Reviews by Roon1
Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389603
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Loved the chapter. Edward is a horny so and so isn't he? lol 

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Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I think you should keep going.  What i do not understand is how he does not recognise her?  I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it.. part of the arrangement was that she wear a mask and she remain facing forward with her head down... and in the playroom the mask remains but her eyes are covered as well... also it´s been years since they´ve seen each other.. the next chapter should make things a little clearer...


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Excellent chapter.  Esme's a dark horse isn't she?  Tanya's going to be trouble. LOL.  So looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

What a chapter.  It was wonderful.  I cannot wait for the next one.

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Wow hawt chapter.  They are going to be perfect for each other.  I cannot wait until her identity is revealed.  I wonder how he will take it. LOL

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: For the Love of Domination

Brilliant chapter.

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Now who saw that one coming. LOL

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Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

What a chapter.  The virgin sub seems to have sorted out her moved in double quick time.  Edward was very romantic.  I love the cliffie.  Cannot wait to find out what she says.

 

Until next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the love!  Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more!  Check  em out!


Krazi

xoxo

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

Wow what a cliffy.  Wonderful chapter.  He did sorta cut it fine, not a very organised dom. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Interesting. There were times when I found Bella to be rather annoying.  Her "training" is not going to be easy if this is anything to go by but she agreed to it.  So bring it on. lol  

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Happy Birthday.  I wonder who the creep is.  Very scary. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

Oh dear, that did not go the way Bella wanted to did it? LOL.



Author's Response:

No it didnt.....*pouts* xoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI

Summary:

You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!!  Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA

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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!

Ari

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love

Oh dear that was rather sad.



Author's Response:

Yes it is. We just wanted to do something different. As far from norm as we could get. I it worked LOL because that definitely was out there. Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing our story. You have no ides how much we appreciate your support!

Ari & DLIR

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Poor Babe, left hungry and alone.  Love the start to your story

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

What a terrible thing to do to your pet.  Poor babe.  

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

It looks Tral is going to have his hand full in more than one way.  Just want to say I am really enjoying your story and am looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Very enjoyable chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Love Pani and Bach's relationship.  There like an old married couple.  I also like how Bach is trying to put Tral straight.  I am looking forward to them getting Babe back.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Poor Bebe, has had quiet an day of it hasn't she?  I take it the men do not know about the breeding camps?  Ben seems very nice, even if a little handsy. LOL

Really looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

No, he doesn't know...yet.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Oh no poor Babe, I hope someone finds her soon.  Poor guys too must be a really hard life they live. That Will is an asshole however and has no compassion.

Another really enjoyable chapter.  Many thanks.

Happy Thanks Giving.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Poor Babe all hurt and worried that Tral will throw her out.  Thank goodness Tral has at last got a clue.  Bach tried to tell him but he was having none of it.  I loved that Bach and Pani have a very active sex life. LOL.  I am so looking forward to seeing how this will pan out for Tral and Bebe.



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you're enjoying this story so much! lol, thank you for the compliment!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Dum, Dum, Dummmm, Tral had certainly taken the leap.  Let hope he has not cause his and his uncle's downfall.   

Loved the lemon by the way.  It was rather sweet, even if he was possibly signing Babe's death warrent..lets hope that does not happen.  I'm all anxious for the next chapter now. LOL.



Author's Response:

Yeah, let's hope. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

That was unexpected but rather a relief.  I just love your characters and this story is simply wonderful. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

I must say I have really enjoyed this story.  It was a marvellous tale  with a wonderful moral.  Thank you so much for sharing.  I do hope you write another story for us when you can.

All the best and a happy Christmas to you and yours.

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Thanks for the warning.  I'll have another read of it before it goes.  I look forward to your next story.  In the meantime have a lovely Christmas and a happy New Year.

Life In The Balance by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Bella’s hopes, dreams, life and future were violently ripped away. She finally finds the strength to do what it takes to save her sanity but at what price? Can the man hired to help her remain professional long enough to save her life?

Warning:  This story contains violence, abuse and death. If you are sensitive to those issues, this isn’t the story for you.

