's distrust of women is understandable  but not his treatment of Bella pre nice Edward, there was no excuse for it at all.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!

What a shocker for Edward.  I wonder how he is going to cope?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Confessions

What a rollacoaster of a chapter,  I loved the ending thorough. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things

Excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Snow Storms

What a dramatic ending to the chapter.  Is Gina mentally  deficient  or something?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises

I love Jane. lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights

Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors

James is going to cause trouble for Beeward, I can just feel it coming. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: First Times

Another amazing chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

Such a dramatic chapter.  Harry and Hunter one and the same and Edward recognises Sue.  Fantastic.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

I have said it before but I will say it again, I love Jane.  What a mess Sue and Harry, need a three day session with Jane and then be shot.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?

My gosh, that is some story Esme has.  Another great chapter, thanks.



Author's Response:

I am very sorry for the lag in responding to your reviews.  I (kasi) have been without internet for over a week and have jsut gotten it back today so it has been a long day thus far.  Nikky and I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi & (Nikky)

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil

Wow!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start

The last part of your chapter was so sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Faith Within

Jane is so my hero! lol  So whose been helping Suebitch?  No doubt we will find out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  I am very sorry for the lateness of getting this review reply to you.  I always write them out and Nikky sends them to everyone on FFN and I send them out to everyone on TWCS and Twilighted.  With the move, I am without internet, so needless to say we got a bit of a delay.  We are hoping that the delay will not cause an issue in the normal posting, however we may run late getting chapters 33, 34 and 35 posted.  This has put me behind by more than a week, so I hope you all are understanding in regards to the situation.  The reviews have been wonderful, and Nikky tells me that there haven’t been a lot of questions.  The next chapter will be loved and hated, but trust in the fact that Jane has a plan for Sue.  Thanks for being such loyal readers, we love and appreciate every wonderful review and comment you all leave us.  HUGS!  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Teaser for 32 subject to changes during beta process

“What do you want Pet?” Sue sneers out.

Bella look at her, and I nod my head in encouragement.  “I want to know why?  Why you didn’t love them?”

Sue shakes her head.  “That’s easy, because they were meant to be mine and Charlie’s, but instead they had to come out being HIS.  Every time I looked at them, all I saw was that stupid fucker.”

Bella looks at her shaking her head.  “Well I was Charlie’s child and you didn’t love me.”

Sue laughs sarcastically, and she shows her teeth as she makes a face.  “NO, you are right about that.  I don’t love you, I never have and I never will.  I wanted something that was mine and Charlie’s, I deserved that.  What I didn’t deserve was for your whore of a mother to intentionally get pregnant to try and steal my man from me.”

I chuckle out loud at Sue’s delusional attitude, and Sue growls at me.

“There are only two people I love in this world that is Charlie and Harry and you took both away from me,” Sue says caustically as she turns her glare at Bella.

“I want to know what you were planning to do with Seth, and the baby that belonged to Tanya, what was your plans?”

Sue laughs at Bella’s question in her evil sarcastic way.  “You really want to know?  Well I’ll tell you,” she says with a now huge happy smile.

 

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family

I loved it, thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  I am very sorry for the lateness of getting this review reply to you.  I always write them out and Nikky sends them to everyone on FFN and I send them out to everyone on TWCS and Twilighted.  With the move, I am without internet, so needless to say we got a bit of a delay.  We are hoping that the delay will not cause an issue in the normal posting, however we may run late getting chapters 33, 34 and 35 posted.  This has put me behind by more than a week, so I hope you all are understanding in regards to the situation.  The reviews have been wonderful, and Nikky tells me that there haven’t been a lot of questions.  The next chapter will be loved and hated, but trust in the fact that Jane has a plan for Sue.  Thanks for being such loyal readers, we love and appreciate every wonderful review and comment you all leave us.  HUGS!  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Teaser for 32 subject to changes during beta process

“What do you want Pet?” Sue sneers out.

Bella look at her, and I nod my head in encouragement.  “I want to know why?  Why you didn’t love them?”

Sue shakes her head.  “That’s easy, because they were meant to be mine and Charlie’s, but instead they had to come out being HIS.  Every time I looked at them, all I saw was that stupid fucker.”

Bella looks at her shaking her head.  “Well I was Charlie’s child and you didn’t love me.”

Sue laughs sarcastically, and she shows her teeth as she makes a face.  “NO, you are right about that.  I don’t love you, I never have and I never will.  I wanted something that was mine and Charlie’s, I deserved that.  What I didn’t deserve was for your whore of a mother to intentionally get pregnant to try and steal my man from me.”

I chuckle out loud at Sue’s delusional attitude, and Sue growls at me.

“There are only two people I love in this world that is Charlie and Harry and you took both away from me,” Sue says caustically as she turns her glare at Bella.

“I want to know what you were planning to do with Seth, and the baby that belonged to Tanya, what was your plans?”

Sue laughs at Bella’s question in her evil sarcastic way.  “You really want to know?  Well I’ll tell you,” she says with a now huge happy smile.