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Awesome banner made by Rosalynn (Rosalynn7885)

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 266053 Read Count: 14118
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2010 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How I Got Here

This is an intense start to your story.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Bella's has been through a lot and this is just the beginning. I've been holding on to this story for a while and I finally felt ready to put it out there.  I hope you like it.  Thank you so very much for the review.   D

Summary: Past Featured Story

Entry for the Scene Stealers Contest on FFn, NM Chap 3. Edward's attempt to leave Bella doesn't quite work out the way he expected. His cruel words don't have the intended effect and this Bella isn't crumbling in the dirt. BPOV, AU

Won Judge's Choice - chosen by Katmom

Beta: Bella's Executioner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8022 Read Count: 635
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2010 Updated: 17 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: That Day He Lied

Now that is how it should have gone. Thanks for sharing, this was wonderful. :-)

Getting Warmer by eiluned price Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. AU. BxE. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159812 Read Count: 6189
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: GIG

Loved it.  It was all sweet and hot.  Lovely.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: SEA

Very enjoyable chapter.  Bella is one lucky girl.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A bit of a tease

Nice one. I liked the changes a lot.  nods. 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

What a start.  Cannot wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

Nasty deaths for the parens. Isabella, was a bit lucky though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jells

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

Awww a baby Edward.  How sweet.



Author's Response: Glad you liked it =) Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Oh no Caius killed both of Edward's parent's and disposed of this twin brother.  What a bad vampire.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Caius is a monster.

Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Wow what an exciting chapter.  Bella seems to have an amazing effect on vampires.  LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you =) We're glad you liked it.

Yes, lol. Bella has something special that she possesses, yet she doesn't know about it.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

Wow what a chapter.  I must admit I was a bit confused at the start of this chapter but it was really good.  I loved the rough vampire loving. LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much! The conflicting emotions were a pain to write! lol

Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Hello waves.  See I finally got around to reading it  and I am so glad I did. Poor Bella a small little pawn amongst carzy vampires.  I cannot wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Hi *waves back* Thank you sooooooooo much for reading!!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

You two have a delightfully sick imagination. lmaooooo



Author's Response:

Roooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!! *tacklehugs*

LMFAOOOO! Very sick, tho Tygs is the sicker one. She's just nuts lmaooooo

Oh and thank you!! =D

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

So bloody, so dark, so barbed. lmaooooo



Author's Response:

LMFAO! I wish I could favorite your comment here! 

 

Thanks Roonie! Tygs and I are busy at writing... well me more sleeping lmao I'm exhausted.

 

XXOO

 

Miss Bean *giggles* 

missbean

A Family Affair by nickeyd26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married.  He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi.  Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her.  Now, they want her to join in on the fun.

 

This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell.  It is a damned sexual buffet.  If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones.  This story is NOT for you.

 Create your own banner at MyBannerMaker.com!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13861
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair

Damn that was hot.  Bella is one lucky vampire:-)



Author's Response:

Hell yeah she is!  What I wouldn't give...

Thanks so much for the rating and review!!!

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71713
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Excellent chapter. Goodbye, Edward, Carlisle, Alice and Esme. Its still shocking. lol 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was so sweet.  Its about time Jake stopped acting like a jerk.  I am really routing for Bella and Edward's relationship.  I cannot wait for the day that they are all together. :-)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awww that was seriously lovely and I have enjoyed your story so much.

A happy New Years to you and yours.

 

Toy by Irish_charm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

After a long absence a submissive gets a summons from his Mistress.

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My entry for the Dommella's Dungeon.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7956 Read Count: 1087
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Toy

LOL.  He obviously doesn't overly mind a sore ass.

Summary:

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Hermione contemplates her life since her capture by the Dark Lord. She has one last act of defiance up her sleeve, one last desperate bid for freedom. Dark, dark, dark!!! You've been warned....


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Tom Riddle
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6910 Read Count: 1163
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought this was excellent and I really enjoyed reading it.

Ménage Triste by LaurieLou Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

It is the eighteenth century and a young Isabella Swan is wedded to the older, harsher Edward Cullen, Duke of Washington. He needs a male heir. She just wants to be loved. A one-shot about loss, love, lust and hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7299 Read Count: 4401
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this one shot.  Historically totally wrong but such fun anyway.  

Its nice to see you here.  

 

PS I am so looking forward to A Rude Scotch being updated here.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it :-) and you're completely right about it being historically wrong! I only had The Duchess film to go off of, Lol. However, I'm glad you liked it anyway :) Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy to be here ;) ARS will be here, so just keep looking :)

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Amazing as always

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Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

 I wonder what Edward wants.  We can work out what Bella wants. I just hope Oh no she is not going to be doing that whole conflict slightly off her head thing again.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Good girl Bella, might as well get something out of it too. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Oh my what happened to Edward.  Is Bella going to break their arrangement?  I cannot wait to find out.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

She stoped it oh my.  Now Edward is crashing the wedding.  This is too exciting.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Another wow chapter. So intense.  I loved it hard.  Bella, got some sense into her head at last and ran for it.  The only thing to do if you ask me. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I feel that I start every review with OMG but its hard not to.  What sort of luck does Bella have?   She is enjoying a bit of Roughward and getting paid for it, I say good on her. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

She is one of the unluckest of woman.  I wonder how much of the Edward thing she can take before she breaks down?  She's a mess and I so wish she was not. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Wonderful chapter as always.  Poor old Bella, she is a mess. I wonder what has gone down with Edward and his family.  Are you going to tell us or tease us a bit more?

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Good God, he's a bit nuts and she seems to be on the verg of falling apart since she meet him. What a pair they make.  He obviously has had some experiance that has put him off women.  What I don't get is why he didn't just get himself a sub?  Does Bella remind him of someone?  I cannot wait to find out.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Lovely, you can just tell she is going to fall for the asshole. lol.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Poor Bella, stuck between a rock and a hard place and I wasn't talking about Edward's c**k.  I would rather she didn't turn to mush when she is near him or even hears him but then I think how cool would I be?  Chance being a fine thing.  I like your Bella, she has been handed some rough breaks and how has to contend with Roughward. lol

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Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow, just wow.  I have a feeling I will be saying that a lot with this story.  He is a cool customer isn't he, even if he does have "The Jawline of the Gods".  I like your Bella's inital reaction to him being "Hot on the outside, crazy on the inside."  She is going to go all mushy over him isn't she?  I really hope not, he is a bastard.

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Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good God woman, what the hell was that?  I am exhaugsted.  (roon0)

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Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Your writing is so powerful.  Your characters so fucked up.  I can easily understand her anger towards Edward, esp., after five years wanting to right wrongs. You what?  He wanted rough sex and she needed the money and enjoyed the sex. What's the problem?  Well, it’s the feelings and thoughts that go with those transactions that create the problems. She has "coped" by suppressing everything in her life that makes her unhappy.  He obviously has decided to face his demons. I suspect his motivation for seeking her out has more to do with his wellbeing then hers but I am a bit of a cynic.  I am very interested to see where you take these two.  Its been a pretty rough ride so far, I see no sign of anything going well for them, as yet.  (Maybe I am not so cynical after all.)

Just a thought but Bella needs professional help because she is one fucked up broad.  If she cannot pull herself together she is going to lose the life she fought so hard to gain, that would be tragic.

It’s always a pleasure to read your work. I am so looking forward to the next instalment.

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Such a complex tortured relationship (I guess we can call it that).  Your Bella is in as much need as Edward is, maybe they can help each other.  Only you know. ;)

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

What an awesome chpater.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112168
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent chapter. I wonder that the deal is between Aro and the really unpleasant Edward snr.  Looking forward to finding out.

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful chapter. I wonder what Edward's father is up to?  He must have some sort of agreement with Aro. I am glad that Edward had the sense to ask for help. Looking forward to the next update. 

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Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I thought this was a wonderful chapter. Edward is an ass but she could have had it a lot worse with someone else. Lets hope he can fix this, just like his face will need fixing. lol.

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow poor Bella.

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter. Its good to see he is not totally heartless.

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like Edward's pov.  You can more or less guess what Bella's thinking.  Excellent chapter.

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my that poor girl.  What a selfish ass.

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh no. What is he going to do to Bella?

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Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Bella has had her bottom belted, given a reluctant hand job and received her first O, all in all quite a night.

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really liked this chapter.  I feel horribly sorry for Vicroria.  Looking forward to the next.