 

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers

Awesome, thank you.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the major fail in getting this review reply in a timely manner.  Been stressing with the issues of moving and getting the net working, but on the bright side things are working well now.  Chapter 33 should post on time, I’m working on 34 right now and Nikky is working on the Epilogue right now.  WOOT WOOT!  Not much for teasers after this chapter, but keep those reviews and thoughts coming in, we love to hear what you have to say.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

TEASER!!! For chapter 34 – subject to changes during beta process...
With the help of Garrett, he got his hands on a large poker table, and even hired a dealer for the night with Aro’s help.  He asked Bella and Esme to make us up snacks, and then sent Emmett and Jasper to get the big people juice.  We kept the card game light while Seth was playing with us.  After he went to bed, we gambled a little harder.  Emmett’s only complaint about the night was that there seemed to be the lack of strippers. Actually, he was upset because there were no strippers.  

The night was relaxing and rather quiet, so it was perfect for me. I don’t see this as my last night of freedom, but the last night of my old, solitary life.  I can’t wait to have Bella as my wife.  I can’t wait to call her Mrs. Masen tomorrow.  Tomorrow I marry my soulmate, and my true life will begin.

~HCV~

Here I am, standing up at the front of the church.  Everything is so beautifully decorated.  The girls made it look perfect, and I know it’s exactly as Bella wanted it.  The ladies of the church made sure that every single detail of Bella’s wishes was precisely the way she had envisioned it.  

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times

Such a cute and lovely chapter.  Jane is freaking great! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

A wonderful round up of the family, thoroughly enjoyable.



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Summary:

 

Best Bella Banner

Summary: Bella is tired of Edward's flirtatious ways. She tries to forget him by dating another man, but it doesn't work out as planned. Heated words lead to passion. Is it the end for these two?    

Winner of Best Bella in the Friday Night Bites Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8057 Read Count: 1307
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 20 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this. Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

This story is a one-shot explaining one of the million and one scenarios of what could have happened after the Cullen’s left Bella in New Moon.

 

This story contains angst and character death.

 

 

The banner is a gift from a beautiful friend and fellow author, MissKingAtYourService . If you haven’t already take a look at her stories on here.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4347 Read Count: 985
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Debt to Pay

That was so bittersweet.  Lovely stuff.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG what a cliffy!

Hope the plagiarism thing gets sorted soon.  I am going to miss Wisp. :(

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay Wisp walked. 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I now want cake!  Wisp is so sweet.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was unexpected. Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What a sad chapter.  :(

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Poor old Edward, at his wits end.

 

Its sounds like you ladies plan to have a rousing time of it.  Good for you.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

You have to love Rose, she is awesome. 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

It was wonderful to "see" into Wisp's head.  I am so looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

An amazing chapter and so moving.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wonderful chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Brilliant chapter.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

A difficult chapter, dealt with beutifully.  Thanks you.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Dr Lawton needs a swift kick to the ...........  

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Lovely chapter.  Liked the hottub.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

The more you here about Wisp the sadder it all is.  Another fantastic chapter.

I, Lucius by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

stories/59714/images/I,_Lucius.jpg

 

Hermione's trying to enjoy a lovely dinner with her friends, Ginny and Draco Malfoy. She wasn't expecting Lucius.  A by request one shot.  Adult content, rated MA.


Categories: Harry Potter, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Lucius Malfoy
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4241 Read Count: 1477
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was hot and sweet, I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

lth

Severus remembers when he fell in love with Hermione and writes her a letter. Inspired by David Bowies song


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21967 Read Count: 2626
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Letter to Hermione

Awesome start to your story.  I am looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words Xx

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: On the wings of Morpheus

Thank goodness did the dirty on her.  She will not have to feel guilty about dumping him and running off with Severus. ;)



Author's Response:

There's a long and winding road Hermione must travel yet before she gets her man. Thank you for reviewing Xx

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: St Mungos

Damn Hermione is as blind as a bat when it comes to Ron, she was given enough clues. lol 



Author's Response:

I agree, but love is blind and there are times when people ignore the signs even if the truth is hitting them over the head with a cricket bat :D Xx

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Grapevine

Yay she is rid of him.  Now  Severus can lend a shoulder to cry on. ;)

 

PS.  I am reading 2 of your stories at the same time on two different sites.  LOL



Author's Response:

Let's hope so ;D 

 

Lol, I do that myself regularly myself Xx

Cast Off's by Sassymami Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary: Past Featured Story

CO

It’s been ten years since them. Her parents are dead because of their loose end, but she has moved on with her life. Still dealing with the supernatural in a daily basis but she never thought she would hear from them again so soon. Now two of the Cullen men need her assistant but only one wants more. Will she let them in her life again or cast them off like they did her. Hum/Vamp—Jas/Belle

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Read & Enjoyed, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56116 Read Count: 47263
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the start to your story

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the convo between Bella & Edward, I wish it had gone like that. lol