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dear Edward is a bit dense isn't he?  Great chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Edward is totally dense.  He'll learn ... someday.  Thanks so much for reading & reviewing (& rating).  It really means a lot .. very encouraging.  Thanks again!  :)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was another intense chapter.  

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor Bella but in truth as a slave owner Edward may be an ass but she could have had much worse.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Alice is brave.  She has got him thinking though.  Good chapter.

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Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

He is showing restraint, that has to be a good thing.  The dinner should be interesting. lol

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Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Edward Snr is a bit of a nightmare.  What is his deal?  Does he not want Bella in his home? Your Rosalie makes a nice change.  Bella needs a friend, if Edward will let her have one. 

As always I am anxious to know more.

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Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Its interesting that he is so possessive and yet has not forcibly taken her. 

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Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What an exciting chapter. Aro is a total pig.

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like this Edward more. Good chapter thanks.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Natural

Very enjoyable



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you so much for taking the time to review!

My Surrender by KareBear1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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ALERT: POLY & Bd/Sm  Carlisle/Bella/Jasper

18 year old Bella has always been at the top of her class even graduating early from high school and getting accepted to Dartmouth on a full scholarship. She enjoyed two years of great grades and loved college. For the first time during her junior year she starts to struggle not in one class but two. She makes a plan to go and confront the two professors who just happen to be cousin and share an office even though they are in separate departments. What she did not know was that they have been scheming to get what they want the innocent Miss Swan.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75116 Read Count: 57627
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I'm hoping to have the next chapter done soon.

 

Hugs

Breaking Point by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have been together since High School, but after 20 years and too little time to be themselves, they find themselves at a crossroads, where one wrong decision could be their breaking point.

Originally written for Fandom 4 Tsunami Compilation

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6664 Read Count: 1547
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 29 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this very much.  I cannot wait to see how it pans out but these are two people under a lot of strain.  Looking forward to your next update.

Wilted Carnation by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

The unthinkable happened while Edward was away & the Bella he finds is not the one he left behind. What can he do to fix the best friend he's loved for as long as he can remember when she won't let him in. Originally written for Fandom Fights Mental Illness. Fisrt banner is mine, 2nd is by Rosalynn and the gif is from Tkegl. Thank you ladies. 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28740 Read Count: 9507
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2011 Updated: 14 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: While You Were Gone

Bella's gone for a walk on the wild side.  Poor Edward. 

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67289
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Excellent chapter.

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What a great chapter. Edward was obviously too engrossed in Bella to hear Charlie. lol 

Summary:

 

Jasper feels the pull to one of his human students at the Seattle Art Institute where he teaching a class on photo Journalist. Does his student feel the pull also and will he dominate her?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4159 Read Count: 1204
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2011 Updated: 31 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it.  This o/s was so hot and sweet. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I had a blast writing it.

 

Hugs

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella’s long distance best friend shows up unexpectedly on her doorstep after being discharged from the Army under mysterious circumstances.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9126 Read Count: 974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this. It was really moving. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427886
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Touch

Wow those two are hot. I thought the whole Tanya conversation worked out really well.

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Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**

Oh my that was a hot and sexy chapter.  I was not expecting Charlie to off himself. 

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**

In my opinion Edward is still an arse, he is twice her age. Seriously, I don't think even think his mother could call him sensitive. lol  Nevertheless, I like him a damn sight more than I do Charlie. I hope your Bella is not too much of a  little mouse.  As for Tanya, she had every right to leave if she didn't want what he offered. As for what she said, it's how she felt, his ego was big enough to get over it. lol 

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Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 **Encounters**

Wow they didn't loose anytime. lol. I cannot wait to see how this pans out.

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Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning

Great chapter.

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Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping

Edward should be delighted with the results of her shopping trip. :)

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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Wow what an exciting chapter. It looks like Edward is going to find his sub.  

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Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

Charlie has not come across well at all, a selfish and greedy man.  Bella looks like she will be jumping out of the frying pan into the fire. lol 

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Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings

I think Charlie is a drunk. It would account for his horrible behaviour. I think Edward is not going to be staying away for long.  So looking forward to the next update. :-))

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Awake

LMAO those two have not wasted time. She'll be on his spanking bench before you can say Green